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by cravar
Tue Feb 07, 2006 2:08 am
Forum: Complete - AU without Aliens
Topic: An Unknown Family (ML,TEEN) COMPLETE 2-10-06
Replies: 14
Views: 18530

HI, Everyone: I'm deeply gratified to know so many of you have enjoyed my story. I had planned on two more parts. What I'm posting now could have been made into two parts, but I decided to just keep it as one. For many of you, the end may seem a little mushy and unlikely for today's critical, unforg...
by cravar
Thu Jan 26, 2006 4:16 am
Forum: Complete - AU without Aliens
Topic: An Unknown Family (ML,TEEN) COMPLETE 2-10-06
Replies: 14
Views: 18530

Hi, Everyone: I'm so happy to see that so many are enjoying the story. In answer to some who can't imagine that Max would have put up with Tess for so long, or possibly never been able to see how mean she was, I'm sure most of us can think of people we've known in the past who we thought were really...
by cravar
Tue Jan 24, 2006 1:54 am
Forum: Complete - AU without Aliens
Topic: An Unknown Family (ML,TEEN) COMPLETE 2-10-06
Replies: 14
Views: 18530

Hi, Everyone: Once again, I'm really enjoying your thoughts and comments. I hope this next part will provide more answers to your questions, as well as giving a more human, kinder side to Max's dad. Here goes: Part 14 Max had to get away to a quiet place while he took the time to read through Liz’s ...
by cravar
Sat Jan 21, 2006 6:41 pm
Forum: Complete - AU without Aliens
Topic: An Unknown Family (ML,TEEN) COMPLETE 2-10-06
Replies: 14
Views: 18530

Not only am I enjoying your comments and thoughts, but I'm getting antsy to finish the story. So, without further ado, here's the next part, appropriately called..... Part 13 - Revelations Bright and early the next morning, Max headed over to his dad’s. He wanted to get the ‘business’ out of the way...
by cravar
Sat Jan 21, 2006 1:28 am
Forum: Complete - AU without Aliens
Topic: An Unknown Family (ML,TEEN) COMPLETE 2-10-06
Replies: 14
Views: 18530

I'm so tickled you're all enjoying the story. Sorry to give the impression Father Phillip is being creepy. But his 'creepiness' will be revealed and straightened out in the next post. For now, though, here are the next two parts leading up to that revelation. Once again, let me know what you thnk. I...
by cravar
Sat Jan 21, 2006 1:26 am
Forum: Complete - AU without Aliens
Topic: An Unknown Family (ML,TEEN) COMPLETE 2-10-06
Replies: 14
Views: 18530

I'm so tickled you're all enjoying the story. Sorry to give the impression Father Phillip is being creepy. But his 'creepiness' will be revealed and straightened out in the next post. For now, though, here are the next two parts leading up to that revelation. Once again, let me know what you thnk. I...
by cravar
Fri Jan 20, 2006 1:47 am
Forum: Complete - AU without Aliens
Topic: An Unknown Family (ML,TEEN) COMPLETE 2-10-06
Replies: 14
Views: 18530

Hi, Everyone: Here's the next part. Let me know what you think. The more I hear, the quicker I'll post the next part. Look forward to hearing from you!!!! Part 10 – Training begins The rest of the weekend had passed rather slowly for Max and Liz. Both were anxious to get started with the training on...
by cravar
Fri Jan 20, 2006 1:46 am
Forum: Complete - AU without Aliens
Topic: An Unknown Family (ML,TEEN) COMPLETE 2-10-06
Replies: 14
Views: 18530

Hi, Everyone: Here's the next part. Let me know what you think. The more I hear, the quicker I'll post the next part. Look forward to hearing from you!!!! Part 10 – Training begins The rest of the weekend had passed rather slowly for Max and Liz. Both were anxious to get started with the training on...
by cravar
Sun Jan 08, 2006 2:22 am
Forum: Complete - AU without Aliens
Topic: An Unknown Family (ML,TEEN) COMPLETE 2-10-06
Replies: 14
Views: 18530

HI, Everyone: I'm back again already. I told you how much it encourages me when I get feedback. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story, so much so, that I couldn't wait to post another part. So here's the next one. I can't guarantee that I'll post the next part so soon. But just keep in mind, feedbac...
by cravar
Sun Jan 08, 2006 12:26 am
Forum: Complete - AU without Aliens
Topic: An Unknown Family (ML,TEEN) COMPLETE 2-10-06
Replies: 14
Views: 18530

HI, Everyone: I'm glad you're enjoying the story. And you continue to ask really good questions. Once again, though, I can't reveal too much without spoiling the following parts. But I continue to reassure you that your questions will be answered. Thanks for your patience. And as always, please leav...