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Re: Earning Trust (AU, M/L, Adult) Pt 28 9/8

Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2015 7:47 am
by begonia9508
Oh! I am so happy to be back! Had to call someone because I couldn't go online anymore! :?
But the good is, now I do have a lot to read, after 4 days without connection! :lol:

Even if Sean is in Liz's room, it won't be so easy for him to do what he wants: Liz isn't the little girl anymore and to do what he wants to, in a private home is going to cost him a few months of jail! :twisted:

EVE :wink: :twisted: :mrgreen:

Re: Earning Trust (AU, M/L, Adult) Pt 28 9/8

Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2015 11:13 am
by L-J-L 76
Great Chapter!!!! Please please please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon? I can't wait to read what will happen next for Max and Liz. Oh hell no Sean didn't. All I am going to say about Sean and Tess is Someone needs to put them in prison with Richard so that way they will rot in prison/hell forever and leave Max and Liz alone. Wow Liz seems to having a great birthday. I love what her friends got her for her birthday. I'm so glad that Liz let Max touch her while putting on her necklace. I like the kiss Liz gave Max that was really sweet. I think that is great that Kim and Brian are going on a date. I love the way Max asked Liz out. So it is going to be a double date with Max, Liz, Kyle and Serena that will be a good thing. When Liz goes in her room will she be able to fight off Sean? Will Liz scream for Serena, Alex and Sarah? Will Serena, Alex and Sarah come to help Liz? Will Liz be scared and stay away from people? Will Liz go into hiding? What is Tess going to do to Max? Will Max be able to fight Tess off? Will Isabel help Max? Will Diane be able to Max and Liz? Will Max be there for Liz? Will Liz let Max be there for her? Will Kimberly be there for Liz and Max? Will Jim and Kyle be there for Max and Liz? Will Sean and Tess go to prison? Will Sean and Tess stay in prison?

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L-J-L 76

Re: Earning Trust (AU, M/L, Adult) Pt 28 9/8

Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2015 2:41 pm
by keepsmiling7
I'm so happy Max and Liz will be going out on a date...........double date that is.
Max was so sweet with the gift of a necklace.
Cliff hanger........Sean in Liz's room.......someone do something quick!
Thanks,
Carolyn

Re: Earning Trust (AU, M/L, Adult) Pt 29 9/9

Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2015 4:18 am
by Roswelllostcause
Jo Liz has complete trust in Max that he won't hurt her. When he touch her collar bone she didn't flinch. But it doesn't mean she didn't feel something! :wink: Yes Sean is in her room.

Eve No Liz isn't a scared little girl any more. When he is caught it will be a lot more than a few months in prison!

L-J-L 76 Liz has been having a very nice birthday. Yes Sean has broken into Liz's room!

Carolyn Yes Liz agreed to a double date with Max. Yes Max was very sweet with the neckless. Don't worry someone will do something. :wink: Just not here!




Part 29

Liz hugged Max good bye as he left. She couldn't believe that this young man cared so much for her, in the short time they had known each other. What surprised her even more was that she was falling for him.

"So do you want to hang out tomorrow?" Asked Max
"Wish I could. But I have to finish my history paper."
"I could come over and help you."
"Uh I don't think so. I tend to get distracted a lot when you are around lately."
"Really why is that?"
"Well you are more intrasting to look at then my homework."
"Really?"
"Max, I really like you and you do make me feel things that I never thought possible after what happened."
"Liz, you should have never have had to go through that."
"I know. But it is over. I have found out that I have some really great people in my life."
"I hope you count me as one of them."
"You know I do."
"Good grief! Will you two stop flirting and kiss already!" Said Isabel

Liz blushed. Max just smiled. He pulled her close and lean down and gave her a soft kiss. Liz felt something she never felt before when she felt Max's soft warm lips on hers. It was a good feeling, warm and she knew that this had to be what it felt like when you were starting to fall in love. Max pulled away and smiled.

"Good night Liz."
"Night Max."

Liz shut the door and Max and Isabel headed for home. They were only half a block from Liz's when Tess came out of nowhere. She walked right up to Max a big smile on her face.

"Hi Max!" Said Tess
"Oh hi" mumbled Max
"So Max, I was hoping we can go out on Friday night." Said Tess
"Tess, that isn't going to happen. I don't want to go out with you."
"Come on I am a hell of a lot more fun than that Liz Parker."
"I happen to think Liz is a lot of fun to be around."
"Oh please she is nothing but a slut that was fucking her stepfather."

Max's married his eyes and grabbed Tess bringing her inches from his face.

"You better listen and listen good! Liz, is not a slut. What that bastard did to her was rape! If I so much as hear you say another bad word about Liz again you will pay are we clear?" Said Max
"Oh and Tess I wouldn't go calling someone a slut if I were you. I happen to know that you have screwed half the football team. I even heard about what happened at the end of the year party last year. What was five or six guys you were with that night?" Said Isabel
"You are nothing but a bitch Isabel." Said Tess
"Yeah, well I don't give a shit what a scanky, gribil like you thinks. Stay the hell away from my brother. Oh and if you spread any rumors about Liz. I will make sure everyone knows what a slut you really are." Said Isabel

Tess let out a scream and stormed off down the sidewalk. Max looked at his sister raising an eyebrow.

"Scanky girbil?" Asked Max
"Well a lot of girls at school think she is a girbil, and she does sleep around. So I just called it as I saw it."

Max gave his sister a smile. They were about to head home when a scream ripped through the night air. They looked at each other.

"LIZ!" They yelled and took off running back to her house.





TBC :twisted:

Re: Earning Trust (AU, M/L, Adult) Pt 29 9/9

Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2015 4:57 am
by L-J-L 76
Great Chapter!!!! Please please please please please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon? I can't wait to read what will happen next for Max and Liz. I'm glad that Max and Liz had their first kiss. And it seemed very sweet and tender. I love the way Max and Isabel handled Tess. That was so cool. Good Max and Isabel threaten Tess. I hope they will make Tess pay really soon. Oh no Liz is screaming. Max and Isabel better get back to Liz's house quickly before Liz gets hurt. Please please please please say that Sean and Tess will be going to jail really really soon? And Please please tell me Max and Isabel will keep their treats?


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L-J-L 76

Re: Earning Trust (AU, M/L, Adult) Pt 29 9/9

Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2015 5:35 am
by Natalie36
tess is such a bitch and I so happy they heard liz scream

Re: Earning Trust (AU, M/L, Adult) Pt 29 9/9

Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2015 7:14 am
by keepsmiling7
Tess just won't give up, will she?
Love the way Isabel put her in her place.
Now.....hurry back to help out Liz, don't like the sound of that scream.
Thanks,
Carolyn

Re: Earning Trust (AU, M/L, Adult) Pt 29 9/9

Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2015 10:25 am
by begonia9508
I can't believe Tess! It is even ridiculous how stupid this girl is!... :lol:

Someone should shows her-self in her mirror but I am not even so sure she will understand what she sees in it: You have to have some intelligence to recognize yourself! :lol: :lol:

EVE :mrgreen:

Re: Earning Trust (AU, M/L, Adult) Pt 29 9/9

Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2015 2:25 pm
by max and liz believer
*shakes head* Good try, Tess. But that really didn't go too well.

Max kissed Liz and she didn't freak out; that's beautiful and such a relief. She really, as you said, trusts him. Otherwise she wouldn't have reacted the way she did. Plus, it helps that she's falling in love with him as well of course.

Good thing that Liz managed to scream; drawing the attention. That was probably the only good thing Tess did - she made Isabel and Max stop in one spot for a while longer so that they hadn't walked too far off when Liz screamed. Otherwise they might not have heard her :?

- Jo

Re: Earning Trust (AU, M/L, Adult) Pt 30 9/10

Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2015 4:18 am
by Roswelllostcause
L-J-L 76 Yes Max and Liz shared their first kiss. That was good the way Max and Isabel told Tess off. So far there is no proof that Tess has committed a crime so her going to jail may not happen. Sean on the other hand......

Natalie36 Yes she is a bitch!

Carolyn No Tess won't give up. Long like the Ice Princess! :lol: They are hurrying!

Eve No one ever said that Tess was smart!

Jo No it didn't go well for Tess. No Liz didn't freak out when Max kissed her. Yes it is good that Liz was able to scream.




Part 30

Liz walked into her bedroom to get ready for bed. She closed the door and started to pull her sweater off. That was when she saw him standing in the corner. Her heart started to race as he walked closer to her.

"Well looks like we are finally alone Lizzie."
"Stay away from me Sean."
"Not going to happen. You still owe me."
"No!"
"Uncle Rich promised that I would get to fuck you. All you got to do is let me have my way with you and I will leave you alone. Well unless you turn out to be a good fuck. Then we will have to do it again."

He grabbed her and forced her down onto the bed. She struggled against him. But he was bigger and stronger than her. So she did the only thing that she could do. She let out an ear piercing scream.

"HELP!"

Sean got mad and slapped her. But that only made her scream again. Her bedroom door flew open at that moment and Sean was pulled off her. She felt someone wrap her into a hug as she watched with tears falling down her face as Max pinned Sean to the floor. She heard a sirens coming closer. She looked to see Serena's was holding her. A few minutes later the sheriff and a deputy came in.

"Sheriff that boy broke in and attacked Liz." Said Sarah pointing to the boy that Max had pinned.
"Miss Parker is that true?" Asked Valenti
"Yes sheriff. Sean has been coming after me for a while. He wants to rape me. He said my his Uncle Richard Carter promised him he could have sex with me." Said Liz
"Deputy Larson get him out of here. Book him on breaking and entering, trespassing assault and attempted rape." Said Valenti
"Gladly sheriff." Said Brian with a smile.

Liz watched as Brian dragged Sean off. Valenti then came over and sat in the desk chair near the bed.

"Liz can you me what happened?" Asked Valenti
"I came in here to get ready for bed after my friends left." Said Liz
"That's today is your birthday. Happy birthday." Said Valenti
"Thanks. Well anyway. I didn't see Sean at first. I had pulled off my sweater and that was when I saw him in the shadows by the corner. The next thing I know is he is telling me that he was going to take what his uncle promised him. That I owed him. He grabbed me, I tried to fight him but he was too strong. That was when I screamed for help. He hit me and I screamed again. The next thing I know he is pulled from me and Max was on top of him pinning him to the floor." Said Liz
"Thanks Liz." Said Valenti

Sheriff looked at Max who had a black eye forming.

"Mr. Evans. Want to tell me how you ended up here?"
"Well sheriff. My sister and I had just left and walking home. We only live a couple blocks away. But we were stopped by Tess Harding who can't get it through her head that I have no interest in going out with her. We were just a few houses away and heard a scream. We came running back knowing that it was Liz. I pounded on the front door. When it opened I ran through the house and right here. I saw Sean fighting with Liz and I just couldn't let him hurt her. So I pulled him off and held him until you showed up." Said Max
"Now my son said something happened a couple weeks ago at school."
"Yeah, Liz was at her locker and Sean came up behind her and grabbed her. He seemed to be trying to get her to go with him. So I helped her out. Liz is my friend." Said Max
"OK I think I got enough. Mr. Evans I will give you and byour sister a ride home." Said Valenti
"Sure. Liz are you going to be ok?" Asked Max
"Yeah. Thank you for helping me Max." Said Liz
"Are you sure?"
"Yes Max. Yeah I may have a few bruises from him grabbing and hitting me but that is all he did thanks to you. If I need to I can call my therapist before my Monday appointment."
"Ok."

Max hugged Liz and he left with Isabel and the sheriff.




TBC