Roswell Fanatics

That's harsh. Would he prefer you to use stilted, unrealistic dialogue that sounds nothing like how real people speak?

I'm not sure what he wants. I could see why it would be an issue if I was using the contractions improperly, but I wasn't. It's just such a little nitpicky thing. Why did he even have to mention it?

Who ever it is that moves my car after I park it and go into the Mall,Walmart or Target! I swear that the thing gets moved because It's not where I think it is when I come out and I look like an idiot walking around going "Now where the hell did I park that damn thing?!"

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