You're Beautiful (UC, Z/L, Adult) [COMPLETE]

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You're Beautiful (UC, Z/L, Adult) [COMPLETE]

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Title: You're Beautiful
Author: Zanssoulmate08
Rating: Adult
Disclaimer: I don't own didley squat. The song "You're Beautiful" is by James Blunt
Summary: Liz and Zan meet on the subway.
A/N: This is yet another story in my series of many one-parters, and my first attempt at Zan and Liz. Please let me know what y'all think! :mrgreen: Okay...due to popular demand :D ... here's the sequel. It's called: Fever.


This day couldn't possibly get more fucked up. My dealer didn't have the stash that I'd asked for this morning, and my high is seriously wearing off. Ever since the others betrayed me three years ago, leaving me for dead, I've been taking all the drugs that I can get my hands on. Anything to numb the pain...


My life is brilliant


Some lady walks by me. Her purse is an easy target, and I snatch her wallet. I rifle through the cash, pull out money for the subway, and smile at the guard who told me just yesterday that he'd bring me in if i snuck on the subway one more time.


My life is brilliant.
My love is pure.
I saw an angel.
Of that I'm sure.
She smiled at me on the subway.
She was with another man.
But I won't lose no sleep on that,
'Cause I've got a plan.



I sat down in my seat, and my eyes widen when I see my dupe, Max Evans sitting across form me and wearing an NYU sweatshirt. He's sleeping, and the girl sitting beside him his reading a book. She's gorgous, with long brown hair and big doe eyes, not my usual type, but DAMN! Her eyes register no shock when she glances up at me and she smiles slowly.


You're beautiful. You're beautiful.
You're beautiful, it's true.
I saw your face in a crowded place,
And I don't know what to do,
'Cause Ill never be with you.



I open my mind to her, suprised at how easy the connection formed.

"What's up Angel?" I whisper in her mind.

"You're Zan, aren't you?" She asks.

"Da one and only. You wit Maxie boy ova there?"

She gives Evans a cursary glance then laughs softly in my mind, "All things are subject to change."

I send her a mental vision, me pounding roughly into her tight little body, her moaning in ecstasy. "Ya like that Angel?"

"Yessssssssssss." She hissed.

The subway came to an abrupt stop and Evans wakes up, giving my Angel a sweet smile and kissing her gently.


Yeah, she caught my eye,
As I walked on by.
She could see from my face that I was,
fucking high,
And I don't think that I'll see her again,
But we shared a moment that will last till the end.



I stood up, seeing as how this was my stop after all. Max didn't see me, but my Angel did.

"Don't leave." she pleaded, her voice cracking along with my heart.

"I gotta, Angel, you's don't belong ta me."


You're beautiful. You're beautiful.
You're beautiful it's true
I saw your face in a crowded place,
And I don't know what to do,
I will never be with you.



A lone tear ran down her cheek as I stepped off the subway, feeling like the world's biggest jackass.


There must be an angel, with a smile on her face,
when she thought up that I should be with you



Evans remained blissfully unaware and I sent my Angel a quick smile, before walking from her life.


But it's time to face the truth,
I will never be with you.




Soooooo... wadaya think? Is it any good? :?:




Here's the links to my other one parters:

Two Out of Three:
http://www.roswellfanatics.net/viewtopic.php?t=13008

Who's to Say?
http://www.roswellfanatics.net/viewtopi ... light=whos

My WIP story: Always and Forever:
http://www.roswellfanatics.net/viewtopic.php?t=11779

And my RPG: War and Seduction:
http://www.roswellfanatics.net/viewtopic.php?t=12782
Last edited by Zanssoulmate08 on Sun May 21, 2006 12:25 am, edited 6 times in total.
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Once upon a time in a faraway kingdom,
Man made up a story, said that I should believe him.
Go and tell your white knight that he’s handsome in hindsight,
But I don’t want the next best thing.
So I sing, I hold my head down, and I break these walls ’round me.
Can’t take no more of your fairytale love.
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Post by Zanssoulmate08 »

I'm sure y'all have given up hope on me but...I'm back! :D I've decided to make this into a series of one parters (think "A Night On Tha Balcony") and the next one will be called "Fever" and as a little preview, since I love y'all so much :D , I'm posting the lyrics that it's inspired by:



Never know how much I love you, you never know how much I care
When you put your arms around me, I get a feeling that I just can't bear
You give me fever, when you kiss me, fever when you hold me tight
Fever in the morning, fever all through the night.

Bless my soul I love you, take this heart away
Take these arms I never use them
And just believe what my lips have to say
You give me fever, when you kiss me, fever when you hold me tight
Fever in the morning, fever all through the night

Listen to me baby, hear every word I say
No one can love you the way I do
Because they don't know how to love you my way
You give me fever, when you kiss me, fever when you hold me tight
Fever in the morning, fever all through the night

The sun lights up the daytime, the moon lights up at night
My eyes light up when you call my name,
Because I know you're gonna treat me right
You give me fever, when you kiss me, fever when you hold me tight
Fever in the morning, fever all through the night.
You give me fever, you give me fever, oh yeah,
Fever all through the night


The song's by Eva Cassidy and it should be up within the next week or two and will be followed by "Just Friends".

-Sarah
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Once upon a time in a faraway kingdom,
Man made up a story, said that I should believe him.
Go and tell your white knight that he’s handsome in hindsight,
But I don’t want the next best thing.
So I sing, I hold my head down, and I break these walls ’round me.
Can’t take no more of your fairytale love.
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Post by Zanssoulmate08 »

In case y'all haven't seen it...here's the link to Fever.

Enjoy! :D

-Sarah
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Once upon a time in a faraway kingdom,
Man made up a story, said that I should believe him.
Go and tell your white knight that he’s handsome in hindsight,
But I don’t want the next best thing.
So I sing, I hold my head down, and I break these walls ’round me.
Can’t take no more of your fairytale love.
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