I deleted it

I wrote it before your post and thought it didn't fit anymore
well, here it is again
ALEX
I finally escaped Tess and her ranting about me ruining her perfect plan. She ... well, Liz and Max added bits to the conversation too, well, Tess uh, talked (lets call it that) to me about my stupid behavior on the phone (who gave me the phone in the first place anyway?) for 15 minutes.
Liz - God bless her! - stopped the girl by pointing out that we should slowly get ready for the beach. I offered to drive us there and excused myself, saying that I had to check the car, whether it was clean or not.
Now, I'm hiding ... I mean, strategizing in Max's and my room, hoping to find a master plan to woe Isabel off her feet but having the feeling that I'll fail miserably.
At least I look good in my James Perse shirt. I better look good in it considering how much that thing costed! Fucking designers and their expensive clothes! My other purchases are normal-everyone-can-afford-them-clothes, nothing out of the ordinary but fine stuff if I can trust Liz and Tess. Have to admit that I'm starting to have doubts about the later's qualifications as a match maker though.
"You alright?" Max asks when we walk out of the room to the main area of the house. "You looked a bit pale by the time you left us earlier."
"Well, after what I went through with Tess outside" (okay, okay, it wasn't
that bad but leave me some self pity, would ya?), "this here feels like heaven." I say, opening my arms wide as if to hug the whole world.
"Good to know." Max chuckles and always runs into me when I suddenly stop, muttering, "And now we're back in hell."
Max looks confused and I just point to the couch where one smug looking Jake sits.
"Relax and everything will be okay. You have Tess, Liz and me on your side." Max says, looking over to where the two girls are talking. Michael and Kyle are nowhere to be seen. "I'll tell the girls that Jake's here so we can formulate a plan." With that, Max is gone, leaving me alone with Jake.
I really wonder if he'd still look that smug with a black eye or bruised cheek? Wow! This tv experience is bringing out the animal in me!
Heaving a sigh, I slowly walk in his direction, intending to be nice ... or at least social.
"Hey Jake!"
"Oh, hey ... Alex, isn't it?" he asks with a weird smile, as if he knows something I don't.
Hate him!
"Yeah, Alex. Why are you already here?" Okay, that was rather blunt.
"I'm waiting for Isabel. Is that a problem?" Wow, was there a challenging undertone in his voice?
I raise my hands in surrender, trying to not hit him. Wonder if he'd look that pretty with a black eye or bruised cheek.
"You coming to the beach too?" I ask, wondering what's worse: watching them together at the beach or thinking about where they are and what they are up to.
"Yes we are, got a problem with that?" he asks mockingly, looking all smug again.
Hm, are there poisionous scorpions in Miami that might poision him? Or maybe he drowns in the sea.
I'd like to know if serial killers think like that too!
Before I can reply though, the door opens and the girls walk in. Maria greeting us with a friendly "Hello" and rushign into her room while Isabel - surprise! - glares at me.
"Next time, you could come up with a better lie when you want to annoy me or at least try to think of a better lie if you are up to thinking, Whitman!"
The clothes don't seem to work - damn! but at least she didn't seem to notice Jake yet.
KYLE
"Nah, you seem to be doing a fine job on your own." Michael replies smugly, sitting on the counter and watching me work. What did he mean with that comment about Max and Tess? He can't know tha I like Tess, I mean, I'm not even sure if I like her.
"You think Tess and Max are serious and it wasn't just a lets-get-to-know-each-other date yesterday?" I ask, cool as cucumber of course while putting the last items away, grabbing a bottle of coke in the process.
"She seems to like Evans. I'm not so sure about him though." Michael replies casually, nipping on his beer. Beer! Come on, it's not even really evening and he's already drinking.
"Hm." I reply, thinking about his words and the way Tess and Evans are around each other.
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bre, you mean like every now and then something like a summary of people's opinions of the whole experience?
and you are sick? poor you! I hope you get better soon again!