Elizabeth and Maxwell AU, M/L, MATURE)CH.32 4/12/06 [WIP]

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Tittle: Elizabeth and Maxwell
Author: urpersonaloddball
Pairing: M/L
Rating: MATURE
Disclaimer: i own nothing, nada, not a thing
Summary: A little like Dharma and Greg


Chapter One

"Hey sorry," he tells me."i didn't mean to run into you. Are you alright?" he asks as he offers me his hand. I take it, get up, then check myself to make sure that i'm alright. This guys is something else, not in a bad way either.

"i'm fine thank you for helping me," i tell him. I look up at him and am face to face with the most beautiful pair of hazel eyes i have ever seen. They just pop and bring out the brightness in his face. He is six five and has brown hair and perfectly tan skin. He's hot.

"Are you sure you're fine?" he asks me again. I nod my head yes. I bet that he think i'm werid because i haven't said anything. I just keep looking at him. His aura is so confusing. It's a huge ball of confusion.

i finally find my voice, " Yeah, i'm fine, no harm done." I tell him and he nods at me. Did i mention that he is still holding my hand and he has soft but firm skin, i wonder what his butt feels like. I bet its firm too.

"that's good," he tells me meeting my gaze straight on," would you like to get a coffe or something?" he asks me. He is so sweet and cute and did i happen to mention very very hot. yummy!

"How about pie instead?" i ask him. He looks at me kinda werid and i just keep staring at his eyes. I can't get over them.

"Pie, sure i could go for some pie, haven't had it in ages." he tell me and i look at him like he has a third head.

"You haven't had pie in ages?!" he just looks at me. "When exactly was the last time you had pie?" i ask him and he looks up at the sky trying to think.

"It was easter three years ago." he tells me. I swear that my eyes are going to pop because i'm look at him all werid and stuff.

"What?" he asks.

"You haven't has pie in three almost four years? are you crazy? How can you go a whole three years without pie, that is just crazy." i tell him. in all honesty it is. I can't go three months without pie. How could i go three years without pie.

"Well, my mom makes the worst pie and i can't find a decent place with good pie, that's why i haven't had pie in three years." he tell me taking his hand from mine.

"I have the perfect pie place, the thing is, it's kind of far." actually its more than a little far. It's in vegas and we are in New York.

"Well then lets go. I have the next two days off work anyway. That is unless you don't want to share your perfect pie place," is he challenging me. He's known me for like five seconds and he is already challenging me.

"Fine lets go," i tell him and he takes my hand and leads me to what i think is his car. It's hot. It's a brand new Ford Mustang and it is hot. It's not red it black and did i mention its hot.

"this is your car?" i ask him

"yeah you got a problem with it" he ask me back.

"Not a one," i tell him and smile as he opens my door for me. he runs around the front of the car and hops in the car. he look at me and smiles.

"so where is this perfect pie place?" he asks me.

" umm, it's in vegas," he stop me the car and looks at me. " hey i told you it was far didn't . . . . " he cuts me off, making a u-turn.

"So it's in Vegas. Okay, let go to Vegas," he tells me. I guess he doesn't know whick way Vegas is because he is going in the wrong direction.

"Hey you do know that you are going in the wrong direction, right?" i ask him.

"Actually i am going in the right direction. there is no way that i am going to drive my baby to Vegas in this heat, so we are going to the airport and we will fly." he tell me then looks over at me and smiles. I can't help but smile back, he has the cutess smile that make you just want to melt.

"Okay then," i tell him.

His POV

Why don't i find this werid. I just met this girl. Well technically i haven't met this girl. I don't even know her name.

"Hey what's your name?" i ask her.

"It's Elizabeth, but since we are going to be going to Vegas together, you can call me Liz." she tells me. Man she's hot. She's got a body to die for and her smile is enough to melt the polar ice caps. She has long dark brown hair. She also has this cute scar on her right eyebrow that give her a dangerous look.

"So, since i told you my name isn't it far to return the favor?" she asks me.

"It's Maxwell Evan, you can call me Max." i tell her. I half expected her to yell or scream. That's what most girls do when they find out who i am and to tell you the truth i really does bother me.

"Evan, i've heard that somewhere," she tells me. "Yeah, my dad works for some guy name Evans but yeah, some coincidence uhh," she tells me. She really doesn't know who i am. this is perfect. She wont know what to expect from me. What if her dad doesn't work for my dad though. Could this be the girl my mom has been trying to set me up with. Nah the women mom chose for me are never this pretty but i would like to know.

"What's you last name?" i ask her. She looks at me.

"Oh, it's Parker," she tells me. this is the girl that my mother has been trying to set me up with. But why wouldn't she know who i was.

"Are you by any chance related to Jeff and Nancy Parker, would you?"

"Yeah how did you know?"

"I know your parents," i tell her. "Your dad and my dad wrok together. Your parents come over all the time." i tell her. She doesn't know who the hell i am. What the f$ck?

"Your .... your Diane and Philip Evans son. Please tell me you aren't their son?" she ask me. why what's wrong with me.

"I guess i can't grant you that wish, because they are my parents." i tell her. She look really pale at the moment. I pull over on the shoulder of the Vincent Thomas.

"Hey are you okay?" i ask her and try to rub her back but she pull away getting closer to the door.

"No, no, please tell me that this isn't happening. You are not Diane and Philip Evans son?" She begging me to tell her that i'm lying and that i'm not my parents son. what does she have against me.











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Chapter 2

Max's POV

Why is she acting this way? What on earth did i ever do to her? I mean, i'm a good guy and i have money so what could be wrong with me?

Liz's POV

"You can't be Diane and Philip Evans's son. You just can't. He's mean and evil. He used to pull my hair when i was young and lock me in the revolving door when i was sick. I hate that guy. You can't be that guy, your sweet and nice," i tell him. He has to be f#cking me. If this guy is Maxwell Freaking Evans then i am going to kill me mother for not telling me that he was in town.

"Well, thank you very much. I have changed a lot since i was a kid and there is no way that you are my dad's best friend's daughter because she is a bitch. She was alway a snob and was alway nagging me to take her places. She was butt ugly too." he tells me. That asshole, i am Elizabeth Anne Sitta-Lee Parker. Daughter to Jeffery and Nancy Parker and if this guy is going to be a jerk to me then i'm going to . . . going to ....

Max's POV

What the hell? She just opened the door and walked out on the Bridge. There is no walkway on the Bridge. Is she trying to kill herself. the only reason i'm able to pull over is because there is construction on the Bridge. She is crazy if she thinks that she can walk all the way back to the city by way of the Bridge. What am i still doing talking to you when i should be going after her and stopping her from killing herself?

"Hey Liz, wait, your going to get yourself killed. Get back here and let go get some pie," i laugh but stop when she turns around and looks at me with death glares. I know those eyes, that is definetly Nancy's daughter.

"Hey i was just kiddine about all that stuff that i said," i yell after her and she starts walking back. Thank you god. Her dad would so kill me if anything happened to her and he found out that i left her here on the Bridge. You may be thinking how could he possibly find out that she was with me, oh, he knows, he know everything. He has eyes everywhere.

She finally made it back to the car and opens the door. I hop in the drivers seat thinking that she is getting in, but she isn't. She grabs her purse, gets out of the car, and pulls out her cellphone and already has the phone to her ear and is waiting for someone to answer.

I hop back out of the car and walk around to the passanger side of the car. As soon as i make it over to her and grab her hand she is already talking and the first thing out of her mouths has to be ......

Liz's POV

"Hi Daddy."

"Hi sweetheart. What's up?" he asks me.

"I have a little problem, can you send a car to come pick me up."

"Sure sweetie, what happened? Did that piece of junk, you call a car finally give out on you?" he sound so sarcastic.

"No daddy," i start to talk, but Max reaches for the phone and tries to pull it away from me. I move away from him and hit him in the stomach. Ha Ha

"Everything alright?" he asks me.

"Just fine. I'm in the middle of the Bridge by the construction. Thanks daddy. Love you." i tell him as i hang up.

"I can't believe you called your father, to have him send a car to pick you up," he tells me with disbelief.

"You are such a snob. You haven't changed at all, have you?" he makes it sound like a question but of course if i answer him he will just snap at me. He is crazy.

"Well, there is no way that i am going to get back into that car with you, ever. Do you understand me? There is no way in hell!" i yell at him. He is the evilest person to ever walk the planet. what's worse is that my mom and Diane have been trying to set us up for years but i always get out of it, playing sick or some shit like that. Life with my family is way too complicated.

Max's POV

"Fine, you know what. Be a spioled rich bitch and just stay here. I don't care at all. Have a nice life," i tell her. I can't believe she just did that.

I go around to the driver's side and hop back into the car. She is evil and hateful and crazy. She is just spioled and someone should put her in her place.

I start my engine, wait for three minutes and take off, waiting for an opening in the road, just to be safe of course.

"Good - Bye Elizabeth!!!" i yell out my window.

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Hey thanks for all the feedback.


Chapter 3

Max's POV

So i got off the bridge, was on my way home and had to turn around. I knew that i shouldn't have left her there. I am so screwed. She's going to tell her dad, who will tell my dad, who will then tell my mom, and who will then yell at me and be very disappionted. My parent are great don't get my wrong and they don't love me any less then my sisters, Isabel and Tess, but one thing that won't stand for is the fact that i left their best friends' daughter on the bridge where anyone could have kidnapped her. Then i will definatly be screwed. Why did she have to be such a spioled Bitch?

Liz's POV

He actually left me here. Your probably thinking that it's okay and that my dad is sending someone as we speak. Well i didn't really call my dad. I didn't call anybody, i thought that he would cheek his phone and figure that out but the idiot didn't and now i have to find a way to get freaking home. Damn him. Good thing i am the master of getting cabs.

I hold up my left hand and with my right i put my two fingers in my mouth and whistle. In seconds, there is a cab right in front of me holding up traffic. Damn, I'm good!


Max's POV

So, i went back and she wasn't there. No where to be found. The workers over to the right got back from their lunch, and i asked them if they saw anything. They told me that she had so impressive work at calling a cab. I took that as they saw her call a cab and went on her marry way. I thanked them and went to my dad's office.

I am tired of this, how could a perfect day turn out to be such a nightmare. I mean, i started out my day at the gym and then met Liz, or rather crashed into Liz on the street. But then she ended up having a major problem with me and i didn't do a damn thing to her. Something is serously wrong with that girl.

I look inside my car, looking for anything that can tell me why did my day turn out to be so evil. I look at the seat right next to me and look down at her . . . . oh shit . . .


Liz's POV

I got into the cab and told the cab driver the address to my dad's office. I was going to ask him if he knew where max's office was so that i could get my purse and stuff back. I left my purse in his car. I had went back in his car to get it but only pulled out my cell phone. Damn i have to see that jerk again. Who did he think that he was. He used to lock me in the revolving doors at the office and once i threw up and he made me walkl over and over in it. It was desgusting.

I wish that there was another way to get it back but if i told my dad that i had met Max on the street, he would tell my mom, who then would tell Daine and then they would all get the wrong idea and everything would go all wrong.

The next thing i know they already have the wedding planned and my dress picked out and what kind of tux Max would be wearing. There is no way i am letting them decide that, i want to pick what Max will be wearing at our wedding, not our mothers. What they hell, we aren't getting married. Or . . are . . . (laugh) . . we . . . (laugh) . . . ?


Max's POV

I got to the office, went to the third floor first to check to see if i had any messages. I had one, from my dad. She's fast, she already told everyone, but i didn't do anything.

I know that if i don't go up there now that they will come down here, they probably had Aaron, the security guard, call to notify them when i arrived. I hate having a big family firm sometimes. I take the elevator to the tenth floor and walk down the hall toward my dad and Jeff's office. Did i happen to mention that i am scared shitless? No, i didn't, well i am, just for your information.

I knock on the door and am met with a "come in" from my father and mother. I open the door and . . .

what the hell? . . .

. . . . there were ballons and my family, along with the Parker's, Whitman's, and Velinti's. What is going on.

They all jump out at my yelling "congradulations" and "way to go" and Kyle and Alex singing(off key might i add)"for he's a jolly good fellow"

I look at everyone trying to figure out what is going on, when i see Liz standing in the corner with an evil smirk on her face. She did something, damn her. Isn't that like that twentith time i've cursed her.

My dad, mom, Isabel, Tess, Kyle, Alex, Jeff, Nancy, and Michael. He seems kind of mad but then really happy at the same time. He gives me a manly hug but whispers in my year, "You hurt her and i will kill you," he tell me. She did something. He lets me go and Liz walks over to me and slides her arms around my waist. I look down at her, she grabs my face and gives me a kiss, and not just a friendly one. what????????????????

"Why did you tell me, Max, that you were dating Liz and now you are engaged?" i hear my mother ask me. I pull me mouth away from Liz's and look at her with shock and then at Liz, who just smirks.

"Yeah baby, i told you that they would be cool with us," she looks up and tells.




Thanks for your idea FamersAmers, but i was going off you idea when i went a different way. Let me know if you liked it, if not, verry verry sorry.

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Chapter 4


Max's POV

She told my parents and my whole family that we were getting married. I am getting married to her. I've known her for about an hour, and now all of a sudden i am getting married to her. My mother already has the plate patterns. Her mother already has our clothes picked out. What the hell? How long has she been here? How long ago did she tell them? And how long do i have to fix it?

I told you that girl would cause me nothing but trouble, didn't i? Well, okay i didn't but i was thinking it. I am telling you now, THAT GIRL WILL CAUSE ME NOTHING BUT TROUBLE! She is very annoying and spioled. She thinks that whole world revolves around her. Well, two can play along at that.

Liz's POV

I can't wait for him to come out of his shock and when he does, he will think it is hilarious. No, he probably won't. He'll flip and get angry and yell. Then he will set them all straight. Then, my mother, Daine, and Max Evans will be out of my life. Thank you, thank you, thank you! (I am taking mental bows(bow is my heads)) hahaha!

Max's POV

"You are right sweety. We should have told them sooner. They would have reacted just fine, and they seem so happy. Don't they sweet pea?" i ask her. Now it's her turn to be shock, and she is. I win, she will now tell them everything and that will be that. She will have to deal with the lies that she told them. I win, i win, i win, i w-i-n!

Liz's POV

My plan is backfiring. He wasn't suppose to go along with it. He was suppose to get upset and tell them the truth and be out of my life forever. Not tell them that we are really getting married. What is wrong with him? Does he expect me to tell them. Ohh . . . . . that evil, evil man. He turning the table back on me. Not going to happen buster.

"I know hunny-bunny, they do look so happy. I was right, we should of told them earlier, but you didn't want to," i look up at him and he looks down at me. He's going to crack.

"I don't know what i was thinking, sweet pea. We should have told them. And yes, you were right, as usual. Now weren't you?"

Okay so maybe i was wrong, but i am not going to give up. He is going to tell them or we are walking down that aile to a life of hell. If i married him it would be a life of hell, wouldn't it. He would be evil, and hate me for the rest of our lifes. It doesn't matter, we aren't getting married. He will crack.

Max's POV

She is going to crack and she will tell them. I will win and all this will be over and done with. Thank you, thank you.

"So, have you two set a date, yet?" my mom and Nancy ask us. I look at them from, looking at Liz's eyes.

"No mom, we haven't. We just got engaged. We haven't had time to think about it."

"Well you should. We have to have something to put in the papaer. Now don't we Maxwell?" she tells me. The paper, they are going to put this in the paper. They can't put this in the paper.

"The paper, Mrs. E. You want to put this in the paper already. We just got engaged, as Max said. We still need time to get use to it, you know," Liz beats me to it.

"Well, Elizabeth dearie. We have to tell them something. They will see you at social functions and things together. When they see you two together, they will question it. We must tell them as soon as possible. Oh . . Oh . . and we could also tell them that you two have been dating secretly for the last three years, as too not to cause any drama. ISn't that a good idea, Daine?" Liz's mother asks my mom. They can't do this. And we aren't going to any social functions together. We aren't getting married, and this isn't getting in the paper. Damn this!

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Thank you for all the feedback and support. Sorry it took so long.


Chapter 4


Liz's POV

[/i]"I had to hear about this in the newspaper. I had to hear that my niece is dating and going to be married to him in the damn newspapaer. Am i not your favotite uncle? Do you not call on me when you are having a problem? What in the world was so important that you couldn't leave your uncle a message saying that you were dating Maxwell Evans and are marring him in five weeks?" yes this is my favorite uncle Ryan. He is gay and has been my favorite person to confide in for the last twelve years. I love him.

"I'm sorry uncle Ryan, but it just kind of happened."

"Just happened Elizabeth, darling, things like this don't just come together out of thin air. They take time, time in which you and he were dating and doing other things without telling me."

"I have to tell you the truth about this but i don't want to tell you over the phone. When are you coming home because i could really use you right now," I tell him. In all honesty i could really use him right now. I need to tell him the truth and have him help me.

"I won't be home until a day before the wedding so i will be there just in time to see you walk down the aisle. I have to go, i'm late for a meeting. Love you and goood luck," he tells me and then the sound of the a disconnected phone. When did my life get so confusing.

It's been a week since the anoucement of my engagement to a Mr. Maxwell Evan. Since then, I have had to go to parties with him, dance at functions with him, and appear at certain events with him. I really hate the rich life. Why didn't he just cave?


Max's POV

It's been a week since the anoucement of my engagement to Elizabeth Parker. Since then, it's been nothing but function after function with her. I wish that she would have jsut told our parents the truth rather than have it come to this. I beat you that she is laughing it up right now waiting for me to say uncle. Not going to happen.

"Max, man, are you ready? You have to pick up my darling sister for your outing tonight, or did you forget?" my best friend in the world, a.k.a. Liz's older twin brother.

"Yeah, i'm just heading out. Are you and Maria doing anything tonight or would you two like to join us?" i ask him. I really do not want to spend an entire evening alone with Liz. I hate her for what she has done to me and we haven't even talked about it.

"No thanks man," Michael tells me has he comes out of his room, all dress and shit. "Maria and i are leaving tonight for my business trip and she's coming with me or did you forget that you would have this place all alone for the next week.

"Mike, you're leaving me alone five weeks before the wedding. Aren't you suppose to be here to make sure that i don't do anything that would reuin my marriage to your sister?" i ask him. I would never do that to Liz, even though she brought it on herself. I could still never embarass her that way.

"You would never to that man, but if you did i would kick your ass. I'm off, i locked my door because your wedding stuff is in there so don't go snooping. Got it?" he asks me and i nod my head. He grabs his keys and then he's gone.

Liz's POV

"So, what are you going to eat. I haven't eaten all day and am so hungry i could eat a horse. How about you?" Max asks me. He took me for a walk in the park, then to a movie and now dinner. He hasn't once treated me like shit for what i did to him. He's been the perfect gentlemen.

"I had a sandwich at the deli on Main for lunch. Why didn't you eat all day?" i ask him.

"I had to work through my lunch hour to get a deposition done and i woke up so late for work that i took a shower at the office before i came to get you."

"You came striaght from the office to come and get me. You could have called and we could have postponed this for another night," i tell him."Going a whole day without eating isn't good for you health."

"You know the way you talk i actually believe that you care about me," he tells me. That stings.

"Look, how many times do i have to tell you that i am sorry for this but you could have told our parents the truth. You brought this on yourself and you know it. If you hadn't left me out on the bridge none of this would have ever happened."

"Your the one that told me to go. You called your dad and told him to send a care to come pick you up."

"I didn't really call my dad okay. I was just pretending to, to make you made at me so that you would want to date me the way our parents wanted us too. I never would have thought that you would leave me alone. I ended up catching a cab back."

"You did all this just so that i wouldn't want to date you. Great plan Liz, now we are getting married," he tells me. He looked really hurt when i told him that i didn't want to date him and when he repeated it there was even more hurt in his eyes.

"You know Liz, i really hate you. You have done nothing but put me throught hell since the day we met. First, when we were kids you would follow me all over the place, as teenagers you dated my basketball buddy even thought you knew that i didn't want you to. Then i had to listen to him tell me all about how great you were in bed. Then, at twenty-one, i find out it was a bunch of bull because i took your virginity and you didn't even tell me that you were a virgin. And now you are making me life hell again by this little stunt you bulled. Thank yo Liz you do nothing but ruin my life every time we see each other," he tells me and i feel the tears form in my eyes. I get up and leave the restraunt before he can see the tears in my eyes. That jackass had the nerve to bring up that night.

Let me tell you about that night. We get drunk and i give him my virginity, he leaves before i wake up and i run to his apartment that used to be right next to mine only to encouter . . .

I walk to his apartmant, nerves, scared. What if he hates me now. I knock on his door but no one answers and i knock again, louder. I hear "hold on, i'm coming". It was a girls voice. The door opens and there stand a girl with blonde hair, blue eyes, and huge boobs. What the fuck.

"Is Max here?" i ask her and she gives me an annoyed look.

"He's tired. I really wore him out last night. You should come back later. Unless your his girlfriend or something, in that case don't ever come back because Max his mine now,"she tells me, gives me a little wave, and slams the door in my face. Bitch. What did i ever do to her? Better yet, that jackass he takes my virginity and then goes on to the next bimbo he could find, bastard.

Yep, that's really what happened. Tis' the reason why i hate Evans's so much. They all suck. That day that he came back into my life on that corner we were playing around, just kiding.

"LLLLLLLLLLLLLIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ, WAIT!"

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Chapter 5

Let me explain what happened last week at the restraunt. My brother Michael and Maxwell have been best friends for since Max, Isabel, and Tess were born. Michael is my twin brother and Max, Isabel, and Tess are triplets. That is the beginning of my explanation.

Max and I did sleep together once but then i found him the next morning with that slut, that i soon found was his ex-girlfriend. I don't know what he did after that night with me and frankly i don't want to know.

Let my take you to where my story began. Max and I meeting for what everyone thought was the first time. No, we have met numerous times. It's just that everytime we see each other we like to pretend that we don't know each other and try to start over again. That is fun. We see each other about twice a year and every year it alwasys ends up with a big fight. He yells at me and i yell at him. But never has he brought up that night again. That bastard, lard face, jack-ass. I really hate him.

Let me get back to my story. Whenever we see each other we start over trying to forget the past and maybe be friends in the future but of course that doesn't work. We last for about a week and then something or someone(his ex) sees us on the street and bring up the fact that Max belonged to her and supposedly still does. Isn't that just peachy. You bet your right. Well something always reminds us of how we used to me and even thought neither of us have ever said the word out loud we both know that that night was the worst night ever.


MAX"S POV

"I can't believe that you are getting married Max?" Amber tells me. Amber is my ex- girlfriend. She and i used to date and then we decided that we were better off as friends. Basically because of Liz. That is a whole other story that i do not want to talk about.

"Yeah, so?"

"You are getting married to your bestfriend's sister and me, your good friend, had to find out from the newspaper. Thanks Max your a real friend."

Amber is taller than Liz with beach blonde hair and big boobs. She's every guys dream right, wrong. I never did her and i don't plan on doing her. We are just friends and i would like us to stay that way for the rest of our lives. Thank you very much. Although, i have to admit when i met her i though 'Hey easy lay' but no i was wrong she is more than that and i hope the guy she ends up with realizes that.

"Amber, i love you. You are a great friend and the reason i didn't tell you is because i thought that this would be over by the time you got back into town. Now, who is this new boyfriend of yours and when do i get to interrigate him?"

"Wow, hold on. You can find out about my boyfriend when you tell me what you mean by 'i thought this would be over by the time you got back into town'?"

"Liz and I were never dating and i never proposed. We had another fight, you know how it is with us. Anyway we were having a nice conversation and then thing got heated and i left her on the Bridge . . "

"You idiot you left her on the Bridge!"

"Can i finish my story please?" i ask her and she waves her hand for me to continue. "Anyway, yes i left her on the Bridge but i went back and she wasn't there. I went to my dad and Jeff's office and found everyone there. Parkers, Valentis, Whitmans, and my family. Liz told them that we were getting married because she knew how much our moms and dads want us together so that the families can join."

"She did. No way. She rocks!" she says.

"What the hell. She does not rock, she sucks ass," i tell her. She shakes her head and look behind me. I turn around to see Liz there with her hand crossed over her chest. I'm in so much shit.

"Hey, Liz," i say. Is that my voice, it sound really really high. Did i just wave too, what is wrong with me.

"You wouldn't be talking about anyone i know or me would you Maxwell?" she asks me. I haven't seen her since that night and i guess she still hasn't forgiven me for those coments i made. I had hoped she would. Then again if she didn't then she would be the one to have to tell our parents that she lied and we aren't getting married.

"Hi Liz, I'm Amber," Amber holds out her hand for Liz to shake.

"We've met. I have to go, have a good time," she tells us. She totally snuffed Amber. I look over at Amber and she looks really pale.

"Amber, you all right?" i asked her.

"She's the girl that came that morning. I thought that she was the girl that you wanted me to get rid off, but that was L . . L . . .Liz." Amber is studdering and shaking.

"Amber, what are you trying to tell me?"

"Liz, was the girl that came to the door that morning. Not Kiki." OOHHHH. SHIT.

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Chapter 6

Liz's POV

That bastard i can't believe that he is still seeing her. That rat bastard. I swear to God that this is so over. We weren't even together to start with but then he goes and sees that slut again. I can't believe him.

"Hey watch where you are going!" someone yells at me. I look up and see it's Kyle and Tess. "Oh, sorry Liz, i didn't relize it was you. Are you alright?" say Tess. I nod my head and make my way around them. Where am i going? You ask. I am going to end this. It was a mistake in the first place and i should have stopped it then. I shouldn't have told them anyway. It all a big lie and known i have to fix it. I keep walking and feel someone grab my arm.

"What the . . . ?" i look at the person who grabbed my arm only to see Kyle with Tess behind him. Tess may be Max's sister but she is a great friend to me. It is Alex, Kyle, Tess, and me. We are our own little group and we love having inside joke and pissing people off. It just rocks.

"No nodding and then brushing us off. What the hell is wrong with you?" Kyle asks me and Tess hits him.

"Kyle, don't be an ass. Can't you see that she's been crying?" she asks him.

"Of course i can. Why do you think i asked her what was wrong?"

"You didn't have to be an ass about it. If something makes Liz cry in a non-joking way then something is really wrong."

"Again, why do you think i asked her what was wrong?"

"Rrrrrrrrrggggggggggggg, men Liz. I tell you, you can't live with them and you can't live without them. Come on sweetie, you are coming with us and then we will send Kyle to get Alex and ice cream and have a nice long talk. How about that?"

"Let's do it."


Max's POV

"I can't believe that this happened?"

"Max, it was an accident. You told her to get rid of the girl and she did, you didn't explain that you had slept with Liz and then ditched her. So, technecally, brother oh, mine, this is your fault. So don't go blaming this on anyone other than yourself."

"Isabel, you are crazy. Can we not talking about this and that wasn't what i was talking about anyway. I was talking about this case, tis' hopeless."

"Tis'? When did you become english?" she asks me. i just shrug my shoulders.

"What's wrong? Did you get into a fight with somebody? Did you and Liz get into a fight?"

"You have no idea," i say to her.

"Tell me what's wrong?" she says.

"I can't because i know what i need to do and you can't help me."

"Why can't i help me? I'm a girl and can fix your problems all i want?"

"I know what i have to do. I am going to talk to her but first i have to wine and dine her. Make her feel special and sweet as pan dulce."

"If you say so."

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Chapter 7

Liz's POV

"I hate that man. I HATE THAT MAN!" i yell as i walk into my apartment.

"Who do you hate no little Lizzy?"

"Arrrggg! What the fuck?" i asks. There is someone in my apartment. Who the fuck is in my apartment.

"Hey, Lizzy, chill kid. It's just me. You now your best friend Andy," he puts his hands up over his head.

"Andy!!!!" i scream as i run into his arms. I jump on him and he raps his arms around me and swings me around.

"Hey now, i knew you didn't forget me."

"Of course i didn't. Why would you think that?" i ask him.

"I don't know. Maybe because you got freaked out when you walked into the living room and i said "hi", you flipped out."

"Sorry about that, i've had a bad day."

"why don't we go get some Chinese food and you can tell me all about it."

"I can't, you have to go put on a suit and i have to go put on a dress and we have to go to my parent's house to see the families."

"?porque?"

"una fiesta en hornor de Max y yo."

"oh!"

"Well, then, you don't want to be late for you wedding party with only three weeks before the wedding."

"Okay!" i said as i walked toward my room. I turn around and walk back to him, and give him a kiss. "I really did miss you."

"I missed you too. Oh, and Serena will be here in two days. She had a meeting that she couldn't get out of. She told me to tell you that she was very sorry and that she would be here as soon as she could. Oh and that she loved you."

"Next time you talk to her, tell her that it is all right and that i will talk to her when she gets here and that she better be back by the time my wedding comes around."

6 hours later

"Serena, i can't believe that you are here. Andy told me that you wouldn't be here until next week, what happened.

"I did not, i told her that you would be here in two days."

"Hey Serena, what are you doing here?" asked Michael (idiot brother) dragging Maria and Max along with him.

"Hi Michael, guys. How's it going and congradulations Max and Liz," she turns to me and looks at me and then hungs me.

"I'm so happy for you, but we really need to talk."

"Okay," i say hugging her back. "What's the matter?"

"I'll tell you later," she says pulling away.

"Liz, can i talk to you?" asked Max, coming up next to me and putting his arm around me.

"Sure," I said putting on a fake sugar sweet smile. I wave to the gang and walk with Max down the hall to Michael's old room. He opens the door and lets me in first with him following. This is what i have always been jealous of, him and Michael. Michael tells him everything and he barely ever talks to me. I hate that.

"Listen, i want to talk to you about what you saw earlier and about . . . "

"Look Max, you don't have to explain. We aren't together and we aren't getting married as a matter of fact I was going to tell our parents tonight after the party so don't sweat it. OK," i pat him on the back then turn to leave.

"Liz . . . "

"Enough Max. I know you hate me and think that i ruined your life by me bot telling you that i was a virgin that night but that moring you ruined sex for me. You are an asshole and i wish that i had never met you again," i turn again and walk out. He grabs my arm, comes closer to me and leans in.

He looks into my eyes with his intense amber eyes. Amber, that bitch. I start to pull away when her pulls me back, closer this time. He just stares at me for what seems like forever when he swoops his head down and kisses me. His mouth moving against mine. His tongue seeking entrance to my mouth. I let him, i should stop this but i don't want to. It feels too damn good. I love the feel of his mouth.

His hands start wondering down my back to my ass and my hands aren't much better. Their touching his chest through his shirt. I'm tearing at his buttons, getting on off and two but his tie is in the way and his suit jacket. I start working at his jacket then his tie when the door opens and we hear.

"Omg, I didn't know you two were in here. I'll just . . .yeah . . . . "

We didn't even know who it was and we didn't care, we just kept on going at it like to two kids in the back set of a chevy. We are really hot and heavy but i don't we don't care until . . . . .


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Chapter 8

We didn't even know who it was and we didn't care, we just kept on going at it like to two kids in the back set of a chevy. We are really hot and heavy but i don't we don't care until i heard the door open again and this time yelling.

"What the fuck, can't you two have a little more decency?" i hear Michael say. Holy fuck, Michael, my brother just caught his best friend and sister getting hot and heavy. Max and i jumped away from each other so fast. He ended up about three feet from where we were actually standing. I am such an idiot, i can't believe i let him do that to me. That asshole!

"Hey Michael, i need to go talk to our parents. I'll talk to you later. Bye," i say and start walking past him when i hear Max.

"Liz?" he asks me and i turned back to him. He looks scared and afraid of what is to come and i don't know if it's from Michael or what i'm going to talk to our parents about.

"Michael, can we talk later. Liz and I need to talk . . "

"Like hell i'm leaving you two in here alone. Do i look fucking insane. Your parents would kill you two if they learned that you two were going at it in their library and you know it. Why don't you two go home?"

"Can't do that you live with me remember Mike and unless you don't want to come home toni . . . "

"Stop it right there. I don't want to hear and why can't you go to Liz's place?"

"Those crazy people are staying with me," i tell them both and then look back down.

"Alright then, "those crazy people" can stay with me for tonight but please oh god i can't believe i am doing this. My sister's inoscence will be lost forever after tonight." he say and shacks his head as he walks out of the room.

"Come on," Max says as he grabs my hand and pull me to the opposite door on the opposite side of the room.

"Max, i need to go talk to our parents."

"Why in the hell do you need to talk to them now?" he asks and you can so tell that he is pissed off at me.

"Because neither of us wants this and we can't let them keep believing that we do want to marry each other when in two weeks we would be getting a divorce, that's not fair to them and you know it."

"Not fair, you want to talk about not fair. I slept with this girl years ago and she was the best thing that happened to me. I left her alone in bed that night and figured that i would be back before she woke up but i wasn't and she went searching for me. Amber was coming over that morning to help me get rid of that hussy for the last time and what happens she send away the woman i wanted to spend that rest of my life with. The woman that i can't get out of my fucking head how great she is in bed, how she screams, how she laughs in my ear, how she loves to talk about things, how she'll make a fool of herself just to make someone feel better and i lost her."

Max's POV

I said what i had to say and now it's time to see if she feels that same way. Please god let her feel the same way.

I look at her and the next thing i know i have this hand on my face and not in a lovey way. She slaped me right on the cheek and it hurts like hell.

"You are a bastard, i hope you're happy with whatever her name is!" she runs out of the room. What the hell i just tell her that i want to spend the rest of my life with her and she slaps me and what the hell?

No way is she getting away with that, i think as i look in the mirror and then head to the door with the very idea of running after her and catching her before she could get to our parents.

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Chapter 9

Max's POV

I didn't have to run very far. She was right there, outside the door, stopped by Ms. Vilenti. Got to love that woman. She can talk so much, but that isn't always a good thing, i think as i walk up to the two of them and clear my throat, rather loudly, to get their attention.

"Hello Max, are you excited? You are going to be married soon. Are you have cold feet? Are you nervious? I wasn't when i married Jim. I knew he was the one right off the bat. I just love that lug so much," she says with a smile on her face, that grows even more when two arms, that belong to "the big lug", rap themselves around her.

"How do you love so much?" he asked her,"I'll kill the bastard for making my wife love him unless it's Kyle, then i will fine."

"It's you and i love Kyle too. Don't you worry," she tells him.

"Well, if you don't mind, i would like to borrow my future wife. Excuse us," i don't that they heard us because they were so wraped up in each other that i feel so sorry for Maria and Kyle and i would like to rub it in their face too. But right now i have bigger fish to fry.

I grab Liz's arm, hard but not hard enough to hurt her, but hard enough so that she can't run away from me. I love this girl and she thought that i was talking about someone else, and not her. She is so annoying but in a cute way, ans makes me so mad when she doesn't pay attention and listen carefully when she really needs to.

"Max, where in the hell are you taking me?" she asks me. I don't answer, all i can think about is getting her into my car and taking her to my place, and telling her the truth, so that this time she gets it and if she doesn't i am going to make love to her so much that she'll know who I'm talking about. That's not such a bad idea, no talking just hot passion, then talking, perfect.

"Max, what do you think you are doing? I don't have time for this, i have to go talk to our parents so that you can go be with you love. So let me go!" she starts hitting my arm but i won't let go, ever.

"If you don't stop hitting me we are going to hash it out right here where everyone can here us. If you don't like it then that is too damn bad."

"Are you crazy, hash what out, and where in the hell do you get the word 'hash', i don't think that that is even wrong."

"What we have to hash out is that, you don't understand who i was talking about back there. I was talking about you," i tell her while turning to face her. "You are the one that i love, you are the girl that i loved all those years ago, and you are the girl that Amber pushed away. She meant to push away me ex, the girl that you hate with a passion. She wasn't suppose to send you away, she was suppose to send her away. I loved you then, and i love you know. Why the hell don't you understand that."

"Why? You don't show it. You send me death ray, you don't talk to me, and you are worse then Michael."

"What in the hell is that suppose to me?"

"You are a stone wall. You don't let your true feeling show through, so if i don't beleive then there is only you to blame. You act like i am the spone of hell and treat me like i'm a freakin STD. So thank you Max, so very much for you love, NOT!" she yells as she walks away.

"What in the hell is going to take for you to believe me, Liz" i ask her. She turns looks at me for what seems like hours, which turns out to really only be two seconds.

"You have to prove. I don't mean buy me flower. I mean buying me my favorite flowers with my favorite candy. Bringing me my favorite lunch and taking me to my favorite spot. If you can do all that, find out all that information by going around to everyone that knows me the most, and i don't just mean one person, Maxwell Evans. I will believe you," she tells me as she turns back to the house and walks away.

"I've got a lot of work ahead of me," i look back to her," yes i do."

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Chapter 10

Max's POV

"Hey Max, man. There is a limo downstairs that say he's here for you."

"That's funny Mike, but i didn't know that limos could talk. Who do you talk to them?"

"The driver you idiot. Now, tell me how bad you screwed things up with my sister that you need a limo and are wearing your best suit?"

"We had a fight Mike, and now i am going to make it up to her so that she actually comes down the aisle in a week."

"Is it that serious?" i look at him for the first time since he came into the room and he looks worried.

"Yeh, but that isn't anything that i can't handle. Don't worry. Now don't worry, everything will be alright."

"Whatever you say man.Let me give you a little warning though. When Liz gets pissed, all men are screwed if they get in her way. She can make them stone with a look. Believe me she look at me and i was walking funny for week."

"Thanks for the warning," i tell him and start to walk toward the door, open to find Maria on the other side.

"Hey, where are you going all dressed up?"

"I have a date will Liz," i tell her and start to run down the hall toward the elevator, hearing Mike tell her that he will fill her in and that i am so going to get it. It doesn't matter as long as i make thing up with Liz i will be alright.

Twenty Minutes Later

"You look wonderful," i tell her as she opens the door. She is wearing a red dress with spegeti straps, that flairs at the bottom. It looks absoulty amazing on her.

"Thank you, you clean up well yourself," she tells me with a sarcastic voice.

"I think that i will take that as a compliment," i hold out my arm but she doesn't take it. She walks around me and up the hall toward her elevator.
I grab her arm and pull her back toward me, with a lot of complant from her. I stopped her complaning really fast when my lips came crashing onto her. God she can kiss. I wonder what else she can do with that mouth.

"That wasn't so hard was it?" i ask her, but she doesn't hear me. Her eyes are closed and she has this look of complete satisfaction on her face. She's holding onto my arm and when i start to pull away she grabs me and tries to pull me back, but she isn't stronge enough. So i go back willingly. She pulls my head down for another kiss, and as soon as i start to get into she pulls away.

"I bet you liked that, didn't you?" she asks me and walks down the hall.

"This is going to be pure hell," i whisper to myself and if she heard me she didn't let on.

"Where are we going?" she asks me as the elevator starts the climb down.

"That you will have to wait and see," i tell her with a little laugh for what is to come next,'i hate

"I hate surprises," she tells me with a whin and a pout.

"I know."