A New Home (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 50 Complete 7/27

[L-J-L 76]

Great Chapter!!!! Please please please please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon. I think it is funny the way Michael and Maria are arguing with each other. I'm glad that Max and Liz and taking things slow and getting to know each other better. So Jenny and Kira are getting better. That is so great. So the girls are going to be Liz's maids. Maybe the girls will talk to Liz and maybe Liz can help them and be there for them. I'm glad Max and Serena are getting along great and are playful with each other. Oh wow I can't believe Serena turned his hair pink. I wonder if Max is going to be able to catch up to Serena.

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L-J-L 76

[begonia9508]

A King with pink hair... something certainly new to Antar and they are going to like it!

EVE

[Roswelllostcause]

Carolyn Oh yes that is something only a little sister would do. I wouldn't worry too much about Max hurting his little sister.

max and liz believer That was a good moment.

L-J-L 76 Max would never really hurt his sister.

Eve Prince Max isn't going to let anyone find out what his sister did to him.




Part 23

Liz and Serena walked into the medical complex and down the hall to the room the girls were in. Zane followed keeping a look out for trouble. Liz walked in the room and gave the two girls a smile.

"Hi Jenny, Kat. This is Serena. She is my friend." Said Liz
"We are both aware of who you are Princess." Said Jenny not meeting either Liz or Serena's eyes.
"Then you should know that if it's just me, and Liz and a few others who we will tell you about later, you can cut the princess crap. I am very informal." Said Serena
"What is going to happen to us?" Asked Kat
"You are going to come to the palace. You will be given jobs as personal maids to Liz. Mainly you will help Liz get ready for formal events and keep her room clean. If she gets sick or hurt you would help care for her." Said Serena
"Don't worry either of you. It won't be a hard job." Said Liz

Jenny looked at Liz and knew that she was being honest with them.

"OK. No one will hurt us?" Asked Jenny
"No one will hurt you. Jenny, I know that trust is going to take time." Said Liz
"No one expects either of you to trust right away." Said Serena

Neither girl said anything. Kara came in with the discharge forms for the girls. Liz signed them as she was the one taking responsibility for them. They headed out to the transport. Liz noticed both girls flinch at the sight of Zane.

"Jenny, Kat this is Lieutenant Zane. He is my personal guard. He will not harm you." Said Liz
"Miss Elizabeth speaks the truth. My parents have welcomed four human children into their home. Three girls and one boy. They are my sisters and my brother. As I will not stand for them to be harmed by anyone I will not stand for either of you to be harmed." Said Zane

When they reached the transport Zane held the door open door for the ladies. As she entered the transport Jenny's hand brushed Zane's. She felt a slight shock go through her. Not a scary one but one of warmth. One that told her that this man wasn't going to harm her. That he really cared what happened to her.

*****

Nicholas watched as the Royal transport left the medical complex with the young princess, the human would be bride of the prince and Kivar's whores. He knew that Kivar was on the watch list. That if Kivar stepped foot on Antar again he would be arrested. But Nicholas would still go through with his plan. Kivar was obsessed with Princess Isabel. But Nicholas had plans to ride the younger one. He was going to screw Serena until she broke. But for now he needed to find a whore to ride hard.

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Jenny looked around the room that she and Kat had been given. They had been offered their own rooms. But neither felt ready to be separated. The beds were both soft and very comfortable. Kat was sitting on the window seat that over looked the garden. In the closest were the uniforms they would wear when they were working. The dresser was filled with other clothes for when they weren't working.

"Jenny, the gardens look so beautiful!" Said Kat
"Yeah I noticed."
"You aren't happy are you?"
"Kat, nothing really has changed in our lives. The only difference is we aren't going to be forced to have sex."
"We aren't prisoners. We can leave this room when we want to."
"But we are still at the beck and call of someone else."
"We have real jobs. We will be paid for any work we do."
"So? Kat you don't get it. Liz was brought here to become a Princess, then Queen. You and I were brought here in secret to be nothing but his whores! The only reason that has changed is someone ratted him out. Now we are servants!"
"Damn it Jenny we can't change what that monster did to us. The fact is that if we were still on earth there is a good chance our lives wouldn't have turned out any different. We might even be dead by now!"

Jenny turned away from Kat and walked out of the room.




TBC

[Natalie36]

love max and serena. i hope the girls get better

[max and liz believer]

It's no wonder that Jenny is cynical. Her life has been a living hell the last couple of years. I'm glad to see that Kat still has some hope and optimism.

And maybe there's another romance in the future… between the protector and the maid

Both Kivar and Nicolas are horrible horrible creatures

- Jo

[begonia9508]

Yeah! I guess if I had the lives the two girls had, arriving on Antar and being used as prostitutes, being a servant wouldn't help a lot!

EVE

[L-J-L 76]

Great Chapter!!!! Please please please please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon? I can't wait to read what will happen next for Max and Liz. I'm glad Liz and Serena took Jenny and Kat to the palace. Hope Jenny and Kat will get along with Liz, Serena and the others. Oh cool Jenny and Zane felt a spark between them. I can't wait to find out how things will go for them. Hopefully Jenny will see being at the palace is better then living with Kivar. Someone needs to get Nicholas before he goes after Serena. I really hate Kivar and Nicholas. I hope someone will catch them and kill Kivar and Nicholas. Where is Jenny going? Who will she meet?

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L-J-L 76

[keepsmiling7]

It will take a long time for Kat and Jenny to fully trust everyone.
They will realize one day how lucky they are to be with Liz when she becomes the Queen.

[Roswelllostcause]

Natalie 36 Max and Serena have a very good relationship.

max and liz believer It is going to take time for Jenny to see things are going to be different. It is very possible that a romance could develope between Zane and Jenny. It will take time though.

Eve The girls are just going to need time.

L-J-L 76 oh yes there is something between Zane and Jenny.

Carolyn Yes it will take time or both girls to trust.




Part 24 One year later

Liz laid on the beach of the lake. Max laid on top of her kissing her neck. She let out a soft moan as he moved down closer to her breasts. He pushed her hair back and moved back up to her lips. Liz reached up and stopped him.

"Max, stop."
"What's wrong Liz?"
"We can't do this."
"I know."

Max rolled off her and laid next to her.

"Liz, you know that I love you." Said Max
"Yes, and I love you."
"Liz, I want to ask my dad for permission for us to marry before you turn sixteen."
"I don't know."
"Liz, I know you are scared. But the truth is, it is becoming harder not to make love to you."
"Max, I know. I still don't understand why we have to wait until we marry."
"It is an old law. The bride of the crowned prince/king must be a virgin on her wedding day. Normally it hasn't been much of an issue. That is because they didn't meet until the day of the wedding or just days before."
"So the fact we have spent time together is not normal?"
"Yeah. Liz, you will first go before the preistest of the granalith. She will determine if you are pure in both body and heart."
"How is that done?"
"She will look into your eyes and search through your mind. You won't be able to hide anything from her. If you try she will determine you unworthy and we will never marry. She could also ask that you be sent away."
"Then I guess I will just have to be an open book to her."
"Yes you will."

Max gave Liz a kiss and they gathered their things and headed back to the palace.

*******

Kivar sat at the video screen and waited for Nicholas to come on.

"Nicholas, what is going on at the palace?"
"Well Isabel has married that human. Not that I was there. Michael, and Serena will marry next year. Though there is a rumor that Max will get permission to marry that human bitch of his before she turns sixteen."
"Damn! I want to break that bitch before that boy has a chance to bond with her."
"What do you want me to do?"
"Keep an eye on things."
"Oh I should tell you your sluts have been given jobs in the palace."
"That is good. That means I have a chance to get them back and finish what I started with them."

Kivar cut the feed and removed his clothes. He climbed into bed and on top of the slut he had been working on breaking for nearly a year. He knew she was almost ready for him to start charging for others to fuck. She was no longer putting up any kind of fight. He already knew there was no way this slut could get pregnant. Draygon was not in the Antarian Empire. They had humans brought just for sex. The only thing the females were good for as far as Kivar was concerned. But on Draygon once they had lost their virginity they were made unable to bare a child, and it was permanent. Their reproductive organs were destroyed with acid injected into them. Yeah the sex was was then painful for most of them, but it didn't matter. They didn't have to enjoy the sex. Once he finished with her he sent he away. He fell to sleep dreaming of the day he would fuck Max's human bitch.

******

Liz watched from her balcony as Jenny walked through the garden. She looked so sad. But she knew that she couldn't force the young woman to open up. She turned when she heard the heavy footsteps of someone in boots. She smiled when she saw Zane.

"The King wishes to speak with you." Said Zane
"I head there in a minute. May I ask you something Zane?"
"Of course my lady."
"Do you want a relationship with Jenny?"
"Am I that easy to read?"
"Well you do get this look in your eyes when you see her."
"I think she is one of the most beautiful women I have ever seen. But I think she is afraid of me."
"She has been really hurt. It will take her time to trust anyone."
"I know."
"Well I shouldn't keep the King waiting."

Liz gave Zane a smile and headed for the King's office.




TBC

[max and liz believer]

Oh no… Kivar has his eyes set on Liz…

But I'm glad to see that things have evolved between Max and Liz, and that they seem to have fallen in love

Now - if we could just get rid of Kivar and Nicolas, huh?

- Jo