Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) COMPLETE 5/5/17 + A/N 5/5/19
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Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) Ch 87, 3/3/16, p. 70
You sure know how to start a girl's day off on the right foot!
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Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) Ch 87, 3/3/16, p. 70
I knew it, the minute I heard Michael struggling with a woman: It could only be Maria, who was looking to find Liz!
And she made him pay for restraining her: a bite from a human is even more dangerous than the one from an animal and Michael is going to need Isabel's abilities... or even Liz's, to cure him, that it!
So the Command is in a military zone, hiding like a rabbit in a hole... Block all the openings and you can fumigate him with gaze him, like the rabbit he is!
He has to pay for all the bad things he did to aliens and humans anyway so...
Happy to have a new part again... checked each day...
EVE
And she made him pay for restraining her: a bite from a human is even more dangerous than the one from an animal and Michael is going to need Isabel's abilities... or even Liz's, to cure him, that it!
So the Command is in a military zone, hiding like a rabbit in a hole... Block all the openings and you can fumigate him with gaze him, like the rabbit he is!
He has to pay for all the bad things he did to aliens and humans anyway so...
Happy to have a new part again... checked each day...
EVE
- Les jouissances de l'esprit sont faites pour calmer les orages du coeur!
- On reconnaît le bonheur au bruit qu'il fait quand il s'en va!
- L'amour vous rend aveugle et le mariage vous redonne la vue!
- On reconnaît le bonheur au bruit qu'il fait quand il s'en va!
- L'amour vous rend aveugle et le mariage vous redonne la vue!
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Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) Ch 87, 3/3/16, p. 70
You are such a tease............that hair cutting scene.......
Lots of built up tension there.
And Dulce Base.........would I ever love to have a tour of that place.
Great story,
Carolyn
Lots of built up tension there.
And Dulce Base.........would I ever love to have a tour of that place.
Great story,
Carolyn
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Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) Ch 87, 3/3/16, p. 70
Wow. The description of Liz's feeling in the previous chapters was so clear and realistic, that it seemed interwoven into the story as thread in a tapestry. It truly speaks of Liz's character and their narrative as a couple.
I'm really excited that Maria is involved.
I'm really excited that Maria is involved.
I like lots of things, but there are three things I like most: love, love... and love
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Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) Ch 87, 3/3/16, p. 70
Please come back and post more really soon? Can't wait to find out what Max and Liz will tell Maria?
And if Maria will find out that Max, Isabel, Michael, Alex, Mr. Evans are aliens? And if Liz and Max will tell Maria what has been going on? Sorry for the question just wondering.
From:
L-J-L 76
And if Maria will find out that Max, Isabel, Michael, Alex, Mr. Evans are aliens? And if Liz and Max will tell Maria what has been going on? Sorry for the question just wondering.
From:
L-J-L 76
Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) Ch 87, 3/3/16, p. 70
That was a lot of awesome reading! Well I'm finally caught up and looking forward to more!!!
I have a few dreamer challenges in mind if you are looking for ideas so pm me!
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Author's Note 10th of March
Hi everyone!
Due to my current inability to find the time to write, the updates will be on a more weekly basis than every third day as perviously Sorry about this. Also, I've gotten out of sync with sending the chapters for editing, which means that I have been "forced" to upload unedited chapters (which I don't like doing). Hence, I'm waiting for the next edit (which I sent to my beta 2 days ago) before there'll be a new update. In other words, I don't know when the next update will be (since it depends on when I'll receive the edit), but hopefully it'll be before the end of this week.
Thank you so so so much for reading and for leaving feedback!
I'm gonna go back to writing now
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Jo
Due to my current inability to find the time to write, the updates will be on a more weekly basis than every third day as perviously Sorry about this. Also, I've gotten out of sync with sending the chapters for editing, which means that I have been "forced" to upload unedited chapters (which I don't like doing). Hence, I'm waiting for the next edit (which I sent to my beta 2 days ago) before there'll be a new update. In other words, I don't know when the next update will be (since it depends on when I'll receive the edit), but hopefully it'll be before the end of this week.
Thank you so so so much for reading and for leaving feedback!
I'm gonna go back to writing now
xx
Jo
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Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) Ch 87, 3/3/16 + A/N 3/10/16 p. 71
Don't worry, I will be waiting... Thanks for the advise! EVE
- Les jouissances de l'esprit sont faites pour calmer les orages du coeur!
- On reconnaît le bonheur au bruit qu'il fait quand il s'en va!
- L'amour vous rend aveugle et le mariage vous redonne la vue!
- On reconnaît le bonheur au bruit qu'il fait quand il s'en va!
- L'amour vous rend aveugle et le mariage vous redonne la vue!
Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) Ch 87, 3/3/16 + A/N 3/10/16 p. 71
that's fine as long as I can still read this awesome story
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Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) Ch 87, 3/3/16 + A/N 3/10/16 p. 71
Take your time!
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