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Re: Lethal Whispers (ML, some MM, MATURE), Ch 27 6/8/15 p. 1

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Perkins caused lots of trouble for Max......but in the end it didn't do him any good. Some things work out well after all.
Poor Max......he hasn't seen the last of Tess yet.......or will he anytime soon.
I'm anxious for the next part.
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Great Chapter!!! Please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon? I can't wait to read what will happen next for Max and Liz. I really hate the games Tess is playing with Max, Isabel, Michael and Tess. I really hate David and the FBI agent. I wonder if Max, Isabel, Maria and Michael can keep themselves and Liz safe form David and the FBI. Will Max, Isabel, Michael and Maria meet Tess? Will Tess tell Max about her dreams? What will Max tell Tess? Will Max believe Tess? Will Tess mind wrap Max, Isabel, Michael and Maria? Will Max, Isabel, Michael and Maria be mean to Liz? Will Tess find out about Liz? What will Tess do when she finds out about Liz? Will Tess hurt Liz? Will Tess give Liz to the FBI? Will Max be able to keep Liz safe? Will Max and Liz fall for each other? Will Max and Liz admit there feelings? Will Liz help Max, Isabel, Michael and Maria? Will Max, Liz, Isabel, Michael and Maria run for the lives? Will Max, Liz, Isabel, Michael and Maria be safe? Will Max, Liz, Isabel, Michael and Maria be safe and have a happy lives together? Will the FBI find out about Liz? Will FBI take Liz? Will Max and Liz kiss? Sorry for the questions I was just wondering. Please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon? I can't wait to read what will happen next between Max and Liz.

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Never thought that Perkins would be so gullible! :shock:

What did he think, eh, that he raped a girl and that was it? and that even after informing the FBI for what he saw, they will let him leave likes nothing ever happen?! :shock: :twisted:

And Tess; wow... she will be even more a problem for the aliens, as she was on the show! :? :? :twisted:

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Chapter 28

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Roswelllostcause - Tess always wrecks everything… :| Thank you for the feedback!
Carolyn (keepsmiling7) - Yeah, Tess is (unfortunately) gonna stick around for a while. But at least they are rid of Perkins (or…?) Thank you for the feedback!
L-J-L 76 - I'll answer some of your questions; Tess probably won't try to mind warp any of the aliens again. Since she tried that on Max and he "felt her" inside his mind, she probably learnt her lesson… Thank you for the feedback!
Eve (begonia9508) - Well, I don't think Perkins is gullible per say. He's more arrogant and thinks he can (as the saying goes) get away with murder. He basically thinks he's God's gift to women - to humankind, really. Thank you for the feedback!
saori_1902 - Thank you!


Previously on "Lethal Whispers"
Liz was attacked by David Perkins (her creepy work colleague) on her way home from work. He abused and violated her, but Max came to her rescue before he raped her and possibly accidentally killed her. Max took Liz to his apartment and showed her his healing abilities.

A special agent from the FBI is on the aliens' trail, questioning David Perkins about the attack on Liz because he suspects that there were extraordinary circumstances to the case. Tess requested to speak to Max (and the group).


CHAPTER 28
Michael

Michael couldn’t believe Max had been so stupid.

Max was the most rational of the three so even if Michael had respected that Max really had wanted to save that girl, Michael had still believed that Max would see the reasonable solution to the problem and let nature run its course.

Well, at least he had believed that until Max had called him last night basically ordering him to hand over a guy to the police.

Now they were standing in Max’s apartment involved in what his girlfriend would call an ‘intervention’. Max had just returned from answering a knock at the door. Michael couldn’t care less about who it was as he momentarily was too caught up in his own anger and disappointment.

“You’ve put all of our lives in jeopardy,” Michael said before Max had completely returned to the living area of the apartment.

“Don’t be so dramatic,” Max sighed, taking a seat on the armrest of the chair where his sister was seated, looking worried. “I’ve only told her about me. You guys were never mentioned.”

“Jesus,” Michael exhaled, shaking his head in disbelief. “I can’t believe you’re being this stupid. From what I’ve found on this girl-“

Max frowned and interrupted, “You’ve researched her?”

Michael decided that Max questioning Michael’s obvious route to ensuring their survival was not deemed an answer right now and continued as if Max hadn’t spoken, “-she’s not the dullest crayon in the box. This girl is a fucking genius.”

Max got to his feet, looking angry. “Michael, you can’t just go around running background checks on-“

“I’m not finished, Maxwell,” Michael hissed.

“Yes, you are,” Max interrupted, his jaw muscles tightening.

“Can we please calm down?” Isabel suggested wearily. She was so tired of those two always fighting, engaging in something of an eternal pissing contest.

“She will figure it out!” Michael practically roared, ignoring Isabel alongside with Max. “If she hasn’t already. It won’t take her long to decipher your oh-so-difficult code.”

“Even if she does, she won’t tell,” Max said, his voice still not raised, but dangerous. Michael was actually instinctively made nervous by that voice as if some rational voice inside of him was telling him to yield. But his anger easily overrode that instinct.

Isabel jumped to her feet. “Shut up!”

Her order produced a moment of silence before Michael grumbled, “She’s a human being; she’ll mess up. Humans are not constructed to be able to hide these type of things.”

Michael earned an angry look from Isabel for breaking the silence, but the statement had already triggered Max. “She’s different.”

“Aren’t they all?” Michael said sarcastically.

“Maria’s been able to keep it a secret, hasn’t she?”

“Don’t drag me into this,” Maria said from the kitchen where she had been munching on popcorn, making herself a promise that she wouldn’t interfere with this intervention. This was an alien-matter.

“She’s human,” Max added as per clarification.

“I’ve noticed,” Michael said, the sarcasm showing again.

“As you pointed out yourself,” Max said, “Liz is smart. She is the most equipped at handling these type of situations.”

“Yeah, well. People become stupid when they’re scared.”

“Liz is not scared.”

Michael gave a humorless laugh. “You’re certain of that? You have no idea what goes on in that pretty little head of hers. Her natural instinct is probably telling her right now to go straight to the bluecoats and report what she’s seen.”

“Who would believe her?” Maria asked. “They’d probably just think she’s crazy.”

“With that background of intellect?” Michael questioned, shooting his girlfriend a disappointed look. Come on, Ria. I thought you were on my side here.

“There’s a fine line between genius and insa-“ Maria started, but Michael interrupted her.

“Oh come on, Maria! You know as well as I do that even if that information might be seen as ludicrous at the first stop, it’s too juicy to stay there. It will get around and eventually end up in the hands of someone that doesn’t find it so unbelievable.”

Michael surveyed the people in front of him, apparently the people that mattered the most to his existence. “Am I the only one seeing the facts here? You need to pull off those fucking pink glasses and smell the fucking disaster here! Because of you,” he pointed at Max, who was looking at him in an enervating calm manner, “we have to leave this place. Probably change identiti-“

“Oh, come on,” Isabel sighed.

Michael was appalled with this whole situation. “Why are you not taking this seriously?”

“Because I know Liz,” Isabel answered. “She seems like a person that could handle this.”

Michael felt the air go out of him and turned his back on the group of traitors. He always feared that they would side with perfect Max, but never on a matter like this. Never when it came to their survival.

“Michael, we understand your concern,” Max started and Michael cringed at that condescending tone. “But how about meeting Liz first, before you jump to conclusions?”

“It won’t make a difference,” Michael said under his breath.

Maria stepped up to him (Damn) and Michael knew he was in for a losing battle. She put her hand on his arm and he could feel her calm gaze on the side of his face. “One chance, Michael. Give it one chance. Then I’ll leave with you if that’s still what you want to do.”

He looked at her and read the sincerity on her face. “Just one,” he mumbled, hating to give in. Hating the feeling of having lost. He had never been a gracious loser.

“Yeah,” Maria nodded.

“This might not be the right time to tell you guys this,” Max said and Michael felt the almost erased anger start up again. Now what?

He turned around so that he could see the group again. Max looked him straight in the eye, knowing that it was best to get Michael to agree on this matter.

“This woman by the name of Tess Ha-“

Isabel looked up at her brother with genuine surprise and interrupted, “Tess?”

Michael leaned back against the wall. Here we go. Next fucking problem on the list. “What is this? National Ruining Michael’s Life Day?”

“So what she said was true then? You know her?” Max asked.

“I know of her,” Michael corrected. “But your dear sister over there is very chummy with her.”

Isabel had the grace of looking ashamed as Max looked down at his older sister wearing a mask of mixed emotions.

“She’s nice,” Isabel said in defense.

“She’s not to be trusted,” Michael amended.

Max surprised Michael by agreeing. “I got that feeling too.”

“So what did she do?” Michael tried to hide his curiosity. What had Tess done to earn such a response from Max?

“She tried to see into my mind,” Max stated matter-of-factly.

Isabel whipped her head to her brother, startled. “She what?

But Michael wasn’t surprised. No wonder he’d never trusted her. She was like them. “She’s alien?”

“Appears so,” Max said.

“She’s never tried anything like that on me,” Isabel said, looking confused.

Probably trying to make sense of this different picture of her friend, Michael thought bitterly.

“At least not to your knowledge,” Michael said out loud which had Isabel look terrified.

“No,” Max shook his head, “No. I don’t think she can do that to us without our knowledge. She can probably do it to humans, because she seemed very surprised when I kicked her out. But I’m pretty sure we would all be able to feel her. It was like… like something was gnawing on my brain.”

“Hard to miss…” Michael mumbled.

“So what…?” Isabel breathed. “So what does she want?”

“She wants to talk to us. Probably about what we know. Well, she mostly wanted to talk to me, but I didn’t want you to be excluded.”

Michael shot him a look. So now we are welcomed back into the decision making process, Max?

“Thanks for thinking of us,” Michael responded acidly.

“When?” Isabel asked.

“On Monday.”

Michael nodded. “Works for me. Let’s see what that little manipulator knows.”

He was actually quite excited about the prospect. He had a feeling they might not get too much out of the girl (it probably went against her nature to be into sharing), but it might shine some light on what the hell they were doing on this planet.

“Okay, I’ve had enough of this shit,” Michael announced and headed for the front door. “Set up a meeting with that girlfriend of yours as well, Maxwell, and let me know.”

“Michael…” Max warned.

But Michael had already left the apartment.
*****
Liz

It was surprising how many of the employees of Elkus Manfredi Architects that were not surprised, particularly amongst the female workers, to hear about Liz’s ‘misfortunate run in with David Perkins after hours. Several employees approached Liz during her first day back to express their commiseration and occasionally adding their less flattering description of that ex-colleague of theirs. Some even seemed relieved (possibly themselves having been at the receiving end of David’s charms) and Liz’s boss came to personally apologize for Mr. Perkins actions.

If Liz had been even a minuscule amount nervous about that first day back at work after a week of recuperation at home, it was completely evaporated at the supportive treatment she got at her workplace. It further enhanced the feeling that she had picked the right place of employment after all, even though it had put her straight in the way of David.

But that good feeling wasn’t going to last. As she made her way towards the door to her office, her employer had just finished their conversation with “I’m arranging for your next colleague to be a woman” called out to her, “Oh, and Ms. Parker, there’s an FBI-agent in your office. He has some questions about the incident.”

Liz froze and her heart plummeted straight through her body to land with a hard echo in her feet. Normally, seeing an agent from the Bureau wouldn’t be such a big deal, considering that she had always been a good law-abiding citizen.

But as of a week ago, she now carried a large federally significant secret that had changed her from being a normal somewhat naïve thinker into one of the most elaborate believer of political conspiracies. Hence, her first thought after Mr. Smith’s announcement was; Why is the Federal Bureau of Investigation interested in a regular case of sexual abuse?

She swallowed, tried to compose herself and calm her nervously fluttering heart, before she opened the door to her office.

TBC...
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Great Chapter!!!! Please please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon? I can't wait to read what will happen next for Max and Liz. Wow I'm glad Max is being protective of Liz. I'm not surprised that Max didn't tell Liz about Isabel, Michael. But I can understand that he wanted to keep them out of it. I think Michael is weird. I think Michael should trust Max about something's. I'm glad that Max told Isabel, Michael and Maria about Tess. And I'm glad that Max wants Michael to meet Liz. I think Michael will probably scare Liz. Oh no the FBI wants to talk to Liz. I can understand her being scared. I think Liz will keep Max's secret. What do the FBI want with Liz? Will they scare Liz? Will Liz be scared of them? Will Liz keep Max's secret? What will Liz do after talking to the FBI? Will Liz go and find Max? Will Liz tell Max what the FBI want? What will Max do when he finds out? Will Max find out about the FBI talking to Liz? What will Max do when he finds out? Will Max talk to Liz? What will happen when Max and Liz are face to face? Will Liz find out about Michael and Isabel? What will Liz do when she finds out? Will Liz protect Max, Isabel, Michael and Maria? Will Max, Isabel and Michael believe Liz? What will happen when Max, Isabel, Michael and Maria meet Tess? Will Tess tell them what she knows? Will Tess tell Max that she is his wife? What will Max do when he finds out Tess was his wife? What will Michael and Isabel do when they find out everything? Will Max and Liz talk? Will Max and Liz get to know each other? Will Max and Liz kiss? Will Max and Liz sleep together? Will Max and Liz admit their feelings? Will Max be able to protect Liz from danger? Will Max heal Liz? Will Liz get hurt? Will Max and Liz have a happy ending together? Sorry for all the questions I was just wondering. Please please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon? I can't wait to read what will happen next for Max and Liz.

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Michael really needs to take a chill pill! Liz isn't going to say anything to put them in danger. But he is right about the little blond tramp! She is dangerous and can't be trusted as far as Max can throw her!
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I can not blame Michael .. but Liz would never betray them.
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Great part! And I am not afraid for Liz! She won't tell because Max saved her and she knew him since a long time now, and she can always says she doesn't really remember what's happened, as she was unconscious!

And Michael! In some way, I understand his fears; imagine to be the only human on an alien planet; you would try to be as unobservable as possible!

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fbi already. damn :shock:
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