Saving the World (AU, M/L, Adult) Pt 55 Complete 8/15
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Re: Saving the World (AU, M/L, Mature) Pt 26 7/16
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Natalie36 Yes bye Tess.
Carolyn I wouldn't worry to much about Tess. But that doesn't mean Liz is safe.
Part 26
Tess was working on her plan to get rid of Liz Parker when the door of her motel room blasted open. She looked over and saw Nicholas standing where the door once stood.
“Nicholas what do you want?” asked Tess nervously.
“Kivar sent me to take care of you.”
“What do you mean?”
“Your time is up. You get to die now. Oh and this time no one is going to bring you back to life.”
“Nicholas you don’t have to do this. If you let me live I can help you take over Antar from Kivar.”
“I don’t think so. I don’t want to rule I want to help Kivar.”
Tess tried to send a blast at Nicholas but he stopped her easily. Then he sent a blast that was ten times as powerful at her and hit her killing her instantly. He looked at what was left of her body and smiled. Then two of his men came in and picked up the burned body and they all when to see Kivar.
“Good work Nicholas. Now hopefully Lonnie and Rath will bring me Elizabeth and we can get those two waste of cells out of the way.” Said Kivar staring at Tess’s burned body.
“Sir what are you going to do with Liz Parker?”
“She will be my wife or she will die a slow and painful death after she gives me a child of course.”
“How are those two bone heads going to get close enough to grab her if she is never alone?”
“Well the thing is her friends can’t watch her all the time. Lonnie and Rath just have to wait until they leave her alone for even a couple of minutes and then make their move. I want the girl alive. I don’t care if they hurt her as long as they don’t kill her.”
“How long do they have to get her?”
“Two days. If they don’t bring me her by then they are dead. We no matter what they are going to die.”
Nicholas smiled he knew that Kivar would do what he said. He only wished that he had been the one chosen to bring the love of Max’s life to Kivar. But that wasn’t what his boss wanted right now. He knew that he would get his chance if Lonnie and Rath failed.
******
Lonnie watched as everyone climbed out of the cars after they drove in from the desert. She knew that Max was right about one thing. She sure as hell didn’t want to make Liz Parker mad. That girl has a lot of power in her.
“So when are we going to go after her?” asked Rath
“When she’s alone.”
“She ain’t never alone.”
“Oh she will be alone even if it’s only for a couple of minutes. Then we grab her and take her to Kivar.”
“She scares me a little. You saw what she did to those rocks out in the desert. Just think of what she will do to us.”
“Rath you are such a wimp. We knock her out and give her the drug that stuff that keeps her from using her powers. She don’t know what she is doing yet. So we can take her easy.”
“Hope that you are right.”
Lonnie and Rath watched the Crashdown they knew that it would be a waiting game. They would have to wait until the time was right. Then they would grab Liz Parker and take her to Kivar.
TBC
Natalie36 Yes bye Tess.
Carolyn I wouldn't worry to much about Tess. But that doesn't mean Liz is safe.
Part 26
Tess was working on her plan to get rid of Liz Parker when the door of her motel room blasted open. She looked over and saw Nicholas standing where the door once stood.
“Nicholas what do you want?” asked Tess nervously.
“Kivar sent me to take care of you.”
“What do you mean?”
“Your time is up. You get to die now. Oh and this time no one is going to bring you back to life.”
“Nicholas you don’t have to do this. If you let me live I can help you take over Antar from Kivar.”
“I don’t think so. I don’t want to rule I want to help Kivar.”
Tess tried to send a blast at Nicholas but he stopped her easily. Then he sent a blast that was ten times as powerful at her and hit her killing her instantly. He looked at what was left of her body and smiled. Then two of his men came in and picked up the burned body and they all when to see Kivar.
“Good work Nicholas. Now hopefully Lonnie and Rath will bring me Elizabeth and we can get those two waste of cells out of the way.” Said Kivar staring at Tess’s burned body.
“Sir what are you going to do with Liz Parker?”
“She will be my wife or she will die a slow and painful death after she gives me a child of course.”
“How are those two bone heads going to get close enough to grab her if she is never alone?”
“Well the thing is her friends can’t watch her all the time. Lonnie and Rath just have to wait until they leave her alone for even a couple of minutes and then make their move. I want the girl alive. I don’t care if they hurt her as long as they don’t kill her.”
“How long do they have to get her?”
“Two days. If they don’t bring me her by then they are dead. We no matter what they are going to die.”
Nicholas smiled he knew that Kivar would do what he said. He only wished that he had been the one chosen to bring the love of Max’s life to Kivar. But that wasn’t what his boss wanted right now. He knew that he would get his chance if Lonnie and Rath failed.
******
Lonnie watched as everyone climbed out of the cars after they drove in from the desert. She knew that Max was right about one thing. She sure as hell didn’t want to make Liz Parker mad. That girl has a lot of power in her.
“So when are we going to go after her?” asked Rath
“When she’s alone.”
“She ain’t never alone.”
“Oh she will be alone even if it’s only for a couple of minutes. Then we grab her and take her to Kivar.”
“She scares me a little. You saw what she did to those rocks out in the desert. Just think of what she will do to us.”
“Rath you are such a wimp. We knock her out and give her the drug that stuff that keeps her from using her powers. She don’t know what she is doing yet. So we can take her easy.”
“Hope that you are right.”
Lonnie and Rath watched the Crashdown they knew that it would be a waiting game. They would have to wait until the time was right. Then they would grab Liz Parker and take her to Kivar.
TBC
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Re: Saving the World (AU, M/L, Mature) Pt 26 7/16
Great Chapter!!!! Please please please please please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon? I can't wait to read what will happen next for Max and Liz. Good the witch Tess is dead. But oh no Nicholas and Kivar are on earth. Now that is major trouble for Max and Liz. I can't believe Kivar would force himself on Liz and marry her. I hope someone will kill Kivar and Nicholas, Lonnie and Rath. DEATH TO KIVAR, NICHOLAS, LONNIE and RATH!!!!! I'm really glad that Lonnie and Rath are very scared of Liz. I hope Liz will use her powers on Lonnie, Rath, Kivar and Nicholas and kill them. I hope no one will leave Liz alone. Will someone kill Kivar, Nicholas, Lonnie and Rath? Who will kill them? Will Kivar be able to take Liz? Will Kivar rape Liz? Will Kivar marry Liz against her will? Will someone be with Liz 24/7? Who is going to stay with Liz? Will Max, Serena, Jeff and friends save Liz? How will Max, Serena, Jeff and friends save Liz? Will Max, Serena, Jeff and friends go to Antar? Will Max stop Liz from getting raped? Will Max stop Liz from marrying Kivar? Will Max and Liz kiss? Will Max and Liz sleep together before Kivar gets Liz? Will Liz get pregnant? Will Max, Liz, Jeff, Serena and friends go back to earth? What will happen when Max, Liz, Jeff, Serena and friends get back to eart? Will Max, Liz, Jeff, Serena and friends live in peace? Will Max and Liz get married? Will all the couple get married? Will Max, Liz, Jeff, Serena and friends all have a long and happy life on earth? So sorry for the questions I was just wondering. Please please please please please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon? I can't wait to read what will happen next for Max, Liz and friends.
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Re: Saving the World (AU, M/L, Mature) Pt 26 7/16
Can't say I am sad that Tess's time was up.
But now I have to worry about Nicholas and Kivar, as well as Rath and Lonnie.
Will Liz ever have peace??
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But now I have to worry about Nicholas and Kivar, as well as Rath and Lonnie.
Will Liz ever have peace??
Thanks,
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Re: Saving the World (AU, M/L, Mature) Pt 26 7/16
Oh! Tess paid for all the bad actions she did! But Lonnie and Rath: In some way, they are stupid but it doesn't mean that they are not dangerous...
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Re: Saving the World (AU, M/L, Mature) Pt 26 7/16
L-J-L 76 Yes Kivar is on Earth. As for someone being with Liz 24/7 that might be hard.
Carolyn Tess is gone. But the bad guys are still around.
Eve Yes Lonnie and Rath are both stupid and dangerous.
Part 27
Liz sat in a booth with Serena and Max after the training in the desert. She was tired. It wasn’t easy learning to control her powers. She laid her head on Max’s shoulder.
“Liz are you ok?” asked Max
“Yeah. Just tired.” said Liz
“You will get use to your powers. I know that I have been pushing you. But the sooner that you learn to control the safer you will be.” said Serena
“I understand that Serena. I should have been working on them all these years. But it was dad’s choice to not to teach me to use my powers.”
“Don’t blame him too much Liz. He wanted you to have a normal life.” said Max
“Max I believe that you were the one to ask me once what was so great about normal.” said Liz
“Hate to say it but as Ava would say that is so cornball.” said Serena
“He was drunk at the time. He and Kyle Valenti got drunk and followed me on this stupid blind date that Maria set me up on threw a radio contest.”
“I know about that night. You ended running away from the DJ with that guy they set up you with.” said Serena
“How do you know about that?” asked Liz
“I heard it on the radio. I felt sorry for you. I hope that no one who calls themselves my friend would do that too me.” said Serena
“So Serena do you have a boyfriend?” asked Liz
“Not right now. There was this guy I was seeing but it didn’t work out.” said Serena
“I’m sorry maybe you can find someone soon.” said Liz
“Yeah well that’s the hard part. Finding someone that isn’t going to freak out that I am half alien.”
“There is someone out there that is right for you. We just have to find him.” said Liz
Well there is one guy I like but he is in love with someone else. I won’t be like Tess and try and come between them if they are really meant to be. I just won’t do it. Serena thought to herself.
Liz watched Serena she knew that she was thinking about something but didn’t know what. She was too tired to try and pick up on her sister’s thoughts. Not that she would have anyway. It wasn’t right.
TBC
Carolyn Tess is gone. But the bad guys are still around.
Eve Yes Lonnie and Rath are both stupid and dangerous.
Part 27
Liz sat in a booth with Serena and Max after the training in the desert. She was tired. It wasn’t easy learning to control her powers. She laid her head on Max’s shoulder.
“Liz are you ok?” asked Max
“Yeah. Just tired.” said Liz
“You will get use to your powers. I know that I have been pushing you. But the sooner that you learn to control the safer you will be.” said Serena
“I understand that Serena. I should have been working on them all these years. But it was dad’s choice to not to teach me to use my powers.”
“Don’t blame him too much Liz. He wanted you to have a normal life.” said Max
“Max I believe that you were the one to ask me once what was so great about normal.” said Liz
“Hate to say it but as Ava would say that is so cornball.” said Serena
“He was drunk at the time. He and Kyle Valenti got drunk and followed me on this stupid blind date that Maria set me up on threw a radio contest.”
“I know about that night. You ended running away from the DJ with that guy they set up you with.” said Serena
“How do you know about that?” asked Liz
“I heard it on the radio. I felt sorry for you. I hope that no one who calls themselves my friend would do that too me.” said Serena
“So Serena do you have a boyfriend?” asked Liz
“Not right now. There was this guy I was seeing but it didn’t work out.” said Serena
“I’m sorry maybe you can find someone soon.” said Liz
“Yeah well that’s the hard part. Finding someone that isn’t going to freak out that I am half alien.”
“There is someone out there that is right for you. We just have to find him.” said Liz
Well there is one guy I like but he is in love with someone else. I won’t be like Tess and try and come between them if they are really meant to be. I just won’t do it. Serena thought to herself.
Liz watched Serena she knew that she was thinking about something but didn’t know what. She was too tired to try and pick up on her sister’s thoughts. Not that she would have anyway. It wasn’t right.
TBC
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Great Chapter!!!! Please please please please please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon? I can't wait to read what will happen next for Max and Liz. I like the way Liz, Max and Serena can all sit together and try to have a normal time together. Poor Liz she has to practice her powers harder and it is making her tired.
Who does Serena like? Please tell me it is not Max?
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Who does Serena like? Please tell me it is not Max?
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Re: Saving the World (AU, M/L, Mature) Pt 27 7/17
And I guess the guy Serena likes is Kyle? Or am I wrong?
Anyway, waiting impatiently for more, thanks! EVE
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Re: Saving the World (AU, M/L, Mature) Pt 28 7/18
L-J-L 76 No Serena doesn't like Max as anything more then a friend.
Eve No it's not Kyle! The guy Serena likes is from before she came to Roswell.
Part 28
Lonnie and Rath watched the Crashdown Café. They knew that they would have to wait until everyone was asleep before they made their move. Not that it was going to be easy with others sleeping near Liz Parker. But they would get their job done and hand her over to Kivar.
“Lonnie I know that we have to do this. But we would have to be stupid to think that Kivar is going to let us walk away after giving him the girl.” said Rath
“I know but if we don’t we are dead as Tessie. I personally would rather not die.”
“Lonnie I get the feeling that he is going to kill us anyways.”
“Look dumb ass we are going to do the job we were sent to do. I don’t care what happens to you. I just want to go home.”
Just then they noticed that the last of the lights in the Crashdown and apartment above it when out. They slowly made their way into the alley and headed up the fire escape. They looked in Liz Parker’s room and saw her in bed with Ava asleep on the floor. They climbed in the window and Rath grabbed Liz putting a hand over her mouth so that she couldn’t scream. She tried fighting him but he was too strong. She tried to use her powers but couldn’t get them to work. So she did the only thing she could think of and screamed in the heads of Ava, Serena and her father as she was dragged out the window and down the fire escape. Rath threw her in the back of a car as Lonnie pulled away. She knew that she was in trouble when she saw who had her. But there was nothing that she could do to get away from them.
“Kivar is going to kill you.” said Liz
“Shut up Cornball we are just doing our job.” said Lonnie
“If you think that he is going to let you go home your crazy. He doesn’t care about you or anyone else. He wants Antar for himself.” said Liz
“Rath shut her up.” yelled Lonnie
Rath looked at Liz and placed a gag in her mouth. He knew that she was right. Hell she was the brains of the Roswell group. He knew that. But Lonnie was blinded by a promise that would never be full filled.
*******
Serena woke and ran into Liz’s room and found Ava had woken up as well.
“What happened?” asked Serena
“Lonnie and Rath took Liz.” said Ava
“This isn’t good.” said Serena
“No it isn’t. Kivar wanted Liz alive because when Max healed her he named her his Queen. Liz is the only person that can give birth to an heir that the granalith will except.” said Jeff walking into the room
“How do we find her dad?” asked Serena
“Isabel is going to have to dreamwalk her. Hopefully she will know where she is and we can go after her.” said Jeff
“I’m sorry I didn’t protect Liz.” said Ava
“It’s not your fault Ava. Liz is strong but I know that she can’t stop Kivar on her own. She is going to need everyone’s help to do it. We better call the others and get them over here.” said Jeff
Serena when to her room and grabbed her cell and started to make phone calls and prayed that her sister would be ok.
*****
Liz didn’t know when she had passed out but when she woke up she found that she was no longer in a car but locked in a room. It took her a minute to remember what had happened. Just then the door opened and a man walked in. Liz knew who he was before he even spoke.
“Kivar you’re not going to win.”
“Elizabeth I already have what I want. Well almost everything I want.”
“Max is going to stop you.”
“Max is a weak boy. I have the one thing that he cares the most about and I plan to keep it.”
Kivar walked over and sat next Liz and reached over to touch her. Liz pulled away but Kivar grabbed her.
“Not listen good bitch. You will give me an heir or I will start hunting down those weak human friends of yours and make sure that they die slow and painful deaths.”
“Go to hell.”
Kivar slapped her across the face and got up.
“I see that you need time to think about this. I will be back to check on you later. Sleep well Elizabeth.”
Kivar left the room and Liz started to cry. She didn’t know what she was going to do. She was scared and knew that Kivar would kill her friends if she didn’t get out of there soon.
TBC
Eve No it's not Kyle! The guy Serena likes is from before she came to Roswell.
Part 28
Lonnie and Rath watched the Crashdown Café. They knew that they would have to wait until everyone was asleep before they made their move. Not that it was going to be easy with others sleeping near Liz Parker. But they would get their job done and hand her over to Kivar.
“Lonnie I know that we have to do this. But we would have to be stupid to think that Kivar is going to let us walk away after giving him the girl.” said Rath
“I know but if we don’t we are dead as Tessie. I personally would rather not die.”
“Lonnie I get the feeling that he is going to kill us anyways.”
“Look dumb ass we are going to do the job we were sent to do. I don’t care what happens to you. I just want to go home.”
Just then they noticed that the last of the lights in the Crashdown and apartment above it when out. They slowly made their way into the alley and headed up the fire escape. They looked in Liz Parker’s room and saw her in bed with Ava asleep on the floor. They climbed in the window and Rath grabbed Liz putting a hand over her mouth so that she couldn’t scream. She tried fighting him but he was too strong. She tried to use her powers but couldn’t get them to work. So she did the only thing she could think of and screamed in the heads of Ava, Serena and her father as she was dragged out the window and down the fire escape. Rath threw her in the back of a car as Lonnie pulled away. She knew that she was in trouble when she saw who had her. But there was nothing that she could do to get away from them.
“Kivar is going to kill you.” said Liz
“Shut up Cornball we are just doing our job.” said Lonnie
“If you think that he is going to let you go home your crazy. He doesn’t care about you or anyone else. He wants Antar for himself.” said Liz
“Rath shut her up.” yelled Lonnie
Rath looked at Liz and placed a gag in her mouth. He knew that she was right. Hell she was the brains of the Roswell group. He knew that. But Lonnie was blinded by a promise that would never be full filled.
*******
Serena woke and ran into Liz’s room and found Ava had woken up as well.
“What happened?” asked Serena
“Lonnie and Rath took Liz.” said Ava
“This isn’t good.” said Serena
“No it isn’t. Kivar wanted Liz alive because when Max healed her he named her his Queen. Liz is the only person that can give birth to an heir that the granalith will except.” said Jeff walking into the room
“How do we find her dad?” asked Serena
“Isabel is going to have to dreamwalk her. Hopefully she will know where she is and we can go after her.” said Jeff
“I’m sorry I didn’t protect Liz.” said Ava
“It’s not your fault Ava. Liz is strong but I know that she can’t stop Kivar on her own. She is going to need everyone’s help to do it. We better call the others and get them over here.” said Jeff
Serena when to her room and grabbed her cell and started to make phone calls and prayed that her sister would be ok.
*****
Liz didn’t know when she had passed out but when she woke up she found that she was no longer in a car but locked in a room. It took her a minute to remember what had happened. Just then the door opened and a man walked in. Liz knew who he was before he even spoke.
“Kivar you’re not going to win.”
“Elizabeth I already have what I want. Well almost everything I want.”
“Max is going to stop you.”
“Max is a weak boy. I have the one thing that he cares the most about and I plan to keep it.”
Kivar walked over and sat next Liz and reached over to touch her. Liz pulled away but Kivar grabbed her.
“Not listen good bitch. You will give me an heir or I will start hunting down those weak human friends of yours and make sure that they die slow and painful deaths.”
“Go to hell.”
Kivar slapped her across the face and got up.
“I see that you need time to think about this. I will be back to check on you later. Sleep well Elizabeth.”
Kivar left the room and Liz started to cry. She didn’t know what she was going to do. She was scared and knew that Kivar would kill her friends if she didn’t get out of there soon.
TBC
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Re: Saving the World (AU, M/L, Mature) Pt 28 7/18
time for our group to pull together
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Re: Saving the World (AU, M/L, Mature) Pt 28 7/18
things are looking pretty helpless right now.....
where is Max when we need him??
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where is Max when we need him??
Thanks,
Carolyn