Queen of Pain (UC, Liz/multi partner, adult) Pt21 1/25/20

[totallizfan]

More...….please

[sarammlover]

Holy shit!! An update! It was so hot and then Liz was a bonehead!! Can’t wait for more!!

[totallizfan]

Just checking

[totallizfan]

please update...... we really need something new to read.

[Appleprincess]

OMG!!! OMG!!! OMG!!! No words! Just OMG!!!

[LovelyPOM83]

Hey, I have to say I read your story Queen of pain in 1 day. I usually don't read uncompleted stories, especially on here now that this forum is completely dead. But I couldn't resist, and now here I am asking if you can please update your story. I know there's only maybe 2 or three parts left and I can certainly use my imagination in the conclusion, but I would rather read it from your point of view.
Your story is amazing...I feel Liz won't fully accept and see her relationship with Zan until Max maybe dream visits her or something, a near life experience so she can actually see him feel him and he gives her acceptance that she's not betraying him. It may be a little far fetched, but I feel that's the only way she is going to move on, and admit to herself that she is in love with Zan.
Zan will never be Max, but they are cut from the same cord. They have the same essence, she's lucky to have that essence still in her life after loosing Max they way she did. And that she was able to say goodbye only in connection, but most people don't even get that. She should be embracing the love instead of the regret. But it's your story and your vision of what's to become if them.
I'm in the same boat as a author, I'm making it my dedication to this board and finish my fictions that I've started.
Hope to hear from you soon. Take care.

always, POM