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Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 61 2/26/22 (WIP)

Posted: Wed Mar 02, 2022 8:41 am
by keepsmiling7
So glad to see the return of this story, and I hope you are doing much better now.

Unwell, yes Max has a problem. The problem is Zan taking over, even the energy shield can't stop that.

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 61 2/26/22 (WIP)

Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2022 11:38 pm
by behrinthecity

Any dreamer moment is my favorite part! Lol

:D As a fellow dreamer, I get that! :wink:

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 61 2/26/22 (WIP)

Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2022 11:45 pm
by behrinthecity

OMG, yes it was! Now I’m thinking does anyone still have access to the chip? What ramifications does it have on Max not just mentally but physically too. And who’s going to take it out and will there be any negative effects with taking it out? So many questions…so this just means that we need longer parts :wink:

Excellent questions. As for the answers... we shall see! :twisted:

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 61 2/26/22 (WIP)

Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2022 11:48 pm
by behrinthecity
keepsmiling7 wrote: Wed Mar 02, 2022 8:41 am So glad to see the return of this story, and I hope you are doing much better now.

Unwell, yes Max has a problem. The problem is Zan taking over, even the energy shield can't stop that.
Hi keepsmiling7! Thank you for the wishes and comments. I am able to withstand being at the computer more and more, so am healing well.

That is a good point regarding Zan, but notice the color of the shield and when it stopped. Zan may not be as malicious as we thought...

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 61 2/26/22 (WIP)

Posted: Sun Mar 06, 2022 9:56 am
by keepsmiling7
okay, the energy of the shield was blue, not green.......this was better at stopping the bullets. It appears Zan was helping!

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 61 2/26/22 (WIP)

Posted: Tue Mar 08, 2022 9:52 pm
by MP
Is it to soon to ask for another part :oops:

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 61 2/26/22 (WIP)

Posted: Wed Apr 06, 2022 4:59 pm
by dreamon
Just stopping by…

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 61 2/26/22 (WIP)

Posted: Fri Apr 22, 2022 6:19 am
by behrinthecity
A/N: My computer died after I presented a lecture this week meaning the next part is inaccessible at the moment. :(

After i redo some work documents, I will start rewriting the next part. Really annoyed at myself for not backing up the latest part. :x

Apologies for the further delay.

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 61 2/26/22 (WIP)

Posted: Fri Apr 22, 2022 8:02 pm
by dreamon
Oh no! That sucks

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 61 2/26/22 (WIP)

Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2022 6:57 pm
by clueless
What brand is your computer?! I’m willing to write them a strongly worded email on your behalf for this immense inconvenience. Don’t they know that you have fans waiting eagerly for an update!