Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 10:13 pm
Yay! It's fixed! Whoopie! *Does happy Dance*
Here's the next part, hope you like!! Thanks for the feedback!!! I really mean it!
Maxsgurl
Raychelxluscious
Topy458
taressa05
ShatteredDreamer
To_Kiss_A_Frog
RoswellRulz
Emz80m
Michelle
anonymousarfan
alienmom
linliz68
hazz
Lizza
confusedfool
Earth2Mama
cherie
roswellrox
Behrsgirl1230
Bixie
SmileeUk
<center>Part 10</center>
I sat on my bed, idly flipping through a magazine as the phone rang. After the 5th ring, I grunted in frustration and picked the phone off the hook, paused just long enough to hear the shrill voice on the other end, and then slammed it back down again. I sat in silence for about 10 minutes, until the phone started to ring again. This time I let it go to my answering machine.
“Hey, it’s Liz. I’m not here right now, so leave a message after the beep!”
“Liz! Pick up this phone right now!” Maria screeched. Then in a softer voice she said, “I’m really, really sorry, Lizzie. I just thought that maybe you needed a confidence booster! And I knew you’d never go out like that on your own, so I had to—”
I yanked the phone off the hook and held it to my ear. “A confidence booster? A CONFIDENCE BOOSTER?! You had no right Maria! I didn’t want to go out looking like that!!! It was MY CHOICE! You pretended to be late, knowing I’d help you, and forced me to go out in public with that little get-up—!”
“I’m sorry!” Maria said, sounding very upset. “But it worked didn’t it? You got to talk to Max didn’t you?” she asked, suddenly sounding smug.
“Only because I looked the way I did! Notice he wasn’t leaping to my side when I looked normal!” I shouted, though I didn’t fully believe it. I still remembered what he had started to say before Kyle had interrupted us.
‘But you don’t need—’
What would he have said if Kyle hadn't come? That I didn't need the clothes and make-up to look nice?
Maria huffed in frustration at the other end of the line, bringing me back to earth. “Why are you always so down on yourself? Why can’t you see what everyone else sees?”
I stayed silent, trying to think of a good comeback. When I couldn’t, I just said, “I have to go Maria. Talk to you later, ok?” I said, and then hung up without waiting for an answer.
<center> *******</center>
I walked nervously to my locker, not sure what to say to Maria. I didn’t know if we were friends again or not, but I figured I’d just let her take the lead. If she was nice, fine; if she wasn’t, who needs her anyway?
“Hey,” she said as I walked up. “You’ve got something on your locker.” she said, grinning. I looked over and was surprised to see a single, white rose.
“Who—?” I started to ask.
“No idea,” she interrupted. “It was there when I got here. I’m guessing that you have something inside there too.” she said, indicating to my locker.
I grabbed the rose and held it up to my nose, smelling it's sweet scent. Then I put the combination in for my locker, feeling slightly nervous, and opened it, not totally surprised to see a small piece of paper fall from it and flitter to the ground. I bent down to pick it up, Maria huffing impatiently beside me.
“What’s it say?” She asked eagerly, looking over my shoulder as I stood up. I unfolded the paper and read it.
Dear Liz
Hey, I saw you last night. You looked… very different from normal. Beautiful, but you didn’t need all that. You’re absolutely perfect just the way you are. I also noticed all of the guys staring at you; I can’t help but admit that I was a little jealous.
Anyway, hope you’re doing ok!
<center>Signed, Anonymous. </center>
“Awww,” Maria sighed. “he’s so sweet.”
“Yeah,” I admitted, “He really is.”
Maria laughed and sent me a teasing look. “You mean you’re actually admitting that he’s real?”
I glared at her. “I guess… But what if—” I was cut off by a loud voice calling my name.
“Liz! Hey, LIZ!!” A boy called, and I turned to see Alex’s cousin, Collin running toward me. I resisted an eye-roll with much difficulty. Alex and Maria always teased me about Collin being in love with me. Too bad he was a year younger than me, about a foot shorter (and I’m about 5 foot 2 inches at the most) and had braces and glasses.
“Hey Collin.” I said, trying to sound as if I was happy to see him.
“Hi!” He said excitedly. “How are you?”
“Oh...uh good. You?” I asked politely
“I’m great. I’ve been hanging out with Alex a lot. Oh, look, here he comes now!” He said, pointing enthusiastically over my shoulder. I turned and saw Alex’s lanky form walking toward us.
“Hey.” he said when he got there. He didn’t say anything about Collin, but I could see the humor in his eyes.
“Hey yourself, stranger.” I said, delighted to see him. “Haven’t seen you're face since you’ve became Isabel's partner.” I told him, a teasing note in my voice.
“Yeah, it’s coming along good. She’ll be eating out of the palm of my hand in no time.” Alex said, though there was a serious note in his voice. I knew that it went much deeper than that with Isabel. As if to prove the point, Isabel appeared at that very moment, her brother in tow.
“Hey, Alex.” she said, a slight blush on her cheeks.
“Hey,” he said in a mock casual voice. “How have you been?”
And just like that, they were in their own little world. They started to walk to class together, giving us only a vague goodbye.
“So, anyway—” Collin started, turning toward me, but Max interrupted him.
“Hey, Liz.” He said, his smile making my knees weak. Completely forgetting about Alex’s cousin, I turned to him.
“Hey,” I said shyly, smiling at him.
“So, Alex is a friend of yours?” he asked.
“Oh, yeah, practically since birth.” I replied. He opened his mouth to say something, but Collin butted in.
“He’s my cousin.” he said proudly, staring hard at Max. “So you’re my competitor, huh?” He asked. “You don’t look so tough. We shall see who wins the fair lady’s heart!”
At his words I blushed a deep crimson, wanting to bury my head in the sand. I looked over at Max to see how he was taking this, but he looked simply amused.
“I guess we will.” he replied smoothly. Collin sent him a comical looking glare and then stomped off, looking annoyed.
“Oh my gosh.” I muttered, utterly mortified. “Sorry about that he’s… absolutely crazy.”
Max raised his eyebrows in amusement. “He seems to like you.” he noted.
“Like I said, crazy.” I told him, smiling a little.
He looked at me seriously, a strange emotion in his eyes. “No it’s not.” he replied, almost inaudibly.
He wasn't saying what I think he was saying. “Excuse me?” I asked breathlessly.
“Liking you is definitely not crazy.” he told me, smiling one of those bone melting smiles.
“Uh… thanks.” I said shyly, tucking a strand of hair behind my ear.
He winked at me. “No problem. See you 'round, Parker.” he added as the bell rang and he headed off to class.
I slumped against my locker, a dazed expression on my face.
“Wow.” I murmured.
Here's the next part, hope you like!! Thanks for the feedback!!! I really mean it!
Maxsgurl
Raychelxluscious
Topy458
taressa05
ShatteredDreamer
To_Kiss_A_Frog
RoswellRulz
Emz80m
Michelle
anonymousarfan
alienmom
linliz68
hazz
Lizza
confusedfool
Earth2Mama
cherie
roswellrox
Behrsgirl1230
Bixie
SmileeUk
<center>Part 10</center>
I sat on my bed, idly flipping through a magazine as the phone rang. After the 5th ring, I grunted in frustration and picked the phone off the hook, paused just long enough to hear the shrill voice on the other end, and then slammed it back down again. I sat in silence for about 10 minutes, until the phone started to ring again. This time I let it go to my answering machine.
“Hey, it’s Liz. I’m not here right now, so leave a message after the beep!”
“Liz! Pick up this phone right now!” Maria screeched. Then in a softer voice she said, “I’m really, really sorry, Lizzie. I just thought that maybe you needed a confidence booster! And I knew you’d never go out like that on your own, so I had to—”
I yanked the phone off the hook and held it to my ear. “A confidence booster? A CONFIDENCE BOOSTER?! You had no right Maria! I didn’t want to go out looking like that!!! It was MY CHOICE! You pretended to be late, knowing I’d help you, and forced me to go out in public with that little get-up—!”
“I’m sorry!” Maria said, sounding very upset. “But it worked didn’t it? You got to talk to Max didn’t you?” she asked, suddenly sounding smug.
“Only because I looked the way I did! Notice he wasn’t leaping to my side when I looked normal!” I shouted, though I didn’t fully believe it. I still remembered what he had started to say before Kyle had interrupted us.
‘But you don’t need—’
What would he have said if Kyle hadn't come? That I didn't need the clothes and make-up to look nice?
Maria huffed in frustration at the other end of the line, bringing me back to earth. “Why are you always so down on yourself? Why can’t you see what everyone else sees?”
I stayed silent, trying to think of a good comeback. When I couldn’t, I just said, “I have to go Maria. Talk to you later, ok?” I said, and then hung up without waiting for an answer.
<center> *******</center>
I walked nervously to my locker, not sure what to say to Maria. I didn’t know if we were friends again or not, but I figured I’d just let her take the lead. If she was nice, fine; if she wasn’t, who needs her anyway?
“Hey,” she said as I walked up. “You’ve got something on your locker.” she said, grinning. I looked over and was surprised to see a single, white rose.
“Who—?” I started to ask.
“No idea,” she interrupted. “It was there when I got here. I’m guessing that you have something inside there too.” she said, indicating to my locker.
I grabbed the rose and held it up to my nose, smelling it's sweet scent. Then I put the combination in for my locker, feeling slightly nervous, and opened it, not totally surprised to see a small piece of paper fall from it and flitter to the ground. I bent down to pick it up, Maria huffing impatiently beside me.
“What’s it say?” She asked eagerly, looking over my shoulder as I stood up. I unfolded the paper and read it.
Dear Liz
Hey, I saw you last night. You looked… very different from normal. Beautiful, but you didn’t need all that. You’re absolutely perfect just the way you are. I also noticed all of the guys staring at you; I can’t help but admit that I was a little jealous.
Anyway, hope you’re doing ok!
<center>Signed, Anonymous. </center>
“Awww,” Maria sighed. “he’s so sweet.”
“Yeah,” I admitted, “He really is.”
Maria laughed and sent me a teasing look. “You mean you’re actually admitting that he’s real?”
I glared at her. “I guess… But what if—” I was cut off by a loud voice calling my name.
“Liz! Hey, LIZ!!” A boy called, and I turned to see Alex’s cousin, Collin running toward me. I resisted an eye-roll with much difficulty. Alex and Maria always teased me about Collin being in love with me. Too bad he was a year younger than me, about a foot shorter (and I’m about 5 foot 2 inches at the most) and had braces and glasses.
“Hey Collin.” I said, trying to sound as if I was happy to see him.
“Hi!” He said excitedly. “How are you?”
“Oh...uh good. You?” I asked politely
“I’m great. I’ve been hanging out with Alex a lot. Oh, look, here he comes now!” He said, pointing enthusiastically over my shoulder. I turned and saw Alex’s lanky form walking toward us.
“Hey.” he said when he got there. He didn’t say anything about Collin, but I could see the humor in his eyes.
“Hey yourself, stranger.” I said, delighted to see him. “Haven’t seen you're face since you’ve became Isabel's partner.” I told him, a teasing note in my voice.
“Yeah, it’s coming along good. She’ll be eating out of the palm of my hand in no time.” Alex said, though there was a serious note in his voice. I knew that it went much deeper than that with Isabel. As if to prove the point, Isabel appeared at that very moment, her brother in tow.
“Hey, Alex.” she said, a slight blush on her cheeks.
“Hey,” he said in a mock casual voice. “How have you been?”
And just like that, they were in their own little world. They started to walk to class together, giving us only a vague goodbye.
“So, anyway—” Collin started, turning toward me, but Max interrupted him.
“Hey, Liz.” He said, his smile making my knees weak. Completely forgetting about Alex’s cousin, I turned to him.
“Hey,” I said shyly, smiling at him.
“So, Alex is a friend of yours?” he asked.
“Oh, yeah, practically since birth.” I replied. He opened his mouth to say something, but Collin butted in.
“He’s my cousin.” he said proudly, staring hard at Max. “So you’re my competitor, huh?” He asked. “You don’t look so tough. We shall see who wins the fair lady’s heart!”
At his words I blushed a deep crimson, wanting to bury my head in the sand. I looked over at Max to see how he was taking this, but he looked simply amused.
“I guess we will.” he replied smoothly. Collin sent him a comical looking glare and then stomped off, looking annoyed.
“Oh my gosh.” I muttered, utterly mortified. “Sorry about that he’s… absolutely crazy.”
Max raised his eyebrows in amusement. “He seems to like you.” he noted.
“Like I said, crazy.” I told him, smiling a little.
He looked at me seriously, a strange emotion in his eyes. “No it’s not.” he replied, almost inaudibly.
He wasn't saying what I think he was saying. “Excuse me?” I asked breathlessly.
“Liking you is definitely not crazy.” he told me, smiling one of those bone melting smiles.
“Uh… thanks.” I said shyly, tucking a strand of hair behind my ear.
He winked at me. “No problem. See you 'round, Parker.” he added as the bell rang and he headed off to class.
I slumped against my locker, a dazed expression on my face.
“Wow.” I murmured.