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Re: From Rags to Princess (M/L, AU Adult) Pt 19 9/15

Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2015 5:50 am
by Natalie36
oooo, more twist and turns :D

Re: From Rags to Princess (M/L, AU Adult) Pt 19 9/15

Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2015 6:56 am
by begonia9508
Tess again :twisted: ... She will be really pleased, when she will hear what Khivar thinks about her, as it seems she is also half human!

Thanks EVE :mrgreen:

Re: From Rags to Princess (M/L, AU Adult) Pt 19 9/15

Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2015 11:21 am
by L-J-L 76
Great Chapter!!!! Please please please please please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon? I can't wait to read what will happen next for Max and Liz. I so knew the mega bitch Tess would be in the story if you have evil in it. I really really hate Kivar and Tess. I hope someone will kill them before they try and kill the royal family soon. I'm glad that Jeff and Kyle know each other. And I'm also glad that Kyle told Michael how he knew Jeff. So Jim and Amy are dating that is great. Wow so Tess is Kivar's half breed sister. I wonder if Tess will find that out. I'm glad that the king want to have dinner with everyone to welcome Jeff. Hopefully Jeff will feel like he is home at the palace with his girls. So Liz turned Max on with a passionate kiss huh. I'm glad Liz was not surprised. Poor Max he may have to take another shower before the dinner. I wonder how long it will be before Max and Liz have will sleep together. What did Kivar promise Tess? What will happen at the dinner? Will Liz, Serena, Kyle and Jeff be happy to see each other? Will they all hug? Will Kyle and Serena fall in love? Will Max and Liz get married and bond? Will Max and Liz bond before Kivar attacks? Will Michael, Kyle, Max and Philip find out about Tess being a spy for Kivar? What will Philip, Diane, Max, Michael and Kyle do with Tess? Will Philip, Max, Diane, Michael, Kyle kill Kivar and Tess? How will Kivar and Tess get killed? Will Max, Liz, Serena, Kyle, Isabel, Philip, Daine and Jeff live through the fight with Kivar? Will Max, Liz, Serena, Kyle, Isabel, Philip, Diane and Jeff live a happy long and happy life? Will Max and Liz get married? Will Max and Liz bond? Will Max and Liz have kids?

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L-J-L 76

Re: From Rags to Princess (M/L, AU Adult) Pt 19 9/15

Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2015 4:21 pm
by keepsmiling7
Please hurry up and physically bond.,.........I am glad the mental bonding has started though.
Looks like that blue eyed maid is doomed after all of her spying. She will be surprised to find out that she is half human herself.
Hope someone is watching Kivar very close.......
Thanks,
Carolyn

Re: From Rags to Princess (M/L, AU Adult) Pt 20 9/16

Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2015 4:05 am
by Roswelllostcause
Natalie36 Yes there are a few twists and turns!

Eve She might not live long enough to find out that she is half human.

L-J-L 76 Yes Jeff and Kyle know each other.

Carolyn Max andvLiz will physically bond before to much longer. I think there might be someone keeping an eye on Kivar. There is someone who hasn't shown up yet don't forget! :wink:






Part 20

Jeff walked into the dinning room wearing a new suit that was finer than anything he had ever owned in his life. He saw that both Michael and Kyle had already arrived in dress uniforms. The door opened and he saw the younger of his two daughters come in. He had missed her so much. She looked so much like her mother.

"Serena?" Asked Jeff

Serena turned and looked at her father.

"Dad?"

Jeff wrapped his arms around his daughter. Serena hugged her father back.

"I missed you dad."
"Missed you to honey. You doing OK? What about your sister?"
"I doing good. Liz, she is doing better. It was a little rough when I first got here. But I think it will be best if she explains what was going on."
"The prince isn't miss treating her is he?"
"Trust me dad Liz isn't doing anything with the prince she doesn't want to do."
"She is telling you the truth dad."

Jeff turned to see Liz enter the room looking more like a princess then a poor farm girl turned slave. Liz smiled and pushed a strand of her hair back. That was when he noticed that she was no longer wearing the slave bans.

"Lizzie? He freed you?" Asked Jeff
"Yes. He has also asked me to marry him. I told him yes." Said Liz
"That is wonderful sweetie. We will need to talk to more later OK?"
"Yes dad."

Liz gave him a hug. Max and Isabel came in. Max walked right over To Liz and placed a kiss on her cheek. He then turned to Jeff.

"Welcome to the palace Mr. Parker." Said Max
"It is an honor to be here my prince." Said Jeff with a bow

It was then that King Philip and Queen Diane came in. Everyone sat at the table. It was during the meal that Liz picked up her glass and was hit with a vision.

The King picked up his glass that had just been refilled by the blond blue eyed maid. He took a sip and fell over dead.

It caught Liz by surprise. It was the first clear vision she had had since this new power developed. She then saw the maid refill the King's glass. He reached for the glass and Liz knew that she had to say something.

"My King, please don't drink that." Said Liz

Philip looked at Liz and saw fear in her eyes.

"Miss Parker, what did you see?" Asked Philip placing the glass down.
"I saw you drink from that glass and die." Said Liz
"Take this and have it tested." Said Philip to one of the guards.
"Liz, is there more?" Asked Max
"I can't be sure but I think that one maid has something to do with it." Said Liz
"Which one?" Demanded Michael
"That young blond one. With the blue eyes." Said Liz
"Captain have her locked in her room until we find out what is in that glass." Ordered Philip
"Yes sire!"

Michael got up and dragged the maid off to her room and placed two guards on the door. Jeff looked at his older daughter in shock.

"Could someone please tell me what is going on?" Asked Jeff
"Liz, has mom gift of the seer dad." Said Serena

Jeff was speachless. He had hoped neither of the girls had ever gotten that power.






TBC

Re: From Rags to Princess (M/L, AU Adult) Pt 20 9/16

Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2015 4:43 am
by L-J-L 76
Great Chapter!!!! Please please please please please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon? I can't wait to read what will happen next for Max and Liz. That was so cool Liz stopped Philip from being poisoned. I'm glad that Tess is going to be locked in her room. And I can't believe Tess thought she could get away with poisoning Philip the king. I'm glad that Jeff is with his girls. So Max and Liz are getting married. That is so great. Wonder why Jeff is not happy about Liz being a seer like her mom. Will Philip find out what was in the glass? Did Tess poison the king why? Why is Jeff so worried about Liz having the power of seer like her mom? Will Jeff tell Liz why he is worried? Will Max and Liz bond really soon? Will Max and Liz get married very soon? Will Max and Liz bond and get married before Kivar attacks?

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L-J-L 76

Re: From Rags to Princess (M/L, AU Adult) Pt 20 9/16

Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2015 5:46 am
by Natalie36
thank god she saved the king. maybe they will get answers out of tess

Re: From Rags to Princess (M/L, AU Adult) Pt 20 9/16

Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2015 8:15 am
by keepsmiling7
Liz's vision saved the day.
What's lurking around the corner now????
Thanks,
Carolyn

Re: From Rags to Princess (M/L, AU Adult) Pt 20 9/16

Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2015 9:06 am
by begonia9508
Liz was first afraid of what it would be with her, if she gets the visions but now, she has seen that everything was fine with her, and because she could save the King! :wink:

Thanks EVE :mrgreen:

Re: From Rags to Princess (M/L, AU Adult) Pt 21 9/17

Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2015 4:01 am
by Roswelllostcause
L-J-L 76 We find out here if there really was poison in the glass.

Natalie36 Answers out of Tess? Maybe but I wouldn't count on it.

Carolyn Well Kivar is still running around and put to something.

Eve Yes Liz was scared of the visions. But now she has saved the King's life!






Part 21

Jeff sat in the garden with Liz and Serena after dinner.

"When did the visions start Elizabeth?" Asked Jeff
"About a week before Serena arrived. But until tonight none were clear." Said Liz
"What has changed to make them clear?"
"I did a mental bonding with Max." Said Liz
"Liz, you do know that is a permanent bond?"
"Yes dad. I didn't have a lot of choices. I could have had the guardians remove it. But if I did that, then it had the risk of changing me. Do nothing and end up going crazy. So I went with the what I felt would be best for me. Dad, I was given this gift for a reason."
"Dad, if not for this new gift of Liz's the King more then likely would be dead." Said Serena
"I know. But I still worry. Liz, you have a lot of responsibility with this gift." Said Jeff
"Dad, did mom see this as a curse or gift?" Asked Liz
"To her it was a gift. Liz, you are where you have always meant to be. She told me the day you were born that the day would come that I would see you rise to a place that was bigger then that farm. It wasn't until the Prince brought you to visit last year that I truly understood what she meant." Said Jeff
"What about me?" Asked Serena
"You are where you belong too. You were born to be a guardian. Each of you were born to be far greater than lives struggling on that farm." Said Jeff

"Dad, are you OK with losing the farm?" Asked Liz
"Yes. Your mother made me promise her if I was given the opportunity for a better life then I would take it." Said Jeff
"Dad, you do know that since I agreed to marry Max that when he becomes King, I will be your Queen." Said Liz
"Elizabeth, I will be more than happy to have you as my queen." Said Jeff
"Love you daddy."

Jeff wrapped both his girls in a hug and kissed them both on the top of their heads.

********

Philip sat at his desk in his office. He knew he was going to have to talk to Elizabeth soon. They had to set a date for the wedding. Just then there was a knock the door.

"Come in." Said Philip

In came in a young man with papers in his hands.

"What do you have for me Alex?" Asked Philip
"There was poison in your glass. Zattar to be exact." Said Alex
"Refresh my memory."
"Well Sire Zattar is from a plant in the northern mountains of Partar."
"Duke Larrick's world?"
"Yes Sire."
"Thank you. You may go."
"Yes Sire."

Alex left and Philip called in Michael.

"Have the girl brought to me for questioning. She isn't smart enough to be behind this on her own. Oh and have we gotten word from our spy inside Kivar's?"
"Yes Sire. Maria reported in an hour ago. She has seen proof that he is the one behind the destroying of the farmland."
"Damn. Next time you hear from her tell get me copies and get back here. It is no longer safe for her there."
"Yes Sire."
"Michael, Maria is tough. She won't get caught."
"I know. It's just that I love her so much."
"I know."
"Besides if anything were to happen to her Amy DeLuca would kick both of our butts."
"Don't I know it. That is one scary woman!"

Michael smirked if the people knew that their King was scared of a human woman.





TBC