The Vault (M/L, Mature) (COMPLETE)

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The Vault (M/L, Mature) (COMPLETE)

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Title: The Vault
Author: Greywolf
Couple: All CC mainly M/L
Rating: Mature due to subject matter, violence
Disclaimer: I don't own Roswell or any of the characters. But if I did, I'd have done a better job on Jim Valenti. Melinda Metz made him a monster. Jason Katims did a much better job with him. Most cops aren't all that bad, and even the worst generally better than those they protect us from. But please don't sue me, i'm just having a little fun here.

Summary: This takes place about a month after Max heals Liz in the Crashdown when fate takes their love in a whole different direction.


Saturday Morning 10:00 AM Roswell Sheriff’s Office

Sheriff Jim Valenti was sitting at his desk. Being a Sheriff was not a 40 hour a week job, and he had gotten to his office this Saturday before 8:00 AM on this, a supposed “day off.”

He had first reviewed the duty log from last night. It had been a fairly unremarkable Friday night in Chaves County. One bar fight with no one seriously injured, one perpetrator already had been bailed by his family, the other was on the phone now trying to find a bail bondsman on a Saturday morning. There were two DWI arrests, with one having an outstanding warrant on him from Dona Ana County for domestic violence. They’d work out transporting him on Monday, if the extradition paperwork was complete by then. Altogether a not particularly exciting night. That was good, the lack of excitement. In law enforcement, exciting nights tended to be bad news.

He then had reviewed the law enforcement message traffic. There were the usual missing person’s reports, generally teenage runaways who had fights with their parents. Their pictures and descriptions would be distributed, but he doubted that any of these kids would show up in Roswell. They tended to head for the bright lights of Phoenix, or other big towns. Two level-three sex offenders had apparently cut off their tracking anklets and somehow walked away from the Albuquerque sex offender treatment halfway house, but these people were believed headed in the other direction, toward Gallup, on the road to Las Vegas. A drug ring had been broken up in Taos, but several members were not caught. Their descriptions would be distributed to the deputies. No imminent problems, based on the message traffic. It was a quiet morning.

Putting aside his routine work, he dug back into the file he had kept in his desk for the last three weeks, the Max Evans file, and began to review it once again. Reading the witness reports from the Crashdown shooting incident, he again felt the hairs on the back of his neck stand up. Something was absolutely wrong here, but he couldn’t quite understand, or couldn’t quite convince himself, of just what that something was.

He’d known Liz Parker for years, heck, his son Kyle had even dated her a few times. Exactly what had happened he didn’t know, but whatever it was had involved Max Evans, and it had terrified the girl.

She was unskilled at lying, and on the initial interview she had given, she had lied a number of times. At the time he’d written her nervousness off as a reaction to the discharge of a gun that could have killed her, but she had specifically denied that the teenagers that the tourist couple had described being present were local teenagers, and Max Evans had later confessed at the Crash celebration that he had indeed been there. Even shaken up by the gunplay, it seemed unlikely that Liz Parker could have failed to recognize him. She’d known him since the third grade and, he found out from Kyle, was her current Biology lab partner.

Clearly, she had been terrified by whatever Max Evans had done with her on the day of the shooting, and when she’d subsequently been interviewed again, she again seemed to be frightened to death. She had made some clumsy evasions there as well. He would have liked to pursue it further, but being an innocent bystander being shot at by unruly customers really wasn’t much of a crime, and no one was going to take action against a 16 year old waitress for making false statements in the half-hour after she’d just been shot at either. He’d tried to get further information obliquely, leaning on the other waitress and Liz’s best friend, Maria DeLuca, but all that interview told him was that whatever Liz feared was apparently contagious, Maria was just as scared, though perhaps a somewhat more experienced liar.

He didn’t know what hold Max Evans had over these two young ladies, but whatever that hold was it clearly terrified them both. Despite Max’s reputation as a shy introvert honor student, there was something going on here.

He thought of Philip and Diane Evans, remembering that terrible night when he, as a rookie deputy had come upon the accident. A trucker who’d been using amphetamines to stay awake, to make up time through the desert had lost control of his rig and crossed the centerline. Philip had tried to turn, but their car had still been struck a grazing blow that nearly demolished it. Philip had been badly bruised but not seriously hurt. The blunt trauma to Diane had cost the couple not just the baby she was carrying, but the capability to ever have children. He remembered bitterly that the truck driver had gotten off with six months in jail, with four months of that suspended. Sixty days, for the loss of a life, and the devastation of two others.

He’d also been on duty the night, almost ten years ago, that they’d come across the two foundlings walking in the desert, walking naked hand in hand. It had seemed like a godsend to the Evans' at the time, although Valenti privately thought the kids were probably from some weird religious cult. How else to explain 6 year olds that couldn’t talk, and weren’t even potty-trained. But nonetheless, these kids had turned around the devastated couple. And the girl, at least, had seemed to be a really good kid. He’d worked with her on the Christmas Toys for Tots drive. A little intense, perhaps, someone had once called her “the Christmas Nazi,” but a hard worker with her heart in the right place.

Her brother, however, had always been somewhat of an enigma, a loner, cordial but never really warming to anyone. The Sheriff found himself wondering what the Unabomber had been like as a kid, what a young Jeffrey Daumer had been like, or a young David Koresh? For somehow, something about this introvert kid was scaring the Hell out of Liz Parker and Maria DeLuca and while the Sheriff didn’t know what, he would find out. And whatever it was, he’d find a way to protect the girls and the people of Chaves county from this kid. That too was his job.
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Saturday Morning 11:00 AM Olson’s Sporting Goods, Dexter New Mexico

Rafael Torres was at the front counter when the two men came in. The boss had just gone to buy them both lunch, his treat. It was a quiet morning, and these were the first two people he’s seen in the store in the last two hours. They weren’t locals, and Rafael assumed they were tourists.

They asked about buying camping gear and started to assemble a small pile on the counter, a couple of sleeping bags, canteens, packs, a Coleman stove with fuel, a small camp shovel, some rope, and a considerable quantity of freeze-dried food. The smaller one looked at the knives in the display case, and asked if he could see the Gerber survival knife. As he handed it to him Rafael saw movement out of the corner of his eye, and started to turn to look at the larger man.

This turn was interrupted by the flat blade of the camp shovel impacting upon Rafael’s right temple. He fell to his knees, struggling to remain conscious. At once the smaller man put the knife to his throat and demanded, “The keys to the gun cases and ammo. Now! And if any alarms go off, your throat gets slit long before any police could get here.”

When Ben Olson returned from the local drive-in with lunch for Rafael and himself he was confronted by a dazed clerk with blood trickling down the side of his head and two heavily armed men.

Ben looked at the silent alarm, looked yet again at the spot under the counter where his own handgun was concealed, and then looked once more into the barrel of the twelve gauge shotgun leveled at his stomach.

Not worth the risk, he decided. He raised his hands slowly saying, “Take whatever you want, just don’t hurt anyone.”

Ten minutes later Rafael and Ben were gagged and hog-tied in the back storage room, the store was locked with the “closed” sign in the window.

What little money was in the till was gone, as were two pistols, three rifles, a shotgun, and considerable ammunition.
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Saturday Morning 11:40AM Highway 285 15 miles from Roswell New Mexico

“Well the gear and the guns are a help,” said Garber, “but there was only about $160 in the till, nothing we can start a new life with in Mexico.”

“We need a big score,” said McMillan. “Just the one, then we get over the border where we don’t have to worry about US Justice, halfway houses, GPS tracking anklets, three strikes laws, or anything else. As long as we have enough money for an occasional bribe to the local authorities, we live like kings. Mexico, gateway to the street children of Central America,” he laughed.

“The money is the rub,” said Garber. "Living may be cheaper south of the border, but the few hundred we have aren’t going to be near enough. We need to make one big hit before we cross the border, and that doesn’t mean some gas station or sporting goods store. That means a bank, and since they are closed Sundays we either do it now or put off crossing the border until Monday. Somebody will find those two before then, and everything will get more dangerous. I vote we do it now.”
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Saturday Afternoon 12:30PM. Evans Home, Roswell New Mexico

Philip Evans was finishing up three legal documents for clients in his home office. Diane and Isabel were off to the mall for a day of shopping, and he had more or less twisted Max’s arm to go up to the arroyo at Lobo Canyon with him to go fossil hunting that afternoon.

Philip Evans wasn’t one of the local rock hounds, but he did like fossil hunting. He’d taken a course in paleontology in college, and a couple in geology, before deciding that his future was in law rather than science. But he did enjoy fossil hunting, and the area around Lobo Canyon, about 40 miles away, was a favorite of his. Once the bottom of an ancient sea, where the infrequent desert rains had eroded away the walls of the canyon and the arroyos that fed into it. You could find all sorts of small fossils, mostly shells but occasionally the fossilized remains of sea plants and even small fish. His office had one wall of such finds. Sometimes during the summer the whole family would camp out for a weekend at the canyon, scouring the sides of the arroyos for new finds, and taking pictures of the quiet beauty of the New Mexican desert.

But today there was more to it than that, Philip admitted to himself. He needed to corner Max, one on one, and find out what was wrong.

Although always somewhat of an introvert with other people, his son had always been comfortable within their family. But Max had changed in the last four weeks or so. He seemed depressed, preoccupied, and somewhat at odds with his sister Isabel. The last was particularly disturbing because Max and Isabel usually were close, really close, almost as if they could share the same thoughts. Lately, there seemed to be some animosity, or at least some great difference of opinion between the two.

Philip remembered being a teenager, and well remembered spats with his own sister, but whatever was going on with Max seemed far more serious than his own turbulent teenage years had been. Instead of being his usual self, Max would come home, retreat to his room, and lay on his bed playing some particularly depressing teenage music. It was depressing his mother, it was depressing his sister, and it was damn sure depressing Philip Evans.

This was to be his chance to lean on him until Max explained what the trouble was, and Philip intended to make the most of that opportunity.

Two of the three letters Philip had just prepared required attestation by a notary. Normally, he would have waited until Monday, when his own secretary, herself a licensed notary, would have attended to the problem. But one matter was quite urgent, and must go out with the Saturday mail. For that reason he told Max that they would need to make a stop at the bank before hitting the post office on the way out of town. Both of the women in the loan office were notaries, and whichever one was on duty this Saturday morning could notarize the document. It would just work out. The bank closed at 2:00PM.
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Saturday Afternoon 1:30 PM Crashdown Café, Roswell New Mexico.

Sheriff Valenti was sitting at the counter, slowly finishing his coffee.

When he had entered the restaurant he had sat down at the counter and ordered lunch. He had immediately drawn the attention of Liz Parker, whose face had flashed a quick look of fear at the sight of him. She had talked briefly to the other waitress on duty, who had then come to take his order. Jim was fairly sure that the counter was usually part of Liz’s seating area, so he suspected she was again avoiding him.

Whatever hold the Evans boy had on her, it apparently was still in effect, and she seemed to go out of her way to ignore his presence, although he had caught her several times out of the corner of his eye, staring uncomfortably at his presence.

As he watched, Jeff Parker went to the second till, pulling out the checks and large bills, preparing for a bank deposit. The deposit bag was zipped shut and locked, but before Jeff had quite gotten to the door the short order cook had called him into the back.

The Sheriff was idly sipping his coffee as he saw Jeff return and walk up to his daughter.

“Lizzy, I’ve got to fix the water heater on the dishwasher. The deposit could wait, but we’ll still need change before Monday morning. Could you run the deposit over and pick up four rolls of quarters, three rolls of dimes, four rolls of nickels, and six rolls of pennies?” he asked, handing her the paper he had read the list of change from.

“Sure, dad.”

She had walked into the back, returning in a few minutes with a sweater over the top of her uniform and minus the antennae. As she left she cast one last look at Jim Valenti and then looked quickly away.

Valenti shook his head. That was one frightened girl, he thought.

He’d have to work on finding out what the big secret was about the Evans boy.
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Saturday 1:45 PM Roswell Branch, First New Mexico Bank

Max Evans actually enjoyed spending time with his father normally, particularly their forays into fossil collecting in the arroyo. He enjoyed science and natural history, and both he and Isabel realized how fortunate they were to have the love of their Mom and Dad, particularly when they saw the disastrous foster home situations Michael had known in his life.

But this wasn’t normally, he realized. He’d been in a funk for sometime over the situation with Liz. He realized that he wanted something that could never be, realized that Izzie and Michael were probably right to push him away from her, and he even realized that it was probably the best thing for Liz as well.

Having intellectualized all that, he’d still spent the last two weeks feeling like crap over the whole situation, and if that weren’t bad enough he knew the agenda today would be for the brilliant legal mind of his Dad to give him the third degree over why he’d been so damn depressed. And Dad was sharp, he’d have to be constantly on his guard, destroying whatever recreational value the outing might have otherwise had.

It actually would have been kind of nice to have an afternoon of losing himself in exploring the wonders of the desert, but instead it would be a constant vigil that only reminded him of the things he’d really like to be able to forget.

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The lady in the loan department, apparently the only one who was a notary, was tied up on the telephone. His father was waiting patiently before her desk with his papers. Max looked around for a magazine, something to read, something to get his mind off the situation with Liz.

There wasn’t much reading material in banks, he decided. After he had read the signs touting the current 6 month and 13 month CD return rates, read a brochure that told him more than he ever figured he’d need to know about home equity loans, and another that told him about his rights as a credit card holder, Max looked up with relief to see that his father was finally getting the papers stamped.

And then he saw her.

As she came in the door, a white sweater over her waitress uniform and clutching a bank bag in her hand, Max felt his heart leap in his chest.

She got in line behind the nearest teller and looked idly around the bank. Max saw her eyes widen as she saw him sitting in the loan department.

Max pulled his eyes away from hers and retreated to the far side of his father who was still talking to the notary. What had he, a poor little alien ever done, that the fates should torment him so much?
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Liz thought she’d somehow felt Max’s presence as she’d come in the bank, but had believed she was just daydreaming. She daydreamed about Max a lot lately. But then she’d seen him, standing in the loan department, his father at a desk behind him.

His eyes had met hers once, then he’d quickly picked up a bank brochure and wandered back behind his father, appearing to read it. She doubted he was interested in the brochure that much, just doing it to avoid her. She was almost certain he was holding the brochure upside down.

It would be really easy to hate Max Evans, she decided, if only she didn’t love him so damn much. What right did he have to be all noble and self sacrificing, to decide for THEM all by himself that being together wouldn’t work, that they were “too different”?

She had loved him since the seventh grade at least, probably since puberty. She had sent all the right messages, in the clumsy way that a seventh grade girl would, and when he’s shown no interest, she’d just resigned herself to being his friend. Maria had claimed that Max was interested, but she’d never seen any evidence of it.

Even that day at the Crashdown, even when he’d saved her life, she might have accepted that he was just a friend, because Max was like that, he was caring, he probably would have done the same if it had been Maria or anyone else lying on that floor bleeding to death. But when she’d been frightened, when she’d run from him, she saw the hurt in his eyes. And when he’d connected with her to show her he was still Max, not some kind of monster, he’d let her see the real Max, the Max who loved her as much as she’d ever imagined anyone could love another.

For Liz, there could be no going back. ‘I’m not going to give up on you, Mr. Max Evans,’ she thought, her eyes burning into the back of his head. ‘If I have to fight Michael and Isabel both, if I have to fight the whole damn world, I’m not giving up on you.’

Liz shook her head and a sad smile came to her face. ‘Who would have thought??? Liz Parker, smallest of small town girls, an alien stalker.’
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Saturday 1:55 PM Roswell Branch, First New Mexico Bank


Mr. Fillmore went to the vault and set the timelock. It was really the only reason he needed to be here on a Saturday, to set the timelock. He was the only one who knew the combination. He was really a little bit of a paranoid old desert rat, not really trusting anyone, even the employees. But that caution had served him and the bank well during his four decades of working for the bank, and just because he was now bank president, it didn’t change anything. He wasn’t here every hour the bank was open, but he was always here to open it, and always here to close it. And when it was closed, he was the only one who could open it, at least other than normal bank hours. The bank inspectors had insisted that other bank officers have that combination in case something happened to him, well, nobody lives forever he realized. But from the time that vault door closed at 2 PM Saturday until 7;30 Monday morning, nobody was getting in to that vault Mr. Fillmore knew, nobody but him. That’s what timelocks were for, he thought to himself as he readied the vault door.

He was proud of the new vault. It had an expanded safety deposit box area, far larger than the old one, the one he’d watched them install in 1952. And within that, there was another inner vault, where they stored all the cash reserves whenever the bank was closed. He was a frugal man but where it came to bank security he spared no expense, he thought, remembering the recent security upgrades.

Mr. Fillmore had already overseen the tellers securing their cash drawers in the inner vault, all but the last one, dealing with the end of day rush as people drew cash from their accounts for the weekend and small businesses made deposits and got coins they would need to make change for the rest of the week. All was quiet in the life of Mr. Fillmore. All was routine. But as the two men walked in the door, that would soon change.

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As he entered the bank, McMillan had a brief twinge of doubt. Should they really be doing this? It wasn’t that he had any ethical qualms about it, McMillan had never been much constrained by ethics. It was more a practical consideration. While he and Garber were longtime criminals, bank robbery really didn’t have much to do with the crimes they usually committed.

Still, he wasn’t going to spend five more years in some halfway house, five more years wearing an anklet, five more years being kept from doing what he enjoyed doing most. The holdup of the sporting goods store had gone well enough, even if the money in the till had been pretty meager. They’d gone in there unarmed, unarmed to a place that had all sorts of weapons, and pulled off the robbery without a problem. Now they were armed to the teeth, going in to a small town bank just before closing. How hard could that be?

They needed the money, and that was the plain fact of the matter. They needed the money for their new life south of the border, and they weren’t going to get it knocking off service stations or cafes. What had that Willie Sutton guy said? You gotta go where the money is…..
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