Posted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 10:46 pm
Dropping this off. I KNOW i said I'd send it to my betta, but I'm realy trying to finish this story by next week so... If there are major mistakes It's my fault not Emma-lol, but thanx girl I do appreciate all your help!
Maxsgurl
anonymousarfan
obsession
g7silvers
icequeen
FSUMSW94
RASaero611
Behrsgirl1230
ILYMEFOREVER
Earth2Mama
loviedovie
stardreamer323
Michelle in Yonkers
Dreamer06
martine
Emz80m
Liz86000
NorafanofMaxandLiz
Topy458
hazz
Chapter 10- Cream
“Three days till the wedding Lizzie,” Tess singed while walking into the huge kitchen. Everyone else was in the dining room having breakfast. Liz smiled slightly at her sister, because she knew exactly what was coming next before she even spoke the words, “My lasts days before becoming Mrs. Tess Valinti. God, can you imagine settling down with one man for the rest of your life? I say we make the these last few days count.” Liz asked cautiously, “What exactly did you have in mind?” Tess’ face lit up before speaking again, “Well, since you asked…I think we should go clubbing tonight. What do you say?”
Liz was actually considering the thought. A night on the town sounded fun. Even the thought of dancing in a hot and steamy clubs had its appealing sides. “Alright but only on one condition. We bring Kyle and the guys along; I don’t think your husband would like it very much if you went to a club without him,” she insisted.
Tess corrected her immediately, “Future husband,” but after thinking about the situation for a moment longer she finally agreed with a sigh. Liz nodded her head with triumph and asked, “So where exactly are we going?”
“So what’s it called again?” Maria shouted from her closet as she threw basically all of her clothes on the floor. Liz shook her head and sighed before answering, “Cream.” Maria immediately turned around and asked, “Cream huh? That sounds promising,” she smiled wickedly before going back to the closet.
“Oh, Maria can I barrow some clothing. I didn’t really bring any of my clubbing clothes with me,” Liz asked although she already knew the answer. Maria was always packed for any occasion. If she had a winter coat and a ski mask in there, Liz still wouldn’t be surprised.
“Of course girly, we gotta make your hunny drool don’t we,” Maria winked before pulling out some really tinny outfits. Liz thought about Maria’s previous comment and smile at the thought. Yeah she was going to make Max drool all over himself when he’d see her.
“Girls get your asses down here or were going to leave with out them,” Alex yelled up the stairs. Max just smirked at him and waited patiently. He was use to waiting for women to get ready, and he pretty much knew that the longer you waited for a women to get ready the more beautiful she’s going to look.
Kyle, Alex, Jesse, and Max were all standing at the edge of the stairs before the beauties came waltzing down the stairs. They all look nice, but the one that caught Max’s attention was the small brunette. Her hair was down and crimped perfectly. He swallowed roughly when his eyes slid down her body. She was wearing rocker, black tight shirt that hung off the shoulders. Under the British flag that was on her shirt were the words spoiled on it. It looked as if it had been torn at the bottom in order to show her perfect stomach. Max groaned when he saw the sexy belly button piercing. The chain on her pleated denim skirt pulled off the final touch of a rocker chic look not to mention the black cross on her neck. God she almost looked like a schoolgirl gone bad.
Maria, who was just behind Liz, had an extremely tight white tank top on with some Pe Pe jeans accompanied by some big silver hoop earrings. Lonnie had a New York tank on and some extremely low baggy pants on, while Tess wore a black dress that was way to short to be worn on any one and even had a slit on the side that went hire.
One by one they went to the front door until it was just Liz and Max. Max couldn’t get over the way she looked, and Liz smiled wickedly and walked towards him until they were mere inches from one another. Feeling each others breath, Max was intoxicated with her. Just when he lent over to kiss her sweet lips, Liz walked past him. She not only brought her lips as close as possible without touching his while walking past but also brushed up against his straining member. It was almost painful the way she caressed it with her body while passing him slowly.
She just smiled knowingly again as she walked out of the door. Every move she did tonight would be on purpose. She was so tired of this cat and mouse game they constantly seemed to be playing. Max always seemed to be in so much control when he was with her …except for last night. She had momentarily seen his guard down completely, and she wanted it to come tumbling down tonight as well. Maybe, just maybe, she could get Max Evans to loose his facade. By the way he looked upon her, she was guessing it wasn’t going to be as hard as she thought it would be.
Well, this was it. They were now standing in front of club Cream. It was huge like a warehouse and the line went all the way down the block. Neon lights and half naked bodies could be seen inside from the windows. “Great, how the hell are we suppost to get into this place? It’s packed,” Lonnie asked as she eyed the crowd, but Tess and Kyle were already up at the front of the line laughing with the bouncer. Tess gestured for them to come over.
Tess introduced them to Brad the bouncer and explained, “Kyle use to be one of the waiters in here, so Brad here is going to let us in.”
As soon as they got in hot air hit their lungs. It smelled like sex and worse it even looked more like sex. Half the girls were basically wearing bras and mini skirts. As for the guy, most of them didn't have any shirts on what so ever. Everyone except Tess was feeling a little over dressed. Liz’s sister of coarse fit right in with the scene.
Kyle just laughed and yelled to them, “Don’t worry they gotta room where you can take a little more of your cloths off and not worry about them getting stolen. Come on.” They went through haft a crowd of bumping and grinding to get to a quiet room on the side. “Hang up your stuff in here, and then get your asses on the dance floor,” Kyle said with a pat on the back to Max before grabbing Tess’ hand and walking out.
“Dam Liz, Your brother in law knows some connections,” Maria whistled while taking of her coat. “No kidding,” Jessie laughed as he took off his shirt, “Any body know what exactly the dress code is in here?” he joked. Maria laughed lightly and said, “I think it’s ‘Less is more, but naked over rules all.’”
Max smiled as he unbuttoned his shirt, but didn’t take it off. Liz glanced over to the sight, but was caught in the act. He smiled wickedly with a cocky grin on his face. She just rolled her eyes and followed Maria out to get a drink at the massive bar.
Electric European music filled the room as hot-bodies grinded into complete strangers. Seduction was definitely in the air. “We’ll have a round of comfortable screw against a walls,” Kyle yelled to the bar tender. It took Liz to realize that that was actually a name of a drink. It was one of those places that had sexual names to different drinks.
After a few Grinding Showers and a couple of Soothing Orgasms, Maria and Liz were ready for some dancing. “ Maria wanna go on the dance floor?” Liz asked as she noticed Maria’s eyes light up. Maria shook her head in mischief and she pointed to a particular area.
When Liz saw what her friend was pointing to, she stood in amazement. There in front of them were six glass and glowing boxes with girls dancing in them. If you wanted to get the opposite sex’s attention, then that’s definitely where you would dance. Each box had a different theme to it. One had an army feel with its camouflage surroundings, the one under it had bars like a jail cell would. The other one on the outside had furs and animal skins hanging over the walls, and the room under it had a sink and bathroom in it. The one that caught both Maria and Liz’s attention however was the one in the middle and on the second floor. It had a business desk and chair in it and was much bigger than the rest. It sort of had a bad girl feeling to it with its leather armchair and wooden hard desk.
Before Liz could think Maria had already pulled her towards the six boxes. Three boxes were on top of the other three, so the girls had to walk up the stairs to get to the one they wanted. Of course some skanky, big-breasted girl was already there, but her best friend prevailed as always by knocking her on her ass. Maria may have been as small as Liz, but God help anyone who gets in her way.
“Come on Lizzie,” Maria said while pulling her into the glass box with her. Liz was a little bit hesitant but when she saw Max in a near by crowd she went along with it. Shaking her hips, Liz went along with the techno music. She couldn’t really get into it until she heard a familiar song blast from the speakers. It was Toni Braxton’s “Your Makin Me High” and it always made her feel sexy. Sometimes she’d even turn up the radio in her room and strip to it. So that’s exactly what she did, she pretended she was in her room listening to the song and doing her sexy dance to it.
Grinding her hips into the hard wood desk, Liz completely lost control and let go. She threw her head back in ecstasy and let her hands roam her body like a lover would. The cheers and catcalls only drove Liz and Maria on.
Maria lustfully sat on the desk with her legs spread wide for her best friend to dance between them. Liz slowly grinded her hips while slowly moving down Maria body. They only smiled when they heard more whistling and cheering coming from the crowd.
Liz was really getting into it until her eyes met lustful ones in the crowd. He was watching her intently. Not only was this an incredible turn on but also let Liz know her little plan was working. She decided to make him pay a little more by rapping her arm around Maria’s neck and slid further down. Thrusting her hips up, she finally let her knees hit the floor. Liz never once let her eyes roam away from his. She wanted him to know that this little dance was for him.
By the time the song was over, Max thought he’d explode from sexual frustration. What killed him the most was that she was watching him every second. The music must have covered half a dozen groans since she’d started her little dance tease. He felt like if he didn’t do something to her body, he’d die right then and there.
She smiled at him and almost gave a knowing grin before getting out of the box and walking towards him. He was standing at the bar playing a spectator, but when she walked up to him he couldn’t resist but do something.
Liz gasped when he took her by the hand and led them into the crowded dance floor. The temperature felt like a hundred and one in there when he brought her skin against his before grinding to the sexy music. Breath was no longer an option when he pushed his knee between her legs and pressed it against her core. Letting a moan escape her mouth, she caressed his chest with her fingertips.
‘Jesus, she feels so good,” he thought while his hips rubbed against hers perfectly, and yes he did realize how close they were to actually having sex. Of course he did, it was the only thing he was thinking about. It was painful to know how good she would feel dancing without her cloths, because without the clothes they would be right back at that night after the party. That night when she was drunk with alcohol and he was drunk from her.
Slowly, Liz let her hand go up his shoulders and let the unbutton shirt fall to the floor. She’d never seen any thing more masculine and gorgeous as this boy in front of her. He practically glowed in the purple lighting above. Deciding to be bold, she brought her lips to his chest and sucked a dark nipple into her mouth.
He hissed the words, “Fuck,” before grabbing her hips and pushing them straight in to the one thing that needed her attention, and it needed her desperately. Breathing increasing, Liz slipped her hand down his chest and ‘innocently’ grazed against his angry member. She reached over and squeezed his ass when he started sucking on her neck with passion.
They couldn’t get close enough to each other. Sweat glistened down their bodies as they kept grinding to the music. Pulling her hair roughly, he began sucking lower and lower on her body. She tasted so sweet like strawberries and whip cream. He was so addicted to her; he craved every inch of her body.
Grabbing on of her legs, he lifted it higher on his hip. She moaned at the sensual angle, and held onto his belt loops for balance. The way he was touching her felt so familiar, but she did know how that was possible. She couldn’t even remember the night they had…
“Baby your burning me alive,” he whispered into her ear. She looked into his eyes that could barely be seen from his wet bangs. He looked so delicious with his sweaty hair and body and he even tasted more delicious and that’s what she wanted to do. She wanted to taste his sweet lips. He must have seen it in her eyes, because he smiled that sweet and love sick smile that she’d only seen once. Where had she seen that smile before?
Before she claimed her lips, she snapped out of her trance when she heard a familiar song. It was Janet Jackson’s Son of a Bitch that blew through the speakers. ‘Oh my God… the elevator,’ she remembered. Images came into her head as the lyrics came into her ears.
Sharp shooter into breakin hearts
A baby gigolo - a sex pistol
Hollerin at everythin that walks
No substance just small talk
Max came to the party in the elevator. He had grabbed her and kissed her with such passion.
Know why you feelin on that girl's behind
You gotta sleezy one track mind
His kiss was so perfect, and then he had brought her to the car and then…
Working your work until you think you find
Who's goin home with you tonight
He took her home. They climbed into her room and then they… they made love. Oh God she remembered EVERYTHING.
Maxsgurl
anonymousarfan
obsession
g7silvers
icequeen
FSUMSW94
RASaero611
Behrsgirl1230
ILYMEFOREVER
Earth2Mama
loviedovie
stardreamer323
Michelle in Yonkers
Dreamer06
martine
Emz80m
Liz86000
NorafanofMaxandLiz
Topy458
hazz
Chapter 10- Cream
“Three days till the wedding Lizzie,” Tess singed while walking into the huge kitchen. Everyone else was in the dining room having breakfast. Liz smiled slightly at her sister, because she knew exactly what was coming next before she even spoke the words, “My lasts days before becoming Mrs. Tess Valinti. God, can you imagine settling down with one man for the rest of your life? I say we make the these last few days count.” Liz asked cautiously, “What exactly did you have in mind?” Tess’ face lit up before speaking again, “Well, since you asked…I think we should go clubbing tonight. What do you say?”
Liz was actually considering the thought. A night on the town sounded fun. Even the thought of dancing in a hot and steamy clubs had its appealing sides. “Alright but only on one condition. We bring Kyle and the guys along; I don’t think your husband would like it very much if you went to a club without him,” she insisted.
Tess corrected her immediately, “Future husband,” but after thinking about the situation for a moment longer she finally agreed with a sigh. Liz nodded her head with triumph and asked, “So where exactly are we going?”
“So what’s it called again?” Maria shouted from her closet as she threw basically all of her clothes on the floor. Liz shook her head and sighed before answering, “Cream.” Maria immediately turned around and asked, “Cream huh? That sounds promising,” she smiled wickedly before going back to the closet.
“Oh, Maria can I barrow some clothing. I didn’t really bring any of my clubbing clothes with me,” Liz asked although she already knew the answer. Maria was always packed for any occasion. If she had a winter coat and a ski mask in there, Liz still wouldn’t be surprised.
“Of course girly, we gotta make your hunny drool don’t we,” Maria winked before pulling out some really tinny outfits. Liz thought about Maria’s previous comment and smile at the thought. Yeah she was going to make Max drool all over himself when he’d see her.
“Girls get your asses down here or were going to leave with out them,” Alex yelled up the stairs. Max just smirked at him and waited patiently. He was use to waiting for women to get ready, and he pretty much knew that the longer you waited for a women to get ready the more beautiful she’s going to look.
Kyle, Alex, Jesse, and Max were all standing at the edge of the stairs before the beauties came waltzing down the stairs. They all look nice, but the one that caught Max’s attention was the small brunette. Her hair was down and crimped perfectly. He swallowed roughly when his eyes slid down her body. She was wearing rocker, black tight shirt that hung off the shoulders. Under the British flag that was on her shirt were the words spoiled on it. It looked as if it had been torn at the bottom in order to show her perfect stomach. Max groaned when he saw the sexy belly button piercing. The chain on her pleated denim skirt pulled off the final touch of a rocker chic look not to mention the black cross on her neck. God she almost looked like a schoolgirl gone bad.
Maria, who was just behind Liz, had an extremely tight white tank top on with some Pe Pe jeans accompanied by some big silver hoop earrings. Lonnie had a New York tank on and some extremely low baggy pants on, while Tess wore a black dress that was way to short to be worn on any one and even had a slit on the side that went hire.
One by one they went to the front door until it was just Liz and Max. Max couldn’t get over the way she looked, and Liz smiled wickedly and walked towards him until they were mere inches from one another. Feeling each others breath, Max was intoxicated with her. Just when he lent over to kiss her sweet lips, Liz walked past him. She not only brought her lips as close as possible without touching his while walking past but also brushed up against his straining member. It was almost painful the way she caressed it with her body while passing him slowly.
She just smiled knowingly again as she walked out of the door. Every move she did tonight would be on purpose. She was so tired of this cat and mouse game they constantly seemed to be playing. Max always seemed to be in so much control when he was with her …except for last night. She had momentarily seen his guard down completely, and she wanted it to come tumbling down tonight as well. Maybe, just maybe, she could get Max Evans to loose his facade. By the way he looked upon her, she was guessing it wasn’t going to be as hard as she thought it would be.
Well, this was it. They were now standing in front of club Cream. It was huge like a warehouse and the line went all the way down the block. Neon lights and half naked bodies could be seen inside from the windows. “Great, how the hell are we suppost to get into this place? It’s packed,” Lonnie asked as she eyed the crowd, but Tess and Kyle were already up at the front of the line laughing with the bouncer. Tess gestured for them to come over.
Tess introduced them to Brad the bouncer and explained, “Kyle use to be one of the waiters in here, so Brad here is going to let us in.”
As soon as they got in hot air hit their lungs. It smelled like sex and worse it even looked more like sex. Half the girls were basically wearing bras and mini skirts. As for the guy, most of them didn't have any shirts on what so ever. Everyone except Tess was feeling a little over dressed. Liz’s sister of coarse fit right in with the scene.
Kyle just laughed and yelled to them, “Don’t worry they gotta room where you can take a little more of your cloths off and not worry about them getting stolen. Come on.” They went through haft a crowd of bumping and grinding to get to a quiet room on the side. “Hang up your stuff in here, and then get your asses on the dance floor,” Kyle said with a pat on the back to Max before grabbing Tess’ hand and walking out.
“Dam Liz, Your brother in law knows some connections,” Maria whistled while taking of her coat. “No kidding,” Jessie laughed as he took off his shirt, “Any body know what exactly the dress code is in here?” he joked. Maria laughed lightly and said, “I think it’s ‘Less is more, but naked over rules all.’”
Max smiled as he unbuttoned his shirt, but didn’t take it off. Liz glanced over to the sight, but was caught in the act. He smiled wickedly with a cocky grin on his face. She just rolled her eyes and followed Maria out to get a drink at the massive bar.
Electric European music filled the room as hot-bodies grinded into complete strangers. Seduction was definitely in the air. “We’ll have a round of comfortable screw against a walls,” Kyle yelled to the bar tender. It took Liz to realize that that was actually a name of a drink. It was one of those places that had sexual names to different drinks.
After a few Grinding Showers and a couple of Soothing Orgasms, Maria and Liz were ready for some dancing. “ Maria wanna go on the dance floor?” Liz asked as she noticed Maria’s eyes light up. Maria shook her head in mischief and she pointed to a particular area.
When Liz saw what her friend was pointing to, she stood in amazement. There in front of them were six glass and glowing boxes with girls dancing in them. If you wanted to get the opposite sex’s attention, then that’s definitely where you would dance. Each box had a different theme to it. One had an army feel with its camouflage surroundings, the one under it had bars like a jail cell would. The other one on the outside had furs and animal skins hanging over the walls, and the room under it had a sink and bathroom in it. The one that caught both Maria and Liz’s attention however was the one in the middle and on the second floor. It had a business desk and chair in it and was much bigger than the rest. It sort of had a bad girl feeling to it with its leather armchair and wooden hard desk.
Before Liz could think Maria had already pulled her towards the six boxes. Three boxes were on top of the other three, so the girls had to walk up the stairs to get to the one they wanted. Of course some skanky, big-breasted girl was already there, but her best friend prevailed as always by knocking her on her ass. Maria may have been as small as Liz, but God help anyone who gets in her way.
“Come on Lizzie,” Maria said while pulling her into the glass box with her. Liz was a little bit hesitant but when she saw Max in a near by crowd she went along with it. Shaking her hips, Liz went along with the techno music. She couldn’t really get into it until she heard a familiar song blast from the speakers. It was Toni Braxton’s “Your Makin Me High” and it always made her feel sexy. Sometimes she’d even turn up the radio in her room and strip to it. So that’s exactly what she did, she pretended she was in her room listening to the song and doing her sexy dance to it.
Grinding her hips into the hard wood desk, Liz completely lost control and let go. She threw her head back in ecstasy and let her hands roam her body like a lover would. The cheers and catcalls only drove Liz and Maria on.
Maria lustfully sat on the desk with her legs spread wide for her best friend to dance between them. Liz slowly grinded her hips while slowly moving down Maria body. They only smiled when they heard more whistling and cheering coming from the crowd.
Liz was really getting into it until her eyes met lustful ones in the crowd. He was watching her intently. Not only was this an incredible turn on but also let Liz know her little plan was working. She decided to make him pay a little more by rapping her arm around Maria’s neck and slid further down. Thrusting her hips up, she finally let her knees hit the floor. Liz never once let her eyes roam away from his. She wanted him to know that this little dance was for him.
By the time the song was over, Max thought he’d explode from sexual frustration. What killed him the most was that she was watching him every second. The music must have covered half a dozen groans since she’d started her little dance tease. He felt like if he didn’t do something to her body, he’d die right then and there.
She smiled at him and almost gave a knowing grin before getting out of the box and walking towards him. He was standing at the bar playing a spectator, but when she walked up to him he couldn’t resist but do something.
Liz gasped when he took her by the hand and led them into the crowded dance floor. The temperature felt like a hundred and one in there when he brought her skin against his before grinding to the sexy music. Breath was no longer an option when he pushed his knee between her legs and pressed it against her core. Letting a moan escape her mouth, she caressed his chest with her fingertips.
‘Jesus, she feels so good,” he thought while his hips rubbed against hers perfectly, and yes he did realize how close they were to actually having sex. Of course he did, it was the only thing he was thinking about. It was painful to know how good she would feel dancing without her cloths, because without the clothes they would be right back at that night after the party. That night when she was drunk with alcohol and he was drunk from her.
Slowly, Liz let her hand go up his shoulders and let the unbutton shirt fall to the floor. She’d never seen any thing more masculine and gorgeous as this boy in front of her. He practically glowed in the purple lighting above. Deciding to be bold, she brought her lips to his chest and sucked a dark nipple into her mouth.
He hissed the words, “Fuck,” before grabbing her hips and pushing them straight in to the one thing that needed her attention, and it needed her desperately. Breathing increasing, Liz slipped her hand down his chest and ‘innocently’ grazed against his angry member. She reached over and squeezed his ass when he started sucking on her neck with passion.
They couldn’t get close enough to each other. Sweat glistened down their bodies as they kept grinding to the music. Pulling her hair roughly, he began sucking lower and lower on her body. She tasted so sweet like strawberries and whip cream. He was so addicted to her; he craved every inch of her body.
Grabbing on of her legs, he lifted it higher on his hip. She moaned at the sensual angle, and held onto his belt loops for balance. The way he was touching her felt so familiar, but she did know how that was possible. She couldn’t even remember the night they had…
“Baby your burning me alive,” he whispered into her ear. She looked into his eyes that could barely be seen from his wet bangs. He looked so delicious with his sweaty hair and body and he even tasted more delicious and that’s what she wanted to do. She wanted to taste his sweet lips. He must have seen it in her eyes, because he smiled that sweet and love sick smile that she’d only seen once. Where had she seen that smile before?
Before she claimed her lips, she snapped out of her trance when she heard a familiar song. It was Janet Jackson’s Son of a Bitch that blew through the speakers. ‘Oh my God… the elevator,’ she remembered. Images came into her head as the lyrics came into her ears.
Sharp shooter into breakin hearts
A baby gigolo - a sex pistol
Hollerin at everythin that walks
No substance just small talk
Max came to the party in the elevator. He had grabbed her and kissed her with such passion.
Know why you feelin on that girl's behind
You gotta sleezy one track mind
His kiss was so perfect, and then he had brought her to the car and then…
Working your work until you think you find
Who's goin home with you tonight
He took her home. They climbed into her room and then they… they made love. Oh God she remembered EVERYTHING.