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Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) Ch 87, 3/3/16, p. 70
Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2016 8:55 am
by Morning Dreamgirl
You sure know how to start a girl's day off on the right foot!

Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) Ch 87, 3/3/16, p. 70
Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2016 9:36 am
by begonia9508
Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) Ch 87, 3/3/16, p. 70
Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2016 10:36 pm
by keepsmiling7
You are such a tease............that hair cutting scene.......
Lots of built up tension there.
And Dulce Base.........would I ever love to have a tour of that place.
Great story,
Carolyn
Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) Ch 87, 3/3/16, p. 70
Posted: Sun Mar 06, 2016 4:25 am
by mela3
Wow. The description of Liz's feeling in the previous chapters was so clear and realistic, that it seemed interwoven into the story as thread in a tapestry. It truly speaks of Liz's character and their narrative as a couple.
I'm really excited that Maria is involved.
Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) Ch 87, 3/3/16, p. 70
Posted: Mon Mar 07, 2016 6:37 pm
by L-J-L 76
Please come back and post more really soon? Can't wait to find out what Max and Liz will tell Maria?
And if Maria will find out that Max, Isabel, Michael, Alex, Mr. Evans are aliens? And if Liz and Max will tell Maria what has been going on? Sorry for the question just wondering.
From:
L-J-L 76
Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) Ch 87, 3/3/16, p. 70
Posted: Tue Mar 08, 2016 9:56 am
by dreamon
That was a lot of awesome reading! Well I'm finally caught up and looking forward to more!!!
Author's Note 10th of March
Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2016 3:51 am
by max and liz believer
Hi everyone!
Due to my current inability to find the time to write, the updates will be on a more weekly basis than every third day as perviously

Sorry about this. Also, I've gotten out of sync with sending the chapters for editing, which means that I have been "forced" to upload unedited chapters (which I don't like doing). Hence, I'm waiting for the next edit (which I sent to my beta 2 days ago) before there'll be a new update. In other words, I don't know when the next update will be (since it depends on when I'll receive the edit), but hopefully it'll be before the end of this week.
Thank you so so so much for reading and for leaving feedback!
I'm gonna go back to writing now
xx
Jo
Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) Ch 87, 3/3/16 + A/N 3/10/16 p. 71
Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2016 3:57 am
by begonia9508
Don't worry, I will be waiting... Thanks for the advise! EVE

Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) Ch 87, 3/3/16 + A/N 3/10/16 p. 71
Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2016 8:16 am
by Natalie36
that's fine as long as I can still read this awesome story
Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) Ch 87, 3/3/16 + A/N 3/10/16 p. 71
Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2016 8:50 am
by Roswelllostcause
Take your time!
Helen