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THE FIRST TIME (M/L ADULT) A/N 12/22/08 [WIP]

Posted: Tue Aug 26, 2008 6:00 pm
by pijeechinadoll
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fanart made by me.

TITLE: the first time

AUTHOR: Ping (Pijeechinadoll)

DISCLAIMER: I do not own Liz Parker or Max Evans. They are from Roswell. I do not own Isabel or Alex either or a matter of fact anyone one else who is stated in my story. The characters of "Roswell" belong to Jason Katims, Melinda Metz, WB, and UPN. They are not mine and no infringement is intended I do not profit from them, they belong to their owners. ^^
ANY OTHER CHARACTER NOT KNOWN TO ROSWELL BUT WHO IS WRITTEN IN THIS STORY IS A FIGMENT OF MY IMAGINATION> ALL MINE ^^

Pairings/Couples/Category: Max/Liz AU

Rating: ADULT

SUMMARY: Probably Setting: The story go back into the past and future of Liz Parker’s Diary. Due to the fact I don’t know and can’t remember the actually dates of e.g. birthdays etc. (im crap at remembering things like that ^^ so please don't sue me) So I’ve kinda made it up. Lizzie will be 21 in 1999, if you want to work out the calculations go a head :-)
~Max and Liz’s relationship… read how they grow up and grow apart?! Will they ever get back together? I’m not sure if anyone will have powers, just read on to find out.

Author's Note: I’ve been around in this group for ages (lurking ^^ reading other fanfics) .This was my VERY VERY first attempt at a long story. i wrote THIS STORY ages ages ages ago but decided to post it up here I hope you like it and enjoy it. i have to say i hope i've IMPROVED since i wrote this. but hopefully this story is still readable.
~I’m a dreamer at heart enjoy. I would love feedback. Yep, I want to know what you think of my attempt at a little fiction.
*please note that there will be a scene of RAPE (sorry to readers in advance)
i will mark it with a warning in advance and highlight the title.

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22nd July 1989
It all started on Lizzie’s birthday... 11th birthday that is...

8:00am

‘Hey Lizzie dear... Wakey wakey rise and shine!! Now what is your mummy and daddy favourite day today?!’ beamed a face.

Lizzie looked up see that her mum and dad standing in front of her with a small cake and present. She grinned like a little girl, knowing that her favourite day had came again. Her birthday!

‘Blow out the candles!’ smiled her mummy after she and daddy had sung happy birthday.

‘Every year I hope and dream,
All my wishes come True
I close my eyes… I search hard inside
This wish I hope comes true…’

And with saying that little Lizzie made her wish and blew out her candle. She never wished for much, for example last year she wanted a bike. And she got it. But this year it was something bigger.

‘So Pumpkin what did you wish for this year?’ whispered Mr Parker.

‘You know Daddy if I told, my wish won’t come true!’ giggled Lizzie.

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Her parents then left Lizzie to get changed; it was going to be her first birthday party with all (well most) the kids from her school. She couldn’t wait. Usually when she had a birthday party, it was her mummy, daddy, Alex and Maria. But this year was going to be different. Her parents allowed her to invite 50 kids to the Crashdown Café. Somehow she knew that this year was different… something was going to change. About her, she didn’t know… all she knew the word change rang through her little head!

Quickly getting changed, she pulled on her favourite pink teddy bear top and her beige jeans. Then she realised that she hadn’t opened her present. She gingerly sat herself next to the radiator. She could feel the heat down her back. Lizzie carefully peeled of the wrapping paper, to reveal two separate treats. First one was a hardback book. She opened it to find that there were no words in it. Pages after pages of blank pages. No pretty pictures and no big words. It saddened her… what kind of present was this. But then as she flipped the book closed when she noticed that there was writing on the very first page.

‘My dearest Lizzie,

You’re probably wondering why I brought you this book…
Well the fact is Daddy and me didn’t know what to get you
And so Daddy had let me pick.
I thought long and hard and then I realised that you’re getting old.
The first thing that I got was a diary from my mum.
And so I thought that I’d do the same…
This is something she can put down all your secrets and precious moments…
The good and the bad!
Treasure it and keep it safe.

Love your mummy.

Beyond the end of time,
My little baby cries
She’s growing fast she going tall,
She’s not my baby any more.
You’re growing fast you’re growing tall
I still love you my precious one.
I watched you grow…
You’re beautiful…
I hope I’ll be proud of you
4eva more.

‘Wow a secret diary… what shall I write… wow… I don’t know…’ laughed Lizzie. ‘I’ll write about my party later.’

She then picked up the other present; it was inside the present but was wrapped separately. It fell soft; she pulled of the paper and what fell out was a piece a fabric. She held it up and realised that it was a bra. A little tag on the end said 32a. She was confused at the number; maybe she would ask her mummy later. She slipped it in to her pocket and then took a peek around her door… Whew… the coast was clear! She then ran to the bathroom and locked the door.

9:00am

Lizzie pulled off her top and then her vest top that was underneath. To reveal a body that was still growing. Lizzie never noticed before, never needed to, that the fact her chest was growing outwards. She shivered and slipped on the bra that she had taken out of her pocket. It actually fitted perfectly. She then heard voices screaming and laughing. It was her best friends Alex and Maria. They were shrieking from the top of their voices… ‘Birthday girl where are you?’

Lizzie quickly threw her vest top into the washing basket and then quickly put her top back on. She turned quickly to see that her cheeks were flushed and blushing pink.

‘Lizzie Parker where are you?’ squealed Maria.

Lizzie quickly flushed the toilet and rinsed her hand and ran out of the bathroom and collided straight into her best friends. They all landed flat on the floor, all three out of breathe, sat on the floor giggling.

‘Happy birthday, Lizzie… HIP HIP HOERAY!’ shouted Alex, as he swung his arm around Lizzie to give her a hug.

Maria sat there still laughing. ‘So Miss’s Parker what did you wish for? Tell me!’

Lizzie stuck out her tongue, ‘it won’t come true then!’

‘Oh leave her alone…’ replied Alex, ‘She’s super…sit…ious…’

‘Will you stop it with your big words! Someone will think that you’re a brainiac! No worst still a GEEK!!!

Alex then ran after her, chasing her down stairs. ‘I happen to like big words…’

Lizzie laughed at two friends, as she followed the downstairs where she could hear children shriek and laugh…

5 years later,
(Liz Parker is sixteen)
Liz is writing in her diary. (POV)

15 May 1994,

9:00pm

…Gosh the last time I wrote in this diary was last week, but it feels like a lifetime. Well today I went on my first date… with Kyle Valenti. He’s okay! But sometime I wish there was those sparks that daddy had told me about when I was young…

<She looked at the dance photo. She wore a purple dress, with her white snickers. Kyle looked funny… he wore a shirt and black jeans and of course his sneakers. But the most funniest thing was his tie. It just looked so wrong and he couldn’t stop pulling at it>

…Oh how I miss you daddy, nothing is the same. I wish that you had seen me going to the school dance. First one! Daddy are you still watching from above… >>>

Liz then flicked back to 2 years ago… and started to read…
(Liz Parker is fourteen)
(This part of the stories is just being told as it has happened… In Liz’s diary are just mainly her feelings…)


6 September 1992,
3:30pm

Lizzie dropped off her bag in to the living room and ran out into the café. Maria and Alex sat there in their usual cubicle. ‘You know what instead gawping at her sweetie, ask her out!’ screeched Maria. ‘How long have you fancied her… since Lizzie’s B’day party 11th b’day party… really sugar that’s sad.’

Lizzie didn’t hear a word as she was too busy thinking about school.

Alex turned to look at Lizzie, who was in her own little world. ‘Help me out Lizzie… Maria’s picking on me!’

‘OH Maria leave him alone. Alex don’t listen to her it you don’t like what she says. Do you want you’re food?’ smiled Lizzie. She always played the neutral one.

Her Mum came to take her orders and then disappeared.

Alex and Lizzie then turned to look at Maria, who was doodling on her napkin. She was drawing hearts all over it. Lizzie then spoke up, ‘Maria there a rumour going round saying that you fancy Micheal and he fancies you. And that you two where caught kissing behind the oak tree. And that Pam saw you and she’s really angry cause she likes Micheal and that…’

It was then Maria cut her off. ‘ Jeez just because I’m drawing hearts and there’s a rumour… don’t believe everything you hear! Anyway I was just about to draw stars on top…’ Maria then drew some stars on top. ‘See!!’

Alex then raises his eyebrows and turned quietly to drink his drink.

‘Lizzie come and get your food.’
‘Coming Mummy!’ answered Lizzie.

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THE FIRST TIME M/L ADULT part 2

Posted: Tue Aug 26, 2008 6:18 pm
by pijeechinadoll
Lizzie carefully carried the tray towards the table, when suddenly a boy came rushes out of nowhere… The tray went flying out of her hands and came crashing to the floor. The plates shattered to small fragments.

Alex and Maria ran over to see what had happened

Lizzie’s mother heard the crash and quickly came out. Lizzie was trying to clean up the mess, as was the boy. ‘Sorry mam!’ squeaked the boy.

A man then came in known as the sheriff, happened to be passing by. ‘What’s all the commotion here?’

‘Mummy it wasn’t my fault, you know that I’m always careful…’ whimpered Lizzie. She wanted to cry everyone was watching her.

‘Yeah it wasn’t! It was that boy!’ said Alex, as he help Lizzie up. ‘I saw it all… He was running!’

The sheriff looked down at the boy, who was crouched on the floor staring at the plates. He was unpleased at the mess the boy had created and was in more angry to realised that it was his own son, Kyle.

‘Kyle I told you if you wanted to run you do you’re running on the sporting track, not where there are people about. Get home now!’

Kyle then left in a strop at being told of by his dad. ‘I’m really sorry about the mess Mrs Parker!’ He then placed some money in her hand. ‘Here’s the money for the damages. And I’m sorry again, Kyle sometimes can get a little excited.’

Sheriff Valenti then left.

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Lizzie cleaned up the mess, whilst her mum went to prepare more food. Once the mess had been cleaned up, Liz put the dustpan back and then went to pick up the tray.

‘Lizzie dear let me take it!’ said her mum, looking up as she fried the burgers.

‘Mummy I am capable… that was a one off.’ smiled Lizzie, as she still felt bad.

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Lizzie must have talked to soon as soon as she walked out in to the café. A boy literally was walking backward straight in to Lizzie’s tray. Lizzie nearly screamed, but nothing came out. She clutched the tray hard, so it didn’t go flying. But she still ended up on the floor with food down her top.

‘I’m sorry!’ cried the boy getting a napkin, trying his best to clean up the mess. But was actually making it worst.

Lizzie looked up to see it was Max Evans. The last time she had seen him was three years ago, at her eleven-birthday party. His parents then decided to leave to go to Vancouver to start up a business. So Max left and so did Isabel and Tess. But then they turned up back up in the blue last week.

Lizzie then remembered that was in the past and now in the present, she had curry down her favourite white shirt and Max Evans was not helping matters, in fact he was making it worse!

Alex was on the floor to, but that’s because he was laughing his head off.

Maria grinned at the sight and then realised that her best friend looked like she was about to cry. She quickly whacked her other friend around the head to stop his laughter. It was even funnier to see Alex head suddenly spin round… He didn’t know what quite hit him. But he just sat there rubbing his head. Maria went over to Lizzie. ‘Jeez what is wrong with you boys… can’t you stand on your own feet without knocking a girl down... let alone walk in the right direction. Talk about immature! Alex pick the tray up, I’m taking Lizzie upstairs!’

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(Alex POV, as Liz is gone upstairs)

Alex was still kinda laughing, as he picked up the tray and wiped the floor.

‘I’m sorry did I upset her!’ said Max.

‘Yep sorry! As a matter of fact you’re the second boy who’s upset! So if I was you get out of here before Mrs Parker comes out. Cause I tell you she wont be please.’

‘Oh okay!’ said Max, feeling glum at the whole situation. He then started to walk away.

‘... You know what Max; if you want to cheer Lizzie up, get a replacement for her top. It was her favourite, but I have to say you made it worse.’

‘I did?!’ That made Max feel even worse.

‘So I’m Alex by the way!’ grinned Alex.

‘Yeah I remember, you were the boffin! The clever one!’ Said Max turning back with a smile. Izzy used to say that you three were like peas in a pod, always together. The boffin, the hippy and the…’

‘Wait did you say Izzy!’ gulped Alex.

‘Uhh… yeah… you know my twin sister Isabel, She was meant to start back last week but she was ill. Then there’s my younger sister Tess!

‘Alex!!’ shouted a voice.

‘Sorry Max I better go or Maria will ring my neck.’

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As Alex began to walk up the stairs, he was recalling what Max had said. He didn’t even know that Isabel knew his name. And well it was a compliment for him for her to call him a boffin. That word now meant a little bit more, he actually liked it.

‘Alex stop dallying about, we are going ten pin bowling to cheer Lizzie up! Get your jacket.’ Grabbing both of them.

Alex turned round to Lizzie as Maria ran ahead to go and ask Mr Parker to drop them off. ‘Max is really sorry you know!’

‘You’ve changed you tuned I thought that you said that that family was snobby!’

‘No sorry that was Maria, anyway Max and Isabel are really nice.’

‘Isabel! How did she get into the conversation?’

‘Didn’t you know that Alex fancied her? Laughed a voice behind them.

They both turned to see that it was Maria, dragging Mr P’s hand and with the car keys in her other.

Lizzie starts to write in her diary.
8:30pm,

I can’t believe I was that last one to know. I mean Maria has known all this time- it really upsets me! Alex said that neither one of us was meant to find out, but Maria was blackmailing him. I didn’t realise it was Isabel that they were talking about hours earlier whilst we were in the café. But it’s not the point. Anyway they couldn’t stop fussing over me, so I forgave them. I don’t think I have ever stayed mad with them for long. I mean they’re my bestest mates. I love them. Anyway we had a lot of fun. Kyle Valenti was there with his mates and he brought me a hot dog to share with him. Maria and Alex were in stitches; they couldn’t stop laughing at me. Kyle kept saying sorry about before. He’s kinda sweet! Actually he was meant to be grounded but he sneaked out, he then turned round to me and said that it must of been fate, as we meet at bowling. Maria says that he fancies me, but I think he was just being polite! I mean who on earth would fancy me? Me plain old boring Lizzie Parker?

10:00pm

Okay I just had to stick this in my diary before I forget it. After I wrote in my diary, I went to pick up my white shirt from my balcony. You know the one with the curry sauce that I tried to scrub off with the help of Maria. But still didn’t budge!! Anyway I went outside, to pick it and… guess what it clean! Pure white! I went to thank Mummy for getting it out, but she didn’t have a clue what I was talking about. And she was didn’t realise that I had another accident. Strange. Anyway it looks brand new, and smell… well fresh… full of lilies smell…And It was folded up nice and neat. It looks well brand new…

THE FIRST TIME M/L ADULT part 3

Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 8:17 pm
by pijeechinadoll
enjoy ^^



7 September 1992,
(This part of the stories is just being told as it has happened… In Lizzie’s diary are just mainly her feelings…)


Next Morning 11:00am

Lizzie woke up to see the sun steaming through her curtains. It was going to be a nice day. She climbed out of bed and put on that favourite shirt of her and bounced down the stairs, to get breakfast and then go to school.

She heard muffled voices coming from the living room. Lizzie creped a little bit closer and but her ear to the door, whilst peeking through the door.

She didn’t understand what was happening…

‘Gosh Amy what am I going to tell Lizzie, she’s going to be devastated… how am I going to cope…’ and with that Lizzie mother started to cry.

Amy Deluca was trying her best to comfort her.

Lizzie carefully pushed the door open and went up to her mum. Her mum looked devastated and surprised and gave her a hug and then passed a letter to her. ‘Read it my Princess!’ she whispered.

Lizzie stumbled back up to her bedroom, balcony and fell in to her seat. She pulled open her letter; she would talk to mummy and daddy afterwards. She looked at the writing it wasn’t familiar to her. She pulled open the envelope…

To my Lizzie,

I never realised how much you’ve grown until the last few days. God There is so much that I want to tell you and do with you, but I know I won’t fit it all in this letter. When I first saw you come out into this world, I knew that you would be precious. I wanted to teach you everything, but I can’t, time is running out, time is of the essence.

Lizzie, I love you dearly and I never told you this but I’m dying, I didn’t want to see you in pain. I’m glad that I will see you happy and I hope that you saw that you made me happy.

Please Lizzie take care of Nancy. I know that she will need you and you will need her. Your mummy loves you as much as me. I feel sad at the thought a leaving you.

(Lizzie felt the tears run down her face)

You’re growing up to be a fine young woman and I only hope that the man that ever bags you will realise what a catch you are. And how Special you are! I only wish that I could be at your wedding and see your children grow up. By sadly it won’t happen.

Get a good education, a good job- you always told me when you was young that you wanted to be a schoolteacher. I hope that you achieve your goal! Don’t ever let anyone tell you your dreams can’t come true. Don’t let anyone force you into anything you don’t want to.

Lizzie my dear have a prosperous life!!

Lots of love your Daddy!

I’m sorry to leave… I will always love you.

Don’t worry; I will always be by your side. I will also be watching you day and night even though I’m not going to be here with you. Please don’t give any grieve to your mummy. She needs you to be strong and mature.
But I know that you are already that.

In the envelope I a silver key on your eighteenth birthday ask you mummy for the box. But for now wear this key around you neck for good luck and save keeping.

I LOVED YOU LIZZIE AND I STILL DO! DO NOT FORGET THAT AND DON’T FORGET ME… CAUSE I’LL ALWAYS REMINBER YOU!!

Lizzie sat there gobsmacked, her daddy was gone… god… he was gone… how would she cope… She read the letter again, realising she did recognise the writing the first time. But it was such a blur and she knew as soon as she left the living room. It was bad news…

14 September 1992,
12:00am

It was seven days later; Jeffrey Parker had just been buried. Lizzie had sat in her bedroom since then. Maria and Alex had tried to talk to her, but she didn’t want to know. She ran out of the house and kept running and running… She managed to find her self down at the graveyard. She broke down into tears. She stared at her father’s head stone through her stinging eyes- “The beloved Husband and Father, who will be deeply missed. Always be with you!! JEFFREY PARKER 7:11:1992”

Lizzie then found a hand on her shoulder. ‘I know how you feel, I lost my mum… Don’t worry it will get easier… eventually…’

Kyle looked down at Lizzie, trying to suppress his own sadness, by grinning. ‘I’m here if you want to take your anger, upset and frustrations out… I could be ya voodoo doll!

Lizzie hugged Kyle, whilst her tears became a never-ending fountain…

Back to 5 years later,
(Liz Parker is sixteen)
Liz is continuing writing in her diary. (POV)

<<< But did I tell you that I did try to have fun. (I know what you’ll be thinking; it’s two years since you’ve gone.) Yet I still miss you daddy. Maria went with this boy Brody he’s new. In my eyes, he’s a bit mysterious… but maybe it’s just because he’s NEW!!

Do you remember Isabel? No I don’t suppose you do… anyway she came to my 11th Birthday party, with her sister and brother. She’s really pretty and she was well popular when we were at school. And she ten times as popular now, as she had lived in Vancouver. All the boys fancied her and asked her to the dance. But the weird thing is she asked Alex. She’s actually quite sweet! Not as snobby and stuck up as I thought. LOL. NITE DADDY!!

16 May 1994,
9:00am


It was on the weekend, what a chaotic day. The Chrashdown was jammed full of people. I don’t know how me and mum and Maria coped… the past few days. Mum said something about getting a new chef to hire.

(That day…)

‘Hi Lizzie!’ said Kyle. ‘ Are you busy?’

Lizzie looked round herself, Kyle looked too as he grinned sheepishly. ‘Guess you are! I’ll sit and wait!’

‘Kyle you’ll be waiting a very long time!’

‘I’ll just daydream about you… you know the wild fantasies!!’ a comment that defiantly made Lizzie blush.

Isabel then walked in with Alex, Tess and Max. They sat down and looked at the menu.

Lizzie walked up to them, she didn’t know why but the whole family of them being together intimidated her. Yet her best friend sat between Isabel and Tess looking pleased and relaxed. Isabel was grinning as Alex whispered into her ear. ‘Tell me what you said!’ squealed Tess. Even though she was a year younger, she sounded like a child.

Lizzie inched up. ‘Sorry what would you like to order?’

Everyone glanced up at her; their piercing eyes shook her slightly.

Isabel glanced down at the table, whilst Max continued to stare at her. Tess just turned the other way towards Alex.

Alex grinned at Liz after a while. ‘Isabel, Tess and Max, I want to personally introduce to you my best friend Liz Parker, better known as Lizzie.’
Isabel looked up and smiled. ‘Duh Alex I already knew Lizzie, it’s just that we hardly talked before.’

‘Hi! Sorry!’ said Lizzie, just at the same time as Max, exactly the same words

Lizzie suddenly blushed pink in her cheeks.

‘Lizzie I need your help if you’re not ordering! Damn!’ shouted Maria. ‘Mrs Parker we need a new cook, no make that a new waitress… Lizzie!’

Lizzie quickly moved to the kitchen, as she dished out the orders to the customers the more orders came through. She wanted to scream at everyone to leave, she wished her dad was here, he seemed to be able to do everything right. She watched her mum just go through the motions like a robot ready to clunk out.

Lizzie then felt a tap on her shoulder. She spun round to find herself face to face with Max Evans. ‘Let me help you!’ was his only reply.

Lizzie and her mum watched in awe and surprise as Max took over the kitchen and worked quickly and sufficiently. Maria even had the chance to sit down to rest, so she was enjoying every minute. Isabel seemed happy for her brother, so that made Alex happy. Tess had already left.

TBC

THE FIRST TIME M/L ADULT 4

Posted: Thu Aug 28, 2008 7:26 pm
by pijeechinadoll
8:00 pm Closing Time

Lizzie watched as her mum counted up the profits. ‘Not a bad day’s work!’ grinned Maria. She then turned to look at Max, ‘Look has he even stopped yet he’s still working.’

‘Max!’ called Mrs parker, after they closed, before Max had left. ‘Come and eat with us.’

Mrs parker prepared the food in the kitchen and brought it out. Sitting at the table Lizzie was quiet as Maria and her mum did must of the talking. Afterwards Lizzie went up to the shower and then went to say goodnight, but Maria and Max had already left.

The phone then rang before she fell asleep. ‘Hello Lizzie, it’s Kyle!’

‘Oh hello!’ murmured Lizzie, remembering she had a boyfriend.

‘So what’s up? You sound tired!’

‘Yep just really tired! Kyle… sorry I’ll see you tomorrow at school.’

17th May 1994
12:00pm


‘Okay in today’s biology lesson I’m going to put you into groups of three. Isabel, Micheal and… Liz. In one group…’

‘Miss I’m not working with him, he’ll bring my grade down.’ Pouted Isabel.

‘Think I wanna work with you?’ muttered Micheal.
‘You Miss Evans have no choice, I can’t change it for you, or I’ll have to change it for everyone else. No you go and sit with him. Miss Lizzie Parker I see you have no problem?!’

Liz tried not to laugh. This was going to be very interesting. ‘No problem, but it Liz Miss Atkins not Lizzie any more!’

Once the group were together, they were all given different categories, to research for. The final result was a slide show.

(Isabel’s P.O.V)

‘God I can’t believe I’m working with that lazy pig!’ cried Isabel.

‘Izzy you’re talking to you’re self again.’ Laughed her boyfriend looking up from his textbook. He planned a kiss on her cheek.

‘I’ve also got to work with Lizzie…’

‘Is that so bad?’ question Alex. ‘Please try to get on with her, she’s my best friend and she’s really nice!’

‘Alex why is that you never let me finish. I don’t mind working with Lizzie. Really! It’s just Micheal Geurin who I hate! God he’s such a slacker. I mean last year I got my first D, not even a C a D. aaAAAHHH!’ cried Isabel with frustration.

‘…Awww I love it when you’re angry!’

‘Well I love it when you’re sweet…’

Unknown to the rest of the world, Isabel had always had a crush on Alex since she was 11. She remembered the fact that Jody one of her friends (now living in Switzerland) had hurt her self when playing and Alex was the only boy that came over and tried to stop her crying. He was so sweet. I mean she always thought he was clever, but being so sweet, made her like him more.

She then had to leave for Vancouver. She so didn’t want to leave her friends, most importantly Alex. Whilst in Vancouver she didn’t have a Boyfriend, she noticed a lot of boys were annoying and ignorant. She missed watching Alex goofing around. She made a few friends, but like Max, she felt like a loner. Tess her younger sister by 5 months, was the only one that seem to have settled down completely. She had a number of boyfriends, a lot of friends. Isabel wondered did Tess get that from her. Isabel was Miss popular in Roswell. But now thinking back she wasn’t sure whether or not it was for someone’s benefit.

It was then after three years later, Isabel’s dad got a transfer back to Roswell. But the first week she was meant to go back she came down with the flu. She so wanted to see Alex. But when she did it was only for a brief moment, either she’ll get dragged away or he did. And by that time 2 years had dragged on. And then their first dance arrived…

She couldn’t believe at first when he said yes. All the boys had asked her, but she point blank refused. She only wanted to go with boy. She wanted Alex. But it had seemed to her before, that he didn’t seem to know that she existed, he was always messing around with the only two girls in his life. His best mates Lizzie and Maria. Could he ever fit her into his life?

2:00pm

It was Liz’s history lesson. Very boring! She sat usually with Alex, but this time, Kyle managed to bag his seat. And that sort of pissed Liz off, but she didn’t know why.

‘Do you wanna go to the cinema later?’ Kyle wrote on a piece of paper.

‘Um I guess so I’m not doing anything!’ She wrote back.

‘Okay everyone; I’m going to be setting you projects to do. As we live in Roswell, the town that supposed to have a crashed UFO and the USA alien convention is coming to town. I want you to research and write up a essay… in pairs that is.’

‘But Sir don’t you think that we’ve got enough projects on the go, as well as in other subjects!’

‘Well I don’t mind!’ said Pam. ‘…as long as I can I work with Max.’

She then gave him a wink, in which Max just blushed and glanced back his book.

‘Pam… You will not be randomly choosing anyone!’ said Mr Williams.

The room fell silent, Mr Williams continued, ‘Okay everyone’s name is in the hat. So start picking.’

‘I hope I working with you!’ grinned Kyle, wrapping his arm around Liz.

‘Woooohhhh!!!’ screamed the class.

Liz blushed.

‘Shush!’ muttered Mr Williams. ‘Liz my star pupil! PICK!’

Liz dived her hand straight down to the bottom and pulled one straight out and looked at the piece of paper.

‘Is it me?’ questioned Kyle, grabbing the piece of paper.

Liz gulped. She had a strange feeling about this. ‘Ummm no it says Max!’

Max then looked up, and for a split second, they locked eyes. He then looked down.

There were an immediate uproar especially from Kyle and Pam at the end of lesson.

‘There is a saying Kyle, All fair in Love and War!’ was all Mr Williams said, walking out.


TBC. LOL ^^ :lol:

THE FIRST TIME M/L part 5

Posted: Sat Aug 30, 2008 2:28 pm
by pijeechinadoll
3:00 pm

The bell had rung a couple of minutes ago. ‘Liz… umm are you doing anything tonight?’ wondered Max, turning to look at her.

Liz looked up and was about to say something, but Kyle came up behind her and wrapped his arms around her waist. ‘Soor…ry I’m taking me girlfriend out!! See you later Max-Boy!’

Diary Entry: -

Okay its 4:30, quick summary of today. It so strange today, I mean I bundled with people that I just usually don’t associate with. I’ve got to work with Isabel and Micheal. He just gives me the freaks. It'll be good to work with Isabel though. Anyway I’ve also got to work with Max Evans. He’s… I mean he’s clever, that will be good, but he’s so quiet. He hardly ever talks to me. I don’t have a clue how his brain works; actually do I even want to know. Oh forgot to add I’ve got my second date with Kyle. Fingers cross for good luck that it goes okay.

9:00 pm

Liz and Kyle arrived at the Crashdown.

‘So what did you think of the film!’ asked Kyle. ‘I wasn’t sure if you wanted to see an action. So I thought the Green Mile seem ideal!’

‘It so sad, Poor John died for a murder he didn’t do. He had a gift and it was wasted. He saved that dead mouse and cured that woman of cancer.’

‘I know!’ whispered Kyle. He then leaned over to kiss Liz. Liz’s first kiss, she hadn’t known what to expect, but she liked it. But there weren’t any fireworks that she expected, like she saw on TV.

‘I’ll see you tomorrow Kyle,’ murmured Liz. ‘I’m tired!’

‘Oh okay!’ He then left, after he kissed her on the cheek.

♥♥♥♥♥

Liz then noticed that the kitchen light was on. And wondered why her mum was awake. She unlocked the door and then locked it back. She could hear music coming form the kitchen. It was on quite loud for her enough to hear. It was playing Dido’s Here with me, her favourite song. She went in and saw that a boy was bent cleaning the walls. So Liz turned the music off to get his attention.

And it worked because he turned round. And for mini- second Liz’s heart skipped a beat.

‘…What? What… are you doing here?’ cried Liz.

‘Um sorry!! Don’t you know that your mum gave me a job! Did I scare you? Because you look a bit pale.’

‘You had no effect on me what so ever!’ huffed Liz. She didn’t know why he frustrated her so much.

‘Oh sorry then, I’ve nearly done, then I lock up afterwards.’ Said Max.

(Max P.O.V)

I don’t know why but Lizzie feels cold towards me. What have I done to upset her? Should I ask her?

I watched her go up the stairs. Suddenly I don’t feel like working anymore. I hope she ain’t like this when we work together.

21st May 1994

Liz woke up; it was the strangest dream she had last night. ‘She was walking up a cliff. She was wearing a white gown. She then stood on the edge waiting… then someone came up from behind her and kissed her. She melted from his touch…’

Liz couldn’t stop thinking about the dream. Liz couldn’t figure out who he was. But that’s all she could think of- him. He played on her mind she couldn’t concentrate. ‘Liz! Are you okay girl; you seem to go all to-to on us. You all spaced out. What’s the matter?’ grinned Maria.

‘Oh nothing… how you? It feels like we haven’t talked in ages? No wait I know the reason why, you’ve been to busy with Brody. Just like Alex is with Isabel.’

‘You can talk! What about Kyle?!’ laughed Maria.

‘Umm we just like each others company… we just get along!’

‘And!’

And what?’

‘Lizzie parker, I’ve known you since I was five and I can tell that something is bothering you!’

‘Nothing! Look the bell has gone, I’ll see you later.’

♥♥♥♥♥

‘Hi Liz! So what are we doing today!’

‘Oh hello Isabel… um we’re finishing structures. Where’s Micheal?’

‘Oh you know probably slacking again!’ mumbled Isabel. But then continued with a grin. ‘But I think we get more work done- plus the fact we get to chat more!’

‘Oh okay!’

‘Is something bothering you Liz, cause I can sort of tell?’

Liz was so distracted by the quick question it caught her off balance. ‘Um yes, No… sorry… No!’

‘Is it a boy?’ questioned Isabel. ‘And I sense that it’s not Kyle.’

Liz glanced at Isabel weirdly. Isabel pulled a face. ‘Okay!’ smiled Liz. ‘How do you know?’

‘Let’s just say I’m a good judge of character and I’m good at reading people’s facial expressions.’

‘Really what else can you tell me?’

‘I can tell…’ Isabel looked hard into Liz’s face. ‘That you’re not quite at peace. Something is bothering you, it’s playing really deeply into you’re mind. It’s making you frustrated at not being able to find answers… I could tell you more, but then I’ll be giving you’re life story.’

‘Really!!!’

‘Nah I just say that for effect. But I word of advice, I think you’re looking in the wrong place. Don’t close anyone out and I mean nobody Liz… cause it will result in you’re loss!’

Diary Entry: -
21st May 1994


1:00pm

Okay what Isabel said was very strange, but it did make some sense. Very freaky. There was defiantly some truth to it. The dream I can’t get out of my head. Yes someone is defiantly on my mind. And it’s not Kyle. But where do I find answers. Where? How? I’m so pissed off and upset about this, Isabel right- FRUSTRATION!!!

Plus I don’t know whom else I could talk to. Maria is always with Brody. Alex is always with Isabel. Anyway Alex is a boy! I couldn’t talk to him about this stuff. And Kyle is a defiantly no! No!

I really feel like I’ve come to a dead end… gosh is that the time. I better get some sleep before work…’

‘Lizzy!! Lizzy!! Wake up!’ Someone cried

‘Mum…! Huh! Okay… what’s the matter?’

‘You’re Auntie Sally is sick and has been rushed into hospital. I need to go to New York! Will you be able to hold the fort? Max, Maria, Dannii can help you. Will you be okay? Max is working in the afternoons and Eric will be coming to work in the morning.’

‘Huh… Eric! Who’s he?’ replied Liz, drifting back to sleep.

‘You’re cousin silly, you know Auntie Alena’s son. You used to get on really well when you were younger. Lizzie are you awake!’

‘Umm yeah!’

‘He’ll be down on Monday; Max said that he’ll help you on the weekend. Okay!’

Lizzie saw her mum off and then went into the Crashdown. Great she felt even more alone.

It wasn’t as busy as she thought, after she had taken out the garbage. Maybe she could sit down with Maria and have a quick chat. She called out to Maria, but couldn’t find her. She then looked in the changing rooms first, then the toilets and last of the entire kitchen. Max was frying the burgers. ‘Umm have you seen Maria?’

Max turned up to look at Liz. ‘Yeah, she just gone home. She felt sick… well she was sick, well she was! Do you need some help, we could call Dannii!’

Liz was upset about Maria, but suddenly felt her temper boil. ‘I am capable!’ she cried at Max. ‘I’m going to get the orders if you need me!!’

THE FIRST TIME M/L 6

Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 12:49 pm
by pijeechinadoll
9:00pm

By the time it hit closing time the afternoon rush had came and gone most of the remaining customers had just left. Max avoided contact with Liz and kept communication limited. Which actually made Liz feel bad. Yet every time for some reason she couldn’t help but snap at him. She watched as he cleaned up the floor. He didn’t even look up once. She was about to walk away when she had this feeling that she ought to apologise. ‘Max… Look! I’m really sorry…’

Max looked up, his eyes glistened and a smile grew on his face. ‘Hey it’s okay! I don’t mind you taking you’re anger out on me. It wouldn’t be healthy to keep it bottled up. Or… you could just always just… talk to… me…’

‘You…!’ Liz was surprised as well as shocked.

‘Why what’s wrong with me? I’m actually a good listener! Grinned Max.

‘You know what we haven’t talked since my 11th Birthday…’

Max sat down next to Liz at the counter. ‘Yeah it’s strange we see each other nearly everyday… but never say more than hello to each other.’

‘Tell me about it…’ Liz looked at Max. ‘Why is that?’

‘I don’t know. You tell me. I haven’t got a clue.’

‘I don’t know… the last time we chatted properly was at my party. You were wishing me happy birthday. You gave me a necklace, But I…’

Liz was about to continue, when Max replied, ‘I know, you lost it…’

‘How did you know?’ answered Liz, this was getting sort of strange.

Max looked away for a second and reached inside his pocket and pulled out a red little velvet pouch. He then emptied the content on to the table. Liz gulped as she immediately recognised it. It had Lizzie Parker- Roswell engraved onto the pendent and on the other side had an image of a hand print ‘… Is that my one… where?’

‘The day I was leaving, I found it. I was going to bring it to you, but my mum said I couldn’t, as I would have missed the plane. And that I would have to just post it.’

‘Why didn’t you?’

Max looked at Liz. ‘Don’t you understand that I wanted to give you it back in person…?’

It still hadn’t clicked to Liz where the conversation was going. ‘So you came back, I still don’t understand why you just didn’t me it back then.’

Max grinned and shrugged his shoulders. He knew that he had to do it now or he would never have a chance or the guts. He then leaned over towards and kissed her. Liz was so shocked she quickly pulled away.

And this was not the reaction Max was looking for. ‘…I’m so sorry Liz… I don’t know what came over me. Umm here’s you’re necklace. Sorry I had it for so long.’

He placed the necklace in her hand and got up.

‘Max!’ Liz cried, ‘What is this all about? You can’t do that to me and walk away. Why are you messing with me? Why did you kiss me? What have I ever done so badly to you?’

Max was silent. He didn’t even turn round.

Liz heart was pounding fast and she felt angry and upset. ‘Max answer me!’
She leaned over to turn him round to face her and the instant contact to him was strange. She felt light- headed and dizzy. But suddenly she had like a flashback.

# Lizzie’s party #

# They were playing spin the bottle- truth or dare #

This Liz remembered playing…

# But then the bottle landed on her. She looked up at everyone and she found Max’s gaze on her #

This she couldn’t remember that happening- it was hazy…

# The bottle then was spun. It spun round and round. It then slowed down… passed Sean, Maria, Alex, Mekalia, Matthew, Jade, Lukus, Katie and slowed completely to a stop #

# Liz looked up knowing full well whom it had landed on. Max. For a second their eyes locked, but then they both looked away. Both preferring to stare at the floor #

# ‘PICK A CARD! PICK A CARD!’ cheered the whole group #

# Lizzie bent down and picked up a card… KISS #

# Lizzie placed the card in front of everyone and stood up… she approached the centre of the circle. Max knowing full well what that meant did the same, he got up and step next to Lizzie #

# Lizzie leaned forward… #

# ‘You don’t have to do this, I could pull out…’ Max whispered into Liz’s ear #

# Liz frowned a little, but closed her eyes and felt Max’s soft lips graze hers. He then kissed her a little more, but still as gently as the moment his lips touched hers. She felt faint and giddy. But most of all she enjoyed it #

# Max then pulled away. She opened her eyes to see Max staring at her… #

Liz then tried to remember what happened next. She looked at Max, her chest started to hurt and she felt close to tears. ‘My birthday party, tell me what happened Max!’

‘Why do you want to bring that up? Nothing happened!’ muttered Max.

‘Nothing happened. Stop lying Max… we…’

Liz then ignored Max and tried to remember again. She felt hazing; her mind was all jumbled. She couldn’t remember. She touched his arm lightly to try to have the same effect as the first time, but it didn’t work. ‘Max!! Please…’

‘Look Liz we played spin the bottle, it landed on you. It landed on me. You picked a kiss card and we kissed full stop!’

Liz was listening; she couldn’t remember the next few minutes after that. She could remember the end of the party. It was like someone had picked her brain and wiped an area of her memory away. Yet she had never realised that some of her party was forgotten. She started to cry, she was upset, frustrated… most of all confused.

(Max’s P.O.V)

Max watched the tears fall from Lizzie’s face and immediately felt bad. His heart started to ache for her; a small lump started to form in his throat. He touched her on her arm lightly. He wasn’t sure if he could tell her. Sure he could trust her, but was he ready. Was she ready? Because this revelation could turn their whole world upside-down and change their lives forever.

He turned to stare at Liz’s tear stained face; he gently lifted it up to allow her to look at him. ‘Liz’s I’m so sorry… please don’t cry anymore…’

Liz looked at Max and saw his soft chocolate eyes gazing down at her. Liz blinked her watering eyes.

‘Let me try and help you remember, do you trust me?’ whispered Max.

(Back to Liz’s P.O.V)

Liz stopped crying and glanced down at the necklace and then back at Max, she searched inside her heart and realised that she didn’t know why but she felt like she could trust Max with her whole entire life. It was strange but she felt all tingly all over… She nodded.

‘Trust me!’ he whispered.

Liz felt her eyes slowly drift close and she felt herself fall into what seemed a trance. But she could feel Max still next to her. She then felt his Lips against hers. Then her heart and mind exploded open as well as her soul. She could hear Max’s voice speak very softly in the distance. ‘I’m sorry!’ -over and over again. ‘What’s happening?’ whimpered Liz.

‘Shhh… stay calm. I would never let anything ever happen to you. I’m opening a connection.’

‘What…?’ Murmured Liz.

‘I’ll explain to you one day, just stay with me okay.’

Liz suddenly felt Max’s hand touch her forehead. His hand was cold, but smooth at the same time. ‘Try to remember now…’

Liz came out of the trance and pulled away slightly. ‘What did you do?’

‘I’ll explain later… remember… it’s time…’

# Lizzie opened her eyes, Max was still kissing her #

# She then looked up and realised that the whole entire room was silent. She looked closely at everyone they were all still. She laughed… It was very strange. She pulled away from Max #

# She went up to Maria and waved her hand in her face. ‘She’s still Max!’ #

# She looked at Alex amused. He was staring into mind air. ‘Glad to see you find this amusing.’ Grinned Max, he then stopped. He turned serious; ‘I’m glad you didn’t freak out.’

‘What have you done to them?’ Liz realised the extent of what had happened; she could feel herself getting hysterical. ‘Cause I am a little freaked!’

‘Lizzie can I tell you something first. It’s really important.’

Liz nodded, as Max continued. ‘I know that we’re young. But I’ve always felt connected to you.’

Liz blushed. ‘And well the thing is that I as born with a special gift. I can stop time and many more things. That’s why everyone’s kinda still…’

Liz was silent. ‘Lizzie are you okay with me telling you this. I need to know!’

Liz couldn’t understand. ‘Why are you telling me?’

‘You’re special and… I don’t fancy you… well that’s wrong I do… but it’s more than that… I kinda think that I love you!!’

‘Love me! Max I might not know many things, but I know that this is pure madness. How could you love me, I bet you don’t even know what it is or means! Max I’m eleven years old!’ pouted Little Lizzie. ‘I’m not ready for a boyfriend- Especially one with funny powers. Okay!’

‘Oh okay…’ muttered Max. ‘Fine.’

Lizzie looked at Max and immediately felt bad and regretted what she said. He looked so sweet and innocent. But he just continued what he was saying. He didn’t let her get a word in. Each word felt like a stab to her in the heart. Her head was saying sorry over and over again, but Max didn’t seem to notice. He didn’t care. He hurt too much to care.

‘Well we better get back into place! We wouldn’t want anyone to notice anything UNUSUAL… Wouldn’t want them to know that we kissed any longer… Let’s just act normal. Like the kiss never ever happened. Is that you’re NORMAL? Cause I don’t think you’d want to be like me! Just forget anything that I just said to you. It never happened. And if you do tell anyone I’ll just deny it. I’ll tell everyone you were lying. So get back into place then! That means kissing you!! #

The flashback then transferred to Max’s view.

# Max watched as Liz closed her eyes tightly. For a minuet second he hated her. He hadn’t wanted it to be like this. He had wanted her to love him, like he loved her> But all he felt was hurt and rejection. He felt a tear run down his face #

# Liz was then still like everyone else. He touched her head. And kissed her lightly on the head. ‘I can’t help it Liz. I loved you. And I can’t help it now but I will still always love you. You have left a permanent scar in my heart. My Lizzie Parker…’ #

Liz then watched in awe, Max at a tender age had tried to act so mature and so loving. She was shocked at how he coped with his powers. She then continued to watch as little Max turned back the time, by just waving his hand. He then stood in back place and stroked little Lizzie’s hair and cried.

# Little Max was crouched down crying #

# He then stopped, he wiped his tears and went back to kiss Lizzie. He clicked his fingers #

# ’Okay next!’ cried Maria. Alex spun the bottle and it landed on Sean. ‘Okay pick a card!’ #

‘Truth or Dare! I’ll pick a dare!’ laughed Sean. ‘I’m in a devilish mood!’

Isabel read out the dare. ‘Kiss the person, on the right! Oh it’s the birthday girl treat today!’ #

# Sean then jumped up and planted a full on kiss on Liz’s lips #

# Unknown to anyone else, Max was squirming in his seat. His heart was in tatters. He felt sad that someone else was kissing the girl that he was truly devoted to and loved. Would he ever get the chance to show her ever again? Most importantly would she ever understand…?’ #

Liz came out of the flash with her arms around Max. He had actually been crying. She had never felt so bad in her whole entire life, well except for when her father died. Liz wiped his tear stained cheek gently. ‘…I’m so sorry Max… For all these years I’m sorry…’

‘No I’m sorry… I knew you weren’t ready. I deserved it. I was just a little schoolboy, who thought he knew everything. I was just being greedy- I just wanted what I couldn’t have. I deserved it!’

‘No… no… you didn’t… I never realised that you loved me like that. I’m so sorry…’

Max then got up and then went to the kitchen. ‘Max don’t go, please talk to me… I said I’m sorry.’

Liz followed Max. ‘Max let’s talk!’

Liz followed him looked at him strangely, ‘’Max what are you doing?’

Max grinned, ‘Sorry I’m hungry and I know you haven’t eaten. Do you wanna eat something?

Liz frowned. ‘Umm yeah… if we talk during food or afterwards…’

‘Okay!’ Max stuck some ready-made food in the microwave to be reheated and was about to press the button.

‘Max can I just ask you something, did you some how have the power to make me forget it ever happened?’

‘Umm yeah If you what to see it like that. I know I had no right to, but I didn’t know what else to do.’

There was silence then between them. Liz blushed when she realised that Max was staring at her face. ‘Can I kiss you Lizzie?!’

‘…Umm no one calls me Lizzie anymore!’

‘Except for me…’ whispered Max into Liz’s ear, it made her laugh light- heartedly. Liz looked into Max’s eyes and saw all the love and hurt that he had been holding for her. Max brought his lips against hers.

Then the flashes started again.

# Max was trying to get over Lizzie in Vancouver but couldn’t. He always had the necklace as a constant reminder. It wouldn’t let him forget her and it wouldn’t let him forget what happened. That’s why he never sent it back to her #

# Sometimes he would take it out and play with it. But most of the time it stayed tucked away in his pocket. It was literally burning a hole in pocket and his heart #

# The excitement of going back to Roswell #

# Max finally getting back and attempting to listen to Alex and Maria talking about Liz #

# Max’s and Alex’s conversation #

# Max then climbing up to Lizzie’s bedroom and fixing the top #

# Wrapping it up especially #

# Max watching Lizzie at her dad’s funeral. He wanted to be the one to comfort her, not Kyle #

There were so many flashes between them. Max’s favourite one was of Lizzie grinning at the white top. Then there were others.

# Liz happily chatting to Alex and Maria. Her bright smile #

# Liz cheerily taking orders from the customers in her alien uniform #

# Her death of her father, her sadness, every night #

# Her being very sneaky and glancing around as she wrote in her diary #

The last few flashes made Liz blush. It was the one of her and her new bra and the other one was her dream. Which she wasn’t expecting to see those tonight of all nights.

She expected Max to laugh, but Max just smiled and kissed her again. She felt sparks flying through her entire body.

# Max! Max! Where are you? #

# Hey up here! It’s amazing view up here. You can see our star! Come up! #

# Our star? #

# Yeah our star we saw it the other night. You know the bright white one #

# Liz walked up, careful not it trip or tear her white gown #

# Liz got up there, Max was right it was amazing- All the stars. She felt his arms around her as he kissed her neck tenderly #

# He then turned her round and kissed her lips. Liz melted, as he laid her down… #

Liz immediately snapped out of the flashback. ‘That… it was you Max. You’re the one in my dream.’

Max laughed a little and then frowned. ‘Wait a minute Liz. That was my dream!’

‘Yours!’ muttered Liz. Her eyes then twinkled. ‘Could it be possible that we had the same dream?’

Max had never thought of that possibility. ‘Umm dreams??? Isabel? Does Isabel know any of this?’ asked Liz.

Max laughed. ‘Trust me she’s the last person who would know anything about what goes on in my head. She’s totally oblivious. Plus if she dared ever to use her powers on my she’ll know I’ll kick her sorry ass in… plus she’s too wrapped up in herself and Alex of cause.’

‘She’s got powers! Does Alex know?’

‘Probably. I don’t know, anyway she’ll tell him in her own time. This right now is about you and me.’

‘Isabel saw that I was upset and agitated, but she told me I just needed to talk to someone.’

‘Ah yeah Isabel mind reading and facial reading is quite good. All connected to her main power dream walking.’

‘She told me not to shut anyone out. Or I could have lost something.’

Max looked away. ‘It would have been you wouldn’t it.’ whispered Liz. ‘I would have never realised it and then maybe we would have never got it together, we’ll have gone our separate ways.’

‘I’m so sorry Max, will you ever forgive me…’

Max stopped her talking by placing a finger on her lips. ‘Liz you know that I have… I love you!’

Liz placed her arms around Max’s neck. Their heads touched gently, Max wrapped his arms around Liz’s waist. ‘Wow… you love…’


‘Max… I know I can erase all those years of pain away with the click of my finger. But we can try can’t we. I never realised, but yes I think that kinda love you too. And I don’t care if you have these powers. It what makes you special!’

Max leaned over and kissed her again, for the first time there was something different about it. It was like they understood one another, it seem magical. There was something in his kissed that was totally different from Kyle. Her heart pounded like mad and she could feel her heart swell up into a giant eruption, ready to explode. Her feet felt tingly, no make that her entire body. She felt alive and special that Max had chosen her. She felt sparks from just one touch of Max’s finger, it seem shivers down her spine. She couldn’t help but giggle.
Max stopped kissing her. ‘Owww… don’t stop. I was enjoying that.’

‘Oh I just wanted to know why you were laughing!’

Liz laughed even more, till her sides of her stomach started hurting. She collapsed on the floor in a heap. Max kneeled down next to her. ‘Liz are you okay.’

Liz bit her lip, still laughing. ‘Is this the real thing? This what I’m feeling- it isn’t you doing this with you’re powers.’

‘Doing what?’

‘Can’t you feel it? The tingling and the sparks.’

‘Oh that! No that’s you. It’s the way you make me feel and I hope it how I make you feel. It’s a human thing!’

‘The fireworks!’ whispered Liz, as Max, sat down next to her.

‘Yep!’ replied Max.

‘I’ve been waiting them to happen for ages… and you’re the one.’

‘I’m the one for what?’ Max was a little confused.

‘Max kiss me again I enjoyed that…’

Max did, as he was told. Each kiss became more stronger and urgent. ‘Max…’ murmured Liz.

Liz realised that it was this moment that she wanted and needed more, she started to unto Max’s shirt button. ‘Liz… do you know what you’re doing?’

‘Max you know all the answers so do I…! I’m…’ she couldn’t finish the sentence.

tbc? is anyone reading this? :mrgreen:

THE FIRST TIME M/L ADULT part 7

Posted: Mon Sep 01, 2008 10:34 am
by pijeechinadoll
Liz kissed him even more; it was like it was feeding her satisfaction. She pulled Max closer to herself and wrapped herself against him. She shivered as she moved his hand to travel up her skirt. Max gulped as his hand came into contact with her smooth thigh. He ran his hand up and down her leg, whilst kissing her more. Their breathing deepen at every kiss. Her whole entire body ached at the contact of his. She could hear Max murmured. ‘So smooth…’ Over and over again, as his hand moved up and up her skirt. She was getting very hot; her thighs started to heat up and sweat. They ached at every touch; he ran his hand up and came close to contact to her front region. He moved away back down.

Liz looked at his flushed face. She didn’t have a clue what she was doing. Max didn’t either, but she started throbbing down below. The more he stroked her inner thigh, the more pressure was applied to her frontal region. It was like a chain reaction. Her breathing suddenly became irregular and she had to at times gasp for big breath, as Max was Kissed her neck.

She throbbed for what seemed an eternity, until she couldn’t take it anymore. She kissed Max hard on the lips and pushed his hand up as far as it could go. It was an automatic release, as Max cupped her between her legs and ran his hand hard against her. She thin material that separating his hand and her skin was getting soak. Liz wrapped her arms around his neck and clung onto Max for it was like her life depended on it. Her insides shook like an earthquake.

‘I’ve never felt like this before Max… I’ve never wanted to go any further than kissing… I’ve seen this on television… gosh I can’t think straight… And the teachers said in physical education and taught us… what they teach us… don’t know… umm… but… with… you… I feel… I can… do anything…’

The more he touched her, the more she ached. Liz pushed his finger underneath the material and Max breathed hard. He had come in contact with one of Liz’s warmest parts of her body. She felt hot and wet; he gentle trailed his finger against her opening. It sent vibrations down Liz’s back. She pushed her body up hard against Max’s Finger and pulled Max on top of her.

They lay against the cold floor as Max’s finger went up harder and harder against her. He pushed his body against her. Liz’s body ached more and more, at his every touched.

Liz started to undo the buttons of her top half of her uniform. ‘Max mmm…’

Max stopped for a second his finger hand still inside her panties. ‘Liz we can stop you know.’

‘No!’ murmured Liz. She pushed Max’s hand up and down against her, massaging every weak spot. Every ache made Liz murmur for more. His hand went up and down.’ Max’s… please… More… take…’

She slipped Max’s shirt off and stroked his smooth chest. She looked up at Max. ‘Soul-mates!’

And with that Liz undid the rest of her buttons. Max kneeled down above her legs and freed his hands to help Liz to take her uniform off. It was like opening a parcel. Max couldn’t help but gawp. His Lizzie, her body had grown, she was becoming curvy in all the right places. He bent down and started to place hot kisses against her neck. He slipped the straps of her bra down and undid the front clasp and brought his lips down against her hardened breast. Oh how he had dreamed of this moment. But the realism hit him, that this girl would finally be his. Liz was all flushed and she chewed her lip gently as she waited for Max to continue. She had a see through under skirt on, in which he slid, down her legs. He quivered at the sight of her smooth skin. He quickly ran his tongue down her stomach, as he teased her pants down. He then went down on her. He inhaled her smell and body… it was intoxicating.

He never had done this before, but had seen it in an adult’s film before. He pushed his head down and blew air against her. Liz wailed in surprise. It was so easy being with Liz. He pushed his tongue against her opening. Liz felt herself ache in a way that she had never ever experienced. She felt the ache, growing and growing, as Max tease her more and more and then she exploded…She couldn’t help but cry out, as she came. She gripped Max’s Body against her. Max’s could feel her entire body erupt against his. He grinned gently, as he held her.

‘Wow… that…’

Liz clung on Max, he was against her and she gasped at the pressure. She felt giddy and drunk, not by alcohol but by Max himself. They didn’t need a thermometer to tell themselves that the room temperature was going to hit the room. But Liz didn’t care. She started to undo Max’s Belt.

Max stood up and pulled down his trousers. For a minuet second Liz started to freak. Did she? Was she ready to give in her innocence yet and give Max her virginity at 16? She then watched as Max took out a small packet from his wallet. ‘I’ve never thought I’ll need this in a thousand of years. But my mum and dad always told me to carry one just in case.’ Whispered Max.

He kissed her lips and then kissed her chest. Yep she defiantly was tingling. Then for the first time she remembered her dad. …God her dad, she quickly grabbed Max’s shirt and pulled it on. ‘Liz it’s okay… we don’t have to… I would never force you into anything you didn’t want to do.’

He hugged her. She could smell his after-shave coming of him. But the thing she realized the most that after the closeness of his body was his pelvis was throbbing against her. ‘Max do you want me that much…?’

‘Liz I’m not going to force you!’ replied Max. ‘It doesn’t matter about me!’

Liz ran her hand against his smooth chest. She glanced up to see Max’s brown eyes smiling at her. His hair was ruffled, his neck was red and all their clothes were lying on the floor.

‘You’re not! Whispered Liz. ‘This is my decision…’

Liz glided his boxers down his muscular thighs. She didn’t look down at him; she didn’t want to freak out at this stage. Maybe next time she could look, that’s if there was a next time. Max was on the other hand still contemplating and unsure whether he should continue, but Liz started to kiss him harder. She rubbed her self against his body. Max hands found them selves roaming up the shirt. He cupped her breast in his hands and massaged them. He couldn’t help it but he started to crack under his exterior. He couldn’t hold any longer. His parents had gave him a condom a couple of months ago, telling him as he was growing up he would soon need this. So he sipped on the protection and lay Liz on the ground and maneuvered himself to lie on top of her.

Liz blushed as she caught Max’s gaze. He undid her buttons again and lifted her arms above her. He had her total surrender. Now she had her hands cupped around his tightly, as his head went down against her neck. He sucked at her breast lightly. He heard her moan lightly. Her breasts were pink and heaving up and down. He kissed her hard against the lips and pushed his tongue into the mouth. He moved one hand from where he had been holding them above her head and pushed his hand against her front. He stroked her face gentle and ran his hand against her breast, down her stomach. He pushed his hand up and down, whilst his middle finger traveled inside her. Liz became more and more wet. She was becoming ready; he used more and more force. He pushed and massaged more eagerly. Liz moaned lightly. She could feel Max enjoying every moment of it he was throbbing up against the inner of her thigh. He then move up against Liz, his hand was still doing all the work. Liz could feel herself coming against as Max pushed his hand more. Max pulled her legs wider; she could feel the full effect. She then felt him change quickly, he push himself gently into herself to penetrate for the first time. Liz was very surprised that it didn’t hurt as much as she thought it would. Max eased himself in further passed the resistance. Then finally was last gentle thrust, he was inside her. Something then happened that the teachers didn’t warn her about.

She felt her mind, her soul, her entire whole being link with Max’s. She felt his emotions; he saw hers. He saw flashes from the past. He thought her thoughts, she thought his. He saw molecules from inside their bodies’ merge with one another, interact and entwine… He felt fire cascade through his blood, firework from Liz… He felt themselves begin to soar towards the sky. He then started a rhythm, slow achy pushes. Max groaned as, Liz finally came. She cried out. But he didn’t stop there Max continued. He pushed his body up and down against her and his pelvis went in and out of Liz’s body. He kissed her hard he couldn’t stop. Liz moaned out the aching. Max continued to drive himself into Liz. He freed his hands and used them to hoist him self of the ground and balance himself. He keep pushing, Liz ached and throbbed even more than ever. She came some many times, but ache time the ache built up on the last one. He then pushed one more for the finale. Liz came one last time, whilst Max followed suit. Liz cried, as her below ached so severely. It felt like someone had ripped it out. Max collapsed next to Liz and cupped her between the leg till the pain subsided, leaving her feeling like she had floating to heaven. They then fell asleep against one another.


1:00am

Their bodies had been lying on the cold floor, but Liz had slipped on Max’s shirt, whilst he had pulled on his trousers. Liz sat in Max’s lap; he wrapped his arms around her. ‘Oh gosh Max did we just do that?’ Liz grinned with a small shy smile.

‘You don’t regret it Liz do you?’ Max frowned. ‘Please tell me I didn’t do wrong.’

Liz smiled shyly again. ‘Max it was…’ she bit her lip to describe the feeling. ‘That was beautiful… you were beautiful.’

‘Oh that good!’ smiled Max, he then frowned. ‘I didn’t hurt you did I?’

‘The teachers said it would hurt first time… but it didn’t at the start, it did in the middle but the you made it all nice at the end… and the start of it was really nice as well. I thought my entire body was going to blow to pieces…’

‘That I think the television said was foreplay…’

Liz blushed at the word, as Max continued. ‘And you had an orgasm.’

Max chuckled, as Liz blushed even more. He bent over and kissed her. ‘HE HE Lizzie we just made love… WOW!’

‘WE did didn’t we. You said you love me… it wasn’t just…’

Max frowned. ‘Lizzie Parker don’t you dare say that S word. It wasn’t that! Ours was making love. Repeat after me WE MADE LOVE!’

Liz pouted but laughed. ‘REPEAT AFTER ME WE MADE LOVE!’

‘Liz! With out the repeat after bit!’ complained Max.

Liz looked up at Max’s serious eyes and whispered. ‘We made love.’

‘Um what are you going to do about Kyle? Whispered Max.

‘Don’t worry Max, I’m defiantly all yours!’

‘Liz I’ve got to tell you something!’

‘I know… I saw… you’re leaving soon… you got a scholarship in England… For two years…’ Liz could feel tears forming.

‘I’m sorry…’

‘What if tonight hadn’t happened, would you have left again without saying anything!!’

Max didn’t say anything. Liz knew the answer immediately.

‘Yes!’ said Max quietly.

Liz started to pull her clothes back on. She handed Max back his shirt. Max took her hand. ‘I don’t want to leave you Liz! God! I’ve only just got you back!’

‘I know… But I know that this is important for you…!’ Liz paused, ‘I’ll ring my mum and tell her. Eric can help me out a little bit more. I should be okay!’

‘I’ll write to you every day. I promise Lizzie!’

Liz turned away. ‘Will you promise me this then, stay faithful to me forever, I know that a lot of girls want to get their mitts on you!’

‘I know you’re thinking about Pam. But she’s going to a different part of England. Don’t you worry! Plus it’s you I love anyway. I’ve got eyes only for you! You’re my Lizzie Parker. Don’t you forget that! You can’t get rid of me that easily.’

‘Oh okay!’ replied Liz slightly unsure.

Max held her for a second. ‘Are you going to stay faithful to me? No Kyle or Sean!’

Liz looked at Max pleaded face and grinned. ‘You know I wouldn’t. But I’ll promised, just for you!’

Max slipped her necklace around her neck and kissed her goodbye. ‘I love you!’

‘Max just one question before you go… that bit with the stuff where our thought and emotions amongst other things joined together… I can still feel you… with me… that wasn’t normal was it?’

Max grinned ‘you tell me? You’ll know the answer!’

Liz thought about it and found her mind connecting with Max’s. ‘Our connection whispered Liz. ‘It like a switch in my head that I can turn on and off!’

‘I hope Liz that you’ll leave it on forever!’ replied Max. ‘Of course I know and can do a lot more with our connection cause of my powers… but you’ll know when I’m near and you can communicate to me if you open a channel… I’ll know what you’re thinking, feeling, where you are, whom you’re with, I’ll come to you if you concentrate really hard and send out a mental connection if you’re in danger. I’ll come running. BUT remember this Lizzie if you do use our connection, you must always use a channel to connect us or it won’t work. Of course that will never happen cause you’re mine Lizzie and I will never let anyone hurt you.

Liz watched as he left through the back door. ‘Max could we keep tonight to our self. I don’t want our private lives spread around the corridors around school! I mean for the time being…’

Max smiled and understood.

TBC?

THE FIRST TIME M/L ADULT part 8

Posted: Mon Sep 01, 2008 5:06 pm
by pijeechinadoll
5th May 1995
9:00pm

To: Max_Evans#91@hotmail.com
From: Lizzie#PARKERy@hotmail.com


Gosh Max I miss you so much. I miss being with you. It feels so different so strange trying to get back to my life before that once didn’t have you. But the different to now and then, Is that then I didn’t have you, I didn’t know what I was missing. But I do now and it hurts everyday that you’re not here with me. But enough of me pouring out my sorry little heart out I bet you’ve heard enough of my whinging, I know I am. How’s England?’ Can you believe it was a year ago that we spent the night together? It’s still fresh in my mind… I wish you were in Roswell.
Anyway the Crashdown’s doing okay as is my mum. I think! Eric comes back to help once in a while. Not as regularly as before. We get on as well as before. It’s like having a missing brother. But Maria is straining our relationship. You see a couple of weeks Eric told me he likes Maria. But the problem is that Maria likes Brody still. Their relationship is like a tap; it keeps going on and off. But the major thing is that Maria went out with Eric on a date, just to piss Brody off and then she dropped Eric and ignored him. And I know that’s she’s my best friend, but Eric is my cousin too. And they’re trying to get me to takes sides. Now Eric only comes down once in a while, just to see me. But avoids doing any shifts with Maria. Sometimes I can’t believe her. I don’t know how her head works at time…’

Alex is the only one who isn’t causing me any grief. He’s amazing and you’ll be please to know that I’m getting on fine with Isabel. Sometimes when I’m with her, it makes me feel closer to you.

I missed you when you left and I’m missing you still. I wear our necklace everyday. I’ve never taken it off. I love you!

‘You’re beloved Liz.’

-Liz hit the sent button. Unknown to people and friends, she cried herself to sleep every night. She missed Max so much it hurt. But no one knew and no one tried to get her to talk when she was depressed or spaced out.

Liz then lay down on her bed and picked up her diary, she flicked back to the week that Max had left for England.

(This part of the stories is just being told as it has happened… In Liz’s diary are just mainly her feelings…)

26th May 1994

Lizzie I don’t get it. Why are you breaking up with me? I don’t understand. I thought that we were so good together.’

‘Kyle you know why, there’s no sparks between us!’

‘Is there someone else?’

‘No Kyle this is about you and me!’

‘But I love you! I thought you loved me too! Is it me did I do something wrong?’

‘No Kyle, it’s me…’

And with that Kyle left.

25th December 1995

To: Lizzie#PARKERy@hotmail.com
From: Max_Evans#91@hotmail.com

Hello Lizzie. It snowing in England, It’s cold, but amazing. There’s a lot of it, it comes up to my knees. It’s so deep. You remember my mates Callam and Matthew, they showed me how to toboggan sleighing. Whoa… ho it was such a rush…

But I miss you especially at night. Both Callam and Matthew have got their girlfriends with them. They’re so lucky! Apart from them the other boys can’t understand why I’m staying faithful. But I know you understand. It may be snowing in England, but Lizzie it’s cold at night. I wish I had you here to cuddle against. You would defiantly warm me up. Can you believe that a year and a half has gone? 6 months to go… 5th of June… I’ll be back. I can’t wait to see you. I keep dreaming of it.

I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! MAX 4 LIZZIE! MAX 4 LIZZIE! MISSING YOU LIKE CRAZZZZZEEEEEE!! I LOVE YOU LIZZIE!

Love ya! From Max.

Ps- Keep sending me photos of you!! So I can keep them in my album underneath my pillow.

30th May 1996

‘So Lizzie? Who are you going to the summer dance with?’ grinned Maria.

‘…Um I haven’t thought about it!’ replied Liz. ‘I don’t think I’m going!’

‘But you have to! You didn’t go last year! Who cares what Kyle thinks? And so bloody what if he’s going with Pam. (Pam came home early) They deserve each other. I’m sure you’ll find someone better.’ Said Alex.

‘Oh you mean like you!’ stated Maria, punching his arm lightly.

Unknown to them or anyone, Liz had found someone a year and a half ago. It was her secret and she intended to keep it like that for now… till Max came back to her. But for now she just wanted to cherish the memory of her and Max together. Sometimes she was sure her friends found it unusual that Liz would clam up when talking about Max. But Liz would just built up an act and pretend that she hated him. And of course they would just assume after the shirt incident. Thank god they took consideration her privacy… because if they didn’t…

They would have found her letters and emails to and from Max. Now that would have been an interesting read. And of course they knew where Liz’s secret compartment was, but Liz knew she could trust them and they have never betrayed her trust so far. In there was her most important procession- her diary! Her secret diary, All her secrets…

‘So I could find you a date, How about Sean? He still fancies you!’ Maria said getting up and walking away. ‘Ops gonna go!’

‘Bye Maria!’ said Alex. But then Alex turned back to Liz. ‘How about someone else…’

‘No Alex! No one else, I don’t want anyone else but…’ cried Liz.

Alex raised his eyebrows. ‘No one else other that who! Is there something you wanna tell me Lizzie!!’

Liz pulled a face. Alex and everyone only used Liz’s nickname whenever she was in trouble or they wanted to annoy her.

Liz then saw Isabel coming towards them. Pure luck! ‘Hey Isabel over here!’

Alex as usual immediately turned round and forgot about the conversation. ‘Hi Iz!’ said Alex, giving her a quick peck on the cheek.

Every since Isabel started going out will Alex. People thought her status would go down, but it didn’t. Some people had words to say. But most thought it was cool that she was going out with Alex. They boys were all jealous of Alex and many tried to befriend him with little results. He was quite happy staying out the limelight. But that didn’t stop the girls from swooping at him. Lots of girls had actually admitted to liking him, but didn’t have any guts to say anything. Then Isabel bagged him; let’s just say there were a lot of jealous girls. But none were bitchy except for two of three. The rest were happy for them and could see that they were made for each other. They literally lived inside each other’s pockets.

Liz thanked her lucky stars that Isabel had came that second, she then made a excuse to leave and left them to it.

MSN MESSENGER
To: Lizzie#PARKERy@hotmail.com
From: Max_Evans#91@hotmail.com



Lizzie: - Max r u there? I miss you. I’m not working tonight. R u busy?

Liz waited but she didn’t have to wait long because Max immediately replied.

Max: - Oh hello there princess, I was just doing some research for my last asignment. Callam and Matt wantd to drag me out, but hey I knew u would be comin on and chat.

Lizzie: - summer dance is coming up u knw…

Max: - Oh yeah?!… Lizzie you know that I can’t make it. I wish I could, but I can’t. My Flight is booked for that date; I won’t make it in time.

Lizzie: -… Oh it’s okay

Lizzie: - Doesn’t matter :D I’m not going anyway. So wat you up to?

Max: - Nothing much. Just last minute goodbyes etc. Hate to say it – gonna miss Callam and Matt.

Max: -We literally live across the other sides of the world. Matt’s from Australia and Cal is from England. And Me well I’m coming back to Roswell.

Lizzie: - Umm… I see wat you mean!

Max: - Have you told anyone… you know about us? I mean Cal and Matt just assume that I’ve got a girlfriend…

Lizzie: - No! Why have you? I haven’t.

Max: - No! Not about what happened, you told me not to.

Lizzie: - God I miss you so much! I wish you were back in Roswell!’

Max: - umm… I’m glad you miss me, I wouldn’t know what to do if you didn’t.

Lizzie: - Wait that the first time you called me your girlfriend.

Lizzie: - Is that wat I am?

Lizzie: - We’ve never put tags on ourselves before!

Max: - LOL

Max: - yes I’ve just realised that too. That sounds good!

Lizzie: - Yes wat?

Max: - Yes you are my girlfriend and mine.

Lizzie: - Do you miss me?

Max: - Tats a stupid question, you know that answer to that!’

Lizzie: - :D :D :D :D :D

Lizzie: - Just double-checking!

Max: - Hows Izzy?

Lizzie: - She’s fine. I woz really lucky 2day. Alex nearly caught me out, but Isabel showed up and BAM he 4got!

Max: - LOL

Max: - I take it he’s okay!

Lizzie: - Yep and Maria fine.

Max: - wat about you. How u feeling?

Lizzie: - Other than missing you like crazzee. I’m fine!

Max: - I miss you too…

Max: - I love you Lizzie Parker! No how about Elizabeth Evans!!!!!!!!!!! : -]


Lizzie: - HA HA!

Max: - No I mean it. When we’re older I’m gonna marry you, ur going to be Mrs Evans! Don’t you forget that!

Max: - You ta one 4 me.

Lizzie: - Ur sweet.

Max: - I know! Its my speciality.

Lizzie: - Is it and wats mine?

Max: - Your is that you have this totally gigantic talent just makes me fall under you’re spell. UR LUVLY!

Lizzie: - :D Words will defiantly get you evrywhere…

Max: - Really? Anyway?

Max: - Eh oh!!!

Lizzie: - Wat is it?

Max: - Lizzie I may have to go… Matt’s back with Callam, they sound very drunk. I LOVE U!

Lizzie: - Oh okay then… I love you 2. Hopefully I don’t have to wait to long 4 u 2 cum back!

Max: - I know…

Lizzie: - Bye bye!!!!!!!!!

Max: - Hugs and kisses. Sweet dreams.

Lizzie: - ahhh you to!

Max: - Love you

Max: - MISS U!

Lizzie: - ahh you 2

Lizzie: - LOVe you bye!

Max: - Can’t wait 2 c u!

Lizzie: - Love you

Lizzie: - Night night

Lizzie: -XXXXXXXXX

Lizzie: - XXXXXXX

The following message could not be delivered to recipients: Max_Evans#91@hotmail.com offline

Lizzie: - xXxXxXxXx


Liz stared at the screen for a second- Max was off. She then saved the file and then opened it up in Word and then printed it out. She stared at the pages as it came out. She collected them and them slipped them in the envelope. Where there were pages and pages of A4 paper. But they weren’t blank. No, they had things on them. Liz had printed out all Max’s emails and hers and they MSN conversations. She also had a little box that had all of the floppy disks in which she had saved them on. In another larger box she had letters and photos and little things that Max had brought her. She had lots of Max himself, but she only had a couple of them together. Those were taken just before he left. She made a mental note in her head that she must get some more done. She took a disk out and saved the chat on the disk. She then put everything back into her secret compartment. It all fitted perfectly. With her diary sitting on top. She then deleted the computer version and switched it off.


TBC???? :mrgreen:

THE FIRST TIME M/L ADULT part 9

Posted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 6:43 am
by pijeechinadoll
1st June 1996
9:30am

‘Everyone get ya dresses ready, well girls actually. Boys pull out your tuxedoes… preferably not your dads. The summer dance is here! Get your partners ready! It’s gonna be a bast! We counting down… 1 day, 10 hours, 15 minutes, 5 seconds till tomorrows’ dance. ARE YOU READY!!’

The radio speakers boomed throughout Liz’s school. Great just what she needed. Someone’s going to get it. Banners were hung everywhere. Flyers shoved in her face. Oh how she felt like Cinderella, not being able to go to the ball. And it saddened her; she would not see her Prince Charming…

‘Hey! Stop day dreaming! Move out the way dweebs!’ Cried Pam. Shoving Liz and Maria out the way.

‘Shut up!’ Cried Isabel, walking up. ‘Don’t you dare talk to them like that!’

Liz and Maria looked up shocked.

Pam laughed, as the corridor stood to a stand still. ‘Go get a life, this isn’t any of your business. You’re no longer queen of Roswell High you took care of that before. I mean hanging out with those dweebs, but going out with one. Now that’s below and revolting!’

‘Well at least I’ve got taste. Plus I ain’t the one who’s got the reputation for sleeping around, unlike some people I know!’ slammed Isabel.

‘Well at least I ain’t lost my sparkle!’ Most boys like it!’ Isabel I’m the most popular girl now!’

‘Yeah I’m wondering why?’

‘So what, Yeah I admit I had a number of males.’ She muttered gingerly. ‘I can have any boy I want. I could have your boyfriend… If I was desperate!’

Isabel could feel her temper rise.

‘But then again your twin brother is much better. He’s hot! Now I wouldn’t mind getting inside his pants!’

Liz quickly glanced up, at Pam and then at Isabel, she blushed inside and out. Maria hadn’t seen her face. No one had thank goodness. Isabel and Pam were staring at each other.

By then the two of them had drawn in a crowd. Tess was standing in the background came forward. ‘Shut up you whore, my brother wouldn’t look twice at you!’

‘O get lost Tess. I’m sure your sister can fight her own battles. But I suppose if you want to start on me, you could. I could have you brother and you could not do anything about it. And I know that you fancy Kyle. But he defiantly wouldn’t look twice at you. He’s too much of a Man for you Tess. Let’s just say that you need to grow up a bit! Go find ya self a dummy and suck on that. Cause that’s the only thing you’ll be sucking on!!

By then Isabel had been standing there taking it all in. She had started on her friends, her boyfriend, her brother and now her sister. She was defiantly going to blow… But she also felt upset…

‘What’s the matter Isabel? Cat’s got your tongue?!’

‘Oh look who it is! Alex have you come to join the party. You’re girlfriend’s acting all high and mighty.’

Alex stared at her. ‘Pam stop causing trouble, I’d advice you to leave my friends and Isabel alone. Trust me you don’t want to see her when she’s angry.’ Replied Alex.

Pam inched towards Alex and slipped his arm around him. ‘Ohh Alex I love a man who defends his girlfriend!’

It was then something inside Isabel that snapped, the moment that Pam lay her hands over Alex. ‘My point exactly, GIRLFRIEND! I’m his girlfriend. And if I was you keep your corrupted fake fingertips away from him!’

Isabel pulled Alex away from Pam and stepped towards Pam. ‘And I’ll appreciate you not going round shoving my friends around and bad mouthing my family…’

‘OR WHAT?’

The whole crowd was silent. Pam continued. ‘You ain’t got any guts to do anything!’

‘You want a bet!’

‘Yeah I do. Everyone wallets out. Hands up who thinks that Isabel will do anything.’

No one put his or her hands up, no had never ever dared to stand up to Pam, let alone strike her.

‘See!’ Sneered Pam.

And it was in that split second in which Pam opened her mouth; she felt a sharp blow to her face. The crowd’s mouth dropped open in shock. Some grinned quietly. Some boys hooted and whistled. Isabel had just slapped Pam across the face and replied, ‘I warned you and much worse will happen next time.’

Pam stood there rubbing her face shocked.

Isabel turned to the whole entire crowd. ‘Hey everyone shows over. Bell went ages ago. Oh and don’t forget to vote for me for homecoming queen and best couple for the prom.’

Isabel turned to Alex. ‘Alex I’ve got Maths next, will you walk me there please!’

Alex couldn’t help but grin. He was so proud of her. He wrapped his arm around her and pulled her down the corridor. The crowd cheered as they moved away.

Pam was cowardly crouched against the wall. She was shocked, but most of all fuming and was humiliated. No- one had every dared to hit her before. Everyone had left included Liz and Maria, but there was one person was left- TESS, Who was standing there laughing, Pam looked up. ‘Hey Pam I may be in the year below. But at least I know when to stop. You pushed my sister too far. And to say that you damn deserved it. And let me point out, Max my brother. Yep! He would defiantly never look at you twice. He’s got better taste. He doesn’t go for sluts. Oh PS- Go take a look in the mirror, who the f*** are you calling a baby?’

9:00pm

‘Yeah she actually stuck up 4 me and Maria. Pam was being such a cow to her. She was bitching about Alex and Tess, Even you.’ Liz muttered down the phone.

‘Really what did she say?’

‘Ummm….’

‘Liz you can tell me!’

‘Well Pam was saying that she wouldn’t mind…’

‘What Lizzie?’

‘ Pam said you were hot and that she wouldn’t mind getting inside your pants.’ Lizzie said in one mouth full.

Liz heard a laugh at the other end of the phone and felt like crying. Max felt it at the other end. Max immediately stopped. ‘Aww… Liz I’m sorry! Look if it makes you feel any better, it’s never going to happen. Liz you’re the only one who’s been there and I can safely say that it’s going to stay that way.’

Liz felt herself blush. ‘Hey Liz you still there?’

‘Uh Huh!’ replied Liz.

‘Hey I miss you Liz. I wish I was in Roswell. Anyway it’s only about 5 more days…’

2nd June 1996
4:00pm

School had finished early. Lizzie found herself spread out asleep in her room. All she did was dream about Max. Her beloved Max. They were sitting on their cliff watching the sunrise. Max bent over and gave her a lingering kiss. ‘Lizzie…!!’

‘Lizzie will you wake up!’ cried Isabel. ‘Get up that’s an order!’

Maria was standing there laughing.

‘Come on get up!’

‘…Where are you… where we going?’

‘You’re going to the ball and I don’t care if you’re still hung up on Kyle or Sean… nah it’s not Sean is it. Well I don’t care! Get over it! Cried Maria.

Liz snapped out of her sleepy trance. ‘Well lucky for you you’ve got someone to go with. Maria you’ve got Brody and Isabel going with Alex.’

‘So! There are plenty of boys who want to go with you!’

‘Yeah you point them out to me!’ said Liz sarcastically.

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

By the time Lizzie had got changed, so had Maria and Isabel. Isabel was wearing a lilac gown, whilst Maria wore a short black dress. Isabel had managed to coaxes Liz into Liz into a white dress. Ironically the dress was very similar to the dress in her dream. But it had thin plaited straps. Also something else that made her grin was the fact that the white reminded her of purity…

When they got to the dance, Maria was the first to get on the dance floor with a not so happy Brody.

Isabel was nudging Alex, as Liz stared towards the dance floor. ‘Oh Liz, do you want to dance!’ grinned Alex.

‘What about Isabel?’ muttered Liz looking at Isabel; She really didn’t want to be here.

‘ME! I’ve got some stuff to sort out with Lauren. GO!’

Isabel kissed Alex and walked away. Alex pulled Liz onto the dance floor. ‘So Liz, wanna tell Uncle Al what’s the matter?!’

‘Nothing…’ whispered Liz. ‘I just didn’t want to come here tonight…’

‘Really why is that?’ a voice laughed.

‘Oh hey Max. Howya doing? What your doing back so soon, isn’t your plane due…’

‘I just got back actually, to surprise my mum and dad- it’s their anniversary.’

‘Really does Izzy know!?’

‘No thought I’ll surprise her. She’s been waiting for all her presents. Do you know where she is, if you see her can you tell her I’m back and her presents are at home.’

‘Sure thing, I was going to look for her anyway. Umm… you don’t have a partner do you, cause Liz here needs one!’

‘ALEX…’ Muttered Liz.

Max took one look at Liz and then back at Alex and grinned. ‘Sure!’

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

Liz couldn’t believe it; Max was here dancing here with her. Her body was tingling at every touch and thought. They danced nearly every slow dance. Max held her close, not wanting to let her go. No one seemed to notice that they were together. ‘Umm can we go for a walk Max.’ murmured Liz.

‘Okay!’ replied Max.

Just as they were walking out, a group of students pushed them towards the common room. There they had their prom photos taken. One small Polaroid copy for initial use in which they could have a look at but afterwards they could also buy the package. Which consisted of 2 big ones, 4 medium ones, 6 small ones and 16 miniature versions. One of the students handed the Polaroid version to Liz. Liz took it in her hand and walked ahead. Max caught up with her.

They walked out into the fresh air. ‘It’s a nice photo isn’t it?’

Liz didn’t reply. They walked for a few minutes, until they were fed up and were cold. Max slipped his jacket around her. Liz didn’t say thank you. Max was going to say something but decided not to.

Liz headed towards the car and climbed in, they ended up going back to the Crashdown. Max stopped the car. Liz still hadn’t said a word. ‘Are you going to ignore me all night?’ questioned Max.

Liz climbed out the jeep as Max ran round. Liz threw Max’s jacket back at him. He caught in his hands. Liz fumed. ‘I’m not speaking to you Max!’

Max grinned, ‘But you just did!!’

Liz stormed towards the door and opened it. ‘Goodbye Max!’

‘Ah not so fast!’ smiled Max, as he gripped the door. He leaned over and kissed Liz and pulled her towards him. Liz couldn’t help but not resist.

‘Did you like my little surprise?’ inquired Max

‘What surprise? All I was just waiting for was for you to kiss me.’

‘Oh I get ya. I’m sorry,’ Max kissed her again, ‘Do you forgive me?’

‘No! I can’t believe you’re here! Did you get me a present?’ Liz’s hand moved underneath Max’s shirt, his skin felt so smooth.

‘I knew how important this was to you. And I knew you wanted me to be here, So I came.’

Liz felt herself blush as Max kissed her head. ‘Thank you!’

‘I’ll do anything for you…’

‘Is that a threat?’

‘No defiantly a promise!’


TBC? shall i came back with more?

THE FIRST TIME M/L ADULT part 10

Posted: Fri Sep 05, 2008 5:10 am
by pijeechinadoll
THANK YOU FOR READING ^^
here's the next chapter

~OXO~

Liz looked up at Max. ‘Do you want to come in?’ smiled Liz.

Max was so tempted, but knew if he stepped one foot into her house, he wouldn’t be able to stop himself and his desires. ‘Nah I shouldn’t, you’re mum’s probably still up waiting for you!’

‘Mum’s at Aunt Sally’s again. She ill yet again.’

‘Oh okay… well Eric probably waiting for you.’

‘Max! Eric’s got his own place. Please Max come in!’

Flashes started to racing through Max’s Mind. Damn he knew he shouldn’t give into temptation, but it had been to long since her touch. Liz led Max up stairs. Her hands began to sweat and tremor. She led him into her bedroom and told him to wait…

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She led him into her bedroom and told him to wait for a second.

Liz then made it to the bathroom; her cheeks were very flushed. She opened her purse and took a tablet and then went back to the bedroom. She watched Max from behind as he put some music on; he turned it on quite loud. The beat pound against Liz’s heart.

Max then turned round knowing that Liz was there. He walked over to her ‘You know this is the first time I’ve entered you’re bedroom. You wanna show me around.’

Liz pointed around to different items, ‘That’s my wardrobe, that’s my desk, that’s where I hide my diary- but of course you know that. My balcony out there, that’s my mirror. That’s my comfy seat and of cause the thing that takes up the most space- my bed.’

‘Aha the bed!’ repeated Max.

Max moved closer to Liz and cupped her gentle around the face. ‘God Liz did you even know how much I’ve missed you so much.’

Liz smiled. ‘You have better have!’

Max kissed her. They’re connection flew open again as their mind and soul molded into one; he throbbed all over for her. The sensation of her touch was amazing. Liz carefully undid his shirt and then worked her way down to his trousers, seductively pulling them down his thighs. Max planted eager kisses on her face. The smell of her perfume and her hair drowned into his brain. Max pulled her closer, her familiar body so tantalizing. Max lifted her dress over her arms and lay her on the bed. Liz sat up and pulled him over towards her and kissed him. The desire to have her took over his mind completely; he ran his hands over parts of her naked body. He gently pushed her back down on to the bed and descended down onto her. He proceeded to kissing her neck gently. He cupped Liz’s face to look her in the eyes; when he felt Liz pull his pants down. Max felt her smile against his face she continued to watch him as he watched her- eyes never losing contact, as she carefully caressed his part slowly. He was immediately aroused by the effect she had on him, he slipped on the protection and instantaneously jerked her knickers off. Max felt their molecules of their bodies’ merge once again. He pushed into her with so much fury; she couldn’t help but yelp. She giggled as she came immediately. ‘…Max… ahhhh….’

Their bodies rocked carefully to and fro. Liz looked down to where Max and her were joined together, she watched in excitement and anticipation as Max thrushed him self into her more and more. Liz wrapped her arms around his neck so he wouldn’t let go. He kissed the edge of the fabric that covered her breasts. He pulled the fabric down slightly, to reveal the nipple. In which he started to suck on. Liz’s breasts started to ache but she didn’t care. She was loving every moment. He started to draw her straps down as he worked his body into hers. ‘Oh shit… Liz…’

Max grabbed her arms and pushed them down against the bed and pushed and pushed himself against Liz. Liz pushed as much as much as Max, her body had waited so long for his to return. He pushed up and down against Liz.

‘Mine Max… you’re mine!” Liz wrapped her legs around Max’s waist, which pulled Max into her more. The thrusting became faster and more stronger.

Liz cried out. ‘Ahhhhh… ’

The doorknob turned, just as Liz was climaxing. ‘LIZ WILL YOU TURN…’

The door was wide open. Liz looked up to see her gobbed smacked mum looking down at her. Max quickly pulled out. Liz quickly pulled the top blanket on herself and scrambled off the bed.

Max grabbed the other one. There was a second of silent then all hell broke loose.

‘You Bastard! I trusted you! And you go and rape my daughter. You sick bastard; you’re fired! And stay away from my daughter. If you ever come near here again, I’ll have you arrested.

‘Mum! Mum! Wait… it’s not what you think…’

‘I’ll give you 1 minute to get you’re out of my house!’ Liz’s mum shouted and then stormed out.

Liz closed the door behind her. She broke down crying. ‘This wasn’t meant to happen…’ muttered Liz. ‘What am I going to do Max?’

‘Liz it’ll be okay!’ But then a wave of panic spread over Max’s face, he wave his hand over the clock and time stood still. ‘Liz! Shit! You’re bleeding…’

Liz stared at her bed covers, indeed they were blood- stained. Max scrambled over to Liz and tried to hold her. Liz pushed Max away. ‘God please Liz let me help you.’

Liz looked at him, still crying. ‘I have a power to heal’ Max said.

Liz cupped Max’s face and stopped crying, but she couldn’t stop her voice from shaking. ‘Max no! I’m okay. I need to explain to my mum first. She’s got it all wrong… If anything ever happens to you I won’t be able to forgive myself.’

Max quickly got changed and stared at the window. ‘I think it’s the best way to leave!’

Liz nodded, god she didn’t want this night to end like this. Why couldn’t she be happy for once? Tears began to form around her eyes. Max wiped her face gently; Liz pulled away. Max looked at her and climbed through the window, as Liz stopped him. ‘Max… I… Still love you…’

Max felt a lump forming, he felt sad. ‘I love you to!’

Max kissed her and set the time running again, then left.



:cry: TBC?