TAT: In The Beginning (M/L, AU, Mature) (Complete)

Zanity · Post by **Zanity** » Sat Jul 01, 2006 1:15 am

OOOooh. That's evil leaving it their... but if you're promising to come back next week I won't complain much. Great part... I can't wait to see how it ends.

Flamehair · Post by **Flamehair** » Sat Jul 01, 2006 2:05 am

oh - so great

But you're evil to leave it there. Somehow I have a bad feeling for the next chapter. Please don't let Leelee and the baby be hurt - I so need a happy ending for this story

Morning Dreamgirl · Post by **Morning Dreamgirl** » Sat Jul 01, 2006 2:10 am

The conclusion?

Why do I have this fear that it's not going to be a happy one?

I mean, it would only make sense, given that this story is technically part of a series...

But I still am hoping that you're going to give us a happy ending.

I absolutely loved this chapter - especially the interaction between Max/Zan and his sister; as well as Rafe.

It was wonderfully written.

I also like the fact that Isabo wanted to get to know LeeLee. I thought it was so sweet that she wanted to know more about the person that her brother had fallen for, as well as his son.

So is there any way you can give us a hint as to whether it'll be a happy ending?

No?

Well you can't say I didn't try!

This part was great and I loved it!

Ashley

roswell3053 · Post by **roswell3053** » Sat Jul 01, 2006 3:52 am

Please let LeeLee be okay. I hope that Max can make it there in time. I can't wait for more. Awesome update. I am glad that everyone is accepting of him staying. Hurry back.

Post by **Erina** » Sat Jul 01, 2006 3:56 am

Great part, but hurry back with the next (final

) part, we need to know that LeeLee is okay.

BehrObsession · Post by **BehrObsession** » Sat Jul 01, 2006 11:15 am

That was a great part, but I can't believe the way you left it hanging. I have to believe that Max is right and everything is going to be alright. It has to be. He's come across time and space to find her. They are so happy together and they're just starting a family, it can't end in some horrible way. I'm trusting the Dreamer in you to fix everything in the end.

RoswellScripter · Post by **RoswellScripter** » Sat Jul 01, 2006 1:14 pm

definately fantastic!!

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

i felt like i was there, just like everytime i read a chapter

sunrise102 · Post by **sunrise102** » Sat Jul 01, 2006 9:46 pm

Oh man!! I'm on pins and needles! On the edge of my seat! Leelee's gonna be ok right?!?! Oh please! And conclusion? Why? Why should this wonderful story ever need to end? As far as I'm concerned it can go on forever.

I'm sure on one would complain. Least of all me.

I'll be both looking forward to and dreading next week.

valkerie5 · Post by **valkerie5** » Sat Jul 01, 2006 10:59 pm

First of all..... Happy Canada Day!!!

Amazing part!!!

Please, please, please, let Leelee and the baby be ok. It would be horrible for Max to have come all this way to lose her now.

Ohhhh.... post again soon I'll be eagerly waiting.

VeronicB · Post by **VeronicB** » Sun Jul 02, 2006 1:51 am

Oh wow!:shock: I hope Max will get there on time and that it's just a future event. That gives him time to get ready for this.

Can't wait to read more!!!