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by cermel
Wed Sep 22, 2004 8:50 am
Forum: Complete - Canon/Conventional Couples
Topic: Too Soon - (CC,M/L, ADULT) - [COMPLETE]
Replies: 10
Views: 42695

Too Soon

Here’s a few things I’ve learned in writing my first fic. 1. Write shorter stories. 2. Have a complete outline finished before posting anything. 3. Only have necessary scenes. 4. Avoid unecessary characters. 5. Always have a beta! So, here’s the end. I can’t say I’m sad to let it go. I’m rather disa...
by cermel
Fri Jun 18, 2004 10:42 am
Forum: Complete - Canon/Conventional Couples
Topic: Too Soon - (CC,M/L, ADULT) - [COMPLETE]
Replies: 10
Views: 42695

This part hasn't been beta'd. I'm trying to finish this story so I can work on a different one that I'm actually interested in writing. :? Sorry, guys. I'm struggling to finish this because I've grown to hate it. We're getting there though. Winding down to an end. I've already started a new one but ...
by cermel
Fri Jan 30, 2004 1:59 pm
Forum: Complete - Canon/Conventional Couples
Topic: Too Soon - (CC,M/L, ADULT) - [COMPLETE]
Replies: 10
Views: 42695

Well, here's another part for you. It's not what I really wanted... it's about half of what was going to be in it but I wanted to get it out. Gotta try to keep people interested. :? I really am sorry it took so long. Thank you everyone for all your support and feedback. It may be another long while ...
by cermel
Wed Oct 08, 2003 1:27 pm
Forum: Complete - Canon/Conventional Couples
Topic: Too Soon - (CC,M/L, ADULT) - [COMPLETE]
Replies: 10
Views: 42695

Part 92

Part 92 “I’m sorry, honey. There’s just no way we can do it.” “It’s ok, mom, really. I understand.” Josh replied, attempting to sound happy. She sighed. “I know. We’ll see you when you visit this summer. We can celebrate then.” The sadness in her voice pulled at his heart. “Sounds good, mom. Don’t w...
by cermel
Wed Sep 03, 2003 10:02 pm
Forum: Complete - Canon/Conventional Couples
Topic: Too Soon - (CC,M/L, ADULT) - [COMPLETE]
Replies: 10
Views: 42695

I was planning on responding to feedback today but this is pretty much a drive by posting. I'll try to get back to you guys later. Thanks! Part 91 “Is it strange living here?” Madison asked softly from where her head rested over Josh’s heart. “With the Evans’?” He felt her nod. “Most of the time it’...
by cermel
Sun Jul 06, 2003 7:24 pm
Forum: Complete - Canon/Conventional Couples
Topic: Too Soon - (CC,M/L, ADULT) - [COMPLETE]
Replies: 10
Views: 42695

My apologies for the wait. Part 90 April “We can’t stay apart forever,” Liz argued, pacing in front of the coffee table in the living room. “God, no! That’s the last thing I want,” Max exclaimed, moving to the easy chair to sit down. “Just hear me out.” He requested, waiting for her nod. “We’re supp...
by cermel
Mon May 19, 2003 2:39 pm
Forum: Complete - Canon/Conventional Couples
Topic: Too Soon - (CC,M/L, ADULT) - [COMPLETE]
Replies: 10
Views: 42695

Thanks Liz for the beta work! Here ya'll go, hope you enjoy it. Part 89 aka The Dreamer Chapter “You know… we only have two months left.” Max shut his daughter’s bedroom door softly before turning in the direction of his wife’s voice. “Oh?” He questioned, not clear on what she was referring to. Pick...
by cermel
Thu May 01, 2003 6:22 pm
Forum: Complete - Canon/Conventional Couples
Topic: Too Soon - (CC,M/L, ADULT) - [COMPLETE]
Replies: 10
Views: 42695

Thanks for all the bumps, guys! Special thanks to the beta, LizPark! Here goes... Part 88 “I realize that this was something you didn’t want to face in Minnesota and all, but we’re practically brothers, Maxwell,” Josh said calmly. The two were sitting on swings at the park by the town’s elementary s...
by cermel
Sun Apr 13, 2003 6:42 pm
Forum: Complete - Canon/Conventional Couples
Topic: Too Soon - (CC,M/L, ADULT) - [COMPLETE]
Replies: 10
Views: 42695

Sorry for the awful wait! Thanks for all your feedback and support! Huge thanks to LizPark for betaing... is that a verb? To beta? It's a fish... does that count? Anyways... here you go! Part 87 “It’s so beautiful out.” Madison sighed, staring out into the desert. “This place is addicting.” “Agreed....
by cermel
Wed Mar 05, 2003 11:20 pm
Forum: Complete - Canon/Conventional Couples
Topic: Too Soon - (CC,M/L, ADULT) - [COMPLETE]
Replies: 10
Views: 42695

Hey guys, took me longer than I'd anticipated to write this.. and it's pretty short at that. Sorry, I tried. :oops: The fabulous banner by DreamerKitten is on the first page so check it out if you haven't seen it yet. And I added a silly poll. Because I could and I want to know what you guys see in ...