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#13.

Annabel sat in her living room with the television on but not really watching it.

Uncle Max has taken her to the hospital after Sunday school. There still wasn’t any good news about her mummy. Booboo was still on the ventilator. Miss Parker had mentioned that if she didn’t feel up to it she didn’t have to go to school tomorrow, but if at any time she wanted to talk to feel free to ring her. She Annabel her house telephone number when Uncle Max had gone to get some snacks for themselves.

She pulled out the slightly crumbled piece of paper.

She remembered the way Miss Parker had lingered around to say goodbye to her and Uncle Max. Miss Parker was such a nice person. Maybe? Just maybe… No she couldn’t… she gave a little giggle… this would so cheer her up… a project…

Uncle Max had just currently gone to the shower.

Annabel picked up the phone and rang the number.

‘Hello!’

Annabel wasn’t sure at first.

‘Hello? Hello! Annabel is that you?’
Annabel nodded knowing Miss Parker couldn’t hear her.

‘Annabel?’ whispered Miss Parker.

“Uh huh… Hi…”

‘Annabel are you okay did you want to talk to me?’

“Uh huh. Cud you um… cud you… come round my…?”

There was a silence at the other end of the phone.

“Miss Parker?”

‘Annabel I’ll be right round! I’ve got you address in your file. I’ll be right here for you!’

Annabel smiled with delight as Miss Parker put the phone down.

She put the phone down as she shoved the piece of paper in her pocket as Uncle Max came in with a t-shirt and jogging bottoms He had a towel in one hand rubbing at his wet hair.

“Hey sweetie was you talking to someone?”

Annabel shook her head.

“No just talking to the TV…”

“Are you hungry yet?”

Annabel nodded.

“Can I have something now?”

Uncle Max smiled. “Come on lets head to the kitchen”

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#14.

Uncle Max cleaned up the last bit of the kitchen. Annabel had fallen asleep two hours ago which was early than her normal bedtime. So he ended up putting her to bed.

He put his feet up and switched on the CD player as he thought about the woman who played on his mind a lot today. Miss Elizabeth Parker. Wow she was stunning. He definitely wanted to get to know her better. But how to go about it?

He looked toward the covered the window it was pouring down with rain. He sighed as he closed his eyes to rest them. Liz Parker plagued his thoughts and fantasies again. He wanted her with a desire that shook him to the core. But how could he risk it? She was Annabel’s teacher for god sake. What if they didn’t work out? What if…

The doorbell suddenly rang.

Max stumbled up and looked at the clock on the mantle piece.

The doorbell rang again.

He flung the door open.

‘Liz!’

‘Max!’

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Annabel grinned as she heard the doorbell. Miss Parker was late but she was finally here. She giggled. Time for her bed! She closed her eyes and dreamed of mummy and daddy and Booboo.

***

Max was shocked to see her standing on the door step. More shocked that she was shivering soaking wet. But wet she was and never had he seen a better sight in all his life. Damn she looked good wet. But she looked like she was about to collapse. He shook the dirty thoughts from his head and pulled her in.

“Liz Damn it what are you doing here. You’re soaking wet!”

Max pulled her into the kitchen. She stood there shivering as her teeth clattered together. Max got some towels and a t-shirt.

He started pulling off her soaking wet coat. He threw it to the floor and started undoing her tiny buttons of her cardigan; he dropped that to the floor as well. He reached with nervous fingers for the bottom of her small vest and proceeded to pulled it upwards. Liz stumbled backward with a little cry.

“Liz you’re soaking wet! I won’t hurt you

“Liz your lips are ice cold. Come you need to get out of those wet cold.”

Liz bit her cold lips as Max stepped closer to her. He yanked of her top and unzipped her skirt.

He tried to not stare. She was stunning even if she was turning a bit pale. He shook his head as he proceeded to pat and scrub her body down with the wet towel. He dried her off the best he could without hurting her.

He then pulled the T-shirt he had grabbed from the laundry and yanked it over her head. Liz sighed as the warmth enveloped her. Max reached under her knees and lifted her up effortlessly into his arms. She sighed even more snuggled her head into his neck.

‘Max…’

Max walked into the living room and used his foot to move the fire guard. He sat down on the snug rug in front of the fire with Liz in his lap. He watched as she drifted in and out of conciseness. He hoped he wouldn’t need to take her to hospital. That’s the last thing he wanted; but at the same time Liz needed to be warmed up. He couldn’t risk her going to a bath or shower without her collapsing. And so this was the only alternative.

He reached out and brushed the fringe from her forehead.

She moaned a little.

Max frowned, he cupped her face.

“Elizabeth Parker what do you do to me?”






TBC? next chapter miss parker wakes up in Max evan's arms LOL interested? lol lemme know xxx

begonia9508 wrote:What did she do? walk the long way to Annabel's home?... never heard of an umbrella? EVE

JUST had to mention this LOL ^^ made me laugh...

Hunter wrote:Just a friendly bump
Please come back soon

LOL friendly BUMP??? just for you HUNTHUNT ^^

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#15.

Liz woke up disorientated with a splitting headache and an aching body.

She looked in front of her and realised she was in a living room; in front of a fire. She groaned as she tried to sit up but realised she couldn’t as she was trapped under a blanket.

She rolled her body over to find her eyes widening in shock. There lay Max Evans asleep next to her. She gasped as she then remembered where she was. She was at Annabel’s parents’ house.

Oh my god Max had undressed her. He had stripped her down to her underwear… OH MY GOD HE HAD SEEN HER UNDERWEAR, she couldn’t help but squeal silently in embarrassment.

She blushed furiously as she looked under her t-shirt to see what bra set she had on. She blushed and giggled at the same time in relief. In a way she was glad she hadn’t got a normal white bra set or something overly sexy like a red lace corset, but at the same time she had on a royal blue silk push-up Wonder-bra set with high cut briefs. Thank god she didn’t have a thong on. Now that would have taken some explaining, which could have been an embarrassing situation to explain.

As much as she wanted to go speak to Annabel, at the same time all she just wanted to do was get out of there without having to wake Max Evans up.

She twisted a little to try push him away, but sleeping Max Evans grumbled and rolled over onto her as his arm and hand slipped to her waist.

Liz gasped; as she felt his hot breath against her neck and gasped even more as the sleeping Max Evans pressed himself into her.

Oh my god…

“Max…” she whispered.

He didn’t move or wake up.

She nudged him a little in the shoulder.

“Max…”

She nudged him again.

“Max… please…”

Liz whole body flushed with hotness as Max grounded his growing arousal into her lower body even more. She gasped as she herself grew… oh god she blushed furiously as she become wet between the legs. How was that possible?

She blew a raspberry as she tried to calm herself down.

Max was rock hard against her softness…

“MAX PLEASE!” Liz shouted as she shoved him.

Max rolled over; startled awake by a shove.

He realised what had happened in shock as he grabbed a cushion to cover his arousal that tented his jogging bottoms.

“OH FUCK I’M SO SORRY LIZ! FORGIVE ME! SHIT!” as he pressed the cushion downwards harder.

Liz looked so embarrassed. He knew himself that his ears and cheeks were going red. Damn. She looked so upset. Shit had he completely wrecked his chance.

He didn’t mean to but he had been dreaming and fantasying about her, about what he would do to Miss Parker in her classroom or office. I mean her being a teacher and all; he couldn’t help but picture her in her usual environment.

“I need to go to the loo…” blushed Liz, as she stumbled to get up.

“Liz!”

Max grabbed her hand.

“Liz please we need to talk…”

Liz heart pounded.

“I need to go…”

Max nodded.

“Toilet is upstairs to the left.”

Liz blushed and nodded and scarpered out the room.







TBC? OR STOP? LOL ^^

Tamashii wrote:Hi, I think you are mean, you made that chapter soooooo short and you left it there, just to make us suffer!! Please come back soon and tell us what happens next

aww im so sorry when i wrote it i didn't realise it was so short and i wanted to leave a cliffhanger. please forgive me. here's two chapters to make up for it.

destinyc wrote:Come on, we need a bit more than that, don't you think? Poor Max only has the couch cushion for love, now Hurry back, Destiny

LOL ^^ there's nothing wrong with a little cushion luving ^^

Hunter wrote:Ping! You so mean!! How could you leave it like that huh!!
Omg! They were just getting started as well...
You better come back with more!
I love this story so much!

sorry no nookie just yet i know i'm mean

begonia9508 wrote:That was so mean to let Max in such a situation.... even more with red ears which are going to look like two flags! (I just like JB ears! ) EVE

yep i love them as well. ^^

Natalie36 wrote:oh she should of held it in so you could get the talk in

i don't thinks she really needed the loo, do you?

KatnotKath wrote:Anabelle is quite a character and you're quite a writer. I was supposed to be writing myself, instead I found this and haven't I enjoyed it so far . Thanks for sharing, looking forward to seeing more.
Kat

aww thank you sweetie

THANK YOU FOR THE REST OF THE FEEDBACK AS WELL ^^

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#16.

Annabel woke up when she heard the toilet flushing; she climbed out of bed and peeked out of the door. Miss Parker was just coming out the bathroom.

“Psss…” Annabel whispered.

Liz jumped out of her skin.

“Annabel what are u still doing up?”

Annabel shrugged her shoulders and widened the door to let Miss Parker slipped in.

Annabel climbed back into bed whilst Miss Parker tucked her in. Annabel snuggled against her teddy bear and her blanket whilst watching Miss Parker settle down at the end of her bed.

“Annie you shouldn’t be awake…”

“U said u speak ta me!” pouted Annabel.

“Isn’t tat why you here?” Annabel replied with a raise of an eyebrow.

“I know hunny but its way past your bed time.” Whispered Liz, as she picked off the imaginary fluff off the t-shirt she was wearing.

Annabel looked at Miss Parker closer and more curiously.

“Miss Parker why’s ur hair wet? And why r your cheeks red? You lookie a bit pale! ACTUALLY WHY ARE U WEARING UNCLE MAX’S FAVOUR’TE T-SHIRT?”

Miss parker gasped. Why is it kids never miss a thing?

Annabel pouted.

“Watsa matter?”

“Nothing sweetie. Yes I did say I was coming over to talk to you, but my car broke down and it was raining heavily…”

“So why didya not wait in ur car?”

Miss Parker blushed.

“I locked my keys inside the car… I had to wait till my mechanic friend arrived!”

“Didn’t u have no unbrella?”

Miss Parker blushed again.

“No I didn’t… it was in the car…”

“Which woz also lock’d inside?” finished Annabel for her.

Miss parker actually smiled.

“Yes Annabel. That what happened! Now you better go to sleep before your Uncle Max comes up her and tells us both off.”

“Uncle Max wouldn’t tell u off!”

Miss Parker blushed.

“He might… anyway goodnight sweetheart.”

Annabel watched as Miss Parker stood up to leave.

“But u nevr did say why u wearin’ Uncle Max’s fav t-shirt?”

Miss Parker blushed.

“Um… you know the rain... Now night nite sweetie!”

Miss Parker watched as Annabel closed her eyes and then stumbled out the room. She closed the door willing her beating heart to stop pounding.

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Annabel opened her eyes and pouted as Miss Parker closed the door. WHY? WHY? Why is it adult never answered questions straightly? She shook her head in confusion.

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Liz panicked.

What should she do? Should she go back down stairs or go hide in the bathroom? She couldn’t leave; Kyle had dropped her off and it was still pouring down with rain. She sat down on the stairs and rested her head on her knees to stop the pounding of her head.

Max gulped as he watched Liz sitting on the step.

“Liz…”

She looked up with wounded eyes.

“I’m so sorry are you okay?”

Liz shook her head.

“Do you want to come down stairs?”

Liz shook her head.

“Do you want to leave? Do you to drive home?”

Liz shook her head again.

“What do you want Liz?”

Liz shrugged her shoulders.

Max tilted her head toward him.

“What do you want Liz?”

Liz pursed her lips together as a tear slipped down her face.

“Liz…”

Liz sighed; it was so hard to say no to him. He was so gentle with Annabel, she vaguely remembered him trying to look after her. What was wrong with her? Why couldn’t she just fall in love? Why couldn’t she just let go of her inhabitations? Why couldn’t she just…

“Liz…”

Liz nodded as Max caressed her cheek. He held out her hand and led her back downstairs.

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#17.

After closing the door, Max sat Liz down onto the couch next to him and pulled the blanket over her and himself.

Liz scooted away pulling at the blanket towards her.

“What? Can’t you trust yourself?”

Max grinned.

“Max! Don’t laugh at me!” cried Liz.

Max sighed.

“I’m sorry sweetheart… I was only teasing you…”

Liz went back to picking the fluff over the blanket. Max gripped her hand to steady it.

“You don’t have to be nervous of me you know!”

“Max why did you give me your favourite t-shirt?”

Max frowned.

“I didn’t even realise!”

“Well Annabel said it was! So is it?”

Max yanked at the blanket and pouted.

“Well its one that I wear often, so I suppose you could call it my favourite… Actually it looks good on you. Better than it ever did on me.”

Liz looked blankly at him.

“Liz it was a compliment. I was teasing you…”

Liz scooted further with a frown.

“You’re flirting with me!”

“Liz talk to me. We have to talk about this; we have to talk about what happening with us. We have to talk what happened before…”

Liz shook her head in denial.

Max looked closely at her with curiosity.

“You don’t like the attention do you? You hide behind this persona of being a teacher. Where’s the real Miss Parker? What happened to you?”

Liz stumbled out of the seat.

“Nothing happened to me!” she cried.

“Liz this is me. Max Evans! You think I may not know you Liz. But I know you! I’ve seen you without your cover, your shell. I’ve seen you at your most vulnerable, but I’ve also seen your caring, sweet nature. But I also know there’s more to you and I want to learn more. I want to get to know you!”

“It’s all words! You just want me to sleep with me!” whispered Liz.

“Do you really think so little of me?” cried Max.

Liz shook her head. She knew Max wasn’t that type of Man.

“No… I know you’re not like that!”

Max pulled her into his lap.

“Talk to me sweetheart.”

“When I was in high school I thought this guy wanted to really date me, I thought he wanted to take me to prom but it was all a dare.”

“So you haven’t gone on a date since then?”

“I did the once when I was at uni, but he was a bastard as well! He tried to force himself on me…”

“DID HE HURT YOU LIZ?” Max was angry.

Liz shook her head.

“His friend actually stopped him…Kyle he became my friend!”

Max pulled her into a fierce hug.

“I would never hurt you Liz!”

Liz melted into his arms.

“You should make promises you can’t keep!”

“Well I’ll be damned I’ll be keeping this one! Liz Parker I want you to come out on a date with me!”





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#18.

It was an hour before the day finishes, Annabel never did come to school today. Liz sighed as she tried to rub away the headache, she was so tired.

Someone pulled on her sleeve. Liz looked down as Shari pulled on her sleeve again whilst Callum stood there with his face scrunched up.

“Yes Shari, Callum how can I help you?”

Callum rolled his eyes.

“Shari wanted to know why you are unhappy.”

Liz looked up as she heard giggling come from Stephy and Nina another one of her pupils.

They was whispering and looking up at her and then giggling.

Liz shook her head in slight exasperation and amusement; she was tempted to roll her eyes as well. Everyone else was being quiet and getting down to work. Why was it her favourite table of pupils playing up?

They were still giggling.

“Stephy Nina please come up to the table.”

They immediately stopped giggling and walked up to the table. Liz could see that Stephy was trying hard not to laugh. She had lips pursed together, whilst she had her hands hidden behind her back. Nina stood there solemnly.

“Now do you have anything you want to say to me?”

Stephy pulled at one of her pigtail and twirled it around her finger.

“Umm… sorry!”

“Stephy can you explain to me why you are not working? And why you sent Callum and Shari up here?”

Stephy shrugged her shoulders with a giggle.

“Stephy?!” replied Liz as rubbed her forehead

“Yes Miss Parker?”

Liz sighed.

“Are you going to go back and do some work?”

Stephy wasn’t given the chance to answer because suddenly the whole class erupted into commotion.

There stood at the door was Annabel and Max Evans. Liz gasped as Max Evans knelt down next to Annabel and whispered something in her ear.

Oh god he wasn’t was he…

Max then handed Annabel a bunch of flowers.

Annabel slowly skipped over whilst smiling at her classmates. There was all shouted Annabel’s name. Annabel slowly stopped in front on her teacher.

“Hi Miss Parker!”

Liz gulped.

“Hello Annabel we didn’t know you were going to visit today!”

“Uh huh that’s cause it woz a surprise!”

“Surprise huh?” Liz replied as she watched from the corner of her eye Max Evans standing leaning against the door.

“Uncle Max ask me ta talk ta you.”

“He did, did he?”

Annabel nodded and her friends giggled.

“But he ask me ta give these ta you first!”

Annabel handed her the beautiful bouquet of flowers.

“Thank you Annabel.” whispered Liz.

Liz felt like she had to take the flowers, all her pupils were watching with curious eyes. She felt a little annoyed at Max’s persistence. She sighed as she smelt the flowers. A tear wanted to collect at her eyes buts she knew she couldn’t cry in from of her class.

“Now Annabel your Uncle is very naughty if he wanted to talk to me, he should have a) waited till after school and b) waiting till the class was dismissed.”

Annabel grinned and shrugged her shoulder.

“Now Annabel why don’t you tell your Uncle Max to leave and come back later on, but of course you’re very welcome to say.”

Annabel shook her head and skipped back to her Uncle Max.

Liz watched in annoyance and trepidation as Max handed Annabel an envelope.

Annabel skipped back to the amusement of the class.

Stephy and Nina stood with arms linked together with dreamy looks in their eyes as they stood staring at Max.

“He could be a real Ken doll!” giggled Nina.

“Shhh!” pouted Annabel. “That’s my Uncle Max!”

Liz shook her head, thinking back to Last night when Max had asked her out and then slowly kissed her. It was a kiss that held a promise of more to come. She so should have said yes last night but she said no. And all day she had been thinking about it, not sure if she was regretting it. And now Max was here, using his niece as a messenger. Max knew she wouldn’t be able to turn Annabel away.

Liz sat down as her legs turned to jelly.

Max stepped forward with long strides and knelt in front of her. He cupped her face in front of all the pupils.

Liz couldn’t help but sigh at his touch.

“Liz…”

Liz shook her head in denial.

Annabel shrieked.

“No Uncle Max I wanted to do it!”

Max laughed.

“Liz I wanted to come here and ask you but this Little Madam decided that she wanted to do the talking. The flowers and Ballet tickets were her idea. Apparently she full of ideas. She always gives her daddy ideas and now it’s apparently my turn…”

Liz sighed. Oh god he was so perfect. She should have just said yes last night.

“And so I’m here Miss Liz Parker on one knee; hands and feet need be to ask…”

“Uncle Max you taking too long!” pouted Annabel.

Both Liz and Max both smiled.

“Liz as I was saying before I was interrupted. I’m here to ask you tonight to…”

“Basic ‘ally Uncle Max wants ta take ya on a date t’nite, a meal then a concert!”

“Annabel I can ask someone on a date without your help!”
Shari pulled on Annabel’s sleeve as put a finger to her mouth. Even Shari was telling Annabel to be quiet.

Max looked away from his niece to look at the woman sitting in front of her. He couldn’t believe that she had said no last night. In fact he was devastated. He was a walking zombie walking the corridors of the hospital. Half the questions Alex asked hadn’t even registered. He didn’t think he could give Liz up, but at the same time ha had to concentrate on Annabel. So he was going to walk away until Annabel in so many uncertain words said he was stupid and that he should fight for her.

“Liz I know you’re been hurt in the past and I know you don’t even know me well, but if you could just give me a chance to prove to you I’m worth it.

“I would be honoured. I think we’ll be good together.

“Hell even Annabel is rooting for us.

“Let me take you out on a date, let me show you what love is, let me show you how good together we’d be. Please say YES!”

Liz had tears slipping down her face, as Max tried to wipe them. She couldn’t talk because she was chocked with emotion.

“SO what to you say Miss Parker?”

The whole class erupted into chanting.

DATE! DATE! DATE! DATE! DATE!

Annabel stood there grinning.

Liz couldn’t help it. She was falling hard. She nodded in agreement.

“Is that a yes?” asked Max in shock.

Annabel rolled her eyes as she grabbed Shari in a hug.

“IS that a yes? Are you going to come on a date with me?”

Liz nodded a yes and she smiled with happy tears.

“…yes Max.”

Max cried out and whooped with happiness. He grabbed Liz and swung her into his arms. Not caring he grabbed her face and kissed her hard on the lips. The whole class erupted into chaos. The girls were sighing and shrieking. Whilst the boys were all pointing and shouting.

“EURGH COOTIES!”

Annabel herself just stood there with a pleased look on her face.




TBC. LOL ^^ the date...

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ANYWAY HERE's the NEXT PART. xxx mwah x

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#19.

No sooner had Annabel gotten back to Max’s place, she was pouting again. She sat at the top of the stairs with her arms crossed.

Uncle Max was running around like a headless chicken, gathering things together when the door bell rang signalling someone’s arrival.

“Uncle Max doorbell!” Annabel snapped.

“Can’t you answer it? I’m looking for my black shoes!”

Annabel growled and stomped to the doorway of her Uncle Max’s bedroom and pressed her hands to her hips with annoyance. “Uncle Max hav ya been eating the ‘stupid’ pills again! I can’t reach the door!”

Max grinned with happiness and walked past his niece and pinched her cheek.

Annabel shrieked.

“STUPID PILL! SUPID PILL!”

Max opened the door and let Michael in.

“Hi bro!” Max grinned.

Michael could hear Annabel’s screaming from outside the house. Michael sighed.

“You did tell Munchkin it’s me who’s looking after her, right?”

Max laughed as he could hear Annabel still shouting STUPID PILL.

“Nope I thought you could give her the good news! Littlebit get your self down here! Your surprise baby sitter is here!”

Annabel come pounding down the stairs still singing STUPID PILL, STUPID PILL, UNCLE MAX ATE THE SUPID PILLS! She skidded to a halt and looked upwards.

“Nuh huh! NO WAY!” pouted Annabel.

Max laughed and slipped past them. Michael looked offended.

“Uncle Max no!”

“Hey what’s wrong with me!” frowned Michael.

Annabel stuck her tongue out.

“Don’t like you! You’re a stranger! STRANGER! STRANGER!”

“Annabel don’t start that again!” sighed Michael.

Max grinned and laughed he was too happy to let the squabble get him down.

“Annabel behave. You have two choices either you go to your gran and granddad’s or your Uncle Mike’s.”

“Can’t I come with you? Miss Parker will wanna see me as well.” said Annabel with a pout.

“I don’t wanna stay with Uncle Mike or gran and granddad. I wanna come with you! Please Uncle Max!” her eye’s started watering.

Max knelt down in front of her.

“Sweetie please you know how important this is to me. Your Uncle Mike is going to take you to the hospital to visit your brother and your parents. He wants to take you bowling. Please for me be good. I promise next time that if I go out to a meal with Liz, I mean Miss Parker you can tag along. But for this evening…”

Annabel rolled her mouth.

“You promise!”

“I promise!”

“Pinky Promise!” replied Annabel.

Max did as he said with some relief.

“Right so you’re going to behave! For Uncle Mike!”

Annabel spun round on her heels and faced her Uncle Mike. He looked shocked to say the least.

“Right ground rules!” She pouted.

“I still don’t like ya! You not my favourite Uncle Max is! I’m not allowed Ice cream so don’t even try ta tempt me with it. I will watch Bratz n ya will watch it with me. I want pineapple on my pizza; I don’t care if you don’t like them! And I want to play do your hair. N NO COMPLAIN’ TIS TIME! UNCLE MAX NEVA COMPLAINES!”

Michael gulped as he nodded. What had he let himself into? Max definitely owed him big time.

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#20.

Liz was panicking big time Max was going to turn up very soon and she wasn’t even ready. She wanted to cry.

“Lizzie sweetie will you calm down!” Kyle replied.

“Now what are you wearing!”

“I don’t know cried!” Liz.

Kyle Pushed Liz to sit down.

“Breathe girl! Now is he taking you to a meal?”

Liz nodded with a gulp.

Kyle flicked through her clothes.

“Where is he taking you? Italian? Chinese? Indian?”

Liz tried to talk. Kyle shook his head in desperation; it was like Liz had turned into mush. Damn he wanted to see this man.

“Italian?” asked Kyle again.

Liz nodded.

“What about afterwards?”

Liz gulped.

“For god sake woman speak!” pouted Kyle. “This GAYDAR CAN NOT READ YOUR MIND!”

Liz pursed her lips together to stop her nervous giggle fit from starting.

“Lizzie Parker! Will you stop losing the plot! Think Kids! Kids! KIDS!”

Suddenly Liz snapped out of it.

“He said something about a outdoor concert”

Kyle grinned as he pulled a black strapless dress.

“YOU’RE LBD. SEE I KNEW IT WOULD COME IN HANDY!”

“It’s too sophisticated! I don’t like that dress why do you think I hide in the back of the wardrobe!”

Liz elbowed Kyle out the way.

“What about this purple dress?”

“Bah too conservative!”

“This green one!”

“Ugly colour!”

“This silver one!”

“Nice but not for where you going!”

Liz scowled.

“You just want me to wear the short tight black strapless dress!”

“Hey it’s why it’s called a LBD. Little-Black-Dress! And it’s not that short!”

“It’s above the knee!” cried Liz.

“I don’t want to think I’m easy!”

Kyle laughed.

“You easy. What planet?”

Liz pouted.

“I want him to like me for me!”

Kyle shook his head.

“Wait a minute hasn’t he seen you near naked anyway?”

Liz scowled.

“I don’t like my legs!”

“Liz you have killer pins! Now you’re wearing that dress even if it kills you and means me burning all of the other clothes. Here you can have this pashmina to cover your shoulders when you’re outside. See I’m nice!’

Liz huffed.

“Fine get out let me get changed! Ow!”

Kyle yanked her hair out of her pony tail and shook it.

“Hair down!” he flounced.

“Get out Kyle!”

“One more thing!” he grinned.

Kyle yanked open her underwear drawer.

“KYLE! WHAT THE HELL?”

“Nothing I ain’t seen before! I was your ex flatmate!” Kyle grinned he started going through her drawer. He pulled out a black and red lacey bra and pants. He unhooked the straps from the bra and threw them at Liz.

“JUST IN CASE YOU GET LUCKY!”

Liz blushed, just as the door bell rang. Kyle grinned like a Cheshire cat!

“Wooo……. Door bell. Mr Valenti shall go and see who’s ringing this hot momma bell. My bell not yours sweetie!”

Kyle spritzed some peppermint his mouth.

“You hunny take you time! Me I Shall throw myself at the mercy of Mac Evans!” Kyle sighed as he bounced out of the room.

“It’s Max!”

“I KNOW!” cried Kyle with a grin as he fanned himself.

Liz shook her head as she sat down to take a breather. This was it. This was going to be the date and damn was she nervous.


TBC. LOL ^^ the actual date next ^^

KatnotKathLOL wow thanks for the long feedback. hope this chapter satisfy you.x
DreamerM&L LOL ^^ i like kyle as well. keep reading
begonia9508 oh she'll get into a whole load more of trouble, whilst the cats away the mice will play...
Hunteri hope u like the next part.
Natalie36 glad u found kyle funny. x
Tamashii

I think she is right
I can totally see Annabelle like a little Nazi. She will get what she wants!
I feel sorry for Michael, I mean he tries.
Why does she tells him that he is a stranger?
About Liz and Max. I think they are gonna have a great date but I will just have to wait and see.
I love Kyle's part in all this, he is a wonderful friend.

LOL not the fault of Michael. It's Annabel doing actually, he's only baby sat her twice
because she always wants Max. ^^ (LOL which is understandable wanting Max )
That's why Annabel calls him stranger cause he hardly baby sits her and she thinks he doesn't know her
as well as her uncle max does. She's a little devil sometimes. LOL ^^ x

destinyci'm back ^^ here's the next part. sorry to keep you waiting.
Michelle17 keep reading. thanks for the feedback. x

LOL ^^ okay its not quite the date, but i had to add this part in.
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#21.

Kyle flounced towards the door and looked through the peephole. He grinned and yanked the door open with the biggest and campest grin he could muster.

Max who was standing nervously behind the door was shocked as a man with a pink t-shirt pulled the door open.

“Hi hunny!” grinned Kyle.

Max stumbled backwards nearly dropping his flowers.

“Um I… think I… have the wrong flat…” murmured Max, as he stared at what was written on the Man’s t-shirt. I’M ALL MAN…BUT I LOVE DOING MEN.

“Hmm… I take it your Max! STEP INTO MY OFFICE!” smiled Kyle.

“Umm how did you know my name? Am I at the right flat? Does Liz Parker live here?”

“YES AND YES TO THE SECOND AND LAST QUESTION! COME! COME!”

Max stood rooted.

“Come on! I won’t hurt you…”

Max stepped forward as Kyle grinned.

“…much!”

Max eyes widened as he stepped back.

Kyle laughed and pulled him in and grabbed his flowers.

“Wow for me?”

***

Liz was listening by the door with a giggle. She couldn’t believe Kyle was being so evil but it was so funny hearing Max stutter in shock.

She could hear Kyle teasing Max.

‘Um… they’re… for Liz.’

‘But I love white roses! I love them! Hmm… you’re handsome! Liz has good taste. You look good enough to eat! Can I bite you?’

‘NO!’ cried Max.

Liz stumbled out the room laughing as she watched Kyle try to actually kiss Max.

“Kyle get off him!”

Kyle pulled away with a pout to the relief of Max.

“Go home. Adam is surely waiting for you.” Said Liz.

Kyle sighed dramatic as he wondered up to Liz like a naughty school boy.

“You didn’t tell me he was so gorgeous!”

Liz shook her head in annoyance.

“BUDDHABOY go home!”

Kyle pouted and pulled her into a hug.

“Don’t forget the sexy underwear!” he whispered.

Liz pushed him away and dragged him towards the door. She pushed him out and slammed the door.

“See you tomorrow!” cried Kyle.

***

Liz spun round to see Max leaning against the wall.

“Hi!” she whispered.

Max looked towards the stunner standing there smiling, he stood and pulled her up to him.

“Hi!” whispered Max.

Liz grinned.

“Um… sorry about that, he’s a bit eccentric. HAPPY CLAPPY! You know posh as pink!”

“I take it he’s gay!”

Liz grinned.

“Yes!”

Max laughed.

“Thank god because I don’t have to worry about him hitting on you!”

Liz joined in laughing.

“Weren’t you worried about yourself? I mean after all he was hitting on you!”

Max slipped his arms around her waist.

“That’s because I’m apparently so good looking!”

Liz thumped him.

“Jeezs woman don’t hit me so hard. You know I would have to able to defend myself without your help!”

“You sure? I mean Kyle is not your typical gay guy. He’s quite handy with a spanner and did I mention that when we were in college he was a wrestler…”

“Wait a minute did you say Kyle? As the one who protect you from his friend?”

Liz nodded with a giggle.

“You know if he wasn’t gay I would be jealous!” said Max.

“He’s just a friend. A really good friend in fact, he used to be my roommate.”

“Lucky him!” grinned Max.

Liz smiled.

“Are you going to finish getting? I mean you look good in a t-shirt and all, but we have a meal booked soon!”

Liz grinned and danced out of his arms and wondered into her bedroom. Max stood leaning at against the doorway, she was about the close the door behind her was she saw Max. Growing a bit more daring Liz pulled the t-shirt over her head.

She watched as Max’s jaw drop.

She bit her lip, as she stepped inside her dress. She turned slightly to see Max watching her.

“Could you zip me up?” Liz whispered turning round.

Max stepped up and brushed his fingers over her neck to sweep away her hair. He ran his fingers down her back downwards past the back of her bra strap making Liz shiver. Max pressed his lips lightly against her shoulder as he pulled up the zip of her dress; a kiss with a promise. A promise of what to come…





TBC????????

hey sorry to leave you hanging for so long here's the next part.x

Hunter glad for making you happyx

“Could you zip me up?” Liz whispered turning round.
Max stepped up and brushed his fingers over her neck to sweep away her hair.
He ran his fingers down her back downwards past the back of her bra strap making Liz shiver.
Max pressed his lips lightly against her shoulder as he pulled up the zip of her dress;
a kiss with a promise. A promise of what to come…"

#Omg! You're getting so good at this sweetie!
I loved that part immensly Ping!!
THANK YOU FOR A PLEASENT DAY!
Now I'm off to reply to your pm

aww thank you sweetie for your feedback. i love reading it.
begonia9508 i'm glad ur enjoying the story ^^

It's funny how males react with gay guys when, we, ladies, are best friends with them!
EVE

lol i so agree. ^^
keepsmiling7 i know i know i kept you waiting. sorry forgive mex
DreamerM&L It wont be the last we see of Kyle. LOL Oh no LOL
Michelle17 Coming back ^^
Natalie36

i can't stop

i take it you were laughing LOL x
Tamashii aww thanks for the feedback. i love reading itxxx
destinyc

Arrgh, Ping, you left it there?? There?!? So, you must hurry back extra quickly now!
I love the brave Liz here!
Thanks for the update,
Destiny

i know i'm sorry for leaving it there. x here's the next part. as i say sorry its late.xxx


#22

Liz stepped out of the car as Max opened the door for her.

“Are you okay Liz?” asked Max.

Liz had been silent the whole car journey which kinda worried Max. She had been so fired up back at her flat, but now she had reverted to the quiet school teacher.

Liz nodded nervously.

Something inside her was bubbling with excitement but at the same time she was petrified. She was scared. Scared that this was going to end! Scared that this was a dream! Scared that this feeling of excitement would disappear!

Max was so amazing that she had the feeling of fear; scared that he was too good to be true. But she knew he was and maybe that why she was scared. Scared that he could sweep her off her feet, she so could see herself falling for him.

She gulped as she looked up at him.

Max smiled down at her and tucked a strand of loose hair behind her hair and cupped her cheek.

“Lizzie I want you to relax. This date is meant to be fun. This date is meant to give us a chance to get to know each other better.

Liz pursed her lips together and nodded.

“Sweetie says something.”

Liz heart giggled inside if that was possible.

“Sweetie say something anything or even just give me a small smile.”

Liz reached for Max’s hand and ran her hand over his finger, over his palm. She linked her fingers through his. Max looked down in curiosity. Liz hand tightened around his as a small shy smile broke into her blushing face.

Max’s heart skipped a beat.

He tightened his hand in excitement, giving her hand a squeeze as well; as he reached inside the car to pull out her shawl. He was about to hand it her when he decided to wrap it around her shoulders him self. He regretfully let go of her hand as he draped the shawl around her and locked the car.

Finishing locking up the car, he slipped Liz’s arm through his and pulled her towards the restaurant.

***

Liz stepped into the reception area of the restaurant, as Max closed the door behind them. He stepped forward towards the older woman.

“AH Mr Evans welcome, welcome again!” smiled Mrs Benito as she grabbed him into a hug and spun themselves around.

Max laughed in response.

“Where is Mario?”

“Mario? Kitchen where else…and who is this pretty thing with you?” replied Mrs Benito.

Liz blushed.

Max pulled her forward.

“This is Elizabeth Parker, my dinner date for tonight.”

“Ahh so beautiful!”

“I know.” Whispered Max in awe.

Liz blushed under both gazes.

“My little Max are you in love?”

Liz eyes widen in shock, as Max blushed.

“Florence leave the young couple alone!” muttered Mario stepping forward.

“Come come let me show you to your room!” he continued.

Max reached Liz’s hand into his own and pulled her towards him. Her cheeks were flushed still blushing. She was lost in thought. Was Max in love with her? She so wanted to know what Max was thinking. She wanted to know if Max would have responded if not interrupted. She really wanted to know. But what she was scared of was her own feelings…

Max came to a stop outside a room as Mario nodded with a smile as he walked away. Liz was standing there in a daze. He watched the different emotions floor her face. He reached down cupping her face in his hand; he was so tempted to kiss her, but he wanted to save the kiss to later. The first kiss had to be special.

Liz was suddenly shaken out of her thoughts when she felt someone stroking their fingers across her lips. A moan broke out of her mouth.

Liz heart was pounding.

“Max…” she whispered as she looked up.

“Come I have a surprise for you.”

Liz looked around and noticed that they weren’t in the restaurant but in a corridor.

“Where are we? I thought we were having a meal?”

“We are, but I wanted some privacy. Close your eyes.”

Max watched as Liz closed her eyes, He slipped behind her and placed his hands over her to make sure she wasn’t peeking. He slid the sliding door and pushed Liz forward into the room.

“You can look now!”

Max let go of Liz as she opened her eyes.

Liz was shocked at the sight.

There they were in a candlelit room with sky lights running around the room. Silver drapes dropped down the back of the serving booth. In one corner was a water fountain with a cherub sitting at the base. And there in the centre of the room was a table of two dressed in black with rose petals scattered across the top. Champagne on ice and swan made napkins. They whole room had an aroma of Italian food and roses.

“It’s beautiful Max…”

Max sighed in relief at Liz’s words, he never felt like this before and he so wanted to make this special for the both of them.

“Are you hungry sweetheart?”

Liz nodded in excitement.

Max pulled her towards the table and pulled out a chair for her. She sat down with a giggle.

“Max how did you manage all of this?”

“Oh Mario and Florence love me to bits. I’m their son that they never had. They love feeding me! And When ever I come they always give me a special table. But this room is special. I’ve never used it before, but Isabel has told me of it…”

“It’s beautiful. Max nobody has ever taken me to anywhere like this… I’m lost for words…”

“Well I wanted this to be special Liz. I want you to be special.”

Liz nodded.

“So are u hungry?” replied Max with a grin.

“Oh definitely!” smiled Liz in response.

***

By the time they had finished two hours had gone. They had just finished polishing off the dessert, which was strawberry chocolate fondant pudding with vanilla ice cream.
Max had watched as Liz as she bit into the pudding sighing at each bite. She was so expressive and desirable; Max could help but watch her through out the meal. Max knew what he wanted; he knew that he never wanted this to end, now that he had found this angel he never ever wanted to let her go.

Liz sighed as she finally pushed the plate away. She was so stuffed but very satisfied with the food.

She watched in confusion as Max stood up next to her and pulled her into his arms.

“Max what are you doing?”

“Dancing. What else?”

Liz frowned.

“But there’s no music!”

Max laughed and pulled her into his arms and started swaying side to side. Suddenly music floated into the room.

Liz smiled shyly at Max’s grinning face. She rested her head against his shoulder. Max hand trailed down her back caressing her as he went.

She didn’t want this night to end.

Max watched as he swayed Liz to the music. Her eyes were closed lightly as listened to the music. Her head was drooped. He would have to take her to the concert another time. She looked so tired.

“Come on sweetie let me take you home.”

Liz shook her head.

“We’ll leave the concert for another time!”

Liz stumbled awake at the word concert.

“But we can’t miss the concert!”

“Liz you’re knackered. Let me take you home.”

“What if I don’t want to go home!” pouted Liz.

“Liz they concert can wait for another time. I didn’t even pay for the tickets.”

Liz shook her head. She didn’t want the night to end.

“Max. What if I said I didn’t want to go home tonight?”

Max looked down at her in shock.

“Take me back to yours Max.”





TBC? next chapter we will be seeing what annabel is up to? and whether Max will take Liz home back to his or hers. x

hey people. sorry this is late. sorry ive been poorly. i hope this will be worth the wait. xxx

Hunter aww thanks hunter for the feedback
DreamerM&L yep liz has guts to wanna go home with max but wouldnt you wanna go home with him as well. ^^
Natalie36 yep i wanna go home with mr max evans as well.
destinyc

Hoping to see the big kiss coming up soon...pretty please?

i shall see what i can do. xx ^^
Tamashii

Liz has so much of a child on her...

i know she's sweet isn't she.
keepsmiling7

good for Liz, she didn't want the evening to be over!

i didnt want the night to end lol
roswell3053 aww thanks for reading. yep max will take her home.

I love the instant chemisty

yep they have chemistry
begonia9508 lol thanks for reading.
jake17 aww thanks carrie for dropping a line. xxx
destinyc i kinda used your suggestion. take a look. x

on with the show. two chapters. first is back to annabel. ^^ second chapter back to the lovebirds

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#23.

Earlier that day…

Annabel sat there pouting as her daddy sat up in his hospital bed watching American football with Michael.

“Daddy!” she pulled on his sleeve. She had tried to get their attention, but all they did was shove a bag of sweets in front of her.

She had seen her mummy before going to see her daddy and they were go to see her little brother, but her uncle Michael had got distracted by the TV thus wrapping her daddy’s attention in it as well.

Hmm… Annabel got up and pulled the door open. She turned back just as her daddy and Uncle Michael screamed and shouted at the TV. She scowled as she closed the door behind her. Now to find her way to the baby room, she couldn’t remember the way. She looked for the word ‘baby’ but couldn’t see it. Annabel looked up to the symbols.

There was something there that looked like a bottle and a long word beginning with M. She shrugged her shoulders and followed the sign. Her little brain should be scared but there was hardly anyone around. She walked and walked with her teddy in one hand and her blanket in another. She grinned excitedly when she saw the words baby room, finally she had arrived. She climbed up the chair to look through the window but pouted, the room looked different. There were three nurses in there looking after the babies. But she couldn’t see booboo.

“Annabel! What are you doing here?”

Annabel looked up to see one of the nurses had come out the room. Annabel smiled shyly.

“Hi…” she whispered.

“Does your daddy know you come up here?”

“Daddy watchin’ TV with Uncle Mickey!”

“I take it you’re here to see brother?”

Annabel nodded eagerly but smiled sadly.

“But booboo isn’t in there, Booboo missin.”

Nurse Milligan smiled at the little girl. She was so sweet. “Come on I’ll take you and then I’ll go down stairs and tell your daddy and uncle off for leaving you alone!”

She picked Annabel up and walked what seemed a short walk. They arrived at the intensive care room for babies.

“See booboo is there!”

Annabel looked at all the babies they all looked similar but she saw the little blue elephant that was sitting in the corner of one incubator. There was her baby brother.

“Louise can you take care of Annabel whilst I go and get her dad.” Said nurse Milligan to the younger nurse.

“Sure!” Louise lifted Annabel out of Nurse Milligan’s arms and started to wash Annabel’s hands. She then put her into a protective gown and head gear just like the first time.

“You have to leave you teddy and blanket here sweetie!”

Annabel nodded subduedly.

Louise smiled kindly to the young child and stepped into the room. A male nurse technician looked up. Joshua waved.

“Hi Annabel you here to see you brother?”

Annabel nodded.

Joshua pulled up a seat so she could stand on and stepped back so Annabel could see her. Louise stepped back as well.

Annabel looked around her and up at the nurses then back at Booboo. She placed her hand inside the incubator. He looked a little bit healthier than the last time she came. He still had the thing over his mouth and nose to help him breath.

“Hi Booboo its you’r big sista!” Annabel whispered as she stroked his arm.

“I wishsa cud see mummy! I’m meant ta name you… hmm… Jayden… Hayden… Aaron… umm…”

Annabel looked up to see Louise smiling at her.

“How about something beginning with B?”

Annabel shrugged her shoulders in thought. “Um… Ben… umm… Brady… Umm…”

“Ben, Bobby, Bradley, Braden, Bryan, Brendan, Just some thoughts...” replied Louise.

“How about something from the family?”

Annabel pouted in thought. She started to stick things together in her head whilst looking at her little brother.

Benjamin Maxwell Whitman…

It seemed long but it had a ring to it.

She looked her brother. She tried the first name out.

“Benjamin… Ben… Benji…”

“Are you going with Benjamin?” asked Joshua.

Annabel nodded.

“My little brother, Benjamin Maxwell… afta my uncle… Whitman.”

She grinned at her little brother, in her heart he would always be her booboo but now he finally had a name.

♥♥♥♥♥

#24.

Max was still in shock whilst driving Liz back home to his house. He was still in shock when he pushed the door open to his house. He pulled Liz up to his bedroom and now they stood there staring at one another.

“Liz are you sure about this?”

Liz nodded shyly as she dropped her pashmina onto the floor, turning around as she kicked off her shoes.

Max gulped as he watched as Liz lifted her hair upwards from the back of her neck. For the first time in his sex life he was nervous, he brought his hands to her shoulders and caressed her. Liz shivered under his touch.

“You okay?” replied Max.

Liz spun round, letting go off her hair. She signed as she leaned forward and rested her head on his shoulder. Max enveloped her into his arms and held her tight.

He pressed a kissed to her forehead. I love you, he thought.

He stepped back and went to his drawer and pulled out his old university t-shirt.

“What’s that for?” whispered Liz, as Max stepped towards her.

He reached behind her and unzipped her dress.

“Max…”

He slipped the dress down her body and let it fall to the floor. He then pulled the t-shirt over her head, picked her up and pulled open the duvet. He lay Liz down and proceeded to remove his shirt, shoes and trousers. He then climbed in next to her and pulled her against him, thus pulling the duvet back over themselves.

“I don’t want to rush this Liz. I wanted this to be perfect, I want us to be perfect.”

“It is Max!” whispered Liz. “I had a perfect dress, even perfect underwear; do you not find me attractive?”

Max laughed.

Liz pouted as she tried to roll away.

“Liz god you’re perfect and gorgeous. And I love you. You have this air and grace about you. I enjoy your company. I love how you take care of my niece. I like how…”

Liz eyes widened in shock.

“OMG you… did… you… Did you just say I love you?”

Max face fell in shock as well; a blush tainted his cheeks and ears. He nodded in response.

“I’m in love with you Liz. I know we’re only just met, but god it feels like I waited for you forever and you’re so perfect for me. I love you Liz Parker.”

Liz heart pounded with joy. She couldn’t believe this was happening.

Max cupped her face and kissed her. He poured everything into the kiss. It was hot and passionate, sweet and delectable. He nibbled on her bottom lip. He kissed her hard. They were both panting for breathe when they pulled away. Max struggled to form his words.

“I... want... you forever... Miss Elizabeth Parker. I’m... in this for keeps! So... what do you say to that?”

Liz giggled and smiled back.

“I love you to Mr Evans!”

She kissed him back but then pulled away.

“Max Evans you better make love to me tonight or will string you up alive!”

“Yes Miss!”

Max pushed the duvet away and reached for the t-shirt he had put on Liz’s body. He was certainly going to keep his promise.




TBC? ^^ LOL

Natalie36 thanks for the feedback
keepsmiling7 enjoy the next part. thanks for the bump.xxx
destinyc aww im glad booboo has a name as well.xx
begonia9508 yep yep annabel is sweet but she's a devil. read on LOL. x
Hunter awww i love your feedback hunter. ^^
Michelle17 i'm glad u like the name as well. thanks for the feedback. x
Tamashii yeah ^^ i would smack michael and alex as well. tut tut for alex LOL.
roswell3053 read the next chapter to Max's reaction.
ken_r

I read this, to this point, in one sitting. Having lived through a tragedy, personally and working
with grief groups seeing the way others face tragedy makes me always want to learn as much as
I can about the way people face it. I have written about this subject several times and I learn
something with every story. I am also learning while reading yours.
Some might think that a tragedy of losing someone might not be a good backdrop for a love story,
but what could be better. Death can best be faced if we see life going on.
The little girl has her own way of understanding life and if it comes to that, death.
She does not look at things as an end of a path, but rather as a place where new things,
meaning loves happen.
I look forward to following your story. Following to what ever conclusion you take it.
Ken r

WOW THANKS KEN R. the feedback really touched me. thank you. i'm glad you're reading/. ^^

sorry its late.xx
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#25.

Max stripped off the t-shirt that was covering Liz’s naked body.

“Do you know how beautiful you are?”

Max placed his hand just above the left side of her of her breast. Liz shivered at his touch.

“Your heart is beating fast.”

Liz nodded.

“Don’t worry so is mine.”

Max lifted Liz’s hand and pressed it to his chest.

“See my heart is beating rapidly just like yours?”

“Max… are… are you worried like me?”

“Of course I am. I want this to be perfect for the both of us.”

“Max I’m scared I haven’t done this in ages and when… when I did it last time… I didn’t enjoy it much…”

“Don’t worry I’ll make this perfect for both of us.” Max grinned.

“Are u sure?” asked Liz nervously.

Max smiled as he moved his hand downwards to enclose over her breast. He ran his thumb over the aroused nipple. He caressed it gently with his thumb, making it strain even more. Liz whimpered a little.

Max leaned forward and enclosed the tip into his mouth. Liz cried out and tried to push him away. Max was undeterred though, he lifted his hand behind her back to bring her closer as he suckled and sucked at the nipple. Liz could feel herself getting hotter and wetter at the same time.

“Max!” She cried.

Max grinned as he continued sucking, his free hand then wondered downward over her flat belly and downward further. Liz writhered under his onslaught, as Max pushed his hand underneath her lacy pants.

“Max!”

His fingers slipped between her hot wet lower lips. He pushed his fingers in and out, coating his fingers in her juices. He thrust his fingers backwards and forwards between her tender lips.

“Imagine if this is my hard arousal instead of my fingers slipping inside you. You’d feel so wet and full. I’ll be thrusting deeper and deeper inside you body. God you’re so wet!!”

Max licked the nipple with his tongue and went onto the other breast, whilst continuing pleasuring her with his fingers. Liz felt her body… words couldn’t describe…

Max then lifted his head.

“I so want to taste you!” he whispered as he plunged his fingers in one last time as Liz’s hot body arched in pleasure and then came apart.

Liz head was swimming dizzily as she watched Max lick his fingers, when her mobile went off.

“Ignore it!” muttered Max pulling Liz towards him.

Max pushed off his boxers determined to finish what he started. His hands slipped underneath Liz’s body as he rubbed his hot tip against her wet lower lips. Suddenly the house phone rang, Max cursed.

Liz couldn’t help but giggle. She watched as Max rolled over and grabbed the phone.

‘Uncle Max! Uncle Max!’

Max sighed and looked at Liz, who snuggled up against him.

“Yes… Annabel?”

‘Un’cle Max hav u been runnin’ you sound outta breath?’

“Yes littlebit I’ve been running. Now why are you ringing?”

‘Well I uh went to visitin’ mommy daddy + booboo, but Un’cle Mikey ended up watchin TV with daddy so I went to go find booboo by myself and…’

“WHAT?!” shouted Max.

‘Don’t ya worry Un’cle Max the nice nurses told them off!’ Annabel giggled.

“They shouldn’t have let you wonder off by yourself!”

‘But I’m a big girl!’ pouted Annabel over the phone.

Max sighed.

“So why are u ringing sweetie?”

‘Oh! Oh! I named booboo! All by meself.’

“Really what did you call him?”

‘Is Miss Parker with you? Did you give her lots of cooties?’

Liz giggled as Max pressed a finger to her lips to silent her.

“Miss Parker has gone to the bathroom; she can’t come to the phone. So are u going to tell me the name?”

‘Oh I wantd ta tell Miss Parker!’

“I’m sure to tell her Annabel. So what did you name booboo?”

‘Umm… ah yay!’ giggled Annabel.

“So?”

‘It’s Ahh Benjamin Maxwell Whitman!’

“Wow! You named him all by yourself?”

‘Uh huh! And I name afta you as well. The best’est Uncle in ta world. Eh oh! I’ve gotta go. Bye byeeeeeeeeeee Un’cle Max.’

Liz smiled at Max’s gobsmacked face.

“She named my nephew after me!”

“So I heard!”

“It’s amazing! Wow! I’m so happy!”

“Yep!” grinned Liz.

“She named him after me?” Max grinned happily.

Liz shook her head in amusement at Max’s happy smile.

“But Max?”

“Yes Hunny?”

“Are u going to finish what you started?”

TBC?

Natalie36 lol thanks for reading. x
ken_r

The interruptions of youth. But, isn't that what love is all about?

so true LOL.x
begonia9508 he he i personally think she's cute. LOL
keepsmiling7

Annabelle is really proud of naming her little brother.......but she did call at bad time......
Max was out running, that's funny.....

destinyc hmm... keep reading. x
Michelle17 thanks for the feedback. pingx

#26

Max grinned, but sighed. He pulled Liz down closer to himself into the bed and pulled the duvet over themselves. He heard Liz sigh herself.

“Are we not going… tonight?”

Max sighed again.

“Annabel kinda buzz-killed the moment, I’m sorry.”

“Oh…” Liz whispered a little tearfully.

“Do… do you want me to leave? Take me home?”

“GOD NO! No, no sweetie, I want you to stay here.”

Max replied with some gusto as he held her tight in a hug.

Liz nodded.

“What shall we do then?”

Max sighed.

“I’m sorry, how about we just lay here. Let me just hold you. Let me just lie with you. Or we just go to sleep?”

Liz nodded in Max’s shoulder.

“I’m sorry darling!”

“It’s okay Max.”

“It obvious it isn’t Liz, Do you really want to do make love tonight?”

Liz wanted to cry herself to sleep, that’s what she wanted to do. Liz shook her head.

“I love you Max. Can we just sleep?”

“Are you sure?”

Liz nodded and kissed Max on the cheek.

“Good night Max.” Liz whispered as she closed her eyes tightly.

Max smiled sadly as he held Liz in his arms, in a way he should be angry with Annabel. But at the same time he couldn’t, she was his niece for god sake. Yes she was a little terror who had not sense of timing, but at the same time maybe she was a blessing in disguise. He didn’t want to rush things with Liz.

He knew it was wrong but he took the house phone off the hook, if anyone needed him, they could leave a message on his mobile. He didn’t want anyone to wake Liz up.

He sighed as he pulled his boxers back up and slid back more comfortable under the duvet pulling Liz into his arms. Her heavy breathing told him that she was fast asleep.

Brushing the strands away from her face, he felt his heart contract. She was so beautiful and serene. He couldn’t believe that he hadn’t met her sooner, now he had he wasn’t going to waste a moment without her. He thought about his sister lying in a coma and felt sick with guilt and remorse; look at him going out on a date, woo-ing a woman, nearly making love to her, GENERALLY being happy. It made him feel very selfish that Alex was in hospital not knowing if Isabel would wake up again and here he was with Liz. But at the same time he couldn’t regret a moment that happened with Liz, it was like fate played a part.

His mobile vibrated annoying him and shaking him out of his thoughts.

“WHAT DO YOU WANT MICHAEL?” he snapped quietly as Liz shifted in her sleep.

‘DAMN YOU SOUND FRUSTRATED!’ grinned Michael.

“Fuck off! What do you want?”

‘Umm Uncle Max u said a bad word!’

“Annabel?”

‘Yes Uncle.’

“Shit… um… I mean sorry… Annabel why aren’t you in bed? Michael why is our niece not in bed?”

‘Uncle Max u swore again.’

“MICHAEL!”

‘What Maxwell?’

‘Uncle Max talk to me.’

“Michael first I hear you let Annabel walk of by herself and now you’re letting her stay up!”

‘Hey don’t snap at me just cause your sexual frustrated!’

‘Wat’s sexeal frust’ted mean?’ asked Annabel in curiosity.

‘Do you want to explain Maxwell?’

“NO I DO NOT MICHAEL. YOU DIDN’T ANSWER MY QUESTION!”

‘Shhh… Annabel let the adults talk!’ grinned Michael as he re-tucked her in and took the phone off her.

Max in the background could hear Annabel saying ‘make sure you ask him.’

“Michael ask me what?”

Michael sighed but grinned at the same time.

‘Miss Annabel here was worried about you because you weren’t picking up the house phone. She thought the aliens had eaten you.’

“Haha very funny!” snapped Max.

‘Damn you really are frustrated can’t you take a joke. Is Miss Prissy not given it up?’

“SHUT UP MICHAEL DON’T TALK ABOUT LIZ LIKE THAT!”

Max heard Annabel shout across the room ‘who’s Miss Prissy Uncle Max is meana to be wit’ Miss Parker. Giv me the phone! Giv me ta phone!’

“SEE WHAT YOU’VE DONE NOW. You can explain to her now. Don’t ring back unless it’s IMPORTANT!” Max snapped in reply as he flipped the mobile closed.

Liz stirred and rubbed her eyes awake.

“…Max?”

“Yes sweetie?”

“Was you just on the phone?”

“Yeah…”

“Who was it?”

“Not important. Go to sleep.”

“Are you going to sleep with me as well?”

Max nodded and pulled Liz into his arms.

“I love you Liz Parker. Goodnight my darling.”

***

Approx 1h 30mins later…

Liz woke up a little bewildered.

Where was she and why was she lying on top of someone?

She opened her eyes and looked down to see Max sleeping. He was so handsome and she was his. As much as she was disappointed that they didn’t make love, she was kinda pleased that Max was respectful for her and didn’t just want her for sex.

He was the perfect gentleman, he held her gently. He didn’t try to grope her whilst she slept…

She brushed the bangs off his eyes and looked at his beautiful sleeping face.

Her hand wondered down his well chiselled chest in awe. She wonder what he would do if she touch him.

Her hand went lower… she looked at the clock… no one would interrupt this time right.

She used her other hand to help her slip down his boxers…

Yes no one would interrupt this time…


TBC?