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Re: Earning Trust (AU, M/L, Adult) Pt 18 8/29

Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2015 6:45 pm
by keepsmiling7
Now that's a big surprise.
I can see a big case building for Liz.........hopefully Max will continue to be her friend and build trust.
I knew Max was too smart to go out with Tess.
Thanks,
Carolyn

Re: Earning Trust (AU, M/L, Adult) Pt 18 8/29

Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2015 9:42 pm
by L-J-L 76
Great Chapter!!!! Please please please please please please please please pleasew come back and post more really really really really soon? I can't wait to read what will happen next for Max and Liz. Oh wow the truth finally comes out about what happened to the babysitter. I'm glad Sara realizes who id the father of the little girl. Hopefully Kimberly will tell Sara everything that had happened to her. And then hopefully Sara and Kimberly will tell Liz everything. And I agree with Michael about Stepfather Richard and Sean frying!

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L-J-L 76

Re: Earning Trust (AU, M/L, Adult) Pt 18 8/29

Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2015 12:28 am
by max and liz believer
Great part! It's a very nice thing of this Kimberley to return just to talk with Liz about what happened. I'm sure that it can't be very much fun to return after all those years, considering what happened. But it proves that Kimberley is a good person; someone that cares for Liz.

I think it'll be a good thing for those two to meet. Maybe, considering what Liz has been through, Liz'll be able to share and talk about things with Kimberley that she can't with anyone else - just because they have the same experience. Plus, Liz can talk about the babies that never got to live...

Re: Earning Trust (AU, M/L, Adult) Pt 19 8/30

Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2015 5:43 am
by Roswelllostcause
Eve Right now Liz's stepfather is sitting in a jail cell waiting trial. Sean will be a problem for a bit yet.

Natalie36 Yes holy crap! :lol:

Carolyn There is a big case forming for Liz to get justice! Max is way tyo smart to go out with Tess!

L-J-L 76 Yes the truth is out about the babysitter! Liz will find out soon what happened to Kimberly. Michael has never really be a friend to Liz. But he doesn't want anyone treated the way she was.

max and liz believer Jo, it was nice that Kimberly came back to help Liz. It was hard for her to make that choice. But she does care about Liz.



Part 19

Sean moaned as he felt the warm mouth of Tess Harding on his dick. Her blond head bobbed as she continued to suck on him. His body jerked as he finally had his release. After Tess removed her mouth from him she wiped her mouth and smiled at him.

"That felt fucking good." Said Sean
"Yeah? Well what are you going to do about that bitch? Not only did she get your Uncle thrown in jail, but got my dad fired! Claimed he wasn't doing his job! But we both know that slut wanted your Uncle to fuck her!"
"Oh don't you worry Tess, I plan to ride that bitch hard as I can. She will regreat what she did to us."
"Good, now if only I could get in Max Evans pants! Once I take him for a ride he will leave that slut behind and not think twice about her again."
"I don't know what you see in that loser."
"I just think he would be fun to ride."
"You ride the pretty boy. But when you are done I will teach him for butting into things that don't concern him."

Sean then pushed Tess onto her back and jabbed his dick into her as hard as he could. She moaned as he began to ride her hard.

*******

Max walked into the kitchen to find his mom making dinner.

"Mom?"
"Yes honey?"
"There is this guy at school who is threating Liz."
"Her stepfather's nephew?"
"Yeah. How did you know?"
"Your sister said something. Has he tried something?"
"He was trying to drag her off somewhere to my guess was to rape her. She and I can't prove it."
"Oh Max, that girl has been through so much all ready."
"Yeah I know. Mom, I stopped him before he could do anything other than scare her."
"Good. Max, she just needs friends right now."
"I am awear of that. But the fact is I do have feelings for her. Mom, don't say anything. I won't act on them. The last thing I want is for her to have a set back in her healing."
"Something happen I don't know about?"
"The other day you know when I was over there painting. I got her to smile for the first time in a long time. Well that is what Serena said anyway."
"Honey that is a very good thing. It is going to take time. But she has started the healing she needs."
"I know. Mom, I really like her."
"Just remember to take things at her pace."
"Trust me mom. I am."

*******

Kyle Valenti looked up when his dad came in. He knew he needed to tell him what he saw at school today. What he knew Liz wasn't going to do.

"Dad can I talk to you about something?"
"Sure Kyle what is it?"
"I think someone might be in danger."
"Who do you think is in danger?"
"Liz Parker."
"Why do you think she is in danger son?"
"Sean Carter was trying to get her to go with him. From what I could see she didn't want to go with him. I was getting ready to go help her when Max Evans pulled Sean away from her. Sean walked off yelling that it wasn't over and that Liz owed him and he was going to get what she owed him. That it was a promise. I was going to make sure she was OK when they left to go talk somewhere."
"Kyle, I want you to be careful. Liz is a very broken girl. Watch out for her but if she tells you to back off do it. I will look into this boy. But if he is anything like his Uncle he is a very dangerous person."
"Thanks dad. I just thought you should know."
"Thanks son."





TBC

Re: Earning Trust (AU, M/L, Adult) Pt 19 8/30

Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2015 8:31 am
by max and liz believer
Well, it won't be easy for Sean to do what he wants to do, since everyone around seems to haven noticed what he's up to. With so many people looking out for Liz, one can only hope that she'll be safe.

Tess, on the other hand. I don't think anyone suspects her of anything. Unless they see her with Sean and put two and two together.

- Jo

Re: Earning Trust (AU, M/L, Adult) Pt 19 8/30

Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2015 9:47 am
by begonia9508
I hope that will help! Because the more they are to protect Liz, the better it is for her!

Sean should get the same treatment he wants to give Liz and there will be certainly the possibility, for him to be raped to! :twisted: Rape is a sensible matter and shouldn't exist but maybe he could learn something...

EVE :?

Re: Earning Trust (AU, M/L, Adult) Pt 19 8/30

Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2015 11:45 am
by keepsmiling7
So glad to hear Mr. Harding was fired..........but now Tess is really unhappy about that.
Tess and Sean make a perfect pair.....why don't they stick to themselves and leave everyone else alone?
That's nice that Max shared his feelings with his mother.
And I'm really glad Kyle brought the Sheriff into the situation.
Liz needs all of the help she can get.
Thanks,
Carolyn

Re: Earning Trust (AU, M/L, Adult) Pt 19 8/30

Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2015 6:52 pm
by L-J-L 76
Great Chapter!!!! Please please please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon? I can't wait to read what will happen next between Max and Liz. I really really hate the asshole Sean and the mega bitch Tess. I hope someone will teach the asshole and the mega bitch a lesson before they try to hurt Max and Liz. I'm so glad that Mr. Harding is fired. He deserves it. I'm glad that Max and Kyle told their parents. I'm so glad that Liz has a lot of friends looking at her. I hope Max, Isabel, Alex, Serena. Kyle, Maria and Michael will be able to protect Liz for Sean and Tess. I hope someone will stop the asshole and Mega bitch form hurting Max and Liz.

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L-J-L 76

Re: Earning Trust (AU, M/L, Adult) Pt 20 8/31

Posted: Mon Aug 31, 2015 5:44 am
by Roswelllostcause
max and liz believer Jo, Sean won't have an easy time getting to Liz. As for Tess, there is someone who knows she hangs a round with Sean.

Eve It will take time but Sean is going to get what is coming to him.

Carolyn Yes Mr. Harding was fired. Tess isn't happy. Tess and Sean are made for each other! Yes Max shared his feelings with his mother. Kyle telling his dad what he saw is a big help.

L-J-L 76 Liz has a lot of people looking out for her now. Sean is going to get what is coming to him. As for Tess we will have to wait and see.





Part 20

Kimberly pulled on her jacket and followed Richard Carter out of the apartment. She always liked babysitting for Liz. She was such a good kid. It was late and starting to rain so she accepted the offer of the ride home from Mr. Carter. She got into his van and he pulled out of the parking lot.

"Thank you for the ride Mr. Carter."

He didn't say anything. He just kept glancing at her. She started to get uncomfortable. Then he pulled over on the dark street two blocks from her house. He turned off the van and pulled her into the back. He shoved her to the floor of the van pinning her there. He pushed her jean skirt up and reached into her under pants.

"Please Mr. Carter, stop."

He just grinned and put his lips inches from her face. She could smell both alcohol and cigarettes on his breath. He ran his fingers down her face.

"Kimmy, ever had a dick between your legs? Not that it matters to me. I have no problem popping your cherry. In fact I bet those stupid high school boys will thank me for breaking you in." Said Richard
"Please don't do this."

Richard ripped her underware from her and unbuckled his belt. He undid his pants dropped them along with his boxers and forced her legs apart. He then forced his penis into her and right through her virginity. She cried out as he pounded into her hard. He finally let out a grunt as he dumped his seed into her. He pulled out and pulled his pants back up. He then grabbed her arm and placed his mouth right next to her ear.

"You tell anyone about this and I will kill your little brother and sister is that clear Kimmy?"

She just nodded unable to speak. He then drove her the rest of the way home. She went to her room grabbed her pajamas and went into the bathroom and turned on the shower as hot as she could stand. She sat in the tub with her knees pulled to her chest and cried for what had just been stolen from her.


Kimberly woke sweating. She checked her daughter who slept through the nightmare her mother was having right next to her. She had been fifteen when that monster raped her. Now she was going to face the girl she left in danger. She could only hope that Liz would forgive her.

*******

Liz walked into the kitchen and grabbed a bagel and put it in the toaster. She was still thinking about the dream she had. It wasn't a bad dream. But it hadn't been one she ever expected to have.

"Morning Liz." Said Sarah coming in.
"Morning Sarah."
"Liz, there is something I want to talk to you about."
"What is it?"
"Someone came into the Crashdown yesterday asking about you."

Liz felt her heart start to race.

"Who was it?"
"Kimberly Peters."
"As in the girl who use to baby sit me?"
"Yes."
"What does she want?"
"To talk to you."
"Why?"
"Maybe to tell you why she stopped babysitting for you."
"When does she want to do this?"
"Today after school."
"OK. I will come by the diner after school."
"You sure?"
"Yeah. I have a good idea what happened to her to make her quit babysitting."
"OK honey I'll give her a call and let her know you will be there."

Just then Alex and Serena came in grabbed their breakfast and the three of them headed for school.




TBC

Re: Earning Trust (AU, M/L, Adult) Pt 20 8/31

Posted: Mon Aug 31, 2015 6:00 am
by max and liz believer
Poor Kimberly... :cry: Evil evil man :x

Looking forward to the meeting between Kimberly and Liz.

- Jo