xmag, I think 2005... I remember thinking 2011 was so far in the future to be placing the "present" of the story there, but yeah
Well, here we go! From now on, all chapters will be in the present.
Part 27: Point of Reunion
November 2nd, 2011 - New York
1 : Dave
The first servers finally came back online after a tense hour of multiple intents and remote calls, though Dave was far from getting his network back. By his side, Daniel smirked as he wrote one last line of code.
“Told ya’ we could do it.”
“We’re barely starting…” Dave said, his mind looking for the pieces he needed to put the puzzle together: Where was the Unit, where was Van, where was Max.
The Network Keepers in Europe and South Asia were already connected and working together to get things back, but it would take days if not weeks or months to get everything up and running. Bringing his Network down was a small price to pay for Earth’s safety, though. It was slow work from Antar’s hidden headquarters, but at least the internet was secured, and the computer was decent enough.
“Oh, this is interesting,” Daniel said as he stared at a secondary monitor. Security footage from the outside showed up. The first thing Daniel always did was hack the security systems so he couldn’t be surprised the same way Dave had surprised him years ago. “It looks like Michael is here. With Ray in tow, rah-rah…”
Dave looked at the monitor, “And Luke is also in tow, rah-rah…” Van’s second in command was hostile on a good day, and this was most definitely not a good day.
He went back to his own monitor and keyboard and resumed what he’d been doing for the past twenty minutes.
“What are you looking for?” Daniel asked, frowning.
“We were tracked through the Network. I have to make sure we’re not being targeted anymore.”
“Uh…” Daniel said, frowning deeper. “Your people don’t know they have to get rid of their phones at the first sign of trouble?”
“Hmm…” was all Dave responded. Ordinary people? Sure. Max and his merry band? Not exactly. Dave wouldn’t risk losing contact with Max, especially not when Van was coming to speak with him. They hadn’t been instructed to lose them, so chances were they hadn’t.
But if McKay tracked them down, I can track them down as well, Dave thought, looking for a way to verify if they were trackable or not.
A knock barely sounded on the door before Ray came in.
“You’re the first bit of good news I’ve had in the last couple of hours,” Ray said as Dave looked up. Then Ray looked at Daniel and his face went from confused, to suspicious, to downright anger. “You! It was you in the middle of this whole mess!”
“Ray—” Dave warned, aware that one of the shifters was watching them by the door. He couldn’t afford the Rebellion executing Daniel here, at least not yet.
“Don’t protect him! Stop falling for his antics!”
“Ray. Not now.”
“Then when?”
“Whoa, there, I’m just trying to help here. I even rescued Dave earlier today!” Daniel innocently said, and then was utterly silenced by both Dave’s and Ray’s glares.
“Later,” Dave answered with a pointed look at Ray. “We need to find Zan and Van, and Daniel can help to speed that up by tenfold. So, later.”
Ray sighed for patience but nodded twice. “We were being tracked by the phones. Luke told us you had left a backdoor so they could trace Max. It was only a matter of finding the right hacker for the Unit to find their way in, so things clicked in place. We got rid of our phones then. I don’t know about the others.”
“I’m trying to see if there’s any tracking I can do on my own. Daniel is trying to see if the Unit has captured anyone today besides me. He’s been leaving backdoors of his own on their software.”
Daniel studiously continued typing. It was finally dawning on him that the trouble he’d made—that the consequences to his actions—were about to catch up with him.
“What is this thing I’m hearing about Isabel being arrested?” Ray asked.
“Antar politics transcend lifetimes, apparently,” Dave said. On the second monitor, Daniel changed the outside cameras to the inner cameras. Michael was talking with Isabel while Jesse paced. They couldn’t hear them, but it wasn’t looking promising.
“Tell me about it. Luke was explaining to Michael—I mean, the General—about what happened on Antar in the last seventy years, with an emphasis on the last eleven. What are we even doing here?” Ray rhetorically asked.
“We’re helping the Rebellion gaining their rightful leader—and in the process we’re hoping they leave Earth alone.”
“You’re selling Max out?” Ray asked, looking incredulous.
“I’m bringing Max to the table. Whatever he decides it’s up to him,” Dave said, his coding forgotten. He couldn’t look at Ray, though.
“Since when are you working with them?” Ray whispered, aghast.
“Since the beginning, Ray. You teaching them was a big reason why the Rebellion let me keep them under my wing.”
“You—” used me? Ray tried to say, the words clearly written on his face if not spoken out loud.
“Van wanted to wipe out the entire human race for crimes against the crown. What was I supposed to do?” Dave whispered back, angry now. Jake had been so mad at him when he’d found out what the offer had really been about, and now Ray was too, as if Dave had taken all these decisions lightly. As if the fate of the Earth was some random game he’d picked years ago on a whim.
“And you didn’t tell anyone, did you?” Ray said, now looking hurt if resigned.
“I couldn’t. It was part of the deal.”
“What else are you hiding from them?”
Years of calls with Langley and logistics with the Antarian shapeshifters flashed in Dave’s mind. A lot was not really what Ray needed to hear right now.
“Listen, I will explain, I will, but we have bigger problems now. I need your help or we won’t make it out alive, do you understand? This day was supposed to go smoothly yet suddenly it all went to hell—” they both glanced at Daniel and then kept talking, “—so we need to get everyone to safety once more.”
“Oh…” Daniel said from his quiet corner, “looks like they heard you.”
Frowning, both Dave and Ray turned to look at the main monitor as Daniel switched the image once more to the outside: Liz, Maria, and Kyle were visibly walking towards the front door.
“Is that Max?” Daniel asked, hopeful.
“That’s not His Majesty,” the shapeshifter who had guided Ray here said, making all three of them jump. “That’s Jade, the Queen’s guard. He must have taken Zan’s form for a good reason.”
“Or maybe he’s actually Max,” Daniel insisted.
“He would never walk so detached from his wife,” Finn pointed out. The Max on the screen walked a bit faster and reached the warehouse door first. He opened it for the others and looked around, clearly looking for hidden trouble. He didn’t look at Liz once.
“You’re good,” Ray said with approval.
On Daniel’s corner, a warning beeped on the smaller monitor. The hacker cursed. “We have a beacon.”
“What are you talking about?” Dave asked, now looking at whatever warning was on Daniel’s computer.
“Someone’s tracking us here.”
“Impossible,” Finn said.
“They used the phones, didn’t they?” Daniel asked, turning to look at Dave as he started typing, looking for the tracking source.
“Michael destroyed ours,” Ray said, “maybe Liz, Kyle, and Maria still have theirs?”
Dave’s fingers flew over the keys as he searched for the beacon in the hopes of redirecting it somewhere, anywhere else but there. For how long have they known we’re here?
“Wait,” Dave said, stopping on his mental tracks, “What did you do with Isabel’s and Jesse’s phones?” he asked the shifter. The four of them looked at each other for a second, and then the shifter ran out of the room.
“We found the beacon…” Daniel muttered as he and Dave went back to their keyboards and codes. They had to redirect that beacon—or it would be only a matter of time before the Unit landed on them.
2 : Maria
The corridors of this place were amazingly long, she decided, as she took another turn left. She knew where exactly Michael was, to the point their escort was visibly rattled.
“How do you know the way?” Lance asked as Maria waited for him to open yet another closed door.
“The same way you feel a train coming: the vibration is impossible to ignore.”
“The General vibrates?”
Both Kyle and Liz swallowed their laughter as Maria threw daggers at the shifter. “You have no idea. Can you just hurry up? It feels as if—”
“—I’m going to explode something,” Michael finished for her as the doors opened, and he was right there, in front of her.
“Micha—”
She didn’t get to finish. He swooped her up and crash-kissed her as if his life depended on it. The lights flickered as she grabbed his jacket to be as close to him as humanly possible while still clothed. They came for air for a second, and she kissed him back as fiercely after that.
The light closest to them burst out in a spectacular shower of sparks, but they didn’t care. Although there were no real words exchanged through their connection, he kept asking her if she was all right, and she kept asking him if he was really there.
“What are we up against?” Maria finally asked, breathless and worried and ready to do something. He was still holding her head in his hands, almost touching their foreheads.
“One hell of a mess,” he answered, equally breathless. He looked past her to Liz. “Max is getting closer.”
“Yeah, but he’s not…right.” Liz said, biting her lip.
“Van’s still missing. And Isabel is jailed,” Michael added, kissing Maria one more time before separating.
“So, what do we do first?” Maria asked, glancing at the burnt light in the ceiling with mild interest.
“We regroup—and then we get some answers. Dave’s here, and the Rebels are here. It’s time we learn what the hell is going on.”
3 : Max
He’d been dreaming about Antar again. About loud sounds and screams. About adrenaline running through icy veins as he realized the Palace had been breached.
They were coming for him.
“Are you all right?” Violet asked from the front seat, worried eyes searching his face for signs of something she could fix.
Max blinked, trying to reacquaint himself to his present life on his present planet. His head felt heavy for a moment. “How long was I out?”
“Um…about fifteen minutes, tops?” she said, unsure. They were parked somewhere dark on the outskirts of New York City. He could see the lights of the bridge they had crossed while he was having a blast from the past.
“Where’s Ash?” he asked. Shade would be invisibly watching over him, never leaving his side.
“We’re close to headquarters. He’s just making sure the coast is clear.” She looked outside, tense. “This day has been so full of surprises; we’re not leaving anything to chance.”
For a moment, something tingled on his chest—and then jolted his heart. Max literally bounced against the seat, clutching his chest.
“Max!” Violet shouted, while Shade shifted right beside him, ready to defend.
“I’m—I’m okay,” Max said through clutched teeth. “Liz is really close,” he said, apologetic. “We’ve just…reconnected, I guess.”
The two shifters looked at him for a moment, and then let a long sigh out. When the door suddenly opened a moment later, they were ready to jump Ash.
“We’re good to go—what?”
Three pairs of jittery eyes met him in contempt.
“I just need this day to end,” Violet muttered, turning the car on. She only drove for a couple of minutes until an abandoned warehouse came by. All shifters vanished as Max opened the door, making sure the perimeter was secured.
Out of habit, Max counted his resources at hand: he had about three hundred dollars, and he could be back in New York in about an hour. He had no phone, no way to contact back-up, and was walking into unknown territory. On the bright side, everyone he cared about was—down?—there. He bet there was a basement somewhere.
Liz was the easiest to find, but both Michael and Isabel were there, too. If everything had worked out, then their entire group would be here.
Violet and Ash reformed, both bowing. “Welcome to Antarian soil, Your Majesty,” Violet said with a small smile, as if this were an embassy of sorts.
Max hesitated. He was entering what little Antarians could claim here not as Max Evans, but as Zan, their king. For all the memories he had, for all the lessons he’d learned, once he stepped into that warehouse, there was no going back.
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Oh, ouah, an update! I'm so going to reread the last part once it's complete. I remember more the first part, and a bit less the second but the third story is so action packed that it's hard to remember after all those years.
Still, I remember what matters. Van. Daniel. The guards. Isabel's arrest.
So... Dave was working with Van who wanted to eradicate humanity. I guess he didn't have a choice, then. Now our roswellians are regrouping. It's the final countdown. It's about time.
Great MM reunion. Next is probably Max and Liz? And there's still the Isabel problem.
Still, I remember what matters. Van. Daniel. The guards. Isabel's arrest.
So... Dave was working with Van who wanted to eradicate humanity. I guess he didn't have a choice, then. Now our roswellians are regrouping. It's the final countdown. It's about time.
Great MM reunion. Next is probably Max and Liz? And there's still the Isabel problem.
Re: The Rebel *Sequel* (CC ALL, YTEEN) Ch. 27 - pg. 20 - 11 / 1 / 24
YAY!!!!!!!
I'm soooo excited, I'm gonna start over from the first story. I really love this series and I'm very happy you can continue it.
I dont mind only getting the "present" chapters, I just want to know how it ends.
You just made my day
I'm soooo excited, I'm gonna start over from the first story. I really love this series and I'm very happy you can continue it.
I dont mind only getting the "present" chapters, I just want to know how it ends.
You just made my day
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Well, I told you I had two chapters ready to go, so here's the next one. I'll be writing the ending for Nanowrimo so I might take a few more days to post the next chapters. I have scattered scenes for the next four chapters or so that need to be put in order and edited, but the story is moving along!
If you want to catch up with all the details, you can probably re-read only book 3 and be good with that
xmag, it's always so awesome to have your candy validation on my M&M scenes And yes, it's time for Max and Liz to finally find each other
Part 28: Magnets
November 2nd, 2011 - New York
1 : Jake
“Why Dave?” Jake asked Van as they were finally leaving Manhattan. Both Langley and Jet kept searching for tails, signs that the Unit was following them somehow. The last thing any of them needed was to guide them to their headquarters.
“He came highly recommended by Zan’s Guard,” Van said, though there was a subtle tone there that spoke of lingering doubts.
“How did you even meet Dave?” Jake asked, now looking at the rearview mirror. The only Zan Guard who was still standing was Langley himself.
“He found out about me and decided to corner me on a flight to Japan,” Langley answered with a raised eyebrow.
“Charming,” Jake said with sarcasm.
“Ill-advised,” Langley said, nodding. “Yet I was impressed. I’ve been dodging bullets, Antarian threats, and FBI Units for decades—and I didn’t see him coming. Not a whisper, not the slightest of inklings. It doesn’t hurt he has many resources, and I’m not just talking about finances here.”
“You do not surprise a Royal Guard every day,” Van said, now more resigned. “Langley said Dave had the means to keep Zan safe. Then Dave proposed to have you help them improve their skills, and Ray to help them develop strategic thinking. And in all this time, I haven’t been disappointed.”
“He kept you informed,” Jake said, finally understanding Dave’s obsession with their reports. Accurate, short, always on time. It wasn’t like Dave to need so much information in such a scheduled way, but Langley and Van? Yes. A thousand times yes.
It was all making sense now. The secrecy, the planning. Dave’s need to keep the kids inside his innermost circle. But it also made sense that Van was here, now, hoping for a future that might never be. Dave had made sure to keep those flames alive.
“Those reports, though…” Van said, thinking something through, “they lacked perspective. You didn’t know what the end goal was, no one besides Dave and Langley did. So, I sent my own eyes and ears.”
“You were spying on Max?”
“Guarding him,” Jet said from the front seat as a matter of fact. “Wherever the King goes, so does his Royal Guard.”
“Since the moment they stepped out of the compound, everywhere he went, I knew about it,” Van said, looking rather pleased with that.
“And yet you don’t know what Max will choose,” Jake stated. No matter how this Royal Guard thing worked, they hadn’t been privy to Max and Jake’s talks about his memories.
“We will all get our answers soon,” Langley interrupted, speeding up. “We’re not ten minutes away from headquarters. With a little luck, this day can still be salvaged.”
2 : Liz
Max’s presence was suddenly there. It was a force that started right in the center of her being and zigzagged like wildfire through her chest, her arms, and straight to the tips of her fingers. Green electric sparks shone for a moment in her hands as she stopped in her tracks and almost lost her balance. Kyle held a hand to help steady her.
“You okay?” he asked.
“Max—” Liz whispered, as Michael also stopped ahead of her.
“—he’s here,” he said, nodding.
She turned to walk towards Max’s direction, just to see a shapeshifter running towards them.
“General! There’s been a breach!”
She moved past him. If hell was going to break loose in the next five minutes, then she had to hurry and find that elusive husband of hers. Michael and the shifters would cover this, she knew, but a thorn in her stomach was rapidly growing around her soul. What if she was not fast enough and she missed Max yet again?
Leaving Michael, Maria, and Kyle behind to deal with their newest problem, she walked and then ran, and it was just a matter of seconds before she was faced with a security door she had no way to open on her own. Exasperated, she turned to scream for someone to open it, and was met right there by a man she didn’t know. She stepped back, afraid of who this new person—shifter?—was. Her face gave her confusion away as the twenty-something guy smiled.
“I can no longer be His Majesty,” he said, his blue eyes and black hair adorning a boyish smile. He passed his hand over a point in the wall, and the door slid open.
“Jade?” she asked, already starting to walk down the hall, still frowning at him.
“Yes, my Queen. This way.”
He ran in front of her, easily navigating the maze of halls as she felt Max the way two magnets sensed each other. Closer and closer, until Jade opened the last door ahead of her, and at the end of the hall, Max was running straight to her, too.
Jade vanished as she crossed the door, the same way her anxiety and fear vanished at seeing Max, so alive and, as she collided into his arms, so real.
3 : Max
Everything with the world—with the whole universe—was right again.
He held Liz as close as he could, his chin on her head, the touch of her arms around his body, her breath warming the chill in his soul. She listened to his heart, beating so fiercely he thought everybody around them could hear it.
His hands moved from her back to her neck and her shoulders, and he moved one step backwards to see her eyes, to connect with her in the unique way they shared. His soul sang at the stars he saw in those expressive eyes of hers, and they were kissing before he even registered they had moved towards each other.
The connection formed instantly. Liz at the lab, looking through a microscope. Liz, walking through a forest in the middle of winter, hugging her coat as she turned to smile at him. Liz running through the New York metro, a man who looked like him holding her wrist.
Liz laughing, Liz thinking, Liz worried about him.
They came for air, both with their eyes still closed. He had no idea what she had seen from his side, but he knew her worries were not fading away.
“Someone said there was a breach…” she panted, her forehead touching his.
“I’m sure Khivar has found a loophole to execute me…” he panted back.
She smiled, both finally opening their eyes. “Nothing can be easy when you’re a dark-haired, mysterious man from an exotic location, uh?”
He smiled back, “Why, Ms. Parker, would you like it any other way?”
“A vacation without incident once in a while would be nice,” she said, wrinkling her nose. They were both stalling for the inevitable, and neither of them cared.
He winced, embracing her once more, his chin comfortably resting over her head. “I thought—I thought that they would never let me see you again,” he confessed in a whisper, knowing Liz had seen some of that just now.
“I had little hope of finding you again so soon as well,” she answered, her hands clasped behind his lower back.
Behind her, at the end of the hall, Max saw his Invisible Guard reformed, waiting for him. As much as he wanted to remain here, in this little piece of heaven, more pressing matters needed their attention. He had managed to get here, now he had to manage to get them out. With one last breath of her essence, he finally let her go.
Time’s up.
4 : Michael
The problem with being in this place was that Michael had no real intel on how it worked, how extensive it was, or how to defend it. Having Max here was a short-lived relief as the General in him started to make a list of all the things he needed to know—and all the things that could go wrong.
“Right now, we don’t know how deep the breach goes,” Luke said, updating Michael on whatever Dave had said. He hadn’t seen the man himself, too busy trying to convince Isabel to stop blaming herself, while they both knew they had roles to play to keep Max alive.
Yet Max was here now, so the show didn’t have to last long.
Maybe.
“Get everyone who’s gathering information in one room, and we’ll decide on strategy then,” Michael said to Luke, turning to look at Max as he met them in the middle of the hallway.
On his end, Max was talking to his own Guard. “We need confirmation that this is, in fact, Khivar’s doing. You have the means to contact home, right?” They all nodded. “Good. We’ll deal with this once we know it’s real.”
All shifters vanished then, Max’s Guards, Liz’s Guard, even Luke himself. It was way beyond unnerving to know most of them had been watching their every move for years without them knowing about it.
“Max,” Michael said, embracing him for a moment. “Are you okay?” he asked, looking him down as if expecting to find a bleeding wound somewhere.
“Not exactly,” Max answered, freezing Michael. “I’m fine right now, but I won’t be for much longer.”
“What?” both Liz and Michael said at the same time.
“It’s a rather odd theory that I’d rather tell just once. Where’s everyone else? Where’s Isabel?” Max asked, rather puzzled at feeling her close by but not seeing her here.
“Jailed,” Michael said with a raised eyebrow. “Looks like Vilandra is finally getting the punishment she deserves, one lifetime too late.”
“This again?”
“Oh, you have no idea how serious they are about this, including Isabel herself,” Michael said, now guiding him down the hall. “They want blood and the only one around good enough for that is Vilandra. I wouldn’t advice pulling the King card on this just yet, though.”
“Pulling the King card is the only good thing about playing Zan,” Max said in a hushed tone.
“I know, I’m having so much fun playing the General as well,” Michael said with mocked enthusiasm. “But they’re nervous about Van, and everyone is waiting for your answer, Your Majesty,” he added as they reached a set of doors. Michael waved his hand, and it opened with a hiss. “Maria and Kyle stayed with her, trying to come up with a way to get her out. Jesse is there, too.”
“Van isn’t here, yet?” Max asked. “He was shot last I saw him.”
“You’re the last of us to come,” Liz said.
“Dave, Ray, and some other geek are here, too,” Michael elaborated. “We’re still missing Van, Jake, and one of your Guards.”
“Jet. My Guards informed me he stayed behind with Van after we got separated. I had no idea Jake was involved in this, but I thought they would be here by now.”
“Not yet. Dave is trying to figure out where Van was taken. Needless to say, everyone wants him back far more than any of us.”
Max chuckled at that. They might want their long-lost royalty, but it was Van who they knew. It was Van who they followed.
“So,” Liz said as they walked down the hall, “do you guys actually remember Antar? Like…who you were?”
The question was loaded with a million other questions. Are you Zan? How much do you remember? Do you want to go back? Why did you hide it all this time? He hadn’t let Maria ask him yet, but the truth was, Max and Michael had to come clean now. At least Isabel had been able to do so while locked down with Jesse.
“No one is getting me away from you,” Max said, pulling her closer. “I—I’ve been meaning to tell you some things, it just never seemed to be the right time to do so.”
She nodded, absently biting her lip. Maria was not going to be so passive about this, Michael knew. She was buzzing through their connection, barely containing her need to blurt out her own questions.
On they went through the halls, getting closer to Isabel while Michael detailed his side of things. About finding Ray, about getting rid of the phones, and most importantly, about Van’s second in command, Luke. It was all a blur of short answers and no time before they finally arrived at Isabel’s and Jesse’s makeshift jail, where Maria and Kyle were already waiting.
“Glad to see you’re in one piece, girlfriend,” Maria said as she briefly hugged Max, while Jesse looked like a caged panther ready to pound. Michael had thought about offering Jesse to be out of the cell, but he was afraid Jesse would think he could take on shapeshifts and win.
He mentally sighed in relief to have everyone who mattered to him here, regardless of Isabel and Jesse being jailed. Maria gave him a warning glare that he was not out of the hook of questioning, and Liz was glued to Max’s side. Kyle took a few steps back, probably attempting to hear their thoughts less.
It gotta suck to be a telepath.
From his corner, Kyle nodded.
“Please tell me you have the authority to release her,” Jesse said to Max, while Isabel’s eyes filled with tears of shame as she saw him. Max’s heart went out to her, and so did Michael’s.
“Lonnie,” Max said, and in that moment, he was speaking as Zan and she was listening as Vilandra. “No matter what he said, or what you believed, you are my sister, and I forgive you. I forgave you a long time ago. Now it’s time for you to forgive yourself for the wrongs of others. You did what you did because you thought it would lead to better outcomes, to a better future. And there’s nothing I admired the most than those stubborn ideas of yours about making things better.”
“But I betrayed you…” she whispered. “I believed your ways were wrong, that you wouldn’t listen to reason no matter what I said. I wanted change; I wanted you to change. How is that something you can forgive when it all led to our downfall?”
“Because that downfall led to them,” Max said, stepping aside so she could see Jesse and the whole gang. “We cannot change what happened. We all paid a high price then. We don’t need to keep paying it now.”
“Why are you so intent in being Vilandra?” Jesse asked from his side of the hall.
“Yeah, I’d like to know that, too,” Maria said, turning to look at Michael. “Everyone’s calling you ‘the General’ and I don’t see you making any corrections.”
“Look,” Kyle said, still from his corner, “we all have seen it. The three of you clearly have some big conflicts in your heads I don’t want to keep hearing about, but beyond that... Liz, Maria, Jesse, and I know sometimes there’s—I don’t know? A tone in the way you speak?”
“A change in your eyes when you look at things,” Maria clarified.
“Or the way you walk into a room,” Liz said.
“Definitely the way you phrase your thoughts,” Jesse added.
“Yeah, those things,” Kyle said with a dismissive hand. “So, since we’re all here without an audience, who are you, really?”
Michael opened his mouth and faltered, looking at Max and Isabel. This was something they had talked about for so long that it was comically frustrating they were still stuck on how to say this. Max moved forward, facing their questions.
“We know who they were. Each of us, Michael, Isabel, and I have—seen their lives. Like a movie.”
“You remember…” Liz whispered, afraid.
“Yes…and no,” Max said, looking back at Isabel and then at Michael. “We don’t think of ourselves as Zan, Rath, and Vilandra. But we do know what they thought, how they lived. We have a pretty good idea how they died, too, though we’ve never really remembered that part. Sometimes, though, sometimes we wish we could go back and change their lives. Soothe their fears. We know them so intimately that we feel sorry for how things ended. And sometimes we need reassurances that everything is going to be okay now,” he said, looking back at Isabel.
“And sometimes,” Michael said, looking at Maria, “sometimes their personality traits sneak on us. Things that mattered to them, or thoughts about similar things—that’s what you sense. It’s not like they’re taking over us or something like that.”
“So you are Michael,” Maria said, looking at him with narrowing eyes. “You are always Michael, right?”
He nodded.
“Just with a dash of Rath,” Maria said. “I mean, you can’t go through something like this and not be…changed somehow.”
“It’s still us, though,” Max said. “With a wider perspective and some hard life lessons gleamed from them.”
“They don’t seem to think that’s a problem,” Liz said, hugging herself. “Jade said… he said that they want to take you back. They want to use—they want to use the people you used to be so they can win.”
“We might have to act as the rulers of Antar today, maybe a few days after that. But know that we are who you know we are—with a dash of our previous selves,” he said with a ghost of a smile as he looked at Maria. “Once this whole Antar rebellion is past us, we’ll answer all your questions. For now, though, you’ll have to have a little faith in us—and play along.”
5 : Dave
It took him a few minutes and some creative programming to trace back Danny’s backdoor. And there, in black and white, Dave’s worst nightmare came true: McKay was tracking him down to this exact location.
He was six years old looking up at his imposing silhouetted shape. He was seven years old, escaping to his own mind to avoid thinking about McKay. He was nine, he was ten, he was desperate to leave that place, yet so afraid of what that man would do. Jake had always known they would escape, but Dave had not been so sure.
And once they were out, it was McKay’s shadow that had always threatened their lives.
Now McKay was almost at their doorstep. Worse, Max was already here, the man who’d died in another world and stood to bring the wrath of an entire solar system if he didn’t accept to be called Zan.
How can everything be converging right here, right now?
“I bet McKay’s not coming alone,” Daniel said beside him, following the communications between the Unit. “Oh, this is interesting,” he said suddenly, snapping Dave out of his paralyzing fear.
“What?”
“Jake’s on his way, too.”
Time slowed down to a crawl. He heard himself asking once more, what? but his mind had stretched in ten different directions, all running away from McKay yet now stuck on how to save Jake.
“They have just crossed the perimeter. Tell me that’s not Jake on the window.”
On Daniel’s screen, a still shot of a car could be seen. Langley was driving, and Jake was, indeed, the one on the window. Langley wouldn’t be driving Jake here without Van. Not a chance in hell for that.
“How far is McKay?”
“McKay himself? About twenty minutes. But his tactical team? I can guarantee they’re just about to shoot that car.”
“No,” Dave said, getting up to run to stop them, to help them, to do something, when the door he’d been about to reach opened. Ray was coming back with Luke in tow. Van’s second in command narrowed his eyes at the tension in Dave’s face. If worst came to worst, Dave could afford to lose Max, but never Van.
“What?” Luke asked.
“Van is about to get shot outside the warehouse.”
Luke didn’t ask for more.
If you want to catch up with all the details, you can probably re-read only book 3 and be good with that
xmag, it's always so awesome to have your candy validation on my M&M scenes And yes, it's time for Max and Liz to finally find each other
Part 28: Magnets
November 2nd, 2011 - New York
1 : Jake
“Why Dave?” Jake asked Van as they were finally leaving Manhattan. Both Langley and Jet kept searching for tails, signs that the Unit was following them somehow. The last thing any of them needed was to guide them to their headquarters.
“He came highly recommended by Zan’s Guard,” Van said, though there was a subtle tone there that spoke of lingering doubts.
“How did you even meet Dave?” Jake asked, now looking at the rearview mirror. The only Zan Guard who was still standing was Langley himself.
“He found out about me and decided to corner me on a flight to Japan,” Langley answered with a raised eyebrow.
“Charming,” Jake said with sarcasm.
“Ill-advised,” Langley said, nodding. “Yet I was impressed. I’ve been dodging bullets, Antarian threats, and FBI Units for decades—and I didn’t see him coming. Not a whisper, not the slightest of inklings. It doesn’t hurt he has many resources, and I’m not just talking about finances here.”
“You do not surprise a Royal Guard every day,” Van said, now more resigned. “Langley said Dave had the means to keep Zan safe. Then Dave proposed to have you help them improve their skills, and Ray to help them develop strategic thinking. And in all this time, I haven’t been disappointed.”
“He kept you informed,” Jake said, finally understanding Dave’s obsession with their reports. Accurate, short, always on time. It wasn’t like Dave to need so much information in such a scheduled way, but Langley and Van? Yes. A thousand times yes.
It was all making sense now. The secrecy, the planning. Dave’s need to keep the kids inside his innermost circle. But it also made sense that Van was here, now, hoping for a future that might never be. Dave had made sure to keep those flames alive.
“Those reports, though…” Van said, thinking something through, “they lacked perspective. You didn’t know what the end goal was, no one besides Dave and Langley did. So, I sent my own eyes and ears.”
“You were spying on Max?”
“Guarding him,” Jet said from the front seat as a matter of fact. “Wherever the King goes, so does his Royal Guard.”
“Since the moment they stepped out of the compound, everywhere he went, I knew about it,” Van said, looking rather pleased with that.
“And yet you don’t know what Max will choose,” Jake stated. No matter how this Royal Guard thing worked, they hadn’t been privy to Max and Jake’s talks about his memories.
“We will all get our answers soon,” Langley interrupted, speeding up. “We’re not ten minutes away from headquarters. With a little luck, this day can still be salvaged.”
2 : Liz
Max’s presence was suddenly there. It was a force that started right in the center of her being and zigzagged like wildfire through her chest, her arms, and straight to the tips of her fingers. Green electric sparks shone for a moment in her hands as she stopped in her tracks and almost lost her balance. Kyle held a hand to help steady her.
“You okay?” he asked.
“Max—” Liz whispered, as Michael also stopped ahead of her.
“—he’s here,” he said, nodding.
She turned to walk towards Max’s direction, just to see a shapeshifter running towards them.
“General! There’s been a breach!”
She moved past him. If hell was going to break loose in the next five minutes, then she had to hurry and find that elusive husband of hers. Michael and the shifters would cover this, she knew, but a thorn in her stomach was rapidly growing around her soul. What if she was not fast enough and she missed Max yet again?
Leaving Michael, Maria, and Kyle behind to deal with their newest problem, she walked and then ran, and it was just a matter of seconds before she was faced with a security door she had no way to open on her own. Exasperated, she turned to scream for someone to open it, and was met right there by a man she didn’t know. She stepped back, afraid of who this new person—shifter?—was. Her face gave her confusion away as the twenty-something guy smiled.
“I can no longer be His Majesty,” he said, his blue eyes and black hair adorning a boyish smile. He passed his hand over a point in the wall, and the door slid open.
“Jade?” she asked, already starting to walk down the hall, still frowning at him.
“Yes, my Queen. This way.”
He ran in front of her, easily navigating the maze of halls as she felt Max the way two magnets sensed each other. Closer and closer, until Jade opened the last door ahead of her, and at the end of the hall, Max was running straight to her, too.
Jade vanished as she crossed the door, the same way her anxiety and fear vanished at seeing Max, so alive and, as she collided into his arms, so real.
3 : Max
Everything with the world—with the whole universe—was right again.
He held Liz as close as he could, his chin on her head, the touch of her arms around his body, her breath warming the chill in his soul. She listened to his heart, beating so fiercely he thought everybody around them could hear it.
His hands moved from her back to her neck and her shoulders, and he moved one step backwards to see her eyes, to connect with her in the unique way they shared. His soul sang at the stars he saw in those expressive eyes of hers, and they were kissing before he even registered they had moved towards each other.
The connection formed instantly. Liz at the lab, looking through a microscope. Liz, walking through a forest in the middle of winter, hugging her coat as she turned to smile at him. Liz running through the New York metro, a man who looked like him holding her wrist.
Liz laughing, Liz thinking, Liz worried about him.
They came for air, both with their eyes still closed. He had no idea what she had seen from his side, but he knew her worries were not fading away.
“Someone said there was a breach…” she panted, her forehead touching his.
“I’m sure Khivar has found a loophole to execute me…” he panted back.
She smiled, both finally opening their eyes. “Nothing can be easy when you’re a dark-haired, mysterious man from an exotic location, uh?”
He smiled back, “Why, Ms. Parker, would you like it any other way?”
“A vacation without incident once in a while would be nice,” she said, wrinkling her nose. They were both stalling for the inevitable, and neither of them cared.
He winced, embracing her once more, his chin comfortably resting over her head. “I thought—I thought that they would never let me see you again,” he confessed in a whisper, knowing Liz had seen some of that just now.
“I had little hope of finding you again so soon as well,” she answered, her hands clasped behind his lower back.
Behind her, at the end of the hall, Max saw his Invisible Guard reformed, waiting for him. As much as he wanted to remain here, in this little piece of heaven, more pressing matters needed their attention. He had managed to get here, now he had to manage to get them out. With one last breath of her essence, he finally let her go.
Time’s up.
4 : Michael
The problem with being in this place was that Michael had no real intel on how it worked, how extensive it was, or how to defend it. Having Max here was a short-lived relief as the General in him started to make a list of all the things he needed to know—and all the things that could go wrong.
“Right now, we don’t know how deep the breach goes,” Luke said, updating Michael on whatever Dave had said. He hadn’t seen the man himself, too busy trying to convince Isabel to stop blaming herself, while they both knew they had roles to play to keep Max alive.
Yet Max was here now, so the show didn’t have to last long.
Maybe.
“Get everyone who’s gathering information in one room, and we’ll decide on strategy then,” Michael said to Luke, turning to look at Max as he met them in the middle of the hallway.
On his end, Max was talking to his own Guard. “We need confirmation that this is, in fact, Khivar’s doing. You have the means to contact home, right?” They all nodded. “Good. We’ll deal with this once we know it’s real.”
All shifters vanished then, Max’s Guards, Liz’s Guard, even Luke himself. It was way beyond unnerving to know most of them had been watching their every move for years without them knowing about it.
“Max,” Michael said, embracing him for a moment. “Are you okay?” he asked, looking him down as if expecting to find a bleeding wound somewhere.
“Not exactly,” Max answered, freezing Michael. “I’m fine right now, but I won’t be for much longer.”
“What?” both Liz and Michael said at the same time.
“It’s a rather odd theory that I’d rather tell just once. Where’s everyone else? Where’s Isabel?” Max asked, rather puzzled at feeling her close by but not seeing her here.
“Jailed,” Michael said with a raised eyebrow. “Looks like Vilandra is finally getting the punishment she deserves, one lifetime too late.”
“This again?”
“Oh, you have no idea how serious they are about this, including Isabel herself,” Michael said, now guiding him down the hall. “They want blood and the only one around good enough for that is Vilandra. I wouldn’t advice pulling the King card on this just yet, though.”
“Pulling the King card is the only good thing about playing Zan,” Max said in a hushed tone.
“I know, I’m having so much fun playing the General as well,” Michael said with mocked enthusiasm. “But they’re nervous about Van, and everyone is waiting for your answer, Your Majesty,” he added as they reached a set of doors. Michael waved his hand, and it opened with a hiss. “Maria and Kyle stayed with her, trying to come up with a way to get her out. Jesse is there, too.”
“Van isn’t here, yet?” Max asked. “He was shot last I saw him.”
“You’re the last of us to come,” Liz said.
“Dave, Ray, and some other geek are here, too,” Michael elaborated. “We’re still missing Van, Jake, and one of your Guards.”
“Jet. My Guards informed me he stayed behind with Van after we got separated. I had no idea Jake was involved in this, but I thought they would be here by now.”
“Not yet. Dave is trying to figure out where Van was taken. Needless to say, everyone wants him back far more than any of us.”
Max chuckled at that. They might want their long-lost royalty, but it was Van who they knew. It was Van who they followed.
“So,” Liz said as they walked down the hall, “do you guys actually remember Antar? Like…who you were?”
The question was loaded with a million other questions. Are you Zan? How much do you remember? Do you want to go back? Why did you hide it all this time? He hadn’t let Maria ask him yet, but the truth was, Max and Michael had to come clean now. At least Isabel had been able to do so while locked down with Jesse.
“No one is getting me away from you,” Max said, pulling her closer. “I—I’ve been meaning to tell you some things, it just never seemed to be the right time to do so.”
She nodded, absently biting her lip. Maria was not going to be so passive about this, Michael knew. She was buzzing through their connection, barely containing her need to blurt out her own questions.
On they went through the halls, getting closer to Isabel while Michael detailed his side of things. About finding Ray, about getting rid of the phones, and most importantly, about Van’s second in command, Luke. It was all a blur of short answers and no time before they finally arrived at Isabel’s and Jesse’s makeshift jail, where Maria and Kyle were already waiting.
“Glad to see you’re in one piece, girlfriend,” Maria said as she briefly hugged Max, while Jesse looked like a caged panther ready to pound. Michael had thought about offering Jesse to be out of the cell, but he was afraid Jesse would think he could take on shapeshifts and win.
He mentally sighed in relief to have everyone who mattered to him here, regardless of Isabel and Jesse being jailed. Maria gave him a warning glare that he was not out of the hook of questioning, and Liz was glued to Max’s side. Kyle took a few steps back, probably attempting to hear their thoughts less.
It gotta suck to be a telepath.
From his corner, Kyle nodded.
“Please tell me you have the authority to release her,” Jesse said to Max, while Isabel’s eyes filled with tears of shame as she saw him. Max’s heart went out to her, and so did Michael’s.
“Lonnie,” Max said, and in that moment, he was speaking as Zan and she was listening as Vilandra. “No matter what he said, or what you believed, you are my sister, and I forgive you. I forgave you a long time ago. Now it’s time for you to forgive yourself for the wrongs of others. You did what you did because you thought it would lead to better outcomes, to a better future. And there’s nothing I admired the most than those stubborn ideas of yours about making things better.”
“But I betrayed you…” she whispered. “I believed your ways were wrong, that you wouldn’t listen to reason no matter what I said. I wanted change; I wanted you to change. How is that something you can forgive when it all led to our downfall?”
“Because that downfall led to them,” Max said, stepping aside so she could see Jesse and the whole gang. “We cannot change what happened. We all paid a high price then. We don’t need to keep paying it now.”
“Why are you so intent in being Vilandra?” Jesse asked from his side of the hall.
“Yeah, I’d like to know that, too,” Maria said, turning to look at Michael. “Everyone’s calling you ‘the General’ and I don’t see you making any corrections.”
“Look,” Kyle said, still from his corner, “we all have seen it. The three of you clearly have some big conflicts in your heads I don’t want to keep hearing about, but beyond that... Liz, Maria, Jesse, and I know sometimes there’s—I don’t know? A tone in the way you speak?”
“A change in your eyes when you look at things,” Maria clarified.
“Or the way you walk into a room,” Liz said.
“Definitely the way you phrase your thoughts,” Jesse added.
“Yeah, those things,” Kyle said with a dismissive hand. “So, since we’re all here without an audience, who are you, really?”
Michael opened his mouth and faltered, looking at Max and Isabel. This was something they had talked about for so long that it was comically frustrating they were still stuck on how to say this. Max moved forward, facing their questions.
“We know who they were. Each of us, Michael, Isabel, and I have—seen their lives. Like a movie.”
“You remember…” Liz whispered, afraid.
“Yes…and no,” Max said, looking back at Isabel and then at Michael. “We don’t think of ourselves as Zan, Rath, and Vilandra. But we do know what they thought, how they lived. We have a pretty good idea how they died, too, though we’ve never really remembered that part. Sometimes, though, sometimes we wish we could go back and change their lives. Soothe their fears. We know them so intimately that we feel sorry for how things ended. And sometimes we need reassurances that everything is going to be okay now,” he said, looking back at Isabel.
“And sometimes,” Michael said, looking at Maria, “sometimes their personality traits sneak on us. Things that mattered to them, or thoughts about similar things—that’s what you sense. It’s not like they’re taking over us or something like that.”
“So you are Michael,” Maria said, looking at him with narrowing eyes. “You are always Michael, right?”
He nodded.
“Just with a dash of Rath,” Maria said. “I mean, you can’t go through something like this and not be…changed somehow.”
“It’s still us, though,” Max said. “With a wider perspective and some hard life lessons gleamed from them.”
“They don’t seem to think that’s a problem,” Liz said, hugging herself. “Jade said… he said that they want to take you back. They want to use—they want to use the people you used to be so they can win.”
“We might have to act as the rulers of Antar today, maybe a few days after that. But know that we are who you know we are—with a dash of our previous selves,” he said with a ghost of a smile as he looked at Maria. “Once this whole Antar rebellion is past us, we’ll answer all your questions. For now, though, you’ll have to have a little faith in us—and play along.”
5 : Dave
It took him a few minutes and some creative programming to trace back Danny’s backdoor. And there, in black and white, Dave’s worst nightmare came true: McKay was tracking him down to this exact location.
He was six years old looking up at his imposing silhouetted shape. He was seven years old, escaping to his own mind to avoid thinking about McKay. He was nine, he was ten, he was desperate to leave that place, yet so afraid of what that man would do. Jake had always known they would escape, but Dave had not been so sure.
And once they were out, it was McKay’s shadow that had always threatened their lives.
Now McKay was almost at their doorstep. Worse, Max was already here, the man who’d died in another world and stood to bring the wrath of an entire solar system if he didn’t accept to be called Zan.
How can everything be converging right here, right now?
“I bet McKay’s not coming alone,” Daniel said beside him, following the communications between the Unit. “Oh, this is interesting,” he said suddenly, snapping Dave out of his paralyzing fear.
“What?”
“Jake’s on his way, too.”
Time slowed down to a crawl. He heard himself asking once more, what? but his mind had stretched in ten different directions, all running away from McKay yet now stuck on how to save Jake.
“They have just crossed the perimeter. Tell me that’s not Jake on the window.”
On Daniel’s screen, a still shot of a car could be seen. Langley was driving, and Jake was, indeed, the one on the window. Langley wouldn’t be driving Jake here without Van. Not a chance in hell for that.
“How far is McKay?”
“McKay himself? About twenty minutes. But his tactical team? I can guarantee they’re just about to shoot that car.”
“No,” Dave said, getting up to run to stop them, to help them, to do something, when the door he’d been about to reach opened. Ray was coming back with Luke in tow. Van’s second in command narrowed his eyes at the tension in Dave’s face. If worst came to worst, Dave could afford to lose Max, but never Van.
“What?” Luke asked.
“Van is about to get shot outside the warehouse.”
Luke didn’t ask for more.
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Re: The Rebel *Sequel* (CC ALL, YTEEN) Ch. 28 - pg. 20 - 11 / 2 / 24
Oh, ouah, things are going so fast now! I remember McKay (althought I keep picturing the McKay from Stargate Atlantis, lol), the guy who tortured Dave when he was a kid.
Okay, we have a group of aliens with powers and a special unit. The aliens have also been trained as soldiers. Logically, they should win. I say logically because some bad stuff can always happen.
I don't remember, is Mckay and co allied with Khivar or is he one these fanatic anti-aliens, who doesn't even pay attention to the kind of aliens he faces?
Okay, we have a group of aliens with powers and a special unit. The aliens have also been trained as soldiers. Logically, they should win. I say logically because some bad stuff can always happen.
I don't remember, is Mckay and co allied with Khivar or is he one these fanatic anti-aliens, who doesn't even pay attention to the kind of aliens he faces?
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Re: The Rebel *Sequel* (CC ALL, YTEEN) Ch. 28 - pg. 20 - 11 / 2 / 24
Just a quick update! I have the next twelve chapters in draft form and I'm only one epilogue away from The End. So yes, this story is getting closure! I will probably start posting by December, since the drafts are pretty drafty
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See ya soon!
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