Great Chapter!!!! Please please please please please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon I can't wait to read what will happen next for Max and Liz. First off death to Kivar and Nicholas!!!! I really hate them. I hope someone will find out what they are up to and stop them. Kill them. I'm glad Liz is with Max. It seem Liz is following her destiny to be with Max. I like how Ava wants to be friends with Liz. Will someone find out what Kivar and Nicholas are up too? Will Max and others stop Kivar and Nicholas? Will Liz be left alone? What will happen if Liz is left alone? Will Kivar and Nicholas try something? Will Max, Michael, Kyle and Alex protect Liz and the girls? Will Kivar and Nicholas start a war? Will Philip, Diane, Max, Liz, Michael, Maria, Alex, Isabel, Kyle and Serena fight, live a happy life all together? Sorry for the questions I was just wondering.
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great part. kivar is scum 
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Re: A New Home (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 14 6/21
Eve Kivar and Nicholas may not get to far with their plans.
saori_1902 Thanks!
L-J-L 76 Weather Liz is following her destiny or not is still up in the air. Sorry Kivar and Nicholas are going to be around for a bit.
Natalie36 Yes he is!
Part 14
Liz stepped out onto the balcony to get some air. Her head was racing trying to keep all the people she had met straight. Though the only one who sent fear through her was Kivar. She was lost in thought and didn't hear him until he spoke.
"Tell me human, has the prince screwed you yet?"
Liz felt a cold shiver go down her spine at the voice. She turned to see Kivar standing behind her. The look in his eyes sent fear through her.
"Why don't you come with me and I will teach you what the only thing you stupid humans are good for."
"Stay away from me." Said Liz in a shaky voice
Kivar just laughed not believing that this pathetic thing was chosen to be the next queen.
"Why are you so scared Elizabeth? You don't think I would hurt you do you?" Asked Kivar with a dark look in his eyes.
"KIVAR GET AWAY FROM THE GIRL!" Came a powerful voice full of authority.
Liz looked past Kivar to see the King and Queen. Michael and two other guards were right behind them.
"You two escort Lord Kivar out of the palace. Michael find that little pest Nicholas and see that he leaves with Kivar." Said Philip
"Yes sire!" Said Michael and the two guards.
Philip took a step closer to Liz and softened his voice.
"Are you OK Elizabeth? Did he try anything?" Asked Philip
"He didn't touch me. Just talked." Said Liz shakerly
"So you are OK?" Asked Philip
Liz looked into his eyes for the first time and saw that he really was worried about her.
"Yes sir. Just scared." Said Liz softly
"Good. Diane will you see that she gets back to her room? I think the best thing for her would be some rest."
"Of course. Come on Liz." Said Diane
Liz let the older woman wrap an arm around her and lead her away. As she was being led away she heard an angry voice yelling.
"Get your hands off me to stupid lug!"
"Shut up Nicky!" Said Michael
It was a short time later Liz was in her room.
"Liz are you sure you are OK?" Asked Diane
"Yeah. He never touched me. Just said some things."
"I want you to know that the way he feels about humans is not how everyone here feels."
"I know."
"Liz, are you still angry about coming here?"
"No. I understand that this is what is best for me. What my patents would want. They wouldn't have wanted me to die before I really had a chance to live."
"You are still very stubborn."
"That will most likely never change."
"That is a good thing. A strong queen can't give in easily."
"I still don't get why you think that I would make a good queen."
"It will become clear in time."
Diane got up and left Liz alone.
*******
Kivar stormed into his home. He was beyond angry. How dare that pathic king have him throw out! He ordered one of the girls brought to him. When the younger of the two was brought to his room he ripped her robe from her shoved her to the bed and forced himself into her. She screamed as he pounded into as hard as her could. He smacked her hard causing her nose to break and blood to pour down her face. Tears ran down her face as he kept pounding into her. When he had his release she tried to stand up her knees buckled. She crawled to her robe pulled it on and slowly made her way back to her room. Kat crawled to her bed mat in pain.
"Kat, are you OK?" Asked Jenny
"He was really rough. He broke my nose when I screamed in pain."
Jenny just pushed Kat's hair back and wondered if they would ever get away from this monster.
TBC
saori_1902 Thanks!
L-J-L 76 Weather Liz is following her destiny or not is still up in the air. Sorry Kivar and Nicholas are going to be around for a bit.
Natalie36 Yes he is!
Part 14
Liz stepped out onto the balcony to get some air. Her head was racing trying to keep all the people she had met straight. Though the only one who sent fear through her was Kivar. She was lost in thought and didn't hear him until he spoke.
"Tell me human, has the prince screwed you yet?"
Liz felt a cold shiver go down her spine at the voice. She turned to see Kivar standing behind her. The look in his eyes sent fear through her.
"Why don't you come with me and I will teach you what the only thing you stupid humans are good for."
"Stay away from me." Said Liz in a shaky voice
Kivar just laughed not believing that this pathetic thing was chosen to be the next queen.
"Why are you so scared Elizabeth? You don't think I would hurt you do you?" Asked Kivar with a dark look in his eyes.
"KIVAR GET AWAY FROM THE GIRL!" Came a powerful voice full of authority.
Liz looked past Kivar to see the King and Queen. Michael and two other guards were right behind them.
"You two escort Lord Kivar out of the palace. Michael find that little pest Nicholas and see that he leaves with Kivar." Said Philip
"Yes sire!" Said Michael and the two guards.
Philip took a step closer to Liz and softened his voice.
"Are you OK Elizabeth? Did he try anything?" Asked Philip
"He didn't touch me. Just talked." Said Liz shakerly
"So you are OK?" Asked Philip
Liz looked into his eyes for the first time and saw that he really was worried about her.
"Yes sir. Just scared." Said Liz softly
"Good. Diane will you see that she gets back to her room? I think the best thing for her would be some rest."
"Of course. Come on Liz." Said Diane
Liz let the older woman wrap an arm around her and lead her away. As she was being led away she heard an angry voice yelling.
"Get your hands off me to stupid lug!"
"Shut up Nicky!" Said Michael
It was a short time later Liz was in her room.
"Liz are you sure you are OK?" Asked Diane
"Yeah. He never touched me. Just said some things."
"I want you to know that the way he feels about humans is not how everyone here feels."
"I know."
"Liz, are you still angry about coming here?"
"No. I understand that this is what is best for me. What my patents would want. They wouldn't have wanted me to die before I really had a chance to live."
"You are still very stubborn."
"That will most likely never change."
"That is a good thing. A strong queen can't give in easily."
"I still don't get why you think that I would make a good queen."
"It will become clear in time."
Diane got up and left Liz alone.
*******
Kivar stormed into his home. He was beyond angry. How dare that pathic king have him throw out! He ordered one of the girls brought to him. When the younger of the two was brought to his room he ripped her robe from her shoved her to the bed and forced himself into her. She screamed as he pounded into as hard as her could. He smacked her hard causing her nose to break and blood to pour down her face. Tears ran down her face as he kept pounding into her. When he had his release she tried to stand up her knees buckled. She crawled to her robe pulled it on and slowly made her way back to her room. Kat crawled to her bed mat in pain.
"Kat, are you OK?" Asked Jenny
"He was really rough. He broke my nose when I screamed in pain."
Jenny just pushed Kat's hair back and wondered if they would ever get away from this monster.
TBC
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Re: A New Home (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 14 6/21
Great Chapter!!!! Please please please please please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon? I can't wait to read what will happen next for Max and Liz. I hate the way Kivar was talking to Liz about Max. All I can say is I hope Kivar and Nicholas have quick painful death really really soon. I'm glad Philip, Diane and Michael came when they did. The way Philip and Diane talked to Liz was really sweet, caring like loving parents. Hopefully Liz will think of Philip and Diane as her parents too. I'm glad that Dine is acting like a mom to Liz. I can't believe Kivar hurt Kat like he did. I hope one of the human girls go into his room and cut off his penis. Where was Max while all of this was going on? Will Max find out and talk to Liz? Will Max and Liz talk? Will Liz tell Max and Serena what Kivar said to her? What will Max, Serena, Philip and Diane do when they hear what Kivar said to Liz? Will Max, Serena, Michael, Philip and Diane protect Liz from Kivar and Nicholas? How will they protect Liz from Kivar and Nicholas?
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Re: A New Home (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 14 6/21
It was really nice that Liz got to go to the party, because they dressed her up and made her feel like a princess. It was, however, too bad that Khivar and Nicolaus was there. Those two... *shivers* Ugh... I'm kinda scared now that Khivar will takes his frustration and anger out on Liz, just because the royal people protected her. She's an even more interesting object now, when the stakes are higher...
"Nicky"...
Poor that young girl at the hands of Khivar. She has to take all of his mood swings. He could actually (accidentally or not) kill her, being so violent.
Great parts!
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Hehe, this was too funny"Get your hands off me to stupid lug!"
"Shut up Nicky!" Said Michael
"Nicky"... Poor that young girl at the hands of Khivar. She has to take all of his mood swings. He could actually (accidentally or not) kill her, being so violent.
Great parts!
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Khivar! Hope he gets what he merites, at the end! EVE 
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Re: A New Home (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 15 6/22
saori_1902 It is good you don't like Kivar! He is pure evil!
L-J-L 76 Don't count on Kivar and Nicholas going any where soon. Sorry Kat and Jenny can't get to Kivar. They are kept locked up unless he wants one of them. Diane really does care about Liz.
max and liz believer Yes it was nice that Liz got to go to the party and dress up like a princess. I wouldn't worry too much about Kivar going after Liz. She is very well protected. Kivar wouldn't care ifhe killed one of the girls. He only sees them as away to fill his needs, their safety means nothing to him.
Eve Have a little faith in me. Hasn't he and anyone else who is evil gotten what they had coming in the end in my fics?
Part 15 Six months later
Liz ran down the dock and jumped into the lake with Max right behind her. She started to swim away from him. He gave chase and they both laughed when he caught up with her.
"Your swimming is getting a lot better." Said Max
"You really think so?"
"Yeah."
"Max, I was wondering is there a reason you haven't tried to kiss me?"
"Well the truth is I want to. I have wanted to since the day we met."
"Then why haven't you tried?"
"Well, I haven't because I was afraid of how you would react."
"I know I haven't made things easy."
"Liz, I never blamed you for being upset."
"Until the night of the state dinner I hated your father."
"Then he came to your aid."
"Yeah and I saw a side of him I didn't know he had."
"He really isn't a bad person. It's just the stress of being King gets to him sometimes."
"So I guess when you become King it will be my job to make sure you relax and have fun."
"Yes."
Liz grinned and then pushed him under. Then swam for shore. Max came up and gave chase. He caught her as she began to run onto the beach. He grabbed her and both fell to the ground. Max had Liz pinned to the sand and stared down into her big brown eyes. He slowly lowered his lips to hers and gave her a very soft and sweet kiss. He pulled away after a second and rolled so he was laying next to her.
"Sorry I shouldn't have done that." Said Max
"You did nothing wrong."
"Liz, we do things different here."
"So there is no kissing?"
"No nothing like that. It's just you are required by law to be a virgin when we marry."
"What about you?"
"It doesn't matter about me. Only you."
"Max, it was just a kiss."
"Yeah and we have over two years before we can marry."
"I don't understand."
"Liz, there will come a time when just kissing you won't be enough. That I will want to hold you in my arms. Feel you sleeping next to me in my bed."
"Max, we have to take this slow. I have never been in any kind of relationship. So this is very new to me, and what I am starting to feel for you scares the hell out of me."
"I promise that I won't force you to do anything you don't want to do."
"I hope you are able to keep that promise."
Max looked over when he heard someone coming up to them. He grabbed a towel and threw it at Liz. He stood up and looked at the man approaching them.
"Prince Maxwell." Said the man dropping to one knee in front of him.
"Who are you and what do you want?" Asked Max
"Sire, my name is Drayer. I work for Lord Kivar."
"So?"
"My Prince, Lord Kivar has bought two human girls from the black market. One I would say is the same age as your friend there, the other who I am told he has had about two years is a little older."
"Is he hurting these girls?"
"He rapes them daily."
"How long have you worked for Kivar?"
"A few months."
"You do know that if he finds out you came to me that he will kill you?"
"Yes Sire."
"Why risk your life for those girls then?"
"What he is doing is wrong!"
"I agree. Drayer, I will have my father send someone to look into this matter. "
"Thank you sire."
Drayer left and Max turned to Liz.
"Get your things please. We are going home." Said Max softly
Liz could see how this news upset Max. So she did as she was asked.
TBC
L-J-L 76 Don't count on Kivar and Nicholas going any where soon. Sorry Kat and Jenny can't get to Kivar. They are kept locked up unless he wants one of them. Diane really does care about Liz.
max and liz believer Yes it was nice that Liz got to go to the party and dress up like a princess. I wouldn't worry too much about Kivar going after Liz. She is very well protected. Kivar wouldn't care ifhe killed one of the girls. He only sees them as away to fill his needs, their safety means nothing to him.
Eve Have a little faith in me. Hasn't he and anyone else who is evil gotten what they had coming in the end in my fics?
Part 15 Six months later
Liz ran down the dock and jumped into the lake with Max right behind her. She started to swim away from him. He gave chase and they both laughed when he caught up with her.
"Your swimming is getting a lot better." Said Max
"You really think so?"
"Yeah."
"Max, I was wondering is there a reason you haven't tried to kiss me?"
"Well the truth is I want to. I have wanted to since the day we met."
"Then why haven't you tried?"
"Well, I haven't because I was afraid of how you would react."
"I know I haven't made things easy."
"Liz, I never blamed you for being upset."
"Until the night of the state dinner I hated your father."
"Then he came to your aid."
"Yeah and I saw a side of him I didn't know he had."
"He really isn't a bad person. It's just the stress of being King gets to him sometimes."
"So I guess when you become King it will be my job to make sure you relax and have fun."
"Yes."
Liz grinned and then pushed him under. Then swam for shore. Max came up and gave chase. He caught her as she began to run onto the beach. He grabbed her and both fell to the ground. Max had Liz pinned to the sand and stared down into her big brown eyes. He slowly lowered his lips to hers and gave her a very soft and sweet kiss. He pulled away after a second and rolled so he was laying next to her.
"Sorry I shouldn't have done that." Said Max
"You did nothing wrong."
"Liz, we do things different here."
"So there is no kissing?"
"No nothing like that. It's just you are required by law to be a virgin when we marry."
"What about you?"
"It doesn't matter about me. Only you."
"Max, it was just a kiss."
"Yeah and we have over two years before we can marry."
"I don't understand."
"Liz, there will come a time when just kissing you won't be enough. That I will want to hold you in my arms. Feel you sleeping next to me in my bed."
"Max, we have to take this slow. I have never been in any kind of relationship. So this is very new to me, and what I am starting to feel for you scares the hell out of me."
"I promise that I won't force you to do anything you don't want to do."
"I hope you are able to keep that promise."
Max looked over when he heard someone coming up to them. He grabbed a towel and threw it at Liz. He stood up and looked at the man approaching them.
"Prince Maxwell." Said the man dropping to one knee in front of him.
"Who are you and what do you want?" Asked Max
"Sire, my name is Drayer. I work for Lord Kivar."
"So?"
"My Prince, Lord Kivar has bought two human girls from the black market. One I would say is the same age as your friend there, the other who I am told he has had about two years is a little older."
"Is he hurting these girls?"
"He rapes them daily."
"How long have you worked for Kivar?"
"A few months."
"You do know that if he finds out you came to me that he will kill you?"
"Yes Sire."
"Why risk your life for those girls then?"
"What he is doing is wrong!"
"I agree. Drayer, I will have my father send someone to look into this matter. "
"Thank you sire."
Drayer left and Max turned to Liz.
"Get your things please. We are going home." Said Max softly
Liz could see how this news upset Max. So she did as she was asked.
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Great Chapter!!!! Please please please please please please please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon? I can't wait to read what will happen next for Max and Liz. I love the way Max and Liz are together. Hopefully Max and Liz will become closer and be great friends. I'm glad that Drayer went to Max and told him what was going on. Hopefully Max, King and men can save the 2 girls from Kivar.
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So... They are finally getting closer to one another 
It was inevitable, after all. Wasn't it? 
Now... let's see how long they can keep their hands off each other...
I respect this man of Kivar that told Max of what Kivar is up to. He's a very brave man, to go behind Kivar's back. And to do it for two human girls - that's very admirable. I hope that it'll lead to the safe return of those two girls (although they'll probably be traumatized for life for what they've lived through).
Great part!
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It was inevitable, after all. Wasn't it? Now... let's see how long they can keep their hands off each other...
I respect this man of Kivar that told Max of what Kivar is up to. He's a very brave man, to go behind Kivar's back. And to do it for two human girls - that's very admirable. I hope that it'll lead to the safe return of those two girls (although they'll probably be traumatized for life for what they've lived through).
Great part!
- Jo