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Hey everyone,

How are you all? I’m glad you all liked the last chapter, I guess that means that Liz made the right discission by saying yes.

You know originally I was going to make Liz say no to moving in with him and instead she would have brought some old crappy apartment and eventually she wouldn’t have enough money to rent the place and would end up living in the car she buys her self, then Max would have to help her out when things go wrong. But then I got to thinking. Poor ole Liz has been through enough already, I think its about time she got some happiness and how better to do that then moving in with Max Evans… anyone have a better way? I would really like to know it :D

I hope you all like the new chapter and tell me what you think! Thankyou to everyone how has been reading and everyone who is posting feedback, I’d also like to say a special thankyou to:



Cocogurl- Yeah I agree, who would every say no to such a pretty face? I’m glad you liked the last few chapters and I’m happy that you are all up to date :)

Behrsgurl*87- Awww you’re too sweet, I’m glad you like the way I write cause I am still a rookie, kind of :wink: I’m thrilled you liked the update and thankyou for your reply!

aussietrueblue- Yay! They are finally going to take it to the next level and move in together, :P about time ayy? Hmmm… I wonder if everything is going to be smooth sailing from here..?.. :wink: thanks for your feedback!

orphyfets- LoL, I’m so thrilled that you’re happy about Liz saying yes to moving in with Max in the last chapter.. I guess that means she said the right thing ayy? I’m glad you liked the new part, thanks for all your feedback!

roswell3053- Hi, I’m glad you liked the last chapter and thankyou for all your replies to this story, they are greatly appreciated! You will get to see Liz’s family’s reaction in the upcoming chapters so don’t miss out :)

veronica- Hey Vronka, LoL I know I love the puppy dog eyes too isn’t it cute? I’m glad you liked the chapter and I hope you will read on to see how them moving in together works out.

FrenchDreamer- I’m glad you thought the chapter was adorable! Have I ever told you how much I love your feedback? I agree no one could say no to Max, I mean it’s MAX! LoL, yeah she thought that aloud and just when you all thought that little habit of hers was disappearing it comes back again at the right moment :P thanks for your feedback, I love it!

martine- LoL you knew I wouldn’t disappoint you, I just couldn’t! I’m glad you like the chapter and I hope you will tell me what you think of this new one :)

Michelle17- I’m Back! LoL, thanks for your feedback I hope you will continue to read on :P

Dreamerlaure- Yay! I’m glad you enjoyed the last chapter and I hope you like this one just as much :D , I know how sweet are they?

nessy- Hey Ness, I’m glad you had a great time in Queensland you must tell me all about it later :) I’m glad you like the update and I updates as soon as I could!


I hope you will all read on to find out what will happen next between the new ‘roommates’.

Have a great day!

:P…cheka…:P












CHAPTER 34

LIZ P.O.V

It’s Monday, and I am currently on my way to clear out my locker.

That’s right…

I’m officially a student of the Roswell School of Writers.

“Hey chika” I hear Maria’s sad voice say from behind me and turn to see her looking at me pack with tears sliding down her cheeks.

“Hey, what’s wrong?” I ask as I walk up to her and wrap my arm around her in a side hug.

“I can’t believe your leaving me” she cries into my shoulder and I smile weakly.

“Hey, I’m still here… you can see me all the time” I reply, trying my best to cheer her up.

“But your not going to be here” she cries.

“You have Isabel” I state matter of factly.

“No, it’s not the same … plus what makes you think Isabel isn’t in the toilets crying her eyes out over you leaving?” she asks with a pout and I giggle.

“The fact that Isabel is over there with Alex” I state pointing over her shoulder to where Isabel is laughing at something Alex said.

“Well, it’s not the same for her” she says as she wipes her tears with her denim jacket.

“And why is that?”

“Because, she is like your sister in law now… and you two can see each other anytime you want” she states and I smile sadly at her, seeing where this is coming from.

“Hey, just because I’m with Max ….and Isabel is not my sister in law...” I start, but state firmly.

“Yet” Maria adds.

“Like I was saying… just because I’m with Max, it doesn’t make you any less of my friend” I say with a smile.

“You are going to come over and we are going to have a great time and I will call you like every day” I say with a reassuring smile.

“You promise?” she asks as she looks up at me.

“I promise”…

TBC…
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Hey everyone,

Yes I’m back with more! I know the last chapter was very short and, Where was Max? I mean you can’t have no Max in the chapter. So I’ve decided to post another part which is just a tad bit longer.

I’d like to say thankyou to:


aussietrueblue- Thankyou for your feedback I’m glad you liked the last chapter and yeah, I’m also happy that Liz and Maria work things out :P

orphyfets- Thanks for your reply Stefanie, I agree Maria is right about the sister-in-law bit, “yet” … but I’m sure they’ll still be great friend :)

FrenchDreamer- LoL yeah Maria is real bubbly, I’m sure that there will be a little change in Liz not being at the same school like before but I’m positive that Liz will not let their friendship go down hill. In the next few chapters you will see how Liz’s family takes the news… how do you think they’ll take it? Good or bad? :wink: Yeah I know Max wouldn’t let her go as far as to living in her car but what if Liz thought that she would be a hassle for Max and refused to move in with him thinking it was for the better? I’m thrilled you liked the chapter and thankyou for your feedback :D

martine- Hey martine, I know it was too short that’s why I’m back with more :), I’ll try to make the chapters longer or post more frequently. But you can look forward to the next chapter ( it’s a long one ) … I’m glad you liked the chapter and I’m sure Liz would never let her best friend down. Thankyou for your feedback :D


I always like to see what you think of the story and I’m glad that you are posting feedback, thankyou so much to everyone.

Have a nice day!

… cheka :P














CHAPTER 35

LIZ P.O.V

I am currently shaking …

Not because I’m cold but because I am scared.

It’s been two weeks since I left school and I have been attending the Roswell School of Writers for 1 and a half weeks now.

I am still living with my aunty and uncle.

You see that’s the reason why I’m shaking.

Max is on his way over here to pick me up.

I packed my bags last night and I left them under my bed which is in a small room near the fire escape.

I don’t believe I won’t be sleeping in that uncomfortable bed.

I’ll be sleeping with Max …

Now that’s something to look forward to.

DING-DONG

I hear the door bell and run to go and answer it.

“What do you think you are doing” I hear my auntie’s voice screech.

I walk back over to the wall and wait for her to open it.

She was my dad’s sister and they were really close, she took his death really bad and now treats me like a piece of shit.

All I ever wanted was to let them know how much I appreciated them.

But when I told them all I got was a ‘what do you want?”

‘Go away’

‘Where’s your pay check?’…

“Who the devil are you?” I hear my aunty ask as she opens the door to see Max standing there with a duffel bag.

“I’m looking for Liz” he states as he looks pass the door and sees me standing in the corner.

“Why would you be looking for Liz?” I hear Tess’s voice screech angrily.

“Because I’m her boyfriend”…

TBC…
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Hey everyone,

I’m glad you all liked the last chapter and I hope you all read this one to see what Tess’s reaction will be along with Liz’s uncle and aunt’s reaction. Will they take it good or will they take it bad?

I’d like to say thankyou to everyone who is reading and everyone who is leaving feedback :), your comments make my day, so thankyou to:



Cocogurl- LoL, no I doubt that Tess is going to like what she is about to see :wink: Yes Liz was hiding her bag underneath her bed because she was afraid of what they would say if they found out about her leaving and she preferred to have Max by her side. To protect of course, I’m glad you liked the chapter!

aussietrueblue- I’m back with more, Yay! I’m sure Tess is going to be taken by surprise, so read on to see what happens :D Thankyou for all of your feedback!

Behrsgurl*87- I’m glad you liked the chapter and thankyou for your reply :), I’m glad my story has got you on the edge of your seat cause know how much I love suspense!

orphyfets- LoL, your not the only one Stefanie, I hate Tess too and I wish Max could bitch slap her for what she’s put Liz through but we all know that Max is too nice for that, right? :P Thanks for your feedback I’m glad you liked the chapter!

veronica- LoL, today is going to be fun see you there! Yeah it really isn’t any of Tess’s business but we all know how Tess makes it her business to know everyone else’s business and I don’t thinks she will take this good since she liked Max. Thanks for your reply!

martine- I’m thrilled you liked the chapter even though it was another short one, this one is longer than the others. Thankyou for all your feedback, I love it!

roswell3053- I agree with you, I’m glad Liz is getting back on track and sorting everything out, lets hope that telling her aunty and uncle goes well so that it will have a happy ending. I’m glad you liked the chapter and I hope you will read on, thanks for your feedback :P

FrenchDreamer- Awww, are you just saying that your hanging to make me feel like I know how to put suspense into the chapter or are you really looking forward to seeing Tess’s reaction? :wink: Ok so your two options both great when it comes to Liz’s mean uncle and aunty but I think they’ll take option 3 … LoL read to see! :P Is anything including Tess ever pretty? sorry but I really hate her ugly guts, she’s mean and at the moment she’s green with envy. To answer your question Liz was forced by Tess to give her wedge to Tess so that she could spend it, but you’ll have to read on to see if her aunty or uncle knew about it :) glad you liked the chapter and thanks for the feedback!

L-J-L 76- Hey L, I’m glad your back and I’m so happy that you liked the chapter and I hope you will continue to read on as the story comes to an end and the sequel approaches :D!

nessy- I’m happy you liked the chapter and thanks for your replies see you soon and have a good day!


Thankyou for replying to the last chapter, I hope you will all read on as the story ends and the sequal approaches! the sequal is called “Teaching the wife” so keep an eye out for it.

Have a great day!

:P…cheka…:P














CHAPTER 36

LIZ P.O.V

“Who the devil are you?” I hear my aunty ask as she opens the door to see Max standing there with a duffel bag.

“I’m looking for Liz” he states as he looks pass the door and sees me standing in the corner.

“Why would you be looking for Liz?” I hear Tess’s voice screech angrily.

“Because I’m her boyfriend”…

“YOU’RE HER WHAT?” she screams as she looks at me with angry eyes.

“I’m her boyfriend” he repeats as he walks passed my aunty who still just stands and looks on in stunned shock.

“You ok?” he asks as he walks closer and I nod.

“I brought a bag” he says as he raises it and I smile.

“I already packed” I say as I look back into his eyes.

“Better that way” he says as I lead him to my bedroom with Tess hot on our heels.

“You can’t be her boyfriend, that’s illegal … You’re her teacher” Tess screams as we walk into the room that I have called my own and grab my bags.

“Where are you going?” My aunty asks in a soft voice.

I turn to look at her and smile slightly.

“I’m moving in with Max” I state confidently.

“Is it true… is he your teacher?” she asks while looking Max up and down.

“YES” Tess screams.

“YES ITS TRUE” she continues.

“He was” I state and she looks back to me confused.

“Was?”

“I dropped out” I state, not knowing if changing was really ‘dropping out’ or not.

“Dropped out?” she asks shocked.

“I’m attending Roswell School of Writers” I say with a smile as I look at Max who just sends me a reassuring smile and I continue.

“I want to be a writer” I state.

“How are you going to pay for all of this?” she asks confused.

“I’ve been saving money” I say in a soft voice as I bowl my head in shame.

“Why?” she asks in the same confused voice.

“Coz, Tess takes mine” I state as I feel tears sting my eyes.

I try to hold them back.

“She does?” my aunty says as she turns to her daughter.

“Yes”

“How could you?” she screams at Tess.

“She’s not your daughter… but you always told me how you wanted her to stay home, stay here for ever” Tess states as she looks at me in jealousy.

“So I took her money so that she had no where to go but here” she says in disgust as she looks at me then turns on her heels and stomps away.

“Liz, you don’t have to go” she says as she looks at me.

“I want to” I state as I join hands with Max.

“Aunty, all I ever wanted to do was make you happy … to make you know that I appreciate the way you took me in, I must admit I do hate this … this life …. The one I have when I am here” I state as the tears slid down my face freely now.

“But, I learnt to live with that over the years … I learnt that maybe I didn’t deserve to be loved by anyone” I state as I look to Max to see his eyes shimmering with the tears he is holding back.

“Then I met Max, and I know that it’s not true… he loves me … and I love him” I state as I look at him lovingly.


“Thankyou” I say as me and Max walk out the door hand in hand.

I look back once more to see her smile at me from where she stands.

“Bye Lizzie” she says.

TBC…
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Hey everyone,

I hope you all like the chapter and let me know what you think. Thankyou to everyone who is reading and everyone who is posting feedback! Your comments make my day :D

I’d like to say thankyou to:




Dreamerlaure- Hey, thankyou so much for your feedback! I am delighted that you liked the chapter and I agree with you it will be entertaining, heart-warming, and lovable LoL, but more entertaining I think :wink:


veronica- Hey Ronnie, Thursday was so fun thankyou! I’m glad you liking P.E. Tess is green with jealously but I think she might be too embarrassed to come back again. If I was Liz I would have shoved it in her face… just a little bit :devil:


roswell3053- Thankyou for your feedback and yes it is good that Liz’s aunty now knows what Tess was doing while Liz was living with them and I am glad that you liked their reaction to Max and Liz’s relationship!


Behrsgurl*87- Awww, thankyou :blush: … I’m glad you liked the chapter and yeah Liz is a cute character! Thankyou for your replies :)


L-J-L 76- Hey L, Thankyou for your feedback I’m so glad that your liking the story and that you are posting replies! To answer one of your question
L-J-L 76 wrote: Will Tess, Sean, Mr.Dean start trouble for Liz and Max?
Yes one of them will, but which one? Read on to find out!


orphyfets- LoL! hehehe, are you still willing to take care of her cause I will help you :wink: I’m glad you loved the chapter and I hope you will keep reading on!


Cocogurl- I’m glad Tess got hers too :D, I’m so happy you liked the chapter and thankyou for all of your replies!


aussietrueblue- I wish the Aunty knew that Tess was taking her money too maybe then Tess wouldn’t have been so spoiled or bitchy because they could have straightened her out, but she still got hers in the end :P I’m glad you liked the chapter and thankyou for all your feedback!

FrenchDreamer- Hiii! I’m thrilled you liked the chapter; Yeah Liz’s aunt was a bit confusing I guess. One moment she’s mean and the next she’s nice and yes she didn't know about Tess's behaviour. She must have been thinking that her child was perfect, but Tess? Perfect? Hmmm I’ll get back to you on that :wink: Thankyou for your feedback! P.S. I also hate someone that thinks they have all they wanted and never take no for an answer!


martine- Awww thankyou martine, I’m delighted that you liked the part! I think the sun will still shine for Max and Liz :), maybe Tess has finally realised that she stands no chance with Max, or maybe not?
martine wrote: I don't know if people like her exist but really I'm happy I never met them.
People like Tess do exist but I’ve only ever met a few and I’m happy about that! But maybe their behaviour is a cry out for help but in Tess’s case it’s just plan ole jealousy!

nessy- Hey ness, thankyou for your feedback I'm glad you liked the update and i hope you will read on!



I’m glad you all liked the last chapter and here is something to think about for the next few parts.
L-J-L 76 wrote:
Will Tess, Sean, Mr.Dean start trouble for Liz and Max?
Yes one of them will, so which one do you all think it’s going to be?


Tess:
* Little green monster
* The evil cousin who is dreadfully jealous of Liz.
* Believe that she and Max have a chance.
* Stole Liz’s money for years.
* Could be seeking revenge :devil:

Sean:
* Aggressive man, who does not take no for an answer!
* Angry with Liz for turning him down
* Angry with Max for being with Liz
* Could be try to get with Liz again
* Seeking revenge for embarrassing him :devil:

Mr Dean:
* Jackass
* Hates Max for being with Liz
* Likes Liz and wants to be with her
* Manhandles girls
* Has relationships with his students
* Tried to rape Liz :devil:


So who do you think it will be?

Have a great day!

cheka…:P













CHAPTER 37

LIZ P.O.V

We get back to Max’s house at 7.30 that night and it is starting to get dark outside.

I keep thinking back to the pain on my auntie’s face when I told her I was leaving, and how she looked at me as if she cared.

…Did she…???

I mean for all these years, I always thought I was a burden.

I always thought that having me around was only because she thought it was her responsibility and that she owed it to my father and my mother.

I never thought that she actually wanted me to be there and now after seeing the look in her eyes when I left its making me rethink all the thinks that I felt before.

Maybe I was loved before I met Max.

But I know that the love I feel for Max and the love he feels back for me is more than anyone could ever offer me.

I know that it’s true.

“You ok?” I hear Max’s sweet voice ask as he leads me to the door and unlocks it.

“Yeah, I’m fine” I say while sending him a reassuring smile.

“I’ll have to get you a set too” he says, referring to the house keys.

“Yeah” I say as I walk in before him and place my bag near the stair case.

I don’t believe this is my home.

I live with Max now.

How did I Liz Parker ever manage to get so lucky as to have someone like Max Evans as my boyfriend…

And someday, maybe even more than boyfriend.

But right now that’s not what is consuming all of my thoughts.

I continue to try and hold the tears in, but the image of the pain in my aunties eyes keeps flashing in my mind.

“Common sweetheart” he says as he wraps his arms around me.

“Talk to me” he begs and I look up at him and feel my eyes water.

“I’m a mistake” I say as he walks me over to the couch and sits me in his lap while holding me in his arms.

“What?” he says as he looks at me stunned.

“Sweetie what would make you think that?” he asks confused.

“I made her upset” I state as I continue to cry and shake.

“I hurt everyone around me, I don’t want to hurt you” I say as I try to stand up and get out of his hold but he only pulls me to him tighter.

He is the only good thing in my life and I don’t want to stuff things up for him too.

I would never dream of hurting Max.

Maybe the only way to do that is to save him now while there’s still some hope.

“You won’t hurt me” he says and I shake my head.

“I will” I state as I shake uncontrollably.

“Sweetie the only way you could hurt me” he states as he turns my face in his hands.

“Is if you leave me” he states and I look into his loving eyes and find comfort.

“I love you” he whispers into my hair and before I can reply and tell him how much I also love him he continues to talk.

“And seeing…seeing how you have lived in that small little closet that you called a bedroom… it killed me” he says and I look into his eyes.

That closet was my home until I met him and now I couldn’t manage to live any other way.

I need him with me.

as long as I know that I wont hurt him the same way I hurt others, but I make a promise to myself right now.

I will never hurt Max, I love him so much.

And that’s exactly what I tell him.

“I love you too, thankyou” …

TBC…
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Hey all,

How is everyone? That’s good! Sorry that it took me so long to post but I have been back at school for 2 days now and already its taking up most of my time :(, but don’t worry I will still post as often as I can :)

In the holidays I was really bored and I wrote around 5-6 new stories, my newest story is called ‘Elevator Love’ and it is coming out real soon, probably before the sequel to this story …which means very soon! So check out my Authors page to see all my new stories that will be out ‘Really Soon’.

I’d like to say a special thankyou to everyone who is reading and everyone who is posting feedback. I’m glad that you all liked the last chapter!

Thankyou to:



flyawayraven- Thankyou for you feedback and I am glad that you are liking the story so far. I hope you will read on :)

veronica- Hey Ronnie! I agree it was ages ago now but it still makes me want to pay her back big time :twisted: Hmmm, you have to choose one LoL, Dean? Tess? Or Sean?

aussietrueblue- Glad you liked the new part and thankyou for all your feedback to this story :D

orphyfets- LoL I know ayy Max is so cute when he is protective :wink: I’m glad you ‘Loved’ the part (blushing) and thankyou for all of your feedback!

Behrsgurl*87- Yay! I’m back with more :D I’m happy that you’re liking the story so far thankyou for all your replies!

L-J-L 76- hey L! I’m thrilled that you liked the part. I’m glad Max and Liz had that talk too if they didn’t it would have ate Liz up little by little, until she broke down and dumped Max cause of it. Thankyou for all your feedback, I love it :P

FrenchDreamer- Hii! Awww thankx I love my Max too, he is the perfect boyfriend who wouldn’t love him? I guess that comes with him being older and more mature :Hint!: :wink: (older guys) Hmmm I guess you will have to read on to find out, but if you had to pick one out of the three of them who would it be? Tess (LoL, hehe I second that)? Sean? Or Mr Dean? They are all evil meanies :twisted: so you can already guess that they have one intension. We will actually get to meet Max’s ex in the sequel which should be fun, right? You can start to ask yourself … good person or bad person? I’m glad you liked the chapter and thankyou for your feedback, U Rock!

martine- I agree with you 100% Liz should focus on the good things in life instead of getting stuck in her pass. I mean now she is has a new life, with a new future and the best part its with Max Evans :wink: who wouldn’t be happy? I’m glad you liked the part and thankyou for your replies!

roswell3053- Hey, thankx for your feedback for my story I’m happy that you are liking it so far :) I know what you mean, it is sad that Liz thought she wasn’t loved before she met Max... I’m positive that she was, just not in the same way that she is loved by Max. So you think it is Tess? LoL I agree I’m sure after she has a little chat to Isabel and Maria that she will change her mind and think twice before she goes to wreck Max and Liz’s perfect relationship. But like I keep saying it might be Tess or it might be one of the other two :P (P.S. I love keeping the question hanging, hehe)

nessy- Hey ness, thankyou for your feedback I’m thrilled that you are enjoying the story so far and I hope that you will read on… Once again Happy Birthday for Monday! :)

Cocogurl- Thankyou for your feedback, here is the next chapter :D I hope will continue to read on to see what will happen next (nail bitting action, LoL! Hooked yet?)


Your comments honestly make my day (seriously!)

I hope that you all like the new chapter and I hope you will read on to find out what will happen next between Max and Liz… and of course find out who will be the one that starts trouble for Max and Liz... :? Will it be: Tess? Sean? Or Dean?

Have a great day!

cheka… :P










CHAPTER 38


LIZ P.O.V

I wake up to the sun shining in my eyes and turn to my side.

I feel his strong arms wrapped around me and the slight move of his hard chest as he breathes in and out … in and out.

I snuggle further into his warmth, and sigh.

This bed is sooo comfortable… I don’t think I’ve ever slept so well.

“Morning sun shine” he says and I smile inwardly at the new name.

“I thought I was your sweetheart?” I say as I open my eyes slightly.

“You are” he states and I lean up on my elbow.

“Max, I think we need to have a little talk about nick names” I say, thinking that I might get to have a little fun watching him squirm.

“Ok” he states as he too, leans on his arm facing me.

“I’ll start” he says as he begins and I nod in reply.

“Sweetheart?”

“Maybe”

“Darling?”

“No”

“Pooh bear?”

“No”

“Sugar?”

“NOO”

“Baby?”

“No”

“Beautiful?”

“Mmmaybe”

“Princess?”

“Expand” I say as I look up at him to see him making a fake thinking face.

“My Beautiful princess?”

“Perfect” I state as I lean down and kiss him on the lips.

“My turn” I state excitedly as I look him head to toe.

“Now, am I naming you or am I naming you dic…” I start to say but he cuts me off.

“Me…” he states as he looks at me with a sly grin.

“First” he adds and I smile at the thought of what I would come up with for a name, for his ….’Manhood’.

“Darling?”

“No”

“Babe?”

“Maybe”

“Honey?”

“Maybe”

“Sir?”

“No”

“Mr Evans?”

“No”

“Teacher?”

“NOO”

“Maxy Boo?”

“NOO WAY”

“Lover?”

“Maybe”

“Baby?”

“You can do better than that” he states with a tempting smile.

“Sugar daddy?” I say with a smile.

“Let’s stick to honey” he states with a serious face as I feel his ‘member’ stir to life.

I giggle slightly…

“Ok, now can I name your dic…” I start to say but he once again cuts me off.

“Sweetheart, did I not teach you anything in sex ed?” he says and I smile.

“Hey that's Princess” I state firmly.

“Princess” he corrects and I smile contently.

“Can, I name you penis?” I say using ‘correct’ language.

“Yes, you may” he says with a sly grin and I feel like kissing it off his face.

“Dicky?” I start with a smile and I see the slight smirk of amusement on his face

“No”

“Boogie bear?” I say in a sweet baby voice.

“NO”

…hmmm, I liked that one …

“Small machine?” I state, trying to hold in my laugh.

“Small?” he asks as he looks at me in stunned shock…

“Lizzie please, do I honestly have to remind you how big my dic…?” he starts to say and I cut him off.

“Which school did you go to?” I say in shocked amusement.

“Proper language?” I add.

“Penis” he states rolling his eyes.

“Now just for that I think I will stay with Mr Boogie bear” I say as I start to get out of bed for a head start.

“How did you get bear?” he asks as he looks at me in question.

“I dunno, it’s kinda like a bear” I state as I look at the tent forming in his pants.

“How so?”

“It makes you growl… and it’s sharp” I add as I bite my lip seductively.

“NO” he says as he jumps up.

“Liz” he says, with a half serious expression.

I start to smile as he starts chasing me.

“Come back here” he screams as he chases me down the stair case.

“What, does Mr Boogie Bear wanna play?”…

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Hey everyone,

I would like to say thankyou to everyone who is reading this story and everyone who is posting feedback :) I’m glad you all liked the last chapter and I want to say a special thankyou to:





L-J-L 76: Hey L, I’m glad you really like my story that makes my day :) I know the pet names were cute, weren’t they? LoL did you really fall off your chair? If you did I’m glad that I’m funny and I couldn’t agree with you more Mr Boogie Bear is funny…to any other guy it might have been a major blow to their ego, Its good to see that Max can still wear the pants (and keep Mr Boogie Bear in them! … At times) Thankyou for your feedback.


veronica: Ronnie! I’m so happy that you liked the update, it brings a smile to my face (Me= :)) We’ll have to wait and see if you are right about Mr Dean being the bad person who returns but luckily you wont have to wait too long since it is in this chapter! :o What are you doing still reading this? Skip the note and go to the chapter!
veronica wrote:... thats so sweet thet they made up names for eachother! it makes you want to cry lol. i could come up with some names for max... and his "thing"! lucky liz... she gets a great guy like max... why cant i?? lol dun answer that..
LoL, Cry how? Yeah I could come up for a few names for Max and his (in your descriptive words :D) “thing”… Liz is very lucky to have someone like Max but I believe that there is someone out there for everyone and that one day if we are lucky enough we can have a Max of our own. Don’t worry your pretty little head off I wont answer it, just as long as you don’t answer why I can have someone like Max… Deal? (i.e. You better say cause he is married, if its anything else I’ll put on the puppy dog eyes :() hehe!


orphyfets: Hey Stefanie, Thankyou I am so glad that you liked the chapter and yeah, it was cute… they are cute and it would be a shame if that didn’t last because someone came inbetween them :x Those people make me mad, don’t they make you mad? LoL yeah naming his ‘ding’ was funny, I wrote it and I still laughed LoL, thankyou for your feedback!


aussietrueblue: Hey :), Aww that was cute wasn’t it? Aren’t they just the perfect couple? Don’t you worry I am back with more so now you can see more of the happy couple, because things are going to start to get dark very, very soon! LoL, thankyou for your replies to my story :D


Dreamerlaure: Awww, thankyou Lauren I’m glad you loved this part :) I just wanted to put a little fun into it before the mood changes, but I am still so happy that you loved the part, so thankyou for your feedback!


roswell3053: Awww thankyou for your reply I’m glad you found the chapter awesome and the story (you have no idea how happy that make me :D) The nickname were good weren’t they? LoL thankyou for your feedback its makes my day!


martine: LoL! hehehe, that’s the benefits of being a couple not only can you talk about nicknames for each other but each others ummm… “Special parts” I’m glad you found it funny :D and thankyou for your reply!


FrenchDreamer: Heyy! I’m thrilled you liked the chapter and found it funny and I agree 100% that sometimes boyfriends just go way over the top :Wink: yeah I guess the same goes for girls too… hehe!
FrenchDreamer wrote: But The Best Part in all that was when she proposed nicknames for his manhood , it's just hilarious to give it a silly name and then see the face of the guy who is always so proud of it !
LoL, Maybe stuff like that happens to guys because they boast too much… I’m sure we don’t mean to deflate their egos (wink wink!) Well you wont have to wait much longer to find out who will be the person that tries to come between Max and Liz, because it is in this chapter … Yay! No more confusing questions LoL … thankyou for your feedback ‘you rock!’


Cocogurl: LoL yeah that was hilarious I don’t know of a better way to put it than that (plan and simple :wink:) LoL, Mr Boogie Bear … hmmm I think its sounds like something I would have called my teddy when I was little :)
Cocogurl wrote: I'm still waiting for Tess or Sean, or Mr. Dean to show up and try to ruin this for us!
Well wait not longer! Someone has returned to screw things up for them (that’s not a good thing)…



I hope you all like the chapter and tell me what you think, also this story is coming to an end with only 9 chapters left (including this one) so I hope you will all read the sequel ‘Teaching The Wife’.

Now reading on…The Bad person is…???

Cheka…:P










CHAPTER 39


LIZ P.O.V

It’s been 3 and a half months since I moved in with Max and about 2 months that everyone has known that we are together.

We have now ‘secretly’ been dating for approximately…Ummm.

9 months… its seems like it has just flown by…

I am currently on my way to Roswell high…

Where I use to attend and my boyfriend works…

That sounds sooo good… BOYFRIEND…

As I walk down the familiar hall to his office I glace over my shoulder and stare at my old locker.

I knock on his office door and wait patiently.

“Come on in” I hear him call and smile at the sound of his sweet voice.

I open the door and step in, locking it behind me.

“Hey” I say as I bite my lip.

“Hey princess” he smiles as he gets up and makes his way over to me, wrapping me in his big, strong arms.

I snuggle deeper into his embrace, finding warmth in his arms.

“You alright?” he asks as I sigh.

“I am now” I state as I look up into his eyes.

“What’s wrong?” he asks in concern and I smile at the love shining in his eyes.

“I missed you” I state as I look up at him as a bright smile spreads across his face, and that makes me happy.

“I missed you too princess” he states as he looks down at me.

“So how was class?” he asks as he leads me over to his desk and I take a seat on the edge as he sits in his chair.

“Good” I say excitedly as I think of how well everything is going.

“That’s good” he says as he looks me in the eye.

“I love you” he states and it takes me by surprise.

That was random!

But, Ohh- so sweet.

“I love you too, bub” I reply.

“Good” he states with a smile.

I look down at my watch to see that it is getting late, even though it seems as if I have only been here 10 minuets I have really been here 30, including leaving the car walking to the room ….blah blah blah.

“I should get going” I state as I get up off of his desk and kiss him on the cheek softly.

“I have to go to Maria’s house” I add walking to the door.

“Yeah, where is Maria?” he states blankly.

“I had her class this morning and she was no where in sight” he adds and I smile.

“Faking a sicky” I reply as he wraps his arms around me for one last kiss.

“Bye baby” he says sadly as I leave.

“Bye”

I start to walk to my car, passing the staff office on my way.

“That brings back sweet memories” a deep voice says from behind me and I fear turning around.

“Doesn’t it Parker?” he adds as I hear his footsteps coming closer.

I feel like running straight down the hall and back into Max’s office, where I know I will find safety in his comforting arms.

I turn away as he steps into my view.

TBC….
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Hey everyone,

Happy Valentines Day!

Ok so I know that it is a really short chapter but I will update as soon as I can and I won’t leave you hanging too long. There are a few more short chapters but I am telling you in advance :) I will try my hardest to make the few chapters that are left longer but it won’t be too long till the sequel and the chapters a bit longer there.

In all my new stories the chapters are much ‘Much!’ longer so I hope you will read them all… Don’t forget to check out my newest story ‘Elevator Love’ which I posted on the 10th in the Au w/o aliens forum.

I’m glad you all liked the last chapter and I’m thrilled that you are all hanging on the edge of your seats to see who it is that has returned to make trouble…

I’d like to say thankyou to everyone who is reading and everyone who is posting feedback! Your comments make my day :P so thankyou to:



Dreamerlaure: LoL who do you think it is? hmmm … I don’t know maybe they need the attention or just cant help but try to get their asses kick by cute guys such as Max … (of course I’m not saying that Max is going to bash him, or is he?) Yeah, just when things looked like they were going good something/someone bad comes along :x Thankyou for your feedback!


*cad*: Awww thankyou (making me blush), well I’m back with more and I hope you will like it :D Who do you think it is? Yeah I know Max needs to save her and I’m sure he will try but will he get their on time is the question…
*cad* wrote:i can't wait for the sequel. Will you be starting any of the other stories soon or after this?
Yes I started a new story the other day called ‘Elevator Love’ I will be posting part 2 to it as soon as I can, I hope you will read it and hopefully enjoy it as much as you say you have enjoyed the others, LoL also when I start to post the sequel to this story I will be posting ‘Leave you hanging’ … meaning I will have three stories out at the same time, Yay! Thankyou for your reply.


orphyfets: Hey Stefanie, thankyou for your feedback and yes, I am back with more so I wont keep you waiting too long to see what will happen next and just who is back to start trouble… I also hope nothing too bad happens but I guess we will have to see what goes down in this chapter, maybe someone will save her or maybe not? :wink:


flyawayraven: Oh Ohhh LoL, your going to have to read on to see just who the ‘hell’ that is and what kind of trouble they are going to cause not only for Liz but for poor ole Max as well :( … I know they should just leave them alone so they can have a fairy tale ending!


veronica: Ronnie! Buddy! Hmmm, I don’t want to give it away so go and read the chapter!
veronica wrote:let me guess whose behind her ... is it Mr. Dean? has he come back to hurt liz and get in her pants... that over groan asshole...! i could kick him a couple of times!
LoL, Ronnie violence is not the solution to everything but on other hands yes! I could kick him a few times to (after all I am doing boxercise LoL:P) Thankyou for your feedback girl, have a great day!


Cocogurl: Hey thankyou for your feedback, I don’t want to give it away so you’ll have to read on to see what happens next. But I also hope Max gets there on time, do you think he will? :?


martine: Awww I know we all love a happy ending but its hard to have a happy ending if the problem isn’t resolved yet and the bad guy is still running around trying to cause problems… I hope to one day write a good story which will have a happy ending with a happy middle and beginning :D
martine wrote:Francesca, who is back? It's not who I'm thinking it is, isn't it? she won't be nearly raped again?


Read on! LoL, I wish I could tell you but I want it to be a surprise (even though it is really “really” obvious) … thankyou for your reply and I’m glad that your so hooked on the story :)


FrenchDreamer: LoL Aaaaaahhhhhhhh already impatient LoL! I can’t tell you, you’ll have to read on (it’s more fun this way :))You’re right its not Tess, I think she learnt her lesson already … so that would leave the two guys: Sean & Mr Dean? I think they both called her Parker but the part that gave it away was where she was:
francesca wrote:I start to walk to my car, passing the staff office on my way.

“That brings back sweet memories” a deep voice says from behind me and I fear turning around.

“Doesn’t it Parker?” he adds as I hear his footsteps coming closer.


The staff hall! Remember? Oh great I just gave it away :( sorry … So you thought it was Sean? Do you want to change your mind? No Max saying ‘I love you’ out of the blue had nothing to do with anything going wrong, he was just being his same ole sweet self (sigh :P) LoL thankyou for your feedback I’m thrilled you liked the chapter!


L-J-L 76: Hey L, I’m glad you have so many questions and I hope I can answer them all in the short time that this story has left… but if not I’m positive all the answers will be in the sequel :) Now to try and answer one of your questions without giving anything away:
L-J-L 76 wrote: Will Liz get hurt?


Yes, No … maybe! LoL sorry I just really don’t want to give this chapter away so read on to find out all of your answers. Thankyou for your feedback I’m glad you liked the chapter!


roswell3053: Thankyou I’m extremely happy you liked the update :)
roswell3053 wrote: Please don't let anything happen to Liz. I hope that Max will be her knight in shinning armour.


I hope so too… I’m sure Liz will be ok I mean after all there is a sequel LoL thankyou for your feedback!


aussietrueblue: Your right! He is back … but who? :wink: Which he is it your talking about? And if it’s the right he then congratulations your one of the few that took the hint of the staff hall :D LoL thankyou for your reply! You rock :P



I hope you all like this chapter and let me know what you think and I will be back really soon with the next part so you wont be waiting too long…

Have a great day!

cheka…:P







CHAPTER 40

LIZ P.O.V

“That brings back sweet memories” a deep voice says from behind me and I fear turning around.

“Doesn’t it Parker?” he adds as I hear his footsteps coming closer.

I shiver with fear … recalling that day.

Recalling that voice.

Recalling his hands.

I feel the bile rising in throat.

I feel like running straight down the hall and back into Max’s office, where I know I will find safety in his comforting arms.

His arms that kept me safe last time.

That comforted me last time, when I needed him to.

I turn away as he steps into my view.

“I wouldn’t know Mr Dean” I state as I try to avoid eye contact with the beast.

I know that if I look up into his piercing eyes, I will loose all sense of peace.

I will feel scared and alone… once again.

I can’t let him win.

I’m not the first person he has hurt this way.

There have been others.

But I sure hope that I’m the last.

I hope that no other girl in this world will have to go through the pain that Dean caused me.

“Ohh you know it does” he says as he reachers out to stroke my arm and I flinch.

His touch…

It feels so wrong.

So cold.

Not like Max’s.

Max’s are warm and heart felt and when he touches me once I pray that he will touch me again… defiantly not like Deans.

I pray that Dean wont touch me again.

“Please, leave me alone” I state as I close my eyes as I feel the tears start to build up.

Why do I feel so scared?

Why can’t I be strong?

“Why, Lizzy?” he asks, so sure of himself.

“Because, I don’t want your hands on me” I say angrily as I push his hands away forcefully.

I have to be strong!

“Why Liz?” he says in a raised voice and I want to scream.

“Because you don’t want your boyfriend to find out about us?” he asks and I open my eyes to see my hand colliding with his face.

I step back as I see him bend down with his hand to his face in pain as he hisses.

Maybe that wasn’t such a good idea.

“Now would be a good time to run Parker” he states as he grabs my arm and pulls me towards him controllably.

He grabs me around the neck and squeezes tightly.

I feel myself choking…

Everything starts to spin around …and around.

I try kicking and punching, but it doesn’t work.

My feet leave the floor.

I try to scream but my voice gets caught as I fall backwards.

My back then hitting the hard ground as I try to scream, while everything goes black.

“H-he-lp”…

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Hey everyone!

I’m back with a new part and I know it is another short one but there are only a few more chapters left to the sequel which will hopefully have longer parts :P … I’m glad you all liked the last update and I would like to say thankyou to everyone who is reading and everyone who is posting feedback! Your comments seriously make my day :)

Also I’d like to say a special thankyou to:



veronica: Hey Ronnie bonnie, I’m glad you liked the chapter it means lot. Yeah, yeah! I’m sure you did..n’t :wink: I hope Max comes to save the day too, but will he? Hmmm… you never know she could die, but then again there is a sequel and I’m not that mean! LoL thankyou for your feedback! P.S… Awww braces! LoL, how cute!


roswell3053: I’m glad you liked the update :) Hmmm, maybe Max will get there on time but do you think Max is the kind of guy to beat someone up? Yes or No? …or Maybe? LoL, I’m glad you liked the chapter and thankyou for your feedback.


aussietrueblue: YaY! I’m glad you figured it out and knew it was Mr Dean :) LoL, I know I’m mean but I’m sorry … (puppy dog eyes) forgive me? I didn’t leave you hanging that long, did I? Thanks for your replies!


Natalie36: Hmmm… Maybe he’s on his way, who knows? (me!) we cant really blame him though if he doesn’t show up, I mean how is he supposed to know what’s happening to his girlfriend if he is all the way in his office, working? Thankyou for your feedback :D


L-J-L 76: LoL, L I think we all hate Mr Dean … he is a woman beating coward and should pick on someone his own size, maybe Max (who do you think would win that?) …{Max!}… Of course! I hope this chapter will answer most of your questions but if not then the next few will :) I’m glad you like the chapter and I hope you will continue to read on, thankyou for your feedback!


flyawayraven: I’m back! I’m back! :P and I have a new update which I hope you will like, do you think Max will make it in time to save her or is it too late? Thankyou for your feedback!


Behrsgurl*87: I agree Liz should have screamed for Max, that would have been the smart thing to do… but what would Dean have done then? LoL, who wouldn’t want Max Evans to be their knight in shining amour? He could come save me anytime he wants :) … thankyou for your feedback!


martine: I wont make anything too bad happen … I mean I have to save some excitement for the sequel… and I agree with you 100% I cant stand to see a woman be trapped with a man like Dean either, I think jail will do him some good and I don’t see him getting a out of jail free card anytime soon! Thankyou for your feedback I’m glad you liked the part :)


Dreamerlaure: Hey Lauren I’m glad you were looking forward to this next post, so I just had to update :D I’m thrilled that you thought the update was ‘wonderful’ (in words [make me blushhh!] LoL) sorry I made you nervous, but its fun to keep all the suspense in :) Awww … blushing once again Thankyou! for your feedback.


Cocogurl: Gosh you got me scared there for a minuet … I thought I was a bad writer and cruel :( you know I just love the suspense :) but I am so glad that I read on to see that you love all my stories, which make me love all your feedback :D


orphyfets: Hey Stefanie, I’m glad you liked the update and I agree with you, I hope he doesn’t do anything too bad to Liz, hopefully Max will come to her rescue but you will have to read on to find out if he does :) thankyou for your feedback, it makes my day :D


FrenchDreamer: Awww, don’t get too upset :( I guess Dean isn’t in jail because Liz asked Max not to tell anyone after he found out what happen. Do you see Dean going to jail anytime soon? (Keep in mind there is a sequel) Yes I agree Dean is the only one out of the group of evil people :twisted: that would come back for more… Don’t you just hate when people won’t give up on trying to be bad?! Do you honestly believe someone will come to her rescue? And what if say, hmmm… Max did come but he was too late? (just trying to get you interested in the chapter :wink:) I hope you like the new part and thankyou for your feedback, I love it!


I hope you all like the new chapter and let me know what you think… I will be back as soon as I can with an update. One last thing, don’t forget to check out my new story ‘Elevator Love’ it is also posted in this forum.

Have a great day!

cheka…:P










CHAPTER 41

LIZ P.O.V

He grabs me around the neck and squeezes tightly.

I feel myself choking…

Everything starts to spin around …and around.

I try kicking and punching, but it doesn’t work.

I try to scream but my voice gets caught…

I want Max!

I need Max to come and save me, I need him to get Dean off of me… to get him far away from me.

only then will I feel safe.

“H-he-lp” I try to scream, though his hold on my neck is too tight and I can barely make a single sound.

I start to gasp for my last ounce of air when I feel his other hand start roaming over my body.

It feels bad…

It feels so wrong…

I need Max.

Max protects me.

Max is my safety.

“LIZ” I hear Max’s voice say faintly, but he seems so far away.

It sounds like his screaming, yet I hear it so faint.

“M-max” I chockily sigh…when the hand that was tightly griped to my neck disappears and I fall to the floor.

I try my hardest to breathe in and out, trying to get my breathing back to normal… but it’s too late.

It feels as though all my air supply has been blocked off, as if there is a plug stopping me from taking my next breath… which could very well be my last.

I can hardly keep my eyes open.

“Liz, oh god baby” I hear Max’s worried voice say as my eyes flutter shut.

“Mmmax” I sigh as I see the darkness coming closer.

I feel my throat slowly healing…

It still hurts and isn’t healed enough for me to say a word.

Even though my throat is feeling better I still feel as if I am slipping away.

I feel a throbbing pain at the back of my head and realised that I must have hit it while falling.

The darkness gets closer to me and all I can do is hope for the best.

It’s too late.

Max was too late.

“It’s ok” he says as he holds my hand in his much larger ones.

“You’re going to be fine” he states, while I open my eyes slightly to see the tears in his eyes.

Tears he is crying for me.

I love him so much.

I can’t go now, its not my time.

I need to spend more time with the man I love. The man that is standing in front of me, worried for my well being.

It’s not my time.

I try to talk but my breathe hitches in my throat and I feel the fear rising in my chest.

And that’s the last thing I think before the darkness evolves around me.

‘It’s not my time’

“Lizz?”

“Ohh God Nooo”

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Hey everyone!

I’m back with the new chapter, I’m glad you all liked the last update and I would like to say thankyou to everyone who is reading and everyone who is posting feedback! Your comments always make my day

So I would like to say a special thankyou to:




alizaleven: That’s ok! I’m glad that you are liking the story and that you liked the last update, thankyou for your feedback :)


L-J-L 76: Hey L! Im so glad that you really like this story :P I’m so happy that you have so many questions and what makes me even happier is that this chapter will answer all of them :D YaY, thankyou for your replies. ]



FrenchDreamer: Hello Eva, LOL! Hahaha that cracked me up:
FrenchDreamer wrote: Poor Liz , she really never has time to breath !
She really never does get time to breath, always worrying or getting chocked by psycho rapists. Alright I’ll tell you, its not that back… I’m only saying what you want me to say so you may have to read the chapter before you take my word on that :wink: Well actually you can make a sequel without Liz, it could be Max trying to find a way to move on with life after Liz- But I’m not that mean! I love Max and Liz together so if one of them dies I’m gonna chuck a Romeo and Juliet and kill them both :evil: LoL, I think all the bad guys think with what’s between their legs instead of their non-existent brain! I agree 550% those people who try to hurt others for their own pleasure are creeps and scare the crap outta me their so evil :x , I hope you like this new part and I think it is a bit longer than the last, thankyou for your feedback, I love it!


aussietrueblue: Awww I’m sorry … I just love those cliff hangers theres just so much suspence, it even leaves me on the edge of my seat :wink: Yay! I’m forgiven, I won’t do it again (Unless it happens and I have no control over it :)) Thankyou for your reply I’m thrilled you liked the update!


Natalie36: I’m back with more, so there is no need to worry  thankyou for your feedback!


roswell3053: I’m glad you liked the new part and you will have to read this next part to see if it is really the end for Max and Liz, but considering how nice I am (enter rolling eyes here) I think the couple could be fine … keyword could! I’m glad Max got Dean off of her too, but was he too late? Thankyou for your feedback!


orphyfets: LoL ‘grrr’ I’m sorry (puppy dog eyes) sorry for leaving it there but I’m back with more so you can find out what happens next :D thankyou for your feedback!


veronica: Hey Ronnie-poo! I’m glad you like the update but you will have to read on to find out if Liz dies or not. Stuff with Max? Hmmm, what are you thinking? Dean should go to jail, but will he? And yeah Max is soo cute and emotional! awwww… well thankyou for your feedback and have a great day!


Cocogurl: WoW! You sound so devastated and you don’t even know if Liz is dead or not :( I know it’s sad but do you really think I will let it end that way? I’m more dramatic then that, aren’t I? LoL I want Dean to get his ass kicked too, his such a low life :x


Michelle17: Thankyou for your feedback! you will have to read on to see if Liz dies or not and I hope you like the decision I made to that question :D



I hope you all like the new part and let me know what you think. Also I have two new stories out, yes you heard me right! I said 2! So don’t forget to check them out. ‘Elevator Love’ and my newest ‘Maxzan’ which is like Tarzan, they are both posted in this forum.

Have a great day!

cheka…








CHAPTER 42

LIZ P.O.V

I wake up to bright lights shining on the roof above me, and squint against their brightness.

I feel my head throbbing in pain, and feel as if my throat is all chalky.

I feel the fear building up inside off me as I look around the unfamiliar room.

I feel a soft hand holding mine and look to find thick dark hair leaning against the bed face down.

“Ma-ax” I whisper, trying to find my voice but failing.

I squeeze his hand tightly and I feel him squeeze back.

His head jumps up in realisation and his hands cup my small face.

“Ohh god Liz, you’re ok” he states and I smile weakly.

“Ye-eah” I stutter out faintly.

“Ohh honey” he says as he hugs me, but makes sure not to squeeze me too tight.

“Ma-ax” I say out of breathe.

“Yes sweetie?” he asks as he pulls back and looks deeply into my eyes.

“I-i lo-ve you” I say with tears in my eyes.

I want to tell him how much I love him.

I want him to know how much I need him.

After what Mr Dean did to me … I never want to be touched that way again.

I never want to feel as if I would be hurting Max.

I felt as if, even though I didn’t want what happened to happened… that it was my fault.

And the last thing I want is Max to think that I want anything to do with Mr Dean.

“I-i don’t want you to think that I …wanted” I start to explain as the tears continue to fall and my pain increases.

“Liz?” Max says interrupting.

“You think that I think that you wanted Mr Dean to do what he did?” Max asks, trying to find a way to make sense.

I can only nod, trying to save my cracking voice.

“I could never, ever, think that baby” he says as he slowly strokes my cheek.

“I love you, and I know that you love me too…and I know that you would never do something like that” he states.

“After what happened ….Mr Dean left” he says as he looks down at our sealed hands.

“He ran away?” I ask disappointedly, as I look down at my covered body.

… I hate hospitals.

“No, he left town” he says as brings my chin up so we make eye contact.

“After the ambulance got there I left in search for him and I found him… he was packing, I could have stopped him… you know break his bones anything for what he did to you…. but I didn’t” he states as he looks down shamefully.

“I let him leave town… I told him never to come back, and instead of being somewhere locked up he’s in some other state somewhere doing it to more girls” he says as he continues to look disappointed in him self.

I see the tears in his eyes that he is trying so desperately to hold back.

As disappointed as I am, It’s not his fault.

Max could hurt anyone.

“Ohh Max, it’s not your fault” I say as I hold on to him tightly.

“It’s not your fault either” …

TBC…
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CHAPTER 43






LIZ P.O.V

It’s been 3 months since the accident with Mr Dean, and no one has seen him since.

Everything has been going great.

Max and I are still living together and I have been attending Roswell School of Writers for about 7 months now.

That’s so cool …and you know why…???

I bet you don’t…

Damn… that right.

I got 5 months left, and then I’m at home all day sitting down all alone typing on my laptop hoping it won’t break down or break and wake up every morning waiting with anticipation to go on my computer…

… Funny it doesn’t sound like to much fun…

But it’s what I want to be …

And I will make the most of my time…

I feel Max stir in his sleep behind me and turn to see his eyes flutter open.

“Morning Hun” I say as I give him a quick peck on the lips.

“Morning angel” he replies as he wraps his arms around my waist and pulls me to him.

“What where you doing?” he asks as he closes his eyes slightly, while using my breast as a pillow.

“I was just looking at how cute you look when you’re sleeping” I state and watch as a small smile spreads across his face.

“You where?”

“Yeah” I state brushing back his long bangs.

“Listen sweetie” he says as he raises himself on an elbow and looks down at me lovingly.

“I got plans for tonight, so I expect you dressed and ready to go by 7” he says with a sweet grin.

“Where are we going?” I ask excitedly.

“It’s a se…” he starts to say but I cut him off.

“Let me guess…. it’s a secret” I say with a small pout.

And he smiles widely as he kisses my lips and climbs out of bed.

I continue to look at him in all his naked glory, while enjoying the view.

…No one really gets to see their ‘old’ P.E. teacher the way I see Max.

“What are you looking at?” he asks as he turns around and sees me string.

“You sexy” I say as I look at him as he grabs his light blue faded jeans and a white singlet and begins to walk into the bathroom.

“You ahh …. Wanna join me?” he asks with a cocky grin.

“You’re so cocky” I state as I look at him wink at me.

“You sure hope so” he says as he shrugs and turns to the bathroom throwing me one last questionait look.

“What the hell” I say as I run up and jump into his awaiting arms and attack his lips.

What a great morning…

TBC…
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