The Beautiful Mermaid (M/L teen AU) ch 13 3/5 [WIP]

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Re: The Beautiful Mermaid (M/L teen AU) ch 12 10/2

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Thankyou to Blink1lit, futuremrsmcdreamy, veronica, Natalie36, tinie38 & roswell3053 for your replies ... i hope you enjoy this chapter! :)

CHAPTER TWELVE

It had been three days since Liz’s accident with the hook and her fin was making a slow recovery.

She and Max had spent every afternoon together and most nights he didn’t leave until the early hours of the morning.

Liz enjoyed his company, but most of all she loved the way he treated her, even as a mermaid he treated her as if she was a queen.

Always bringing her food and flowers, even though she had explained to him that she had nowhere to put the flowers he just told her that she deserved them.

She still didn’t like the idea of Max breaking the spell. She wasn’t sure if what Tess was telling her was true.

What if there was more to it?

What if when the man that falls in love with her kisses her, he turns into a merman?

She would never wish that upon Max, she loved him with all her heart and just wanted him to be happy. But when asking Max various times if he was happy he always replied ‘Only when I’m with you’.

It filled Liz’s heart with so much love that it sometimes hurt that she was unable to have someone to share her feelings with.

She longed to see her dad and to make sure that he was alright; she longed to tell him all about Max and how she believed that he might be the one for her.

She knew that if her father was here he would have all the answers she was looking for and that they would all lead to following her heart and that would lead to Max.

The thoughts of her father still made Liz’s heart weak; she wanted to know what he had been doing, if he had missed her.

She wanted to make sure that he knew that she didn’t run away from home and that she never would.

She wanted to make sure that Tess got what she deserved.

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Tess had thought that after getting rid of Liz that everything would have been smooth sailing.

Man was she wrong.

It had been close to three weeks that the little brat had been gone for and Jeff would not stop looking for her, even in his ill state.

In one way she was happy thinking that he would tire himself out so much that he would eventually fall and die, but in another way she feared that he wouldn’t give up until he found her.

Her thoughts of him taking her name out of the will were wrong, because he never even thought of the possibility that she would have run away, which made Tess’s job much harder because now she even had to play the role of the sad mother, worried for her daughters well being.

She just hoped that Liz would get out of the picture and soon, Jeff needed to know that his little girl was not coming back no matter what he did.

That bitch was history!

TBC….
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Re: The Beautiful Mermaid (M/L teen AU) ch 12 10/2

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Enjoy!

CHAPTER THIRTEEN

Liz was beginning to get tired of being a mermaid!

She was tired of having to worry about something bad happening outside in the real world to some that she loves and not being able to be there and help them.

She was worried for Max, she wanted to know he was ok and that he would be here each day.

Every time he went away her heart ached but most of all every second her was away she held her breathe until she saw him again.

She was worried for her father, she wanted to know that he was alive and well.

She wanted to make sure that Tess hadn’t tried to hurt him in the way that she had hurt her.

Liz was so caught up in her thoughts that she didn’t even realise where she was swimming until she looked back and she that she had long passed her boundaries.

Before she even got any time to swim back she felt herself being trapped and began to panic as she saw the net that she was enclosed in.

She struggled against the thick ropes, pushing and pulling and trying to swim out.

Just then heard the shell whistle and knew that Max was there waiting for her.

She didn’t want to worry him, but she was more scared than ever right now and she just hoped to god that he figured out that something was wrong when she didn’t come back.

She continued to struggle but it was no use she was caught, the only thoughts left to run through her mind now where thoughts on what would happen to her once the fishermen had found her.

What would they do to her?

Would they kill her because they are afraid that she will hurt others?

Will they use her for their own amusement?

She continued to her the whistle calling for her and knew that Max must be getting worried, just as the thought left her mind she felt herself being lifted up and out of the water.

She struggled to get free from the net as she looked to the wharf which was in sight still, she saw Max looking around through the water and knew that if she tried to call to him, the fishermen would find her.

But either way they would.

As the net continued to be pulled aboard she felt something hard bang the back of her skull and as she looked at the shore one last time her eyes collided with Max’s, and then everything went dark.

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