Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 66 edited + Part 67 1/9/25 (WIP)

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behrinthecity
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Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 66 7/15 (WIP)

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dreamon wrote: Sat Oct 05, 2024 3:11 pm Hey there! I guess I forgot to leave feedback for the last part for some reason. Anyway, I’m still reading and enjoying and looking forward to more lol
Thank you for your check ins and comments. I hope you continue to enjoy!

Yeah typing this story out on the phone. Been using the Microsoft app to keep writing. Though slow at least I did get some progress done.
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Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 66 edited + Part 67 1/9/25 (WIP)

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It was nice to see Diana notice the effect Liz had on Max. He needs everyone right now to feel better, but I think Liz is going to be the key to his recovery.
I never thought about the fact that their power could help them dry their hair! I have long thick dyed hair, I would really LOVE to have this power so that my hair wouldn't take me so long to dry, haha!

That was a lovely chapter! :)
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Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 66 edited + Part 67 1/9/25 (WIP)

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Stefuh- Thank you so much for your wonderful and fast review!

I remember Isabel changing her hairstyle after a shower and that the new hairstyle looked ready and perfect with the hair no longer damp. Plus, she's cleaned spills on clothes too. But my main inspiration was making a more intimate version of the hair thing scene from the Pilot. :wink:

I agree with you, especially in the winter time, that power would be very handy.

Thank you for commenting on Diane's thoughts. You are right about it being a team effort but Liz being the key.
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