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THE DEVIL OWNS YOU (M/L ADULT) a/n 12/08 [WIP]

Posted: Wed Oct 01, 2008 3:35 pm
by pijeechinadoll
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TITLE: ♥ THE DEVIL OWNS YOU
AUTHOR: Ping (Pijeechinadoll)
DISCLAIMER: I do not own Liz Parker or Max Evans. They are from Roswell. I do not own Isabel or Alex either or a matter of fact anyone one else who is stated in my story. The characters of "Roswell" belong to Jason Katims, Melinda Metz, WB, and UPN. They are not mine and no infringement is intended I do not profit from them, they belong to their owners. ^^
ANY OTHER CHARACTER NOT KNOWN TO ROSWELL BUT WHO IS WRITTEN IN THIS STORY IS A FIGMENT OF MY IMAGINATION> ALL MINE ^^
Pairings/Couples/Category: Max/Liz AU (LOL who else)
Rating: ADULT
SUMMARY: No Tess is not the devil but she might as well be. Liz Parker has been put under a curse by her stepmother Tess who wants to marry Max herself. Max has a son who plays with a little girl the same age as him (she is also his best friend); but what Max doesn't know is that the same little girl is Liz Parker. And Liz Parker can't tell a soul. fairy tale twist:modern setting

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PART: 01

prologue...

23 years old Liz watched out of the window as Max drove off.

They had just gone out on their forth date. She smiled happily. It was the also first time that she had met his 9 year old son. It was also the first time they had spent the night together. She was blissfully happy.

“Good looking guy!” retorted a voice behind her.

Liz turned round and came face to face with her platinum blonde hair step-mother. She had married her dad 10 years ago and had made her life a living hell; especially when her father died suddenly with a heart attack. Tess Harding was a bitch who everyone knew married Jeff Parker for his money, but for some reason Jeff Parker was blinded by lust.

Liz’s mother had died when she was 2 years old. So it only had been her father and she until Tess had come sweeping into their little lives. Liz had been a little girl who was very shy, but everyone loved her. She was a very sweet polite child who grew into a beauty young teenage. But the one person she didn’t get on with was her step mother.

“When did you get back?” required Liz, with a sigh.

Tess had been on holiday in Europe for the last 8 weeks, basically spending all of Jeff Parker’s money. Money which the catering business was losing cause of her, she didn’t work. She didn’t do anything but lay by the pool and drink martinis and go shopping and parties.

“Who is he?” replied Tess not answering Liz question.

Tess was 31 but looked very young for her age. How did she it, she looked like she was as young as Liz.

“None of your business!”

“You are my step daughter. Of course it’s my business!”

Liz knew what Tess was about; she had seduced her last two boyfriends. And now she wanted Max. But Liz wasn’t going to let Tess sink her claws into him.

“You can’t have him Tess.” Liz whispered.

“…I won’t let you have him Tess! I love him…”

“I Lurve him!” whined Tess repeating what Liz said in a mocking voice.

Tess squared up and stood closer to Liz.

“I can have anything I want. And if I want Max Evans I will have him!”

Liz recoiled in shock as Tess slapped her. And how on earth did she know Max’s name?

“He has a son Tess please don’t mess with him!” cried as Liz held her cheek.

Tess laughed.

“Me mess with him? I haven’t even started…”

Tears slipped down Liz face!

“I won’t let you mess with him!” cried Liz again.

Tess laughed even more.

Liz suddenly felt dizzy and blackness hit her.








more??? tbc?

THE DEVIL OWNS YOU part 2

Posted: Tue Oct 07, 2008 4:54 pm
by pijeechinadoll
jake17 lol yes i have to ask. :D it nice to know people are reading
keepsmiling7 lol if you have another reason to hate Tess. i guess i did my job well ^^
Michelle17 more please ^^ yep coming right up
destinyc curious? YEP ME TOO :lol: and i'm writing the story
Hunter aww my little buddy. love it that you read my stories :D
begonia9508 lol love the rhyme BITCH TO WITCH ^^
ken_r lol what can i say my brain is a bit twisted. :lol: :twisted: :D wicked stepmother ^^



thank you for reading: on with the show :D
sorry it short. ><
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PART: 02

prologue 2...

Liz woke up with a splitting headache. She rolled out of bed and swung herself out of bed, she stumbled as she hit the floor.

Everything looked smaller for some reason, maybe it was her headache. But as she reached for her t-shirt she squealed. She screamed in fact.

She screamed and screamed…

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Tess scowled as she was woken up by Liz screaming. She cursed blue murder as climbed out of bed and stormed into Liz’s room. If she wasn’t so pissed off she would have laughed her head off. There stood Liz Parker looking like nothing Liz Parker; well she was Liz Parker but instead of a 23 year old young woman there stood a 9 year old kid.

Tess stared at her, looking very lost and starting howling with laughter.

“Oh my god this is so funny! …I didn’t think it would work but it’s brilliant that book that I found!”

Liz realised that Tess was talking about the book of spells that belonged on the shelf of her grandmother’s library. She knew in her educated and logical mind that the spells in there was useless, so how on earth did Tess change her.

“What have you done Tess?”

Tess sniggered.

“Getting Max the only way I though I could… and have fun at the same time… I mean I could have used my alien powers but this is so much better…”

Little Elizabeth looked confused.

“Wat alien powars? There no suc thing as aliens’ powars?” pouted Liz.

“Oh I do!” whispered Tess sinisterly.

She demonstrated as she blasted a teddy bear that sat on Liz’s desk. Liz screamed. Tess sent an electric current running from a hand and then extinguished it. It disappeared as fast as it came.

Liz cowered away in the corner.

“Wat r you?” whimpered Liz.

“Your worse nightmare, you seen not only am I alien, but I realised that I’m witch as well. And you know what that makes me pretty special.”

A tear slipped down Liz’s face.

“Cry all you want but no one will save you!”

Liz pouted.

“Max will save me! I’m goin’ to tell ‘im”

Tess howled with laughter.

“Max can’t save me you brat! You can’t tell him!”

“I will!” pouted Liz with tears.

“You can’t tell anyone prat! I’ve cursed you and until Max Evans admits that love doesn’t exist. You can’t change back! You have to be a prat in the day time and at night time you get only three hours as a woman!”

“Butt Max ‘nos that luvs is real! Luv is real!”

“Love isn’t real silly girl. And I’m going to teach him a lesson he’s never forget. Love is fake! Now lust is real! And I going to enjoy thoroughly enjoy seducing him. And if I get him you die!”

“Now stop crying and screaming! I need my beauty sleep!”

Tess screamed as she stormed out of the room, slamming the door behind her.

Liz slid to floor hic-cupping and crying her eyes out.

Tess really was a wicked step mother now...








TBC? would you like more. im not sure where going with this. Let me if you're enjoying this.
pingx :D

THE DEVIL OWNS YOU part 3

Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2008 5:46 pm
by pijeechinadoll
hey readers thanks for the feedback. HEY LURKERS WHO ARE READING ^^ :D :D come and say hello ^^
mwah. thank you.
ping x

keepsmiling7 AWW THANK U SO MUCH FOR READING XXX :D
Michelle17 LOL tess will always gets whats coming to her. ITS guranteed in this story ^^
Hunter aww thankyou sweetie. Thank you for reassuring me. x
ken_r LOL im glad i will be of some help. Hopefully i'll learn something from you as well. :D
begonia9508 LOL i so agree :mrgreen:

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PART: 03

illuminium cardé flourium de cara…
naâ daio masai selio du chantum plaro


Tess laughed as she re-read the paragraph.

The curse she had placed on Liz was perfect. Liz Parker wouldn’t be able to defend herself. She was a little prat who she could make Max hate and she was going to enjoy every single moment.

illuminium cardé flourium de cara…
naâ daio masai selio du chantum plaro

DESCRIPTION: put an enchantment on a person to change their age. Read out the hex. The spell can only be broken by an admittance of lust. Object of the hex cannot speak of the curse.

Of course Tess beginning Tess completely missed the small print that suddenly appeared on the page.

When the magic runs out at midnight for three hours ~tie a red ribbon to them to lock to the building of your choice. So they are completely under your command.

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Liz sat there as on her bed as tears slipped down her face. Who was she going to turn to now? She had no one. No-one was going to believe that she was a 23 year old woman trapped inside a 9 year old body. With a wicked stepmother as a mother who has cursed her. If it wasn’t such a bad situation it would be funny. She couldn’t believe she was in this situation; things like this didn’t happen in the real world, only in nightmares and fairytales.

She sighed. How could she explain it to Max without telling him? Her brain was such a mess. Never had she hated anyone more than she hated Tess. She knew Tess would do anything to get Max but this was ridiculous.

Liz pouted. What to do? What to do…

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Max smiled as he put away the last dishes from last night. He was so happy, the happiest he had been in ages. Even Timothy was happy. Talk of the devil, in walked Timmy with a sleepy stroll. He plonked himself in the seat of front of Max.

“Morning son!” grinned Max, as he pushed a glass of milk and a plate of pancakes towards Timmy.

Timmy grunted as he rubbed his eyes.

“MORNING TIMOTHY PHILLIPS EVANS! GOOD MORNING!”

Timmy pulled a face.

“Dad! Do you hav to shout?”

Max grinned.

“Hurry up and eat you breakfast. School is in an hour’s time!”

“DAD YOU’RE TOO HAPPY!”

Max laughed.

A Certain Elizabeth Parker made him happy. It was love.

***

Tess had left the house and had locked her bedroom door. Thank god she had the majority of what she need in her bedroom; her laptop and sewing machine. With a determination Liz got down to work of part 1 of her plan. She wasn’t going to let Tess win. If she couldn’t tell anyone she would just have to work around that…





TBC?? short i know SORRY another cliffhanger. i promise the chapters will get longer.
pingx

THE DEVIL OWNS YOU part 4

Posted: Thu Oct 16, 2008 5:22 am
by pijeechinadoll
sorry for the late update. please forgive me. pingx

destinyc lol you can get up to a lot in three hours can't you :lol:
Michelle17 aww thank you for reading
Hunter my little pm buddy. hope u enjoy the next chapter
begonia9508
Wondering what Liz is planing? sawing a rope to escape maybe...? :lol: :lol: EVE :mrgreen:
LOL nearly though but that would involve a hacksaw of some type ^^ :mrgreen: kids don't have those in their rooms.

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PART: 04

Liz twirled in her dungarees and top. It was amazing what a little unpicking and a sewing machine could do. Thank goodness she was good at stitching. She unpicked the lock with little luck; the window couldn’t be opened because sealed in.

How to get out?

She had 30mins before the school bus arrived.

She sighed.

How to get out?

She then remembered the trap door behind her wardrobe. Tess didn’t know about it. But how to get through the trapdoor without letting Tess know? Liz pouted as she threw open the wardrobe doors and sighed at all her clothes.

She grinned happily as she thought of her idea.

She quickly put away her laptop in the bottom of her drawer underneath her books and papers. And replaced the sewing machine, she collected all the waste into a bag and frowned; she suppose she would have to bring it with her.

She grabbed her desk chair and smiled. Thank god her wardrobe was flat pack furniture. Liz removed one half of the clothes from the wardrobe.

Here goes nothing

Liz closed her eyes swung the chair with trepidation.

She heard a large crack.

She opened her eyes in curiosity.

OH MY GOD IT WORKED!

She lifted the clothes back in and put the chair back, she grab the bag and taken one last look back at her bedroom. Pulling the wardrobe door closed she stepped through the trap door, which sent her down a slide to the basement. She climbed through the next door.



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Liz swung her feet as she sat outside the headmistresses’ office, the secretary’s office

Wow didn’t this just feel like her first day?

Mrs Campbell finally came out and sat down next to her.

“So you said your aunty couldn’t make it?”

Liz nodded but spoke up.

“Uh huh.”

“She sent me with tis letter and put me on ta bus! She had’da emergency… Serena James… my aunty is a doctor!”

Serena was actually the name of her old best friend. She was sure she wouldn’t mind.

“Doctor you say? Which area?!”

“Paed… babies!”

Liz was so struggling not to talk like an adult.

Mrs Campbell smiled.

“Ahh paediatrics! That’s what my son is trying to be. Maybe if and when you aunt is free, you can ask her to speak to him.

Liz nodded eagerly hopping to get the conversation over.

“Can I start skool now?”

“Eager! That’s good!”

Mrs Campbell handed her a new book bag and badge and opened the door. She peeked outside and looked left and right and shouted at someone to come to her office.

“Timmy Evans get your self in my office!”

“OW MISS I DIDN’T DO ANYTHING!” as Timmy scarpered in.

“It was Benjamin!”

Mrs Campbell sighed.

“I shall speak to him later. But for now this new girl she’s in your form set.”

Timmy Evans took one look at Liz and pouted.

“Another girl!”

“YES TIMMY ANOTHER GIRL. NOW YOU BE NICE TO HER OF WE’LL BE HAVING WORDS!”

Timmy scrunched his nose in defiance.

He looked at the girl sitting in dungarees with no socks on inside her shoes.

Hmm… strange.

“Come on! We’re going to be late!”





TBC? ^^ more to come?

THE DEVIL OWNS YOU part 5

Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 10:54 pm
by pijeechinadoll
Hunter: don't worry keep reading. tess will get whats coming to her.
begonia9508: hmm not a good idea escaping but Liz has got to take the chance. :D
garcia88: aww thank you for reading xxx
destinyc: lol yes Liz is clever to enrol herself. all in the name of fun for me to write. :mrgreen:

PS: sorry i seem to be only be able to write short chapters ^^ brain juices are short LOL
ENJOY x

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PART: 05

Ten minutes had gone after the home bell had rung. Beth watched in annoyance as Timmy slammed the ball against the classroom door again and again.

“Can you stop doing that please?”

Timmy turned round and pulled a face.

“Whats with ta please n thank you? You been sayin’ that all day. PLEASE. THANK YOU. PLEASE. THANK YOU. WERE THEY THE ONLY TWO WORDS YOU SWALLOWED?”

Think like a kid. Think like a kid.

“It’s called manners!” retorted Beth. “Didn’t ya daddy teach you any?”

Timmy snorted and continued to slam the ball against the door.

“When ya aunty picking you up?”

The question caught Liz by surprise. Shit she was so determined to see Max she forgot how she was going to get home.

Timmy frowned as he watched Beth face blur in confusion for the first time today. She was one weird girl. Whenever he asked her a question she always had an answer. She had a question for everything. He tried to throw her with stupid questions but still she remained cool.

Timmy liked to think he was the bad boy of the class but he also thought he was really clever. But Beth seemed to know everything, more than him and that annoyed him.

“Hey Cinderella! You didn’t answer my question?”

Beth pouted.

“I couldn’t concentrate. Your ball was distracting me!”

“DISTRACT WHAT? STOP USING BIG WORD. DID U REALLY SWALLOW A DICTIONARY? BENJAMIN SAID YOU DID!”

Beth scrunched her nose in annoyance.

“I went to a private school before!”

“YOU WENT TO A SISSY SCHOOL!” Timmy howled with laughter at his own joke.

“DID NOT!”

“DID TO!”

“Did not!”

“OH shut up!” retorted Timmy.

“You don’t like girls do you?”

“NO I DON’T! girls are sissies!”

“Don’t you like your mummy?” asked Beth.

Timmy Scowled and slammed the ball harder.

Liz felt so guilty for asking, egging him on. But she had to get through to him. She had to get him to open up and like her. Maybe invite her round…

“I said don’t you like you mummy?”

Timmy slammed the ball.

“I heard ya the first time. I don’t have a mummy okay!” Timmy roared.

Beth stumbled back in defence.

“I’m sorry!” she whispered.

Timmy looked up, she did look very sad.

“It’s okay my Dad’s a good dad!”

Beth smiled shyly.

Timmy rolled his eyes.

“Do you like you daddy’s girlfriend?” Beth asked eagerly.

Timmy stopped throwing the ball.

“Wait! How do you know my dad has a girlfriend?”

Liz quickly back-tracked her eagerness,

“All Daddies have girlfriends right?” she whispered.

Timmy shook his head in slight annoyance.

He then returned to slamming his ball against the door.

“She’s new. I guess she’s okay. Dad’s seems to like her.”

“But do you like her?”

Timmy slammed the ball slower.

“She’s cool I guess. She stayed n played computer games with me last night before my bed time…

“I think she stayed the longer because my neighbour came and watched me for a bit.”

“How do you know?”

“I woke to go to do a tinky winky in the middle of the night and Mrs Allen was in the living room. She said Dad had gone to drop Liz off!”

“So you like her?”

“GOD WHAT’S WITH ALL THE QUESTIONS?”

“I was just askin”

“Yeah I like her. She better than all the other ones! NOW will ya stop with all the questions. Your hurting my head.”

Liz smiled secretly as Timmy slammed the ball quicker and harder. Suddenly the door swung open to reveal Max Evans.




TBC? ^^

THE DEVIL OWNS YOU part 6

Posted: Wed Nov 26, 2008 6:36 pm
by pijeechinadoll
i know i know...its been forever that ive updated this. SORRY :oops:
thanks for reading, thanks for the feedback and bumps. x

garcia88 so sorry to keep you waiting kris. i hope u enjoy the next part even though its short. x
begonia9508 Eve thanks as usual. ^^
Hunter HUNTHUNT thank u. xxx
mizzshinoda88 aww tina thank u. :D
destinyc destiny. i always value your feedback. thank u.
Janetfl
Hi Ping :D ,
Just read this story this morning and I'm loving it.
As you know I can't stand Tess and you've made me hate her even more ....
I hope Liz will kick her a..!!!! :lol: :lol: :lol:
I just hope that Tess doesn't get her meet hooks into Max :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: !!!
I just can't wait to see how Liz is going to get past this one!!!
Please update soon
JAN
P.S. Thanks for my beautiful banner and siggie you are a genius!!!!
aww jan thanks for the feedback. ^^ im glad you're reading this story. xx thanks. xx
Hunter bump bump. LOL ^^ thAnK u. pingx
garcia88 yes im back sorry its very very late. :D xxxx
ken_r Ken good to know. :mrgreen:
Saavik60
Very...
LOL weird feedback LOL. ^^ :mrgreen:

PART: 06

Max stood watching outside the classroom watching his son argue with a little dark haired girl. He couldn’t hear the full conversation but he could tell from his son’s body language that he was annoyed.

Liz eyes widen in shock as she saw Max standing before them, she quickly swung round and looked at her book.

“Daddy!” cried Timmy.

“Hey buddy how you doing?”

“I’m cool Daddy!” grinned Timmy.

Max looked round at the girl sitting down silently crying and back at his son.

“Timmy what have I told you about picking on girls.”

Timmy face fell, but then blew up red. “AWW DAD I DIDN’T DO ANYTHING. SHE WAS FINE! OYE TELL HIM I DIDN’T DO ANYTHING!”

Max shook his head at his son and went and sat down next to the little girl.

“Hi there I’m Mr Evan’s Timmy dad. I’m sorry if my son upset you…”

“DAD I TOLD YOU I DIDN’T DO ANYTHING!”

Max looked down at the little girl who sniffled and wiped her tears.

“Timmy didn’t do anything Mr Evans.”

Max looked round at Timmy who was grinning. “SEE DADDY I TOLD YOU!”

“I’m sorry… ignore my son he’s a typical boy.” Max said with a smile.

“Beth… my name is Beth.” Whispered Liz.

“Well nice to meet you Beth. Are u new?”

Liz nodded.

“Did you enjoy your first day?”

Liz nodded.

“Are your parents coming to pick you up?”

Liz shook her head.

“Are you okay?”

Liz shrugged

“You don’t know?” Max smirk as he raised an eyebrow.

Liz nodded.

“You do know?”

“DAD CAN WE GO. SHE’S JUST WEIRD!” shouted Timmy, jumping in front of his dad.

Max frowned at his son. Timmy pouted and threw the ball at the wall.

“Is someone coming to pick you up?” asked Max.

Liz shook her head.

“How you getting home?” asked Max.

Liz looked up to the man she had fallen for as a woman, he was so handsome and yet obviously he didn’t recognise her. And that’s why she cried at the sight of him. She missed talking to him, she missed being with him. How was she supposed to let him know who she was? When ever she tried, it was like her mouth was sealed shut. Her poor heart was crying out. As much as she wanted to stay with Max at the same time it hurt too much to be in the same room.

Liz looked at her watch and nearly shrieked.

“I’ve gotta go!”

“Wait!” Max replied feeling sorry for the girl. For the first time he really looked at her, she looked tired and wary.

“You’ve missed the school bus. How you going to get home?”

Liz brain was working over drive, as much as she would like Max to give her a lift, she couldn’t afford to let he drop her home. Unless she got him to drop him off near by.

“Would you like a lift?”

Liz nodded eagerly.

Timmy pouted.

“AWW DAD DO WE HAVE TO!”

“Yes!” grinned Max. This should be a fun car journey.

TBC? :D :D :D

Re: THE DEVIL OWNS YOU (part 6) M/L ADULT 26.nov.08 pg5

Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 7:23 am
by pijeechinadoll
A/N: hey people >< im so so sory but it doesnt look like im going to be able to update my stories before i go to my aunties. sorry xmas time is busy, with work and other stuff. X

anyway HAPPY XMAS TO EVERYONE ^^.
much love pingx

i hope you people can wait 5 days till i come back.x :D