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Re: A New Home (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 26 7/3

Posted: Fri Jul 03, 2015 2:42 pm
by keepsmiling7
I know Liz will pass that test, but it will be so nice when she and Max are bonded.
It isn't safe as long as Kivar and Nicholas are around.

Re: A New Home (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 26 7/3

Posted: Fri Jul 03, 2015 2:45 pm
by max and liz believer
begonia9508 wrote:Khivar and Nicolas; the same types, and we do know what to do to them...

EVE :twisted:
I'm with Eve on this one…

So happy that the wedding between Max and Liz is coming up shortly. It will only be safer for them if they can bond as quickly as possible, considering what is happening around them with Khivar and Nicholas.

- Jo

Re: A New Home (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 26 7/3

Posted: Fri Jul 03, 2015 8:07 pm
by saori_1902
Great part!

Re: A New Home (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 27 7/4

Posted: Sat Jul 04, 2015 5:49 am
by Roswelllostcause
Eve Yes Kivar and Nicholas are very much a like. I think that you might like this part. :wink:

L-J-L 76 Oh I would say that Kivar's days are numbered!

Carolyn Liz will be much safer once she bonds with Max.

max and liz believer Things will be much better for Max and Liz once they bond. But I don't think you will have to worry about Kivar much longer.



Part 27

Liz walked into the garden and felt strong arms wrap around her waist. She leaned back and looked up into Max's eyes.

"I know when your test will be." Said Max
"Yeah?"
"Liz, there is something you should know. Right after you pass the test we will have the bonding part of our marriage. Basically the legal part."
"When will this be?"
"In a week."
"A week?"
"Yes."
"Wow. That is so fast."
"Yeah."
"So uh what happens during this test?"
"All I know about it is you will be taken into the granalith chamber. It will just be you and the priestess. Other than that I don't know."
"I guess I will just have to wait and find out."
"Yeah."

Liz turned to face Max and and gave him a kiss.

******

The group of soldiers moved silently threw the house. They had to be careful not to be caught. If they were they would all be dead. They were on a planet that they had no right to be on. As they moved threw the shadows closer to the master suite they could hear loud grunts and muffled cries. They burst threw the door to find their target on top of a young girl. Two of the soldiers moved quickly and pulled him from her the leader of the group gave the order and four blasters were aimed and fired at the target. His screams were only heard for a moment before he fell silent forever. All that remained of the target was a pile of dust. The leader of the soldiers, picked a blanket off the floor covering the girl then releasing the chains holding her to the bed. She pulled the blanket tight and stared at him.

"None of my men or I will harm you. My name is Michael, we were sent by the King of Antar to deal with Kivar."
"What will happen to me?" Asked the girl.
"I will take you for medical care then it will be determined what becomes of you. What is your name?"
"Christina."
"OK Christina, do you have any clothes you can put on?"
"No. He wouldn't let me have any."

Michael ran his hand through his hair. Not knowing what to do. Then he watched as one of his men took off his jacket then his uniform shirt, before removing his T-shirt and pulled it off handing it to Michael.

"Sir give this to her and my jacket."

Michael smiled and took the shirt and jacket. Then he handed them over to the girl.

"Thank you Lt. Zane." Said Michael

Michael and the soldiers turned so that Christina could dress. Then they led her out to their waiting ship to head back to Antar.

********

Jenny was finishing putting some of Liz's clothes away when Liz's walked in.

"I am almost done. Did you need something Miss Liz?" Asked Jenny
"No. Take your time, and Jenny and didn't I tell you that when we are alone you don't have to be so formal."
"Sorry."
"It's ok. I have noticed that you and Zane have been spending a lot of your off time together."
"I'm sorry is that not a loud?"
"It's fine. You can spend your off time any way you want."
"Thank you."
"Jenny, do you like Zane?"

Liz watched as the young woman's face turned pink and a smile spread across her face.

"Yes. He is so sweet and kind to me. He knows what that monster did to me and still likes me."
"Zane, is a good man."
"Yeah he is. By the way I haven't seen him since early yesterday."
"He had to go on a mission with Michael."
"What kind of a mission?"
"I don't know."
"He will come back safe right?"
"I have every faith that he will. He really cares about you."
"Really?"
"Yes. Jenny it's OK if you are falling in love with him."
"I don't even know what love is. I was an orphan."
"Let give you some advice follow your heart. If it is telling you that what you feel is right then listen to. Your heart will never lead you a stray."
"OK. I have some things I need to take care of."
"Ok see you later Jenny."

Liz watched the young woman go and knew she was fighting her feelings for the personal guard. Liz knew very well what Zane was doing. But wasn't going to get the hopes of either Jenny or Kat up that the monster from their nightmares will be gone from their lives forever.




TBC

Re: A New Home (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 27 7/4

Posted: Sat Jul 04, 2015 10:45 am
by keepsmiling7
I'm glad the bonding will occur soon. The sooner the better.
So cute....Zane and Jenny.
Good luck to Michael and the troops going after Kivar.

Re: A New Home (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 27 7/4

Posted: Sat Jul 04, 2015 11:50 am
by L-J-L 76
Great Chapter!!!! Please please please please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon? I can't wait to read what will happen next for Max, Liz and friends. I'm so glad the test is very soon. Hopefully Liz will past the test. I'm glad the Michael and the soldiers save the girl. I like how Lt Zane gave his shirt and jacket to the girl. I think that is sweet of him. I like how Liz and Jenny could easily talk. I hope Jenny will take Liz's advice. I have only one question who did Michael and the soldiers kill?

From:
L-J-L 76

Re: A New Home (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 27 7/4

Posted: Sat Jul 04, 2015 1:42 pm
by Natalie36
great part and the got the bastard

Re: A New Home (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 27 7/4

Posted: Sat Jul 04, 2015 1:49 pm
by begonia9508
Happy news! Love the way things are going for the poor girls, who suffered through Khivar!!! :twisted:

Thanks EVE :mrgreen:

Re: A New Home (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 27 7/4

Posted: Sat Jul 04, 2015 3:06 pm
by max and liz believer
That was Kivar they killed? Or Nicholas? Whoever it was, he had it coming.

So excited for Max and Liz :D

- Jo

Re: A New Home (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 28 7/5

Posted: Sun Jul 05, 2015 5:37 am
by Roswelllostcause
Carolyn It won't be long before Max and Liz have their bonding. Zane and Jenny take a big step in their relationship in this part.

L-J-L 76 Zane is a very kind man. Who was killed is confirmed iin this part.

Natalie36 Thanks! Yes they did!

Eve Yes things are getting better for Kivar's victims.

max and liz believer You find out here who is now dust!


Part 28

Michael paced outside the exam room the girl was taken into once they arrived back at the medical center in the capital city of Antar.

"Sir maybe you should sit down." Said Zane
"Zane, why don't you go back to the palace and see that girl of yours?"
"What do you mean sir?"
"Damn it Zane! You would have to be blind not to see how Jenny looks at you. She may not admit it but she is falling in love with you!"
"No she isn't she will never love me like that."
"Look Zane, I am not a deep or romantic kind of guy. But even I see it. I saw it from the first day she arrived at the palace."
"You really think that she loves me?"
"Yeah. Now get out of here."
"Yes sir!"

Zane left and Michael turned when he saw Kara come out of the room.

"How is she Doc?"
"Christina is in bad shape."
"Kara, what did that bastard do to her?"
"Michael, if by chance she does fall in love and marries she will never have a child."
"He had her made stariel?"
"Yes. You found him on Draygon?"
"Yeah."
"The way they do that there is very brutal. Once the girl's virginity has been taken, normally after they had been given a drug that keeps them in an arosed state for hours, they insert a probe into the feminal area that releases an acid. Now the girl is awake during this without any pain killers. Now this is done three times completely destroying the reproduction system."
"That is so evil!"
"Michael, most of these girls never fully heal from the acid. Two days after the last treatment they are given back to their master. Sex is then very painful for them. I saw only one other girl who had been through this. She had runaway. She got an infection and died. I was still in training at the time."
"Does this girl have an infection?"
"The start of one. But you got her to me in time."
"Keep me updated on her. I got to go report back to the King."
"So Kivar is really dead?"
"Yeah."
"Good. Tell Aunt Diane and Uncle Philip, I will be by for a visit soon."
"I will big sister. Love you."
"Love you too baby brother. Maria still keeping you on your toes?"
"Yeah, but Rena does know how to pick them. I love her."
"Good. So has our future queen come around?"
"Well, the night before I left I did see her with her tong down our cousin's throat."
"That is too much information."
"See ya soon."

Michael gave Kara a hug and left.

******

Jenny walked in the garden as the sun started to set. She and Zane met nearly everyday at this time. She hadn't been ready to admit it to anyone not even herself that he had fallen in love with the very good looking and kind guard. The thing was she knew he loved her. She was just about to head in when she saw a pink rose come from behind her. She turned to see Zane smiling at her.

"You're back!" Yelled Jenny wrapping her arms around him.
"Yes sweetheart I am." Said Zane holding her tight and lifting her from her feet. Not that it was hard being nearly a foot taller than her.
"I was scared when I didn't see you, this morning."
"I am so sorry. But I couldn't tell you about this mission. I didn't want to get your hopes up if it didn't go as planned."
"Liz, said you went on a mission but wouldn't say more."
"I will tell you now. We found where Kivar was hidding."
"So he has been arrested?"
"No honey. He is dead. We had orders to kill him."
"He can never hurt me or anyone else again?"
"No honey he can't."

Jenny leaned in and kissed Zane. He was surprised at first but soon returned it with all the passion he had.

"Zane can we go somewhere more private?"
"Jen, you know that I would love to take you somewhere to be alone. But I don't know if that is a good idea."
"Why?"
"I love you and I don't know if I can control myself if we were somewhere private."
"Zane, I love you. I am ready to give myself to you fully."
"Are you sure? Jen, if we do what I think you are saying. It can't be just sex for me."
"I don't to have sex. I want us to make love. I know what that means to your people."

Zane smiled and led her to his room.


TBC