Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2004 2:15 am
First I would like ot thank everyone for your awesome feedback it means the world to me.
Kittens To answer your question about Fate I meant it by the fact that Liz just happened to move into the same apartment that Max had to pick up he painting from without even knowing it.
Caelan Yes I love Evanesence I actually got their CD last year after The movie Dare Devil came out! I's really good and I am glad you enjoy it.
Ok now where were we aw yes Max and Liz had just finished dinner lets see what happends..
Enjoy!
Love,
Erin Roswell 10/2/00
*****
Chapter Eleven
"This is a picture of my mom and Dad on their wedding day" Liz said as her and Max flipped through her old photo ablums. "Wow they look so happy" Max said as he looked at the picture.
"I never was one of those girls who dreamed of their wedding since they were little.I don't care about the flowers or dress. I just want my wedding to be a joyious day with all of my close family and friends there and to have a great party and good time." Liz said smiling as she looked at the picture.
"I always pictured mine like that as well with my clostest friends and family. Just everyone haveing a great time and shareing in my special day." Max said smiling as Liz close the ablum.
"Yeah I just want to havefun and dance the night away" She said as she placed the ablum back on the shelf. "Do you still dance?" Max said looking up at her.
"I haven't danced in years. I think the last time was High school." Liz said remembering her distanc memories of dancing ballet as a member of the West Roswell high danced company. "Why?" Liz said glancing up at him.
"Oh I just remembered that you danced in High school. You always used to talk about it with Maria in science lab about your performances." Max said looking at her.
"Yes they were good times." Liz said smiling remembering how she loved it.
"Could you dance for me? I never got to see you dance." Max said softly looking up at Liz with innocent eyes. Liz smiled. "Sure but you are going to have to help me move the couch so I can have room." She said glowing as Max helped her move the couch out of the way.
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Liz stood barefoot still wearing her red dress as Max sat cross legged on the floor. "It's been a while so don't you dare laugh" she said smirking as she pushed play on the CD player.
The song Milk by Garbage filled the room as Liz stood in the middle of the floor waiting for her count before she begain.
I am milk
I am red hot kitchen
And I am cool
Cool as the deep blue ocean
her hands fluttered out in frount of her while her legs begain to come alive to a dance they had know for years as Liz started to move across the floor letting the music take hold of her.
I am lost
So I am cruel
But I'd be love and sweetness
If I had you
I'm waiting
I'm waiting for you
I'm waiting
I'm waiting for you
She spun and twirled as Maz stood in wonder of the creature in frount of him as a power far greateter then her own poured out in every movement.
I am weak
But I am strong
I can use my tears to
Bring you home
I'm waiting
I'm waiting for you
I'm waiting
I'm waiting for you
I'm waiting
I'm waiting for you
she jumped and spirrled to the floor as she cretped closer to max before she sprang up and spun around fluttering across the floor as her movements became more demanding.
I am milk
I am red hot kitchen
I am cool
Cool as the deep blue ocean
She then extended her hand towards letting him take hold of her as the two of them danced in rhythm to the music as if they had know this dance for years.
I'm waiting
I'm waiting for you
I'm waiting
I'm waiting for you
They moved across the floor their eyes locked on each other as they moved deeper and deeper into their own world.
I'm waiting
I'm waiting for you
I'm aching
I'm aching for you
Max then spun Liz around as she fell into his chest and looked up at him as the last cords of the music faded away.
"Liz I can't take it anymore. I want you. I never felt like this before. I want you so much it hurts." Max whispered softy as he held her close.
"Max I have always been a logical person but with you I feel like all my logic is gone and it scares me. Part of me is saying no whileanother part is saying yes. I am so confused." She sighed looking into his eyes.
"Liz I would never ask you to do something unless you didn't want to. You know that I would never pressure you." Max said as he cupped Liz's cheeck with his hand as he brused a piece of stray hair from her face as she nodded.
"Forget logic for a minute and think about what your heart wants you to do." He whispered as he looked into her eyes.
Liz took a deep breath for years she had always wanted to wait she always felt like she would feel guilty if she didn't. She was saveing herself for the one and wanted her first time to be special even if it wasn't on her wedding day. "Liz" Max whisperd as he looked into her eyes searching for answers.
Liz looked up into those amber eyes and her heart melted this ghost from her past she never felt so alive and vurnable all at the same time. Yet she trusted him after all these years.
"Max I...I can't please don't be mad at me. It's just that it's my first time and I always wanted to wait. But my heart is saying yes and I always follow my heart so yes." Liz said as she kissed him hard as he held her close.
"Liz are you sure?" Max said softly. "Max I have never been more sure about anything in my life." Liz sighed as Max smiled as he took hold her her hand and lead her into her bed room.
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Candels burned bright as white roses filled the room. "Max what is this?" Liz said in shock as she took in the beautiful sight around her.
"Surprise I did this while you were getting ready right before we left." Max said softly as he lead Liz onto the bed and sat down. "You did this for me no one has ever done anything like this for me before thank you" Liz said softly as tears filled her eyes as she smiled. Max smiled and took hold of Liz's hand.
"This is my first time as well. Are you nervious?" Max said looking Liz in the eye as she glowed in the candel light. "I know I am so post to be but I am just going to leave it in your hands" Liz said looking up into his eyes as she squeezed his hand.
The then started kissing passonatly as a spark ran through them making them feel even more connected as they tumbled onto the bed holding on to each other tight as they ever so slowly started to take off their cloths as the candels flickerd in the night.
Kittens To answer your question about Fate I meant it by the fact that Liz just happened to move into the same apartment that Max had to pick up he painting from without even knowing it.
Caelan Yes I love Evanesence I actually got their CD last year after The movie Dare Devil came out! I's really good and I am glad you enjoy it.
Ok now where were we aw yes Max and Liz had just finished dinner lets see what happends..
Enjoy!
Love,
Erin Roswell 10/2/00
*****
Chapter Eleven
"This is a picture of my mom and Dad on their wedding day" Liz said as her and Max flipped through her old photo ablums. "Wow they look so happy" Max said as he looked at the picture.
"I never was one of those girls who dreamed of their wedding since they were little.I don't care about the flowers or dress. I just want my wedding to be a joyious day with all of my close family and friends there and to have a great party and good time." Liz said smiling as she looked at the picture.
"I always pictured mine like that as well with my clostest friends and family. Just everyone haveing a great time and shareing in my special day." Max said smiling as Liz close the ablum.
"Yeah I just want to havefun and dance the night away" She said as she placed the ablum back on the shelf. "Do you still dance?" Max said looking up at her.
"I haven't danced in years. I think the last time was High school." Liz said remembering her distanc memories of dancing ballet as a member of the West Roswell high danced company. "Why?" Liz said glancing up at him.
"Oh I just remembered that you danced in High school. You always used to talk about it with Maria in science lab about your performances." Max said looking at her.
"Yes they were good times." Liz said smiling remembering how she loved it.
"Could you dance for me? I never got to see you dance." Max said softly looking up at Liz with innocent eyes. Liz smiled. "Sure but you are going to have to help me move the couch so I can have room." She said glowing as Max helped her move the couch out of the way.
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Liz stood barefoot still wearing her red dress as Max sat cross legged on the floor. "It's been a while so don't you dare laugh" she said smirking as she pushed play on the CD player.
The song Milk by Garbage filled the room as Liz stood in the middle of the floor waiting for her count before she begain.
I am milk
I am red hot kitchen
And I am cool
Cool as the deep blue ocean
her hands fluttered out in frount of her while her legs begain to come alive to a dance they had know for years as Liz started to move across the floor letting the music take hold of her.
I am lost
So I am cruel
But I'd be love and sweetness
If I had you
I'm waiting
I'm waiting for you
I'm waiting
I'm waiting for you
She spun and twirled as Maz stood in wonder of the creature in frount of him as a power far greateter then her own poured out in every movement.
I am weak
But I am strong
I can use my tears to
Bring you home
I'm waiting
I'm waiting for you
I'm waiting
I'm waiting for you
I'm waiting
I'm waiting for you
she jumped and spirrled to the floor as she cretped closer to max before she sprang up and spun around fluttering across the floor as her movements became more demanding.
I am milk
I am red hot kitchen
I am cool
Cool as the deep blue ocean
She then extended her hand towards letting him take hold of her as the two of them danced in rhythm to the music as if they had know this dance for years.
I'm waiting
I'm waiting for you
I'm waiting
I'm waiting for you
They moved across the floor their eyes locked on each other as they moved deeper and deeper into their own world.
I'm waiting
I'm waiting for you
I'm aching
I'm aching for you
Max then spun Liz around as she fell into his chest and looked up at him as the last cords of the music faded away.
"Liz I can't take it anymore. I want you. I never felt like this before. I want you so much it hurts." Max whispered softy as he held her close.
"Max I have always been a logical person but with you I feel like all my logic is gone and it scares me. Part of me is saying no whileanother part is saying yes. I am so confused." She sighed looking into his eyes.
"Liz I would never ask you to do something unless you didn't want to. You know that I would never pressure you." Max said as he cupped Liz's cheeck with his hand as he brused a piece of stray hair from her face as she nodded.
"Forget logic for a minute and think about what your heart wants you to do." He whispered as he looked into her eyes.
Liz took a deep breath for years she had always wanted to wait she always felt like she would feel guilty if she didn't. She was saveing herself for the one and wanted her first time to be special even if it wasn't on her wedding day. "Liz" Max whisperd as he looked into her eyes searching for answers.
Liz looked up into those amber eyes and her heart melted this ghost from her past she never felt so alive and vurnable all at the same time. Yet she trusted him after all these years.
"Max I...I can't please don't be mad at me. It's just that it's my first time and I always wanted to wait. But my heart is saying yes and I always follow my heart so yes." Liz said as she kissed him hard as he held her close.
"Liz are you sure?" Max said softly. "Max I have never been more sure about anything in my life." Liz sighed as Max smiled as he took hold her her hand and lead her into her bed room.
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Candels burned bright as white roses filled the room. "Max what is this?" Liz said in shock as she took in the beautiful sight around her.
"Surprise I did this while you were getting ready right before we left." Max said softly as he lead Liz onto the bed and sat down. "You did this for me no one has ever done anything like this for me before thank you" Liz said softly as tears filled her eyes as she smiled. Max smiled and took hold of Liz's hand.
"This is my first time as well. Are you nervious?" Max said looking Liz in the eye as she glowed in the candel light. "I know I am so post to be but I am just going to leave it in your hands" Liz said looking up into his eyes as she squeezed his hand.
The then started kissing passonatly as a spark ran through them making them feel even more connected as they tumbled onto the bed holding on to each other tight as they ever so slowly started to take off their cloths as the candels flickerd in the night.