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Red Shift Part 2 Chapter 7

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Hi everyone,

As ever, I thank you all for leaving me feedback. It has become a little of a ritual for me, responding to you feedack.

I hope the confusion factor is fading away now. You should all be realising that Alison DeLong is the young girl in the coma, and is in fact, Maria. The only thing you need to sonder about is how she got there. I have left a few very subtle hints, and it Will become clear later on in Part 2.

Now, we just need... uhm... someone else, right? :wink:

Thank you to the poster I assume wishes to remain annonymous, who pointed out that I had the wrong Disney place (which I have now corrected.) I got my land mixed with my world. LOL :)

roswellluver - yes, well, it did sort of tickle my sense of humor.

Ellie - Yes indeed. How will the distances affect them all? :)

BehrObsession - Well, other than my arms, I have some fun coming from my sleeves. :)

AJK001 - I had to work hard to keep everyone recognizable. Seems it worked. :)

smokie - Oh, I am pretty sure that like Michael before him, Hans will feel an attraction to a certain feisty spitfire. And as for Liz... I'm sure that if Maria turned up, Liz will too... eventually.

Venus_star2.com - Hmmm... memories. So far, no one has given any indication that they have retained any memory from their previous lives. . . . or have they?

lazza - I hope you like this part then... :wink:

Timelord31 - Yes. They did. :)

frenchkiss31 - Yeah, it was Maria. :) Hmmm... how to introduce Kyle, Jesse AND Alex? I mean, all three? tall order. How on earth could I do that? But Liz... Thats the easy one. Just put the two of them in a room and presto! Right?

roswell3053 - Yes, it's Maria. You are on the right track and that makes everything that followsd easy :)

aurorasky - Yup. One down and... how many to go? :wink:

tequathisy - Ah yes. How did Maria become Alison? Alison was in a coma while Maria was walking around fighting evil aliens and the FBI in Roswell. Hmmm....
edited to add.. I apologise for not getting the Foster situation quite right, but I have never experianced this, neither do I know anyone who has, And they aren;t exactly legitamet Foster parents, so... But thanks for the comment. :)

omwf - Pretty natural assumption, Liz and Maira being such good friends and all... :)

kay_b - No, Kay. This is the SAME timeline. Max, Liz etc all died at the end of September. The aliens invaded New Mexico and Luke Hans and Leia emerged from Pods in North Carolina a few days later. And now, it seems that the coma girl, Alison, has woken up and seems to have Maria's personality. Okay? :)

mareli - Nah, The nurse is no longer important. Sorry. But you are on the right track :)

jbcna - Sorta Maria? Okay. LOL! :wink:

dreamerfiend - As I said earlier, one down... :wink: Actually, it wasn;t Micky that I had in mind when I wrote that line. :wink:

cherie - Glad you liked it. :) Glad you appreciate my efforts :)

Red Shift


Part 2


Chapter 7


"Come on, boys," Omi's voice called to them from the kitchen door. "Rise and shine!"

The porch was already bathed in morning sunlight doing little to bring relief to the temperature. The night had been hot, even though the windows of the porch only held screen netting. The boys had long since discarded their sheets and were only wearing a pair of boxer shorts. At the intrusion of their grandmother's voice, they buried their heads in their pillows.

"Hey, sleepyheads," she called again. "It's nearly eight already. We need to square away your things so we can all eat breakfast."

This was met with another groan.

"Good luck with that, Omi," Leia rolled her eyes. "You'll never get them up much before ten."

"Well," Omi's voice fell in defeat. "I guess it wouldn't hurt for my senior citizen's Bridge club, who will all be here for breakfast in ten minutes, to see these boys in their skivvies."

Luke and Hans were up in an instant, racing each other for the shower room, accompanied by Leia's laughter.

With their damp hair and dressed in shorts and T-shirts, the boys set about folding their camp beds and restoring the table so that they could eat breakfast together. They sat around the table and helped themselves to toast, bagels, waffles and fruit juice.

"Where's Allan?" Luke looked around.

"He left for work hours ago," Opa chuckled. "Before the day got old."

"Old?" Hans narrowed his eyes with indignation. "It's not even eight-thirty yet."

"Like I said, boy," Opa smirked. "Old. The earlier he starts, the earlier he gets to come back and escape the heat. You're in Florida now. Not the arctic wastes of North Carolina."

"What are everyone's plans today?" Omi asked.

"Well, I was going to run over to that supermarket in Sarasota," Debra added another item to the list she was working on. "Especially since I want to pick up some stuff for the birthday party."

"Whose birthday is that, Mom?" Leia peered over at the list.

"Oh," she looked up, momentarily flustered. "We completely forgot. According to the documents Mr. Lucas left with us, Hans, celebrates his birthday tomorrow while you and Luke, celebrate yours on Saturday. We thought that seeing as we go home the next day, we'd have a big party for the three of you.

Opa frowned.

"Why wouldn't the kids know their own birthdays?"

"We, uh..." Luke saw the look of devastation on Debra's face. She knew she had just made a huge mistake. "We uh... that is, where we came from... we were... we never did anything like that. We've never, uhm, celebrated... our birthdays. We don't even know when they really are. Last Christmas was the first time we celebrated that, too."

"Oh," Opa looked down at the ground. "Sorry, son. I didn't..."

"It's okay, Opa," Luke gave a weak smile. "You weren't to know."

"So, a big party, huh?" Leia gushed. She caught Luke's look of thanks. "So can we invite any friends we make?"

"Of course you can," Omi smiled. "And I'll even invite Richard. Richard Madly. He's the nice young man I pay to do all the things that are too much for Opa and me around the house. You'll like him. He's only in his junior year and he's already some big officer in the ROTC. In fact, Luke, Hans, you should get to know him. He can take you Paintballing."

"What about the rest of you?" Debra looked up from her list. "What will you guys be doing?"

"Not sure," Luke shook his head.

"Thought I'd do a little exploring," Hans bit into another pancake.

"Maybe I'll tag along," Luke shrugged.

"No!" Hans looked up. "No, that's okay. You stick around and have some fun. I just want to..." Hans waved his hand in the air. "I was going to hike up the north end of the island."

"Leia?" Debra continued. "Would you like to come shopping with me?"

"Not food shopping, Mom," Leia scrunched up her nose. "Please! I think I'll stick around and catch some rays."


* * *


"Right here," Leia pointed to the spot where she wanted her beach chair.

Behind her, Luke was struggling to carry the bed, a beach umbrella, an icebox and a huge bag that held everything except the kitchen sink. He collapsed with a groan before letting everything go. He picked up the bed and opened it out for her. As he hammered the lower part of the umbrella into the sand, Leia was laying her towel out on the bed. Luke slid the umbrella open, providing shade for his sister who was sliding out of her sundress, revealing her developing figure in her lime-green bikini. Posing the best way she knew how, Leia started to apply sunscreen to herself.

"I hope you fry," Luke smirked as he headed to the water. He could see all the guys gawking at her.

"Where are you going?" she demanded.

"Swimming," he called back pointing at the water. "Slaving for you is hot work!"

Leia laughed as he retreated to the waterline.

"Hey, babe," she heard a voice close by.

Three boys, her own age she guessed, maybe younger, were strolling toward her with an air of supreme confidence. From the way they looked, she guessed that they were local boys, trying their luck with the tourists. Not one of them had anything that she could describe as style. Each one of them carried a skateboard, wore pants that seemed three sizes too large and wore brightly colored shirts over their white T-shirt. They all wore baseball caps the wrong way and wrap-around sunglasses.

"Lookin' fine," the lead one flicked his hand in some strange gesture.

"Please," she rolled her eyes behind her sunglasses. "Come back and see me when you've grown up."

"No need to be like that," the boy came closer.

"Like what?" Leia smirked. "Selective?"

"Hostile much?" the boy rolled his eyes.

"Oooh..." she returned to her magazine. "You thought 'that' was hostile? You don't want to piss me off, then."

"Come on dudes," the boy started to move away. "Bitch is probably a lesbian anyway."

"This 'bitch' isn't even your species," Leia muttered darkly to herself. "Come to think of it. I don't think anyone is 'your' species."


Luke returned a short while later, wet from the ocean.

"Cold?" she looked up at him.

"Not too bad," he shrugged. "Will you be alright? I'm going to..." he nodded over at the houses.

"I'll be fine," she smiled at him. "Just don't mope around the house, okay?"

She watched him leave and then returned to her magazine while she sat in the shade and soaked up the atmosphere. It didn't take her long until she had read the magazine from cover to cover, memorizing all of the make-up tips and accessorizing strategies. Wishing she had the foresight to have brought more than one, Leia sighed, dropped the magazine to the sand and looked up across the beach. In front of her, a large group of boys had started a game of beach soccer. Though not one for watching sports, there was totally nothing wrong with watching sportsmen. Especially the one with the dark hair who seemed head and shoulders better than the rest, yet seemed to be the only one not taking it seriously. Unlike most of the other players, he had not once looked her way.

"They normally play farther up t he beach," a voice startled her.

An older boy stood to one side, looking down on her. He was tall, definitely buff and had the healthy golden tan of a Hispanic. He appeared to be only slightly older than her. Smiling at her looking him up and down, he sat down in the sand.

"They're playing here, hoping you'll be checking them out," he continued to grin. "Which I can see you are."

"What makes you say that?" she rolled her eyes.

"I saw you staring," he shrugged. "At least one of them has caught your eye."

"Maybe," she pulled a non-committal face.

"I've not seen you before," he continued. "You here for Spring Break?"

"Family," she nodded. "My grandparents live over there."

"We're here for spring break, too," the boy nodded. "A whole bunch of us come down most holidays. The parental units take it in turns to chaperone. We have a blast. Most of them are out there," he nodded at the soccer game.

"Don't you play?"

"I prefer to talk," he looked out to sea. "I mean, sure, I can play. But sometimes... it's just all the same you know? What's the point?" He looked at her. "So where are you from?"

"Raleigh," she smiled at him. "North Carolina. You?"

"Columbia," he chuckled. "South Carolina. So... so what's your name?"

"Leia. Leia Skye. And you're dead if you laugh. How about you?"

"I'm Raul," he grinned at her name. "Raul Rodriguez. Hey, listen. Are you busy tonight?"

"Not especially. Why?"

"I was kinda wondering... would you like to, you know, hang out tonight? For a while. Maybe grab an ice cream or something?"

She liked his confidence. Here was a guy who did not turn to jelly around her.

"Sure," Leia nodded. "What time?"

"How 'bout I call for you, say, eight?"

"No," she shook her head. She would not let Luke and Hans spoil her fun. "I'll meet you somewhere."

"Okay," he nodded. "There's an ice cream parlor up the beach," he pointed southward. "Kind of a hangout, called Scoops. I'll be there at eight."

"Eight," she nodded.

"Well, I gotta go now," he rose to his feet. "I'll see you later, Leia."

"Bye," she called to him.

She watched him until he vanished into the crowds of people who took pleasure in walking up and down the beach. Giving a soft smile, Leia wriggled a little to make herself more comfortable and closed her eyes. She soon fell into a light doze as she dreamed about herself walking along a moonlit beach, eating three different flavored ice cream cones, unable to decide which she preferred.


She heard the bounce of a ball first, followed by the tingling of sand hitting her. Then something large and wet hit her legs. With a shriek, Leia was sitting upright, staring at the black and orange soccer ball that rolled from her beach chair back onto the sand.

"Sorry," she heard someone running across the sand toward her. "I got a little carried away."

She looked up, intent on blasting him with waves of ice. It was the good looking jock.

"No harm done," she smiled.

"Well, that's a good thing," he squatted down on his heels. "My name's Lyle. Lyle Collini."

"Well, hello, Lyle Collini," Leia smiled. "You can call me Leia."

"Leia and Lyle," he snorted. "We sound like a comedy act."

"Well," she laughed. "I'll be the comic while you can be the butt of my jokes."

"So you think I'm a butt, huh?"

"You know what they say," Leia's eyes sparkled. "If the shoe fits..."

"Stick it up your butt?" Lyle finished.

"So are you a local?" she continued to giggle.

"Hey, Lyle," someone bellowed. "The freaken ball!"

Lyle stood up, tossed the ball into the air and kicked it back to his friends.

"Nah," he sat down in the sand. "I come from Atlanta. You know... Joe-Jaw."

"You don't sound southern."

"What can I say?" he shrugged. "I'm a regular Colonel Saunders though. How about you?"

"Raleigh."

"Spring break, too, huh?"

"Family. My grandparents live here."

"Yeah. My family comes here every year. It's okay I guess."

"This is my first time here."

"Really? Well, if you want, maybe I could show you around a little."

"I'd like that."

"Sure," Lyle nodded. "We can do that tomorrow, if you want. Listen. I'm a little tied up this afternoon. I promised some guys to help out in a basketball game. But I'll be free at nine. I'll treat you to an ice cream, if you're free."

"That sounds okay."

"Do you know Scoops? It's just up there. I'll see you at nine, 'kay?"

"See you at nine," Leia smiled as he scurried back into the game.

It was only as she watched him twist past the last defender and tap the ball into the goal that she remembered her date for eight o'clock.

"Oops."

* * *

Luke sat in a chair out in the yard, watching another sunset.

"What ya doing, Luke?" Allan called, emerging from the porch.

He crossed the yard and sat in the empty chair next to him. In one hand, he carried a beer, the glass bottle already dripping wet from the condensation that formed on it. In his other, he carried a can of Cherry Coke. This, too, was cold and wet. He handed the coke to Luke.

"Nothing," Luke sighed, popping open the can and taking a deep gulp.

"Where are the other's tonight? They both cleared out pretty quick after dinner."

"I don't know," he shrugged. "I think Leia has a date."

"What about Hans?"

"I think Hans feels a little... I don't know. He disappeared this afternoon, too."

"So how come you haven't made any friends?"

Luke just shrugged again.

"It's not good for you, you know, son," Allan sighed, taking a sip of his beer. "Being alone like this." He paused, taking a sip of beer. "I've seen how you are around the other two."

"They're my brother and sister," Luke looked up. "How else am I supposed to be?"

"It's more than that, Luke," Allan's gaze was intense. "I've seen how they lean on you, how they rely on you, as though they want you to make their decisions for them. And I've seen how they get when they don't like your decisions. They're taking advantage of you, Luke. You can't let them do that. They avoid being responsible for themselves so that they can blame you if it all goes wrong."

"But what can I do?" Luke's shoulders dropped. "Someone has to be responsible."

"I'll tell you what you can do, Luke," Allan placed his hand on his shoulder. "For now, I'll be the responsible one, okay? I'm the adult here. I'm supposed to be the one who tells you what you can and can't do. You're supposed to be the one who tries to test the limits and find ways around my rules and restrictions. Now go out there and act your age. That's fourteen, Luke, not forty."

"Yes sir," Luke finished his drink and rose from the chair.

Allan watched as he headed into town.

"And may God forgive me if he gets into trouble," he groaned. "'Cause Debra won't."

* * *

"Leia," Raul smiled as the tall blonde girl approached him. "Right on time."

"I was going to make you wait," she smirked. "But I have to be back by nine, so..."

"Curfew?" he raised an eyebrow.

"Something like that," she smirked.

"That's okay," he nodded. "I could use an early night myself. We're all heading over to Epcot tomorrow."

"I think we're going on Wednesday."

"So..." he steered her inside the building. "What do you want?"

They sat outside at a small table, for two, eating their ice creams and discussing their lives and their future plans.

"I'm not really sure what I want to do yet," Leia admitted. "But whatever it is, I don't have to worry about it for a while. I mean, I'm still only a freshman."

"Really?" Raul's eyes widened. "I figured you were older. Sophomore, at least. Maybe even a junior. Like me."

"So you're a junior, huh?" she grinned. "Senior next year. Have you got any college plans, yet?"

"Harvard, I hope," his eyes lit up. "I plan to study Law, but I want my future to be politics. Maybe I'll be the first non-Caucasian President."

"Well... that's some dream," Leia hid her laugh with her hand.

"Too grand, you think?" he caught her anyway.

"Well you gotta have ambition, right?"

"I'd just like to make a difference, you know?"

At ten minutes to nine, Leia and Raul rose from their table and headed back up the sidewalk that led home.

"So, can I see you again?" he turned to her and held both her hands.

"Sure," she nodded. "I'll be in the same place tomorrow. Drop by and say hello."

Raul leaned forward and kissed Leia on the cheek. He hurried away up the path. As soon as he was out of sight, Leia glanced at her watch and ran back to Scoops.


* * *


As soon as she slipped out through the Holiday Inn doors, Hans spotted her. She was wearing jeans now, and a strappy white top. Earlier that morning, she had worn a sundress. He had hidden behind a small cluster of palm trees and watched as she had found a beach chair shaded by one of the thatched sunshades. His eyes had almost popped out when she pulled her dress off to reveal her yellow bikini. She just lay there and soaked up the sun. A group of kids with skateboards gave her some hassle around lunchtime, but she appeared to have sent them off with a couple of sand fleas in their ears. She was definitely one scary girl. For lunch, she had bought a cream cheese bagel and a bottle of coke from one of the sidewalk vendors and settled back down to soak up the sun some more. Later, she paddled out into the ocean for a while before she finally packed up her things and returned to the hotel. Hans frowned, wondering if she might have seen him.

"I'll come back later," he nodded. "It was just too convenient that she barged into us like that. Out of all the people, it was me and Luke. And I'll keep an eye on you, Ms. DeLong. And if you are a threat..."

But she had looked so cute. Especially in that yellow bikini. And when she came out of the water, and her... the cold water had... and she was...

"We have to stay detached," he urged himself as he hurried home for a shower. A cold one.

And after having given Luke the slip, he was back. Watching her as she headed for a pizza restaurant. He would keep an eye on her, he had decided, just to make sure she was not working for 'them'.


* * *


"Hey, Leia," Lyle arrived promptly at nine. "Been waiting long?"

"Just got here," she beamed at him.

Behind Lyle, sitting at a table by himself in front of a laptop computer, she noticed the young guy look up and raise his eyebrows at her. She remembered seeing him there earlier, while she was talking with Raul. She ignored him - he looked like a geek anyway, with his top button fastened in this heat - and looked back at Lyle.

"So," he indicated the counter inside the store. "What can I get you?"

Ten minutes later, they were sitting down at the same table she had sat at earlier with Raul, sharing a huge Banana Split

"What do you think of Siesta Key?" Lyle looked up. "Liking it?"

"Yeah," Leia grinned. "It has a certain charm. And the guys are kinda cute."

"Like that one over there?" Lyle used his spoon to point.

She turned to look at the teenager Lyle had indicated. Their own age, she guessed, he was on the large side, with short, spiked hair. His small, round glasses sat on his chubby cheeks, rather than his nose and leant a rather porcine disposition to his eyes. His white T-Shirt had huge dark patches under his arms, and varicolored smears down his front. His hands were currently holding a grease stained wrapper to his mouth as he was currently inhaling some item of fast food purchased from one of the many stalls that lined the road.

"Oh, yeah," Leia turned back, laughing. "Be still, my beating heart. That's... a whole lot of boy."

"I played this game of football, a few weeks ago," Lyle smirked at her remark. "I was, uh, quarterback. They had this lineman who was as big as that. Man, this guy was huge! The first play, he just blew through my line like they weren't even there. Next thing I know, this mountain of lard has me flat on my back and I'm like, suffocating. His buddies pulled him up - or did they have to use a crane? Anyway, he looked down at me and you know what he said?"

"What?" Leia's eyes were sparkling with amusement.

"Get used to it, pretty boy."

"Oh my God," she roared with laughter. "I bet that was a long game."

"For him, it was," Lyle started to laugh with her. "We changed our plays after that. Went with the running game. We just ran left, or right, and had his sorry ass running all over the place. Man, I swear, he must have sweated off at least half his weight. He was puffing and panting..."

"So, you must be, what? A junior? A senior?"

"Heck, no," Lyle shook his head. "I'm only a freshman."

"So you must be kind of good then, huh?" Leia looked at him. "The QB at our school is a senior."

"I'm okay, I guess," Lyle nodded. "Are you a cheerleader at your school?"

"Please," Leia rolled her eyes. "What do you take me for? An airhead?"

"Ah. But a sophomore airhead?" he wondered. "Or junior?"

"Freshman, too, actually."

"No way," he leaned back in his seat. "Really?"

"Really," she nodded. "Hey, listen. Will you be around this Saturday afternoon?"

"Yeah," his eyes narrowed. "Why?"

"It's my birthday. We're having a party and you can come if you want."

"Cool," he nodded. "I'll look forward to it. But I hope this doesn't mean I have to wait that long to see you again."


* * *


"Color me impressed," the boy behind the laptop computer sat up, softly clapping his hands together.

"Excuse me?" Leia turned from watching Lyle walk away to face the geek. She was a little amused that he actually spoke to her.

"Two dates on one night," he chuckled. "That must have taken some organizing."

"Actually," Leia smiled. "It was an accident. I arranged one date in the morning, and then when I arranged the second one, it was only later that I remembered the first."

"But you pulled it off so well," he nodded. "Both of them are so into you and they both think you are into them. That was... wow. But somehow, neither of them really met...you. Did they?"

"Perhaps," she chuckled. "So want to make it three?"

"Huh?" he gaped.

"Yeah," Leia sat down, leaned across and unbuttoned the top button. "Buy me an ice cream and you can be date number three."

"Sure," he rose quickly, knocking over his chair. "Uh. Can you keep an eye on my computer?" He pushed the lid down.

"'Course I can," she placed a protective hand over it. "But can you just get me a drink? A hot chocolate if they have it. Lots of sugar. I've had all the ice cream I can stand for one night."

"Anders Karlvit," the boy sat down, placing the hot drink if front of Leia.

"Excuse me?" she looked up at him with a frown.

"My name," he paused. "It's uh... Anders. Anders Karlvit

Oh," she grinned. "Sorry. I thought you were saying something in a foreign language."

"Well, it is Swedish," he shrugged. "Not that I speak it, of course. And I already heard your name. Leia, right?"

"Right."

"My friends are so not going to believe this," he shook his head. "This 'is' a date, right?"

"If you want it to be," Leia laughed. "But I can't stay long. My brother's are probably freaking right now."

"Brothers?" Anders suddenly looked worried. "Big? Strong? The kind that push us geeks around?"

"Big, strong, yes," Leia nodded with a smile. "But pushing people around? So not their style. So tell me about yourself, Anders, 'cause I expect you know all about me already."

"Only what you wanted to let them know," he nodded.

"So?"

"Okay," he took a breath. "I'm a freshman, too. I come from Birmingham Alabama. As you can see, I'm into computers. I like to play the guitar, too, but I'm not that good. I hope to go to MIT and when I graduate, I plan to be as big a name as my hero. No prizes for guessing who that is. That's the ten cent tour, by the way."

"I can figure out the rest as I go along," Leia chuckled.

"So," Anders raised his eyes. "There's the geek, the jock and the humanitarian. Which one you gonna choose?"


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Red Shift Part 2 Chapter 8

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Hi Everyone!

Thank you for your continues support and your feedback. As you can see, things will be a lot less "confusing" for a while, but none the less, I see that there are still some elements that might need some explaining.

The least of which is this "war" status of the alien occupation.

In October, aliens inavaded and conquered New Mexico. Because of the technology difference, the US was in no state to counter attack, so they agreed to a ceasefire. Remember that meeting with the President? She was told that they wanted to make it more permanent. So there is an uneasy peace in place. Now its April, and Spring Break. And people are going on with their lives. There is no current conflict, so why shouldn't they? Hope this resolves that one.

BehrObsession - Yup. Jesse, Kyle and Alex are all present and correct. Alison was already on board and so that means... we just need Liz. :)

youre my dreamgirl - Yeah. Leia clearly needs to make a choice, although she need not be in any rush, right? Maria turned up the week before, Alex Jesse and Kyle arrived last week, so...

AJK001 - Yup, Hans doesn't seem to understand his 'attraaction.' Leia understands hers... well, you know what I mean :wink: And that leaves Luke. WHo could possibly be out there for him?

Ellie - Yes, Leia certainly seemed to have a good evening. But how will she continue to juggle them all? :wink: Well... Tess is wayyyy over in Roswell, looking for something. So she's hardly going to turn up here. But there was that fourth person in the pod...

smokie - Anticipation is as good a device as a cliff hanger, I'm finding. :wink: Hmmmm.. yes. Probably best not to try to see inside my head. It's a mess! :wink: And glad you can detect the correct accents. Just as a little inside peek, look out for an amazing accent in a story I'm working on, which I will start posting soon. :wink:

roswell3053 - I'm sure Luke will fine his 'girl' soon. But will it ne Liz?

omwf - Well, it can hardly be a Max and Liz story without Liz, can it? :wink:


lazza - Well, thry need to be like the old gsng, so that's good that you recognise them. :) And yes, they would have to be different... andtheres a reason for this. But it's something quite simple.

cherie - Well... Yes, I am bringing them ll together, but this is only Spring Break. So what happens when it's over?

frenchkiss70 - Hmmm.... Where is Liz? I'm SURE she'll turn up. And when they meet... Can you think of anything that would stop them from making their connection whole again? :wink:

Scottie - I hope you understand now about the war situation. Not so much a war as a standoff at the moment. No threat to anyone else so why not carry on as normal.

Timelord31 - But where will she lean to?


Red Shift


Part 2


Chapter 8




"Now that you're both here, boys," Omi smiled at both Hans and Luke when Luke sat down at the breakfast table.

Luke had returned from the bathroom where he had just showered and dressed. Neither boy wanted a repeat of Omi's threats from yesterday, so had risen early. Neither knew how serious she had been, but there 'had' been a steady stream of older visitors throughout the day. Leia and Debra had already left for another expedition at the Mall, leaving the boys with Omi and Opa.

"I spoke with Richard last night and he's agreed to take the two of you with his ROTC group today. They're going paintballing."

"Richard?" Luke looked from Omi to Hans and then back again.

"Yes," she nodded. "You know. I mentioned him yesterday. I spoke with him last night and he's agreed to take you off for the day."

"I had plans," Hans blurted.

"That's okay," Omi smiled, patting the back of his hand. "They'll keep. Ah. Here he is now."

They all heard the squealing of heavy brakes and the blaring of a deep horn. A few moments later, heavy footsteps ran up the back steps to the porch.

"Hi, Omi," a voice called out as the door opened. "Opa."

Richard Madly was a head taller than both of the boys, and looked much older too. It was hard to believe that this guy was only seventeen years old. His blond hair was cropped short, close to his scalp. Where the sun had bleached it, it looked almost white. His eyes were a steel gray. He wore battle fatigues, camouflaged for a dappled forest. The legs of his pants were tucked into the tops of the heavy boots that he wore. Luke was momentarily reminded of a 'GI Joe' action figure he had seen in a toy store last Christmas. From the way he held himself, Luke half expected him to salute.

"Luke, Hans," Omi stood next to him and placed a hand on his shoulder. "This is Richard. Richard, this is Luke and Hans. Two of my grandchildren."

"Pleased to meet you," Richard held out his hand in a formal, rigid manner.

Looking at Hans, Luke reached out to accept it, only to have Richard take his in a vice-like grip, almost crushing him. From the way Hans winced, he knew that Richard had done the same to him.

"Either of you boys in the ROTC?" he looked them up and down.

"Sorry," Luke shook his head.

Hans looked at Luke. His eyes clearly asked the question. Is he for real?

"Why not?" Richard looked insulted. "Your country needs you. That alien scum won't be interested in just New Mexico, you know. Believe me when I say they'll want the whole rest of the country, too. And it won't end there. We'll soon be at war with them. Before you leave, I'll give you some leaflets. You guys can set one up at your school, 'cause we need everyone to be ready for when we strike. Preferably before they do."

"Uh," Luke looked from Hans, to Omi and the Opa. "Appreciate it."

"Well, come on, boys," he stepped back to let them leave. "We gotta head out. We have a bit of a drive. Transport's out front.

The 'transport' turned out to be an old army truck. They had to climb up into the back, protected from the sun by the green canvas cover stretched over the top. Inside, in two rows, facing each other, there were some more action figures, sitting at attention. They all looked between fourteen and seventeen. Their heads swiveled as one to look at the new comers and then swiveled back so that their eyes were at front again. Not for the first time, and certainly not for the last, Hans and Luke exchanged glances.


No one spoke for the entire journey. Hans and Luke stared out of the back of the truck, watching as the town of Sarasota and the traffic passed by. They couldn't look at the toy soldiers behind them. The houses gave way to an industrial estate. The warehouses and factories gave way to some scrubland. More and more trees were starting to appear now. At last, the truck squealed to a halt. No one moved, except for Luke and Hans who scurried over the tailgate and down to the ground. It was not the most comfortable of rides.

Richard gave them a cool stare when he marched from the truck's cab to stand at the back. Another soldier arrived from the opposite side of the truck and snapped to attention, flipping Richard a salute. Luke could see that he wore a black armband with two gold stripes. Richard wore a black armband with two silver spots.

"At ease, corporal," Richard returned the salute. "Dismount the men."

"Sir, yes sir!" the corporal turned and moved to the truck's tail gate. As soon as it fell open, he stepped back. "Troops, dis-mount!" he snapped.

Almost like a synchronized swimming team, the eight men in the back stood up, turned to face the back of the truck and marched to the tail. Two by two, they leapt to the ground and moved sideways so that in the end, all eight were standing in a straight line.

"Platoon ready for inspection, sir!" the corporal saluted.

Luke and Hans watched in amazement as Richard walked along the line, carefully checking the men's battle fatigues. At the end of the line, he turned to the corporal.

"Carry on," he nodded. "You take them over and get them outfitted. I'll take the two civvies and see what we've got to put up with today. Hans, Luke. You come with me."

Richard led them to a small wooden building to the right of the truck while the corporal whose name they never caught went with the rest of the men to a brick building on the left. Inside the wooden hut, there were a dozen other kids, all wearing jeans and T-shirts, waiting.

"This is your team," Richard told Luke and Hans. "It will be you guys against us." He started to count. "Fourteen of you against ten of us. I've had worse."

"And still won, huh Richard?" an older man stepped out from a back room."

"First Lieutenant Madly reporting for duty, sir!" Richard snapped to attention.

"At ease, soldier," the old man rolled his eyes. "All those odds and you still keep on winning, huh?"

"Of course," Richard shrugged. "Why else would I be fast tracked?"

"Why indeed," the old man shook his head. "Okay, leave these with me. You go see to your own team."

"Good luck," Richard looked back at Luke and smirked. "You're going to need it."

Luke had to hold Hans back as the arrogant officer left the room.

"Just once," the man shook his head. "Just once, I'd like to see someone cream that guy."

"Maybe today's that day," Hans spat.

"Forget it son," the old man started to chuckle. "Richard's the best I've ever seen. I've never seen him lose."


Half an hour later, the fourteen team members emerged from the safety lecture, and were led to the brick building where they kept the equipment locked away. Henry, as the old man's name turned out to be, gave them each a padded jacket, camouflaged, and red helmets with protective eye glasses. After that he handed them all their special guns that fired the small paint pellets. He then handed everyone a 'cartridge' that contained ten blue pellets and showed them how to insert them into the gun.

"You get one free cartridge for the games you've signed up to play. Different color every game. You can buy extra cartridges if you feel you might need them, but 'cause you're facing Richard Madly and the Sarasota ROTC, trust me. You won't hardly use the ones you got. Your best bet is to try to take advantage of your greater numbers. Except for your arms and legs, any hit with a pellet, you're out of the game. A casualty. If you're caught cheating, you sit out the next game."

At that moment, marching in perfect formation, the ten ROTC members arrived.

"Okay, Henry continued. "First few games will be Last Man Standing. Rules are simple. Last man standing, that team wins. ROTC start that end. The rest of you... Uh, what are you going to call yourselves?"

"Losers," someone from the ROTC ranks coughed out, causing them all to laugh.

"Losers it is," Henry shrugged. "Losers start that end. As soon as you both ring the bell, the game starts."


"We need a plan," Luke called to his fellow team members. "We need to act like a team or they're going to beat us."

"Best thing to do is just move up together and stay close. Concentrate our firepower," one of the others decided.

"No," a second added. "Split into two squads. One can meet them head on, while the other outflanks them."

Lets just charge them," a third added. "Like the man said. We outgun them."


One by one, the members of the Losers team headed for their base. A small hill, hollowed into a bowl in the middle, sheltered by some tress.

"Ready?" one of the older kids, Steve, turned to face them.

Everyone checked their gun and nodded.

Steve rang the bell. At once, the distant bell of the ROTC team rang out in response.

"Let's go," Steve grinned.

Everyone ran into the trees, in different directions. Each one doing their own thing, pretending that they were a member of an elite special forces unit. Which they weren't. Luke looked at Hans and shook his head. Hans shrugged and together, the two of them started to move into the trees. While one covered, the other moved.

Around them, they heard the soft 'whup whup' sounds of the guns as paint pellets flew toward targets. Every now and then, someone called out an expletive. Hans and Luke communicated with hand signals, moving as quietly as they could. Hearing noises in front of them, Hans peered around the tree. He saw two blue hatted ROTC members. Hans held two fingers up to Luke, who nodded. Using nods of his head, they counted to three. They both leapt out and shot their pellets into empty spaces. At once, a blizzard of pellets hit them. They were eliminated.

"Tough luck, guys," Richard smirked. "That's ten of us left standing to... uh, none of you. But take heart. You lasted the longest."

"So get your loser butts back to the rest of the losers, loser," someone called.

The trees filled with laughter as the ROTC team started chanting 'lo-ser, lo-ser, lo-ser."

With their heads held down, the humiliated duo returned to their base.


"I have a plan for this one," Steve announced as he slotted the green pellets for this game, home. "We'll stick together. Concentrate our firepower. We'll move out in a bunch. That way, when we encounter them, we can react."

"As good a plan as any," Luke shrugged at Hans.

"Yeah," he nodded. "But not flexible enough. How do we react?"

"I think we should move in three groups," Luke thought about it. Two groups cover the third moving."

As soon as the bell rung out, the squad moved out.

"There," someone hissed.

Twelve guns started to pump pellets at a small squad of blue hats, who took cover behind some trees. Every now and then, they leaned out and returned fire. Suddenly, the ROTC team members leapt from their cover and started to retreat.

"We got em, boys!" Steve called out. "Attack!"

"No!" Luke called, but he was ignored.

"Come on," Hans urged, grinning wildly as he was caught up in the enthusiasm.

Everyone was charging through the trees, chasing the blue helmets ahead. The helmets stopped, and turned. They each fired, hitting the front four Red team members in the chest. From both sides, more red appeared and started to fire. One by one, the Losers fell. Luke stepped behind a tree and shook his head.

"Whup"

He looked down at his chest to see the green flower from the paint pellet on his chest. He looked up into Richard's grinning face.

"Loser."


And so it went. All day long, the Losers... well, lost. They more than lost, they were humiliated. It got so bad that the ROTC team started to cat call to them from the trees.

"Losers!"

At last, it was time for the final game.

"Okay," Henry sighed. "Capture the flag. Basically, you have to capture the other team's flag to win. Ring the bell when you reach it."

"Can we hide it?" someone called. "The flag, I mean."

Luke looked at the flag, affixed to a stout pole buried into the ground and shook his head.

"This is what we'll do," Steve announced. "You two," he pointed to two team members. "You stay here and protect the flag. The rest of us will sneak around to the left and capture their flag."

"Suppose they sneak the opposite direction," Hans asked. "There'll be two of us to all of them."

"Then there'll be twelve of us to however many of them they left."

"Why not split it half and half?" Luke narrowed his eyes. "Seven defenders, seven attackers. We'll have good odds no matter how they set up."

Several team members looked over to Steve.

"Nah," he shook his head. "We'll stick with this." He rang the bell to signify their readiness.

The team hurried into the trees.

"You know what I would do?" Hans looked over at Luke as they scurried with the rest of the team.

"Same as me, I expect," Luke nodded. "Hunt down the opposition, hit them in a series of hit and run strikes until they're all down. Then go after the flag."

"Whose idea was this again?"

"Omi," Luke rolled his eyes. "I think she wants us to be like Richard."

"I'd rather slit my throat," Hans growled.

"I'd rather slit your throat, too," Luke smirked.

As they had predicted, the ROTC Team attacked them with a series of hit and run raids. Classic ambush tactics. Where they were led by a single leader, the Losers team was led by fourteen individuals. There was no cohesion. When an attack came from the left, everyone turned to the left. No one watched the right, where the danger truly lay. They were whittled down, one by one. Even trying to work as their own team, and watch one another's backs did no good. Hans and Luke were among the first targeted. After they fell, there was nothing for it but to walk back to watch their flag get taken.

"Glad we're not going to have any of you with us when we take on the aliens," Richard smirked. "You guys are the sorriest excuse for soldiers I've ever seen."

"Man," Hans groaned as the ROTC members hurled abuse and insults at them. "I've never felt more humiliated."

"I hate that guy," Luke growled as Richard stood on a table and regaled his troops with a debriefing of how soundly they 'whupped those losers' asses!'


* * *


As had happened the night before, Hans and Leia dashed from the dinner table before Luke could catch them. He remained behind and helped with the dishes before he too left the house and followed the sidewalk into town. He sat at a bench in a park that overlooked a central area, watching the people as they went about their business of having fun. Once, he thought he had seen Leia go by, in the company of three young men, but he knew that couldn't be right. As the evening wore on and the families disappeared, only the students, of all ages, were left. Groups congregated and moved on. Couples appeared, entwined, and moved to somewhere else. With a sigh, Luke rose from the bench and headed toward the brighter lights of the beach center.

"Hey!" he heard someone call. "Luke, right?"

Luke turned to face the newcomer. It was the girl from the other night.

"Hey, Alison," Luke nodded, waiting for her to catch up.

"So, where ya been?" she asked. "I kept my eyes open for you and your buddy, but you never showed."

"We, uh, were busy," Luke shrugged. "We went paint-balling today."

"Really?" she grinned. "How did you make out?"

"We got creamed," he snorted.

"You lost?" she raised her eyebrow. "I kind of got the feeling that you and Hans would be good at that sort of thing."

"We came up against this ROTC team," he rolled his eyes. "They've been training. I think the guy in charge, Richard, has plans of single handedly kicking out the aliens in New Mexico."

"What about yesterday?" Alison looked at him. "How come you didn't come looking for me yesterday?"

"I thought Hans did," Luke looked surprised. "He was gone all day. All evening too. I figured..."

"Nope," she shook her head. "Never saw him."

"Sorry."

"So what is it with him?" She smirked. "Is he always so... prickly?"

"Prickly?" Luke started to laugh. "Yeah. Yeah. He's prickly all right. Don't know, really. Never considered it."

"Do you want to get an ice cream?"

"Sure," Luke nodded.

"Well, lets go then," she threaded her arm through his. "Scoops is this way, girlfriend."

"Girlfriend?" he raised an eyebrow.

"It's an honorary thing," she laughed.


From behind the concession stand, Hans watched through narrowed eyes as his brother, and best friend, met up with Alison. He couldn't believe that after all they had agreed, he had broken a rule and had approached someone. Didn't he realize that they had to stay detached? Leia could see that, which was why she played one off against the other so easily. Why couldn't Luke see?

"What is he doing?" His eyes widened when Luke took her arm in his.

He followed them, staying a safe distance behind as Luke led her to the Scoops Ice Cream Parlor. He watched her smile and laugh at the things Luke said.

"He wouldn't tell her our secret, would he?" he demanded of himself.

They sat down outside, at a small table, for two.

"Cozy," Hans growled.

They both had a sundae in front of them. One chocolate, the other was red.

"Probably cherry," he decided. "Luke likes cherry."

"When Alison reached her spoon across and helped herself to Luke's ice cream, Hans had had enough. He would go and let Luke know how careless he was being. He would tell him off for risking them like this.

"Hey, it's Hans," Alison smiled at him as he marched toward them. "Hi! We only just got here. You want a sundae, too?"

"Uh," Hans was startled. "Yeah. Yeah, that would be great."

"'Kay," she rose. "You grab one of those spare chairs while I get you one. My treat."

"What are you doing?" he hissed at Luke when she was inside.

"I could tell you, Hans," Luke looked around for anyone eavesdropping. "But it's a secret."

"Oh, funny, hah hah," he rolled his eyes.

"What does it look like?"

"It looks like you're endangering us," Hans snapped.

"Yeah," Luke nodded. "'Cause all these additives will harden our arteries."

"Hope you like lemons," Alison announced placing a lemon sundae in front of Hans. "Cause I love them."

"I thought this was supposed to be for me," he raised his eyebrows as Alison reached over and helped herself to a spoonful of his sundae.

"You don't mind," she smiled, sucking the ice cream from her spoon. "Do you?"

"Whatever," he waved his hand at it.

"So, Hans," she returned to her own Sundae. "That name so does not suit you."

"And?" he glared at her. "How about I change it for you?"

"Really?" she blinked. "You'd do that for me?"

"Of course not!" he growled.

Alison started to laugh.

"Oh boy," she smirked. "You are too easy. So, what kind of girls do you go for? Or don't freshmen in North Carolina do the dating thing?"

"I like the quiet, invisible kind," Hans glared. "The kind that will do what you tell them, shut up and stay out of your way until you need them."

"I know just the girl for you, then," Alison smirked. "There's an Adult store in Sarasota. You can buy one of those blow-up dolls there. Perfect for you. Except she might have too much personality for you. How about you?" She turned to Luke.

"Luke doesn't do girls," Hans snapped, stung by Alison's doll joke.

"Oh," Maria raised her eyes. "I see."

"No you don't," Luke glared at his friend. "I don't know what kind of girl I go for, 'cause I haven't met her yet."

"How do you know, if you don't know what you're looking for?" Alison frowned.

"I..." Luke sighed. How could he explain this? "It's not on the outside. It's on the inside. I just... I'll just know."

At the end of the evening, they walked Alison back to her hotel.

"Oh," Luke called before she went through the doors. "We're having our birthday party on Saturday. You'll come, won't you?"

"Sure," she called back, laughing. "Maybe I'll go to Sarasota and buy Hans his perfect date." Still laughing, she went into the hotel.

"What did you do that for?" Hans demanded as they turned for home.

"Because she's nice," Luke shrugged.

"She's weird."

"She's friendly."

"She's overbearing."

"And because you like her."

"What?" Hans gasped. "I do not!"

"Really?" Luke raised an eyebrow. "Then how come you were so jealous that I was alone with her?"


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Red Shift Part 2 Chapter 9

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Hi everyone!

Can I just read a few Parish announcements first?

Firstly, I would like you all to know that I will be posting the long awaited addition to my Home For The Holidays series, Auld Lang Syne very, very shortly. Watch for it on the AU without Aliens boards.

Second. I am going to start posting soon, a delightful story called Parisienne Walkways. This is a very Adult story so no minors, please. :wink: It's M&L centric, I'm afraid. No other couples will feature. This story will not interfere with Red Shift, so don't expect weekly postings. Again, it's an AU without Aliens tale, but I'm sure my three beta readers (yes, three, I needed a specialist on board for this one.) would all agree that it's definately worth reading. And I suspect that their partners appreciate it too!! :wink: Coming soon to a thread near you!

Third, as always, thank you all so very much for your generous feedback. See? It's not all that confusing really, is it? :) Unbuckles those seat belts, and just enjoy the ride ... for a while, anyway. :wink:


AJK001 - Well... as tempted as I was to make Max win, there were two important reasons for that whole scene. I'm sure you will spot them when the time comes.

Timelord31 - Hmmm... Interesting dilema. Do I make Max meet Liz first, or do I have Maria bring her to the party?

lazza - Maybe this time around, he will get it right. :wink: As for Rishard, well... he's a special case. :wink:

BehrObsession - By missing from the group, are you implying that maybe it was Liz? Cause like I said last week, IF it was, would Max have left her there? I don't think so.

frenchkiss70 - Well, you are right. I don't think anyone who was on the side of the pod squad would recreate Tess/Ava. So where does that leave us in relation to who was in the pod?

Venus_star2.com - Soon. Soon. Have patiance. :)

omwf - Well... if someone who must clearly be on the side of the pod squad went to all that trouble of resurrescting the gang, why would he recreate people who caused problems? Not very clever. But Richard is not anyone connected with canon Roswell.

tequathisy - Luke does seem more wise, doesn't he? I wonder if there is a reason for that? :wink:

smokie - Fear not. Second story has no (major) angst, no confusion, no major mystery, no need to work out how my devious mind works and only one minor cliffhanger. And yes, it really is me who is writing it! :wink: I was in the mood for something light and fluffy, but someone twisted my arm and made me write it with a lot more steam than I normally do!!! :wink:
Now... as for Liz, or rather... Whats-her-name. I'm sure she will turn up, eventually. Probably around the same time as I explain my title to you. :wink:

NorafanofMaxandLiz - I hope everything is okay now. I haven;t been around MSN for a while. I have a wireless connection now and the damned thing keeps dropping MSN. To 'pull' is slang for obtaining dates.
But answers... well, forhet them for a while and go with the flow. :wink:

roswellluver - I had fun creating the ROTC guys. Richard is based on a guy I knew at school. Military mad. Couldn't wait to join the army. But he was no where near as good as Richard. :wink:

mareli - No, Alison won;t be the focal point of the stopry. Luke is, right now. And soon, his 'Liz' will join him on center stage. Alison is merely a conduit. :wink:

aurorasky - Well... Hans has it tougher than Luke, but for reason that I cannot divulge right now. But thats why he is the way he is with Alison.

Ellie - But it's not like they CHOSE to interact with those guys. But Luke did learn a valuable lesson there. Trust me, he did. :wink:

Roswelllostcause - Are you sure Liz is on her way? :wink: And maybe they will have some residual feelings from the past...

roswell3053 - Well, I can promise you one thing. Luke WILL meet his alternate version of Liz soon. :wink:

nibbles2 - There are plenty of people who would love to have kids like Richard. But remember that he is still that. A kid. Maybe he will be much better when he is older?

Scottie - What? Are you trying to tell me that my story lines are forgettable? I update weekly and you still forget??? :wink: Richard is no relation. Every 'grandmother' of German descent that I have ever met has insisted that I call her Omi or Oma. So I based her on all of them. And Opa's line about the day getting old was a direct quote from an amazing old guy who lived in a log cabin in the heart of the Black Forest. A real character. Of course, he said it in German. :wink:

cherie - I seriously doubt that anyone connectec to the posters and recreated them would recreat trouble for them, too. Richard is Richard and no one else. Not Sean and not Doug - both of whom could both still be alive.


Red Shift


Part 2


Chapter 9


Part 2


Chapter 9


Luke could hear someone moving about in the kitchen. The light streaming into the porch was still filtered by the golden glow of sunrise, tinted by the curtains at the windows. He rose, and stretching as he yawned, padded on bare feet into the kitchen.

"Morning, son," Allan smiled as Luke came in. He was making a pot of tea. "Couldn't sleep?"

"Uh," Luke rubbed his eyes. "It's not that. I wanted to get up early today."

"You got plans?"

"Kind of," Luke nodded. "Seeing as tomorrow's Saturday, and we go home on Sunday... I'm going to catch the bus into Tampa today. There's a museum I want to check out."

"'Morning, Luke," Omi came in, carrying a basket of laundry. "Do you want some breakfast?"

"Yeah," Luke smiled at her. "Please."

"Well you sit yourself down, then," she placed the basket on the counter. "Waffles?"

"Sure," Luke poured himself an orange juice.

"Which museum is that, Luke?" Allan continued as he poured steaming liquid into three cups.

"It's the Museum of Science and Industry," he answered.

"The MOSI?" Omi reached into the cupboard for a plate. "You'll enjoy that, Luke. They even have a planetarium in there. There's a bus stop at the end of Sandy Cove Road, out on Ocean Boulevard. If you catch the number six zero one, it runs right past the museum on East Fowler Avenue. In fact, as I recall, the stop is right outside the MOSI."

"Get your skates on, son," Allan grinned, looking at his watch. "I'll drop you off on Ocean."

"Great," Luke grinned, hurrying his breakfast. "Thanks Allan."

"What about Hans?" he raised an eyebrow. "And Leia? They might want to go."

"Nah," Luke shook his head. "It's not their scene."

"Morning, Luke," Opa blinked as he came into the kitchen, belting his dressing gown. "You're up early."

"It's not early," Luke smirked. "The day's getting old."

* * *

Luke only had to wait twenty minutes for the air-conditioned bus that would take him all the way up to Tampa. He climbed up the stairs, handed over his fare and found a seat on the left-hand side of the bus so that he was sitting in the shade. He slid down in the seat, bringing his knees up so that they rested against the seat in front of him, and watched Florida through the tinted windows.

"This is the MOSI," the driver called back when the bus stopped in front of a large, ornate building.

Luke slid out of the seat and hurried down the aisle. He stepped from the cool interior and out into the humid heat of Tampa. His eyes widened at the line of people waiting patiently to get in. Luke climbed the long, wide stairs to join the line. At the top, he resisted the urge to jump up and down with his arms raised aloft like that boxer had in that film he saw. He joined the line that snaked past the tall colonnades.

After Luke had paid the lady behind the glass window his entrance fee, he folded his wallet into his back pocket and went into the building. Looking up, he read the large gold letters.

"The Museum of Science and Industry."

Inside the foyer, he looked up at the boards that showed the directions to the various exhibits. He looked at them all, deciding to head for the hands on science area. Following the color-coded arrows, he finally arrived at a huge hall around which hundreds of experiments could be performed with simple, every day items. He watched the mainly younger kids who played with wheels and cogs, wires, batteries and switches. Light bulbs, bells, buzzers and blue liquid that turned a gray pole a copper color all found their way into experiments. He couldn't help sharing their joy, even though to him, it was fairly basic. Luke spent almost two hours in that hall.

He followed the colored arrows again, this time to the Hurricane room. A small group of kids, mainly teenagers, stood in a large chamber in between two heavy grills. In front of each grill was a barrier. These barriers and the floor was made of a heavy duty padding, the intention was to prevent any form of injury. The floor had been marked, showing them where to stand. Luke could tell that this would prevent people colliding with one another. When the steward had let in enough people, he closed the door. Overhead speakers welcomed them and gave the introduction speech. From one of the grills, Luke could hear the motors start and felt a breeze.

"At one mile per hour," a voice spoke over the speakers. "The air is considered calm. Up to four miles per hour, it's simply called light air."

Over head, a large, red digital readout read zero four. It was climbing slowly to match the speaker. Luke could feel the air speed up. In the distance, he could hear the fan spinning faster.

"At fifteen miles per hour, we are still only a moderate breeze. On land, dust and small branches would move. At sea, we would see small waves."

Still the readout climbed.

"At twenty five miles per hour, it's considered a strong breeze. Large branches would move, wires would whistle and umbrellas would be difficult to control. Large waves would form at sea, maybe as high as three meters. There would be some spray. At thirty two miles per hour, we are at near gale."

Luke could feel the wind pushing against him.

"Whole trees would be in motion, and you would definitely feel an inconvenience in walking. Mounting sea conditions would push waves as high as four meters with foam blown in streaks downwind."

And still it continued. As the wind grew stronger, so too did it become more difficult to stand. The higher the red number climbed, the more the kids fell over, safely caught by the protective barrier behind them.

"At wind speed greater than seventy-four miles per hour," the voice was shouting, "you are officially in a hurricane. And you've all seen the picture. You don't need me to tell you what is happening."

With his back pressed against the barrier, having fallen over during a 'storm' with the wind at sixty miles an hour, Luke felt awed by the sheer force of the hurricane wind. He heard the winding down of the motors and waited until the wind allowed him to stand again. From the looks on everyone's face, he knew that they to had believed the experience awesome. After an experience like that, there was only one place to go.

The planetarium.


The astronomy lecturer clearly knew his stuff. After a brief presentation on the creation of the universe, and its incomprehensible size, he gave a brief description on how stars were born, and died as well as how planets were created. He covered black holes, quasars, pulsars and supernovas. He kept it light and he kept it entertaining. And at the end, he threw the forum open for questions.

"Yes," he pointed to the dark shadow of the only raised hand.

"I often hear scientists refer to the beginning of the universe as the Big Bang theory," a young girl's voice called. The voice held a confidence and spoke of her desire for knowledge. It was a voice that stirred things inside of Luke. A shiver ran up and down his spine. "Why exactly is it that they believe this all started with an explosion?"

"Ah," the lecturer grinned. "The easy questions first, huh?"

Everyone laughed.

"The simplest answer," he smiled, "is to tell you that we know this from the Hubble Law. Now what, you ask, is the Hubble Law? Okay, in 1926, astronomer Edwin Hubble, while investigating the spectrum of some faint distant galaxies, discovered an unusual relationship. The spectrum of each of the galaxies he investigated was shifted toward the red end of the spectrum - called redshift.

"Redshift is a measure of how fast a celestial object is moving relative to us. If you have ever stood by the side of the road as a car passed by, you have a sense for what redshift is. As the car moves toward you, the pitch of its engine sounds higher than the engine of a stationary car. As the car moves away from you, the engine's pitch is lower than the engine of a stationary car. The reason for this change is the Doppler effect, named for its discoverer, Austrian physicist Christian Doppler. As the car moves toward you, the sound waves that carry the sound of its engine are compressed. As the car moves away from you, these sound waves are stretched.

"The same effect happens with light waves. If an object moves toward us, the light waves it emits will be compressed - the wavelength will be shorter, so the light will become bluer. If an object moves away from us, its light waves will be stretched, and will become redder. The degree of 'redshift' or 'blueshift' is directly related to the object's speed in the direction we are looking. The speeds of cars are far too small for us to notice any redshift or blueshift. But galaxies are moving fast enough with respect to us that we can see a noticeable shift. And what we have noticed is that all distant galaxies showed only a redshift, which meant that all galaxies were receding from us. The further away they were, the higher the redshift. And in all directions! More distant galaxies appeared to be moving away at much larger velocities than those closer to us. The universe appeared to be expanding like some gigantic balloon being blown up, or some cosmic explosion.

"Remember that the Big Bang theory is a direct result of the belief that the universe is expanding, which in turn is based on the assumption that the Doppler effect is the cause of the distance-redshift relationship for distant galaxies. If another explanation for this relationship is found which does not require an expanding universe, then there is no reason to believe there ever was a Big Bang. And there is another explanation -- one that has been experimentally proven! But I think that's best saved for another session. If you are really interested, look up The Shapiro Effect. Does, uh, that answer your question?"

"Yes," the voice sounded confident. "Thank you."

It was a stunned audience that left the hall.


After a lecture like that, Luke followed the path to a concession stand where he bought himself a hot dog and a cherry coke. As he ate, he wondered if the girl understood the answer. She certainly sounded as though she did.

After lunch, Luke found the nature trail. Three and a half miles of what they referred to as 'Back Woods'. Luke followed the winding track as it meandered through flora and fauna reservations for endangered species. He paused in a Seminole Indian Chickee shelter that acted as a window to the wetlands. Luke was rather enjoying himself.

And then he saw her.

Through a gap in the trees, across a fenced-off stream, surrounded by a halo of light, she stood in the sun, talking to two younger children, though she hardly looked much older herself. Perhaps his own age, maybe a year younger. The white, knee length dress that she wore gave her an aura of almost angelic proportions. Her smiling face lifted up, looking his way, but not at him, framed by the cascades of mahogany brown locks. Even from where he stood, her deep brown eyes sparkled with the joy of life. She positively glowed and Luke wondered if she was truly real or some figment that he might have imagined in a dream sometime. When she laughed at a comment from one of the children, his heart started to pound. She spoke to them, and although he could not hear her words, it was the same voice from the Planetarium. The one who had asked the question, and had understood the answer. Here was a girl with beauty to match her intelligence, and from the easy way she dealt with the two young children, he knew that her beauty was more than skin deep. Luke's soul was practically singing to him.

For the rest of the afternoon, Luke followed her; though stalking would have been a better description. He made sure that she did not see him, making use of the natural cover as well as pillars and walls. Anything that allowed him to watch her. As the day wore on, he followed her to the exits and he cast barely a thought as they left the Museum. She walked with the two children, holding their hands tightly, past the colonnades and down the huge steps. She paused at the edge of the road. Luke sucked in huge breaths, trying to pluck up the courage to approach her. To speak to her. Just as he took that first but oh so important first step, a large car pulled up in front of her. A flurry of activity, the happy calling of excited greetings and moments later, the car was pulling away. She was gone. Red shifted from his life before he had even met her.


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The bus journey home was a mind numbing blur. He was only too aware that every mile that the bus took him from Tampa was another mile away from her. And he never even knew her name. The driver had to shout at him twice when they had reached his stop. His feet stumbled one in front of the other as he followed Sandy Cove Road home. Tears that he had kept back since that car had taken her away from him started to appear now. They flooded his eyes. Luke could not help the feeling that grew in the pit of his stomach.

Emptiness. For the first time since he had emerged from his pod, Luke felt truly alone.

No one was at home, yet. A scribbled note indicated that Omi and Opa had gone to Granny and Grandpa's house for the evening. Leia was out with friends and Hans had disappeared earlier in the day, probably to see Alison. Allan and Debra had taken advantage of the solitude and had gone out for dinner. Everyone had someone. He had no one.

His footsteps led him away from the house and toward the beach center, where the kids his own age hung out. Perhaps he would try to bury his loneliness with someone. Anyone. Leia had always told him that the girls found him attractive. He could find one. A girl who would offer him companionship and help take the bitter sting away. Someone who could help fill the void in his heart.

As he reached Scoops, he saw Leia. He was about to call to her, to ask for her help when he noticed her companions. Not settling for just one admirer, she had surrounded herself with three, while a small crowd of hopefuls hung around, hoping to be added to her harem. Her laughter at one of her companions' comments showed him that his interruption would not be welcome. He would have to be alone on his own time.

Turning away, he headed for the beach. Crowds of people were walking up and down the water's edge. Couples, holding hands, pausing for an occasional kiss. He spotted Hans. He was with Alison. They were neither holding hands nor kissing. They were arguing. The pitch and yaw of her harsh words gave stark evidence that his own feelings would not matter in this strange game the two of them played. With a heavy sigh, Luke turned for home. Empty, shallow fumbles in the sand with strangers were not for him, anyway.

It had been a long day. A day in which he had found, and lost, the girl of his dreams. The only thing he could think right now was...

"It was her."


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As parties went, this was the worst one Luke had ever attended. True, it was also the only one he had ever attended. Everyone who had turned up had someone. Leia's three friends, Lyle, Raul and Anders followed her wherever she went. Having spoken with them, Luke had decided that they were all okay, even if Lyle's dry sense of humor took a bit of getting used to. Alison who kept up a steady stream of litany that he should have acted upon, if only to shut her up, constantly shadowed Hans. Even the obnoxious Richard Madly, who spent most of his time humiliating Luke and Hans as much as he could by telling anyone who would listen how badly he had 'whipped Luke and Hans ass,' had come with someone; a ditzy blonde who giggled at the slightest provocation and wore a mini skirt that perhaps a cheerleader her age really shouldn't have been wearing. Luke was starting to get more than a little worried about Richard's predilection to 'whipping asses.' Richard, it seemed, was one of these who enjoyed his victories and enjoyed even more, the opportunity to rub those victories in his vanquished foe's noses. But then, he was fast-tracked.

But Luke paid him scant consideration and merely grinned - or was that a grimace - when Opa or Grandpa teased him about his defeats. His mind, if not his heart was on weightier matters. He wanted nothing more than to have skipped town that morning, and spend the day searching Tampa for his dream girl.

"What's up?" Alison appeared at his shoulder. "You look really down. You're supposed to be happy on your birthday."

"I found her," he sighed.

"Found who?"

"Remember when you asked me what kind of girl I went for? And I said that I didn't know because I hadn't found her yet?"

"Yeah, I remem..." her eyes widened and her hand flew to her mouth. "Wow! You really found her? Where is she? Did you invite her here? Oh, Luke. Tell me you spoke to her."

"I tried," he nodded, fighting back the tears. "She was standing there, and I wanted to go to her, and I did. I mean, I started. But then, a car came. She got in. And she just..." Luke looked up at Alison. "She left. And I never even got to find out her name."

"Oh, Luke," she placed an arm on his shoulder. "I'm so sorry. But you know, if it's meant to be, you'll meet her again."

"She lives in Tampa, Alison," Luke frowned. "We fly home to Raleigh tomorrow. How will I meet her again?"

She had no answer for him.

"Well," Alison sighed. "She might not be your dream girl, okay? But she's really, really nice. I made a new friend the other day and, well, I sort of invited her over. You'll really like her. Trust me."

"Thanks, Alison," Luke nodded as he scratched his ear. "I just want to be alone."

Placing a hand on her shoulder, Luke smiled and walked through the house and out to the back yard. At the end of the yard, he opened the gate and stepped out into the path. He looked out to sea and glanced up and down the beach with his hands in his pockets. With a heavy sigh, Luke wandered down to the water's edge and followed it, thinking of a dark haired angel whose name he didn't know.


Somewhere out there beneath the pale moonlight
Someone's thinking of me and loving me tonight
Somewhere out there someone's saying a prayer
That we'll find one another in that dream somewhere out there

And even though I know how very far apart we are
It helps to think we might be wishin' on the same bright star
And when the night wind starts to sing a lonesome lullaby
It helps to think we're sleeping underneath the same big sky

Somewhere out there if love can see us through (love can see us through)
Then we'll be together somewhere out there
Out where dreams come true



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Alison stared after him as he walked through the porch wishing she could help her friend. She felt bad about inviting her other friend now, but she seemed just like him. A little shy but very considerate of others. Maybe she could just cheer him up a little, even if they weren't meant to be. The doorbell rang and she turned to answer, seeing as she was nearest to the door.

"Julia!" she squealed. Her newest friend was standing at the door, clutching a white envelope. She pulled her in for a hug. "You came!"

"Yeah," the petite girl with long, mahogany colored hair smiled as she stepped into the house. "I figured that this was your last day and all, I'd just come and, you know, hang."

"Come on," Alison smiled. "You have to meet Luke. And he is so in need cheering up." She tried to reach for Julia's arm.

"Oh, no, no, no, no, no," Julia waved Alison's arm away. "Listen. I'm not interested in a relationship right now, okay? I only came 'cause I wanted to see you before you left. I'm sorry I couldn't see you yesterday, but I promised my aunt that I'd take my cousins to the MOSI. But guess what?" Her dark eyes lit up.

"What?" Alison wondered what a MOSI was.

"I saw the cutest guy there yesterday."

"No way!" Alison grinned. "Really?"

"Yes way, Alison," Julia nodded and grabbed both her arms. "He was like, so totally shy. I saw him a few times; he was always trying to like, blend in with the crowd or something. Like he didn't want anyone to see him. But I could. And he was so..."

"Hot?"

"Cute."

"So, did you speak to him or anything?" Alison's eyes blazed.

"I was going to," her face fell. "He was walking toward the bus stop and I was trying to pluck up the courage to speak to him. Say hello or something. But my Uncle arrived I just couldn't say anything in front of him so I kind of hurried the kids inside and shut the door. Oh, Alison," she shook her head. "I'll never see him again. And he was the one. You know? It was him!"

"Wow," Alison shook her head with sadness. "That is just... so... déjà vu."


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:)

Okay, so what else COULD her name have been, huh?

And hands up all those who knew all along what the Red Shift was? :wink:
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Red Shift Part 2 Chapter 10

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Hi everyone,

As many of you have noticed, I have started to post Parisienne Walkways. Hope you enjoy it. :)

I have recieved a few messages professing still a little confusion about the timeline, and the arrival of these teenagers. I'm sure there are many more, and if my writing has led to this confusion, I'm sorry. So I have put together this little precis to explain how it all fits together, without giving anything away.

Okay, remember how in the prologue, there was a 14 year old girl in a coma? Her name was... Alison. And then the nurse that looked after her mentioned that there was a young boy, the same age, in the same kind of coma somewhere else?

Now, during the latter half of the month of September, Tess (it's safe to assume it was all her handiwork) set about systematically murdering the human ties to the Pod Squad, Liz, Jess, Kyle and finally, Maria. Then, an alien Armada, led by Nikolas, invaded the state of New Mexico while a squad of aliens led by Tess attempted to capture Max (she wanted him alive, and ran into an oposing force that also seemed to want Max) But Max, seeing that all hope was gone, blew himself up. Tess and Nikolas began searching for the King's Seal.

Now, a few days later, in early October, three 'beings' who call themselves Zan, Rath and Vilondra emerge from a set of pods (leaving a mysterious 4th behind), hidden in the basement of an unmanned lighthouse in Wilmington, South Carolina. And it seems that someone was expecting them to do so, because that person (a protector, Cal?) arranged for them all to be picked up, and delivered to a safehouse and into the care of Debra and Allen Skye. Whoever it was has a sense of humour (and a Link to Hollywood?) because he named them Luke and Leia Skye and Hans Ollow. Dreadful pun on Star Wars.

The trio grow up learning that they are different, that they have powers and that they are here to do something important. It's pretty safe to assume that this is in fact, Max, Isabel and Michael, somehow reborn, in another set of pods.

During Spring break of the following year (six months or so after the Alien invasion) they visit Siesta Key in Florida where they immediately meet Alison (she from the coma?) who is so like Maria, it's uncanny. And Isabel meets a trio of boys (that nurse mentioned another coma patient. Why couldn;t there have been more?) who are so like Jesse, Kyle and Alex... And now Luke has seen a girl who he knows is "her". And she is petite, long dark hair and a very scientific mind... Hmmm.... She has 'Liz' stamped all over her.

The mystery is now... How did this new set of pods come to be? AND How did Liz and co get reborn... into bodies that look so much like their original selves that they could have been cloned. But, they have been in hospital for 14 years. How did someone, 14 years ago, know that Liz, Maria, Alex and Kyle would be important to the podsters? Who even knew that Jesse would ride into town 14 years ago? Clearly, there is someone... or something very powerful at work here.


Hope that helps remove the confusion you shouldn't have and be left only with that you should. :wink:

Thank you all so very much for your feedback. I hope when I've finished, you will all look back on this story with as much fondness for it as you had for Blue Remembered Hills. (I still get requests for a sequel to that story! :wink:)

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youre my dreamgirl - I did think that the Planetarium would be a most fitting place for their first 'encounter'. I was considering having Max seeing her as he climbed off the bus and have him follow her around all day, but then it would have lessened the impact of not speaking to her at all.

Ellie - Ah, but they don't have a name to go on yet. Alison did not put two and two together. She only knows that Luke saw her in Tampa, and that Julia saw her guy at a place called MOSI.

roswellluver - Couldn't make it TOO easy for them. :wink:

BehrObsession - Similar yes, but as far as she knows, different places. And what are the odds? So it would be a big stretch to place them together.

Timelord31 - Um... no. Something moving away is red. Something coming closer is blue. What we see in an asteroid is different. Perhaps Heavenli24 could explain that a little better than I. :wink:

roswell3053 - Pretty spot on. Luke and Julia noticed each other, and just knew.

lazza - Glad to be of service. :) And don;t lose any sleep over that envelope. You're supposed to think it was a card. It IS a birthday party. :wink:

aurorasky - Well.. then you should enjoy their first 'real' meeting. AND their first 'date'. :wink:

frenchkiss70 - No, it'sa not. It it's not complicated, they probably aren't... nevermind. :wink:

AJK001 - Fear not. I'm sure I can engineer a scenario to put the right people together in the same place. :wink:

tequathisy - True, but then the story would be near the end. And you don;t want this to end too soon, do you? :wink:

cherie - I thought the Planetarium was appropriate. :)

omwf - Yes, I confess. I am a romantic. But then, haven;t you realised this from my other stories? :wink:

Venus_star2.com - Okay, I had to look 'Mara Jade' up. LOL. I ony saw the films. I never read any of the vast catalogue of Star Wars fiction that has been written. Sorry. But even if I had, Julia would still be Julia because of the link to the song. :)

mareli - The title actually has more to do with the past and the future and the relationships. Which is why you get the glimpses of Antar in between the other chapters. (past is red, going away. future is blue, coming towards us.)

Alien614 - Glad you liked it. :)

Scottie - I am actually consciously trying to avoid major cliffhangers for Part 2. A difficult task for me. :wink: LOL And what better justification to reading fanfis than saying, hey, it educates me, too. :)

Leigh - Yes, Richard very much has a military future set in his sights.

Heavenli24 - It's good to get a little validation on this. :wink: As for Luke and Julia (just ask my beta team how many times they catch me writing Max or Liz :wink:) I'm sure thry'll meet properly. soon. Maybe next spring break, huh?

smokie - Mean? Well, I guess. But look at it this way. I get to prolong the longing. :wink: As for the other genre, well... I have written things like that before. The Christmas present in BRH springs to mind. ;) But you can thank BelevnDreamsToo. The devil made me do it. :wink:

Red Shift


Part 2


Chapter 10


The battle may have been a good omen as far as the start of the war was concerned, but one battle does not a war make. During the course of the next few years, the armies' fortunes swung first one way and then the other, before coming back again. Although no one could lay claim to a decisive victory, the Senatists were losing ground as the King's armies, lead by a single command structure, held sway against those lead by three different men who had three different ideas. The result of this was mirrored with a slight shift in the Monarchy's popularity as more people returned to the past. The Senatists were in danger of being defeated... and radical change was called for.

"It's Dray's fault!" Traydn snapped. "With his calls to be made overlord. He sees himself as a replacement to the King and not as a leader of soldiers."

"I would have to agree," Larek nodded. "We are not interested in replacing a King with a Dictator."

"I must protest!" Dray defended. "I am the one best suited to lead us all, for I am the one who knows Antar."

"We all know Antar," Nikolas sneered. "What makes you better suited than any of us?"

"The Antaran soldiers will not follow some off worlder," Dray pointed to the Senate. "And why would one of you have any more right than I? It is me who gave you the Capitol. Don't forget that!"

"The problem remains, gentlemen," Kathana spoke out, "that you are leading three separate armies whereas the King leads but one. True, he delegates to two other generals in Rath and Zan, but they follow his command. His plan."

"Perhaps..." Hanar's voice was quiet. "Perhaps we should consider inviting Deryn to return."

His comment was met with silence.

"You cannot decide upon a single leader," he pressed on, "and as things stand, he will end up victorious anyway. So why not save the lives of thousands and end this war now?"

"You forget yourself," Sero snarled. "You forget how easily he just cast us aside. Oh yes, how remiss of me. Denst would profit greatly from an increase in taxes."

"Please," Khivar raised his hand. "Fighting among ourselves is doing us no favors and makes Deryn's position stronger. We must decide upon a single over-all commander. An overlord."

"What about Khivar?" a voice from the audience called out.

His request was met with a lot of head nodding and a murmur of agreement. The four Senators exchanged glances with one another, giving small nods.

"The Senate would agree to that," Larek spoke for them. "As a Senator himself, he knows the value of our role. What do the Generals say?"

"I can accept that," Nicholas stood up and pressed his clenched right fist over his breast.

"As can I," Traydn followed suit.

"I'll give it a go," Dray grumbled. "But if I don't see any better performance from him, then I reserve the right to assume full control over my own Battalion again."

"But..." Khivar seemed stunned. His mouth opened and closed. Speechless. "But I... What do I know of war? Of leading armies?"

"What did Zan know?" Larek smiled. "And look how successful he has been proving. He may not have won a battle as yet, but neither has he been defeated."

"Only because he has not yet met me on the field," Nicholas smirked.

"Nevertheless," Larek continued. "He has learned well, and quickly. Khivar has the three greatest military minds on the planet at his disposal. How can he not succeed?"

"But I haven't agreed to anything yet," Khivar shook his head.

"You're the best man for the job," Sero agreed. "Please, say you will do it."

The room called for his acceptance.

"All right," his head nodded slowly. "I will agree. But I must ask one concession."

"Anything," Larek leaned forward.

"I must be given full and autonomous control. I cannot rule an army by committee. No one can. Unless I lead unilaterally, nothing will be gained. But grant me this, and I 'will' deliver you victory."

"Agreed!" everyone cheered.


* * *


"I hate this war," Zan stood at the entrance to new quarters and stared out across the square to the buildings that housed his army.

Weary looking soldiers, some veterans of many battles while others were new recruits, refugees who had joined the Monarchists after their homes and families were destroyed by those opposed to the King, drilled in make-shift squares. Their uniforms were tattered remnants of whatever they could find, colored with red dye to make them look like part of a unit. To one side, armories repaired weapons that had been scavenged after the recent battle. To the rear, close to the houses that housed the officers and their families, a clutch of small buildings housed the catering corps. Great pots poured steam from the weak broth that had become their staple diet, along with the bread that had been cooked in earthen ovens. The advanced civilization of Anatar had deteriorated to such primitive conditions. Everyone looked tired, defeated and... hopeless.


"Let me rephrase that," Zan shook his head. "I hate war. Period."

"I agree," Ava approached him. "But it's not like you started it. They dragged you into this, you know. Rather than trying to just depose your father, they threatened to have you executed too. That hardly makes you the guilty party, Zan."

"I know," he sighed. "It's just..." he waved his hands in frustration. "Five years! Five years we've been locked in this stalemate. We have a battle, we have a standoff, we both sneak away to lick our wounds. Sometimes we win, sometimes they do. Then there are the minor skirmishes when we send out patrols to reconnoiter, or to search for food. And all the while..."

"And five years you've been a general," Ava gave a proud smile. "And a pretty good one, too."

"It was a case of having to be," Zan turned back into the tent. "After Traydn and Nickolas defected to the side of the Senatists, and it turned out that Dray had been on the other side all along... I still can't believe it. That Dray orchestrated this whole... mess. He never struck me has having the intelligence to pull all this off."

"Well, if it's any consolation, as many people have stayed loyal to the Monarchists as have defected to the Senatists."

"I know, Ava," Zan sighed. "I know. It's just... While Antar crumbles, I just know that the other planets are preparing to try and take the Granolith from us. Now that they pay no taxes, they prosper while we shrivel under the weight of a war we could ill afford."

"As long as the King controls the Granolith," Ava shrugged, "it's safe. Right?"

"Yes," Zan nodded. "I know. But what if they capture father?"

"Zan?" Ava turned to look at him. "It's been five years. Why are we not yet married?"

Zan looked at her unbelievingly.

"You would have me throw a celebration while Antar burns, Ava?" he gasped. "I would not injure my people so. We will not wed till we have peace." He took a breath and calmed down. His voice dropped to just above a whisper. "Or all is lost."

"Zan," she stamped her foot. "We are at war! We are fighting to maintain the monarchy. And do you realize that you and your sister are the last of your line? You have to give your people an heir. Someone... something to fight for!"


* * *


"Your highness," Rath entered the tent.

"How many times, Rath?" Zan turned to face his friend. "We're both generals now. We're friends. Can't you call me Zan?"

"I bring news," Rath ignored him.

"Good news, I hope," Zan snorted.

"Sorry," Rath shook his head. "It's not. The Senatists have a new leader."

"Do they," Zan raised his eyebrows. "Do we know who?"

"Khivar," Rath said the name as slow as he could.

"There's a turn up," Zan raised his eyebrows. "Why did Dray step aside?"

"He didn't so much step aside, as found a noose around his neck."

"He was executed?" Zan was surprised. "I thought the whole thing was his idea. I thought he was the one who had orchestrated this whole civil war."

"Not executed," Rath shook his head. "He committed suicide. I guess he couldn't handle the humiliation of being replaced like that. I think his failure to defeat you at the Battle of Tegel Plains was the final straw."

"But I didn't exactly win that battle, either," Zan pointed out.

"But you were outnumbered, Zan" Rath smiled. "Two to one. And you led your forces in an orderly retreat. You may not have won, but neither did you lose. And you returned with your army almost completely intact."

"So, what does that mean for us?"

"I'm not sure," Rath shook his head. He took a deep breath. "I guess time will tell."


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Red Shift Part 2 Chapter 11

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Hi everyone,

It seems that I forgot to change the date on the title last week, so if you didn't read Part 10 from last friday's update, go back and do so now.

You all seem pretty much up to speed now, so I guess all I need to do is thank you for your continued feedback. :)

Heavenli24 - Yes, but at present, the Senatists are doing well.

Timelord31 - Glad you're all caught up. :)

AJK001 - Well... you made it this far, right? :)

roswell3053 - Thank you. :)

aurorasky - Well... now they have seen one another... just a matter of time. :wink:

tequathisy - Could be. It could be. :wink:

Ellie - Interesting theory, but one minor flaw. We discovered in part 1 that Future Max was a trick perpetrated by the skins to split Max and Liz up. So unlikely that they would recreate their enemy. Right? All I will say is that you have been given two clues already. BUT - I have still one vital piece of infor to impart. Just not yet. :wink:

frenchkiss70 - I don;t see it as making you wait, rather, as imparting vital information for you. :wink: All good things come to he who waits. LOL

Thanette - Glad you enjoy my writing. But you failed to mention all my other stuff too. :wink:

BehrObsession - Yeah, Khivar sure seemed taken aback, right? :wink:

Roswelllostcause - Yes, Alison will surely have a big part to play in getting Luke and Julia together, :wink: She will have a MAJOR impact on their future relationship.

Scottie - Well, I'm glad that my banner doesn;t look quite so wierd now. :wink: And if Future MAx wasn't real... neither was ... Get the picture? :wink:

roswellluver - Yeah. Sounds like he was pushed. :wink:

VeronicaB - Well... It was both hard and fun writing it, so I'm glad you were moved by it :) But it's a lot of fun for a while so relax. :)

smokie - Even though I have a tendency NOT to answer questions, I still love seeing them, along with the thoughts and ideas that people come up with. It really does keep me on my toes, making sure I have my i's dotted and my t's crossed.

cherie - Thank you for the birthdau wishes. I was hoping to sneak that by quietly :wink: LOL

mareli - I seriously doubt that anyone was fooled by Dray's 'suicide'. :wink:


Red Shift


Part 2


Chapter 11


The journey home from Siesta Key was a quiet affair. Hans seemed slightly more animated than he had on the journey down, while Leia was positively buzzing with the great time she had and nice guys she met. Both Allan and Debra had teased Leia about her faithful 'hounds' and had also teased Hans about his strange, argumentative friendship with Alison. All in all, they had agreed that Anders, Lyle and Raul were very nice boys while Alison was a lovely girl. They wished that there had been someone to tease Luke with. In spite of the chatter, however, it was clear that everyone was feeling a little blue.

"What about you, Luke?" Debra called from the front of the family car as they turned into their neighborhood in Raleigh. "Did you meet any one nice?"

Leia gave a soft snort while Hans rolled his eyes.

"Uh, no," Luke shook his head, looking back from his vigil through the side window for only a moment. "Not really. Alison was okay."

"But did you all have a good time?" Allan called out as they drove up their driveway.

"Oh, yes!" Leia gushed. "It was great meeting our grandparents too, you know."

"Sure," Hans shrugged.

"Yeah," Luke told the window. He turned to face Allan. "Yeah, I did. Thank you for taking us." At least now, he knew whom to look for. Even if it was worse than the proverbial needle in a haystack. This would be a needle in a million haystacks.


The days passed by. For Luke, school was the same old rut of blending in and not being noticed while he watched Leia flirt with a newfound confidence. She was getting really good at playing one guy off against the other. His attempts to hide in plain sight were thwarted by the steady stream of jocks that sought him out to somehow gain some measure of influence over Leia by befriending her brother, who in the end, proved unbefriendable.

In the evenings, after completing his homework, Luke turned to the Internet. Using maps that he had downloaded, courtesy of MapQuest, he had built up a large poster of Tampa. He had marked them into large squares. He would sit for hours, staring at it, hoping against hope that one of his newly developing powers would somehow tell him exactly where his mystery girl lived. Either she did not live in Tampa - a thought that frightened him - or he did not have that power. He settled on the latter.

"What's up, sport," Allan came into his bedroom and sat on the corner of his bed.

"Nothing," Luke sighed. "Just... homework."

"Yeah," he nodded. "I have to say, your grades are really excellent. Especially science."

Luke just shrugged.

"Listen," Allan began. "I've just told Hans and Leia downstairs... you ah, were up here. So now I'm telling you. You all seem a little... down, since your return from Siesta Key. So, I spoke with our folks and they say they'd be happy to have you kids stay with them for the summer. What do you think?"

Luke paused and looked back at the map. An idea started to form. The whole summer to search for her. He had only counted on being allowed to go for two weeks. What were the chances of him finding her now?

"Can I take my bike?" he asked at last.

"I don't see why not," Allan shrugged. "But what with the cost of freighting it down there, it would probably be better to buy one down there. A second hand one."

Luke hadn't thought of that.

"That would be great, Allan," Luke nodded. "Thanks."

"'Course, Debra and I couldn't come for the whole summer... well, I couldn't, I mean. But we thought that if you guys went on your own, and we came down for, say, the last two weeks, or in the middle. Or even one week early on and another at the end of the summer. Anyway, we could spend some time with you guys then. So what do you think?"

"That sounds great," Luke smiled. "Whichever you prefer."


"So," Leia came in shortly after Allan left. "The whole summer, huh?"

"Should be fun," Luke smiled. "Watching your lap dogs tail you like that."

Leia grinned back at him.

"They're all okay, in their own way," Leia nodded, "I mean, if I could meet someone who was a combination of the three, then I would be in heaven."

"Did you ever want to tell them? You know... our origins?" Luke pointed upward.

"Nuh uh," Leia shook her head. "Though I suspect Anders knew that I was hiding something. But he never pressed me, not that I would have told him anything. But I do know that I can trust them. All three of them. They would all be cool with the secret."

"Don't let Hans hear you say that," he rolled his eyes. "But how do you know that?" Luke peered at her. "Is it like, intuition or something?"

Leia looked hard at Luke for a moment before she rose and crossed to the door. She looked up and down the hallway, closed the door and returned to sit on Luke's bed.

"Promise you won't freak out?"

"That means I'm going to," Luke smirked. "It always happens that way on TV."

"Well this isn't TV, okay? This is my life!"

"Sorry, Leia." Luke squirmed in his chair. "I'll be cool with it. You know I will."

"I've discovered a new ability," she leaned forward and whispered.

"You have?" Luke's eyes widened. "What is it? What can you do?"

"Last night, I was looking through my photographs from Spring Break. I had photos of all the guys, yeah? Well, I was looking at one of Anders. Even for a geek, you know, he's kind of cute. Anyway, I kind of fell asleep with his face in my mind. At first I thought I was dreaming. There were all these silver... balloons, I guess. And one of them seemed to be attracted to me. It seemed familiar. So... and I really don't know how I knew to do this, I kind of opened a doorway into the balloon and I stepped in. And I was in this... dance hall. I was wearing a red dress... only it wasn't me. I mean, I was there, but so was another me. In a red dress, a really elegant red dress. And then Anders was there. And I watched him as he took me to dinner and then to a dance... except that we were the only ones there."

"I hate to break it to you Leia," Luke smirked. "But dreaming isn't exactly an alien only ability."

"No, Luke," she shook her head. "You don't understand. I wasn't dreaming. I was in Anders' dream. I can walk into other people's dreams."

Luke thought about her statement for a moment.

"That's uh... wow," he widened his eyes. "That could be really useful, Leia. Can you do it to anyone else?"

"Yeah," she nodded. "I tried it with Lyle and Raul, too."

"Can you only do it to people you know really well?

"They're the only ones I've tried," she shook her head.

"Try it with someone we don't know," Luke narrowed his eyes. "Like a politician or something. But... wait. Do they know you're there? Can they sense you?"

"I don't think so. At least they gave no indication of noticing me. But I think they might have acknowledged me, don't you?"

"Test it on me, first," Luke couldn't believe he was suggesting this. "We need to know if you're visible or not, and seeing as I doubt I dream of you very often... Maybe later, you can try other things. Like, can you control the dream?"

"Do you want to try tonight?"

"Can do," Luke nodded.

"I'm not going to see something that's going to scar me for life, am I?" she stared with suspicion.

"I don't know," he grinned. "You'll have to tell me."

After Leia had left, Luke went to his flight bag to retrieve the information he had brought with him about the Museum he had visited. A plain white envelope fell out. He frowned as he picked it up, having never noticed it before. Slipping his finger into one end, he slid it along the envelope's length, ripping the top open. He pulled out a generic birthday card.

"Happy Birthday - Jules," was all it said inside.

"Who the heck was Jules? He never met anybody called Jules, or anything similar. Especially not at his birthday party. Ah, he nodded. It must have been that blonde bimbo that Captain America was showing off. But didn't she have a different name? Something like Tabitha or something. For some reason, holding a card that he did not know whom it was from was bothering him. He would have to ask the others. Perhaps they knew her.


* * *


At the ringing of the final bell of the day at the Siesta Key High School, Julia Cartier, a dark haired freshman, closed her science books and started to put them away in her book bag. Satisfied with the work she had achieved that lesson, she slid from her seat and left the classroom, heading for her locker.

"Jules," she heard someone call. "Jules!"

Julia turned to see her best friend, Sandra Reynolds hurrying to catch up with her. Sandra was tall for a freshman, and her flaming red hair had an inclination to draw attention to her. She tended to be on the giddy side but Julia liked her. Like Julia, she wore blue jeans and a white top.

"What's up?" she smiled at her approaching friend.

"Where are you off to in such a hurry?" Sandra frowned. "You took off in such a rush."

"Oh, yeah," Julia gave her an apologetic smile. "It's just that I have to run or I'll be late."

"Late for what?" Sandra wondered. "A hot date? Or did you finally meet this mystery man of yours? What?" She rolled her eyes at Julias's reaction. "First time you've ever showed interest in a guy and I can't tease you?"

"Neither," she gave a soft snort. "I'm meeting with the manager at Scoops about a job for the summer."

"Oh, Jules! That would be so cool!" Sandra bounced up and down, squealing with excitement. "Free ice cream all summer."

"I somehow don't think Mr. Faulkner will let me give all his profits away to my friends," Julia smirked. "But hey, I could always ask him if he has any more vacancies for you. It would be such a blast, the two of us working together over the summer."

"Sorry," Sandra shook her head. "No can do, I'm afraid. Two weeks into the summer, we're off on another one of our family trips. First we go up to Washington to see my Mom's parents. And then we go across to Minneapolis to see my dad's folks. We don't come back till a few days before school starts again."

"Oh, Sandra," Julia's face fell. "What am I going to do all summer?"

"A part from work, you mean?" Sandra raised an eyebrow. "Gee, I don't know. Maybe accept a date or two from all the cute guys that are going to ask you out on dates when you serve them their ice cream."

"I told you Sandy," Julia rolled her eyes. "There's only one guy for me."

"And where is he now, Jules," Sandra shook her head. "Huh? You had your shot and you bailed on him. It's time to..."

"You just don't understand," Julia sighed.

"No," Sandra frowned. "I guess I don't. But when guys start to notice me, I hope I don't turn out to be a real romantic like you." She gave a soft chuckle. "That would just suck, being hooked up with one guy like that. Anyway, see you tomorrow. Good luck tonight."


* * *


"So, Julia," Mr. Faulkner glanced up from her application form. "Why Scoops? I mean, I know that every kid wants a summer job to earn money, but someone like you could work anywhere. The library, for instance. Why would you want to work at an ice cream parlor?"

"When it comes to filling out my college application, Mr. Faulkner," Julia leaned forward, "I don't want it to say that this girl is a loner. I want them to know that I'm perfectly capable of mixing and even working with other people. I, uh... don't want to be labeled."

"I see," he nodded. "So basically, you like to plan ahead, huh?"

"Yeah," she nodded with a smile.

"Well, you know that I'm well aquatinted with your father, and I know that you will be someone I can trust, so..." he smiled and held out his hand. "Welcome aboard."

"You mean I got the job?" Julia's eyes widened as she shook his offered hand.

"Was there any doubt?" he chuckled.

He rose from his chair and crossed to a large metal cupboard. He opened the door to reveal two shelves stacked with dresses, wrapped in plastic.

"Take three or four in your size," he indicated the dresses.

Julia took a couple of the dresses. She had already seen what they looked like. Although they were short, coming to mid thigh, they were not too bad. They buttoned down the front with buttons shaped to look like small candies. The collar was a V-neck, opened quite low to show a little cleavage - for the girls who had any. The white dress was patterned with fruit, lemons, strawberries, cherries and bananas. It was kind of cute, for the guys.

"You'll need to keep them clean, but if you have any messy accidents at work, you can help yourself to a new one. You'll need these," he handed her two plain white aprons. "And these," he handed her two folded white card style hats. There was a net hanging from the back. "For hygiene purposes, if you work with the food, you need to keep your hair in the net at all times. The other girls find it easier to pin it up first, but that's up to you. But I want you to work out on the patio, you know, as a waitress, so as long as you keep it in a ponytail, you don't need the net."

He led her out to the staff area to a wall of lockers.

"This is yours," he opened one up and offered her the key. "You can stick photos or notes or... phone number on the inside. But outside stays clear. Okay? Now, can you start tomorrow night?"

"Uh, sure," Julia nodded.

"Good," he smiled. "When you get here, speak to Vanessa. She'll show you the ropes and give you your schedule. Until the summer starts, you'll be working five nights a week, three hours a night, okay? It's a rolling schedule so everyone gets a weekend free, eventually. During the summer, it'll be chaos here, so I'll want you to work six hour days, five days a week. One week you'll start early, eight a.m. till two-thirty p.m., with half an hour for lunch. The next you'll work late, two-thirty p.m. till nine p.m. The law says you can't work past nine, but when you turn sixteen, you can work till we close. Again, you get half an hour for lunch. You need to stagger that break with the others, obviously. So, is that okay?"

She nodded.

"Welcome to Scoops."


* * *


"I'm home," Julia called as she walked through the front door of their town house, overlooking the Grand Canal.

"Hi, poppet," her father called from the living room. "You're home late."

"Yeah," she went in to join him. "I had an interview. For a job."

"A job?" he frowned. "Honey, you know nothing is more important than your homework."

"Dad," Julia rolled her eyes. "Summer vacation is only two weeks away and no one gives out any homework now."

"So where's the job? The library? I heard they were hiring."

"No," she laughed. "I'm working at Scoops. It will give me more exposure to people and look better on my college application. Less of a loner."

"You're not a loner," her father smiled. "You're just destined for greatness. Say, Scoops. Is that Harry Faulkner's place?"

"Yeah," Julia nodded. "He said he knew you."

"He's a good guy, Jules, so I guess it's okay. But if any of those guys gives you any hassle, especially those tourist punks..."

"Don't worry, Daddy," Julia batted her eyelashes. "I'll be just fine."


* * *


"Oh, hey, Alison." Julia lay back on her bad talking on the telephone. "It's so good to hear from you. How are you?"

"I'm doing good, babe. How about you?" Alison asked.

"Pretty good," Julia nodded. "Missing my good friend from Jackson, Mississippi." She started to giggle.

"Well that's a good thing, because now what I'm going to tell you should cheer you up."

"What's that?"

"My dad has to work in Sarasota all summer. So rather than a hotel room, he's going to rent a small house and bring the family with."

"No!" Julia sat upright.

"That's right, babe! I'll be there all summer!" Alison squealed down the phone.

"Oh, Alison," she giggled. "That will be so cool! Oh, and I'll talk to my dad. He knows people who know people. Maybe he can get your dad a good deal. This is going to be so great! I'll have a friend for the summer now."

"As long as you don't let things get boring," Alison laughed.

"There's no need to worry about that," Julia smirked. "Oh, hey, and I have a job, too."

"Really? Doing what?"

"Waitressing. And you'll never guess where."

"Where."

"Scoops."

"Really?" Alison laughed. "No way. That is so cool. Do they need any more summer staff?"

"I could always ask."

"So," Alison spoke softly after a moment's silence. "Did you ever see him again?"

"No," Julia sighed and flopped back onto the bed. "I've been back to MOSI every weekend but I haven't seen him again. What if he was a tourist on Spring Break?"

"You sound as bad as my friend, Luke." Alison huffed.

"The guy whose party you invited me to, right?" Julia chuckled. "The one I never met."

"Yeah," Alison agreed. "You would so like him."

"No, no," Julia shook her head. "You know, because I already know who I want. I just have to find him again, that's all."

"Yup. Just like Luke," Alison was laughing. "He's looking for the girl of his dreams, too. He met her but didn't get her name or anything. Which is why the two of you would make such good friends. While you both search for your respective soul mates, you can keep each other company. As friends."

"Yeah, but didn't you say he lived up north somewhere?" Julia frowned.

"But he does have family there. He might come down for a week or two."

"So when are you coming down?"

"School breaks on Friday, right? We'll be arriving on the following Saturday."


* * *


Ready for bed, wearing her night-dress, Julia sat at her dressing table, pulling her brush through her long, brown tresses. She was staring blankly at her reflection in the mirror. As always, her mind turned to that boy. The one she had seen at MOSI.

"Where do you live?" she whispered. "Are you local? Do you live in Tampa? Nearby? Maybe you live in St. Petersburg. That's not too far. Then again, there are so many places that are not too far. And lots of places that are. What if you were only here on Spring Break?"

He was on his own, she remembered. Alone and visiting a museum. He must be intelligent, even though she had noticed he had a physique every bit as good as the jocks in her class.

"I wonder if he even noticed me?"

She looked down at the two swells that her breasts had formed in her night dress.

"No one notices me," she shook her head. "Not while I look like a little girl. I turn fifteen in a couple of weeks and I still only just fill an A-cup bra. Why would someone like him notice someone like me?" She sighed, placing the hairbrush down on the table. "It's hopeless. I'm hopeless."

She rose from her table, crossed to her bed and slipped under her sheet. It was too hot for anything more. She fell asleep dreaming of her mystery man and those awesome gold colored eyes.


* * *


"That's it!" Sandra was bouncing up and down as she waited for Julia to empty her locker. "Friday! Last day of school! Wahoo!"

"Calm down, Sandy," Julia grinned.

"Oh, yeah," she smirked. "I forgot. You're in mourning, aren't you? No more school for nine weeks!"

"I'm not that bad," Julia rolled her eyes.

"You are too," Sandra chuckled. "But I still love you."

"Have a good summer, Jules," someone called as they walked past.

Julia looked up to see the junior, soon to be senior, Richard Madly walking by. Sandra's mouth fell open.

"Oh, yeah," Julia nodded. "You too, Richard. And uh, good luck with that ROTC training... camp thing."

"Thanks," he nodded. "See ya!" He gave her a wave and was gone.

"Girl," Sandra shook her head. "That guy is so in to you."

"Not going to happen," Julia shook her head.

"I mean, come on!" She swooned against the lockers. "The guy's practically a god! He's the best looking guy in school... now that the seniors have technically left."

"Don't you think he's a little old for me?" Julia gave her a funny look. "I mean, he'll be a senior."

"So?" Sandra squealed. "You'll be a sophomore. And wasn't he dating Tabitha DeSotto? She's in our class too. So what's the big deal?"

"Right," Jules nodded. "And in case you didn't notice, she has that whole blond hair and blue eyed cheerleader thing going on. And the big..." She held her hands out in front of her chest. "And I mean, really big. And I am so not any of that."

"The guy is going places, Jules," Sandra rolled her eyes. "Know what I heard? I heard that if he passes a special test next spring, then he can join the Army as a commissioned officer and do his college courses at the same time. The guy's going to be a freaking General by the time he's thirty. He's going to be some great... leader."

"Uh huh," Julia smirked. "Can you see me having to do anything with the military? I mean, come on. I'm just not cut out to be seen with any kind of leader. Leaders need special women. Strong, supportive. Beautiful. Not small and mousy like me."

"Generals do not have blonde bimbos for their wives," Sandra pointed out.

"No," Julia agreed. "They have those as their mistresses. And I am so not going to play second fiddle to anyone. And Richard Madly is not what I want."

"He may not be your Mr. Right, Julia," Sandra wrapped her arm across her shoulder. "But he can be your Mr. Right Now."

"You watch too much TV," Julia shook her head."

"So what are you doing tonight?"

"I have to work."

"Okay," Sandra shrugged. "You on the early shift tomorrow?"

"No," Julia shook her head.

"Then I guess we can hang out at the beach, you know, for first day of..."

"Summer Vacation!" both girls chanted together, giving one another the high five.

"Oh, yeah," Julia burst into a huge smile. "And you know what? My friend Alison arrives tomorrow so we'll need to find her. You two will get on so well together.


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Red Shift Part 2 Chapter 12

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Hi everyone,

Thank you all so very much for your feedback for this story. I'm glad that you have all caught up and understand where we all are right now.

But, it does make me chuckle, however, when you start to ask about certain characters and whether or not they relate to someone else already met.

Sandra cannot be Serena, because Serena did not exist. She was part of he whole Future Max fiasco that turned out to be a trick of the Skins.

Richard is unlikely to be some recreation of Sean, because why would people loyal to Max recreate people who caused him problems, and how could people disloyal to Max know about his rebirth when so much secrecy surrounded this second incarnation?

IF I introduce someone who used to be someone else, I WILL make it slear. Okay? So unless it's obvious, do not try to match new characters with old.

So, you are all holding your breath for the all important meeting between Luke and Julia, huh? Well, everything in it's proper time. You know I never rudh my stories, right? So patiance. :)

roswell3053 - Glad you are clear on things now. :)

Timelord31 - Thank you :)

lazza - Yes, it does seem that even in new lives, their old ones overlap. I wonder why that might be?

roswellluver - Soon. They'll all meet soon. :)

Ellie - It's always fun to theorize, and please don;t stop. I really do love reading them. :)

tequathisy - Serena never existed. Sorry.

omwf - Do you really think I would drag out the torture of 'The Meeting'? You know it's coming. :)

aurorasky - Soon. Soon. :wink:

frenchkiss70 - Aw come on! I write these stories and you say I torture you? :twisted: I love it I love it! :wink:

BehrObsession - They do both seem to know what they want, right? I doubt anything will stop these two getting together. :)

smokie - Prolonging? Like I said. Everything in it's rightful place. I just have so much to put in place before they meet. YOu'll see. You'll understand. And you will appreciate it all the more the slight delay.

VeronicaB - I'm glad that you enjoyed the effort I put in to show Julia's life. I needed to show that basically, she is the same person. If you know what I mean.

Alien64 - You're welcome. :)

AJK001 - Drive you nuts? So you're saying the meetying is more imprtant than the story? :wink: Who am I kidding. Of course it is.

Roswelllostcause - Of course I love leaving you hanging. Surely you know that by now. :wink:

Antarian - Thank you :)

cherie - They surely are! Of course I had to put them all together for a good length of time to learn all about one another. Let the good times roll! :wink:


Red Shift


Part 2


Chapter 12

At the back of the Ice Cream Parlor, Julia stepped into the ladies changing room and opened her locker. She pushed her personal effects inside and pulled out her dress, apron and hat. Striping down to her underwear, she pulled on her white waitress dress, fastened her apron and got herself ready for her shift.

"Boy," she shook her head as she washed her hands. "I hope I can cope with the six hour shifts that start tomorrow."

The late shifts hadn't been too bad. The number of customers that chose to sit outside in the warm evenings ensured that she was kept busy, but she never felt rushed. The time passed quickly, for which she was grateful.

"Don't worry," Vanessa had warned. "Once the crowds start to arrive for their vacation, it'll be absolute chaos out there. Those tourists can sometimes drive you crazy. But they're not all you'll need to worry about."

"Oh, no," Ellen, another waitress smirked. "Wait till you find out the ways the guys come up with to get at you. Some just try to 'see' your pants. Others want to get into them. My advice is never accept a date from one of our customers. They're usually always asking for a bet."

"Oh, yeah," Sophie started to laugh. "And they definitely have problems with wandering hands. Getting a little fresh with you, if you know what I mean. And our dresses are just the right height for them to..." she left it, hanging.

Julia frowned. So far, she had not experienced anything like that and had to admit to herself that she really was rather a naïve sort of person, always willing to see the best in everyone.

"Don't worry," Vanessa shook her head and flashed a sympathetic smile. "Play it smart. You're pretty intelligent and the dumb ass morons you have to watch for have a pretty limited imagination. If you figure that anything any guy ever says to you, or does has some ulterior motive, and look for it, you can figure it out before you fall for it. And the clever ones are usually too damn shy to try anything anyway. Oh, and watch out for the Bart gags."

"The Bart gags?" Julia frowned.

"Yeah, you know," she nodded. "Some moron phones up and asks if there's a Michael Hunt there. You know what they want you to shout out, right? The scumbag is probably sitting on a cell phone in some group of kids, sniggering away. I always just say, sorry, he didn't come in tonight. No matter what name they use."


As with all of her previous shifts, this one eventually started to draw to a close. With only another twenty minutes to go, the staff were already starting to clean down the machines that were unlikely to be used now that the place was winding down. Julia found herself behind the counter, sweeping the floor."

"Can I get a cute guy," she heard some one ask from the other side of the counter. "To go."

Her face frowning, she turned to face the new customer. Then her face lit up when she saw whom it was.

"Alison!" she exclaimed.

"Jules!" Alison was bouncing on her toes.

Julia ran around the counter and into her friend's arms. They hugged each other tightly, giggling with pleasure at seeing one another again. As they started to release each other and saw everyone staring at them, they both broke into a blush.

"When did you get here?" Julia was still holding onto Alison's hands.

"A short while ago, actually," Alison was still bouncing. "Dad has to be in some big meeting thing tomorrow or whatever which meant that we had to come down a little earlier than expected. And here I am! I came over as soon as I could. So what time do you get off?"

"In about fifteen minutes, actually," Julia was grinning like the Cheshire cat as she glanced up at the big clock. "Oh, that reminds me. Do you still want a summer job?"

"Is there one available?"

"Yeah," Julia nodded. "One of the senior girls quit earlier than we'd thought. She's taking off to Europe with her boyfriend or something before they leave for college. Come through and I'll introduce you to Mr. Faulkner. He normally leaves early but he's got a bit wrapped up tonight."


Alison followed Julia into the boss's office where Mr. Faulkner was reading through some pricing reports.

"Well," he shrugged. "I normally like to get you to fill out an application, and then interview you, find out what kind of a person you are but if Jules is recommending you, then that's good enough for me. But I guess you can fill it out and bring it with you when it's done. Can you start tomorrow?"

"Yes, sir," Alison nodded with enthusiasm.

"Okay, then. You can work with Julia. She can show you the ropes, get you your uniforms and stuff. Welcome to Scoops."

Grinning widely, the two girls went through to the staff area.

"Jules," Alison nodded widely. "I have so got this feeling. This is so gonna be the best summer ever."


* * *


Having changed back into her jeans and T-shirt, Julia took Alison out to the beach, where they sat cross-legged on one of the many benches that lined the 'boardwalk'. To the west, the sky held the last ripples of the orange and red tints of the sunset. Neither girl noticed them. Their purpose was to catch up on everything that happened to them in the weeks since they had last seen one another. Which didn't really amount to all that much.

"Did you hear from that guy you were hanging all over last spring?" Julia's eyes sparkled in the pale dusk.

"I was not hanging all over him, but no," Alison sounded disgusted. "I gave him my email and my phone number. He said he would get in touch, to give me his. Only he didn't."

"I'm sorry," Julia let the sympathy she felt for her friend show in her voice. She reached over and touched her friend's arm. "What about the other guy? The one you wanted to set me up with?"

"Who, Luke?" Alison looked up. "Oh yeah. He's like, Hans' brother or cousin or something. I asked Hans to pass on my info to him, too. But I'm kinda thinking that he didn't even bother to do that, either, because, you know? Luke's not like that. Luke would have contacted me just to say 'Hi' if he had my info. He's really nice... kind, you know?"

"I guess," Julia nodded.

"I mean," Alison continued. "Hans is like, a whole different matter."

"So why didn't you try dating Luke, then?" Julia giggled.

"Like I told you, during spring break," Alison shrugged. "Luke has someone special all lined up, and I wasn't it. Remember how I told you that he didn't know what kind of girl he liked 'cause he had never met her yet? Well, apparently, he went somewhere, and like, met her. So he only wants her, now and I doubt he would be interested in anyone else. Even someone as totally amazing as me," Alison winked.

"He sounds a lot like me," Julia sighed.

"Hey," Alison exclaimed. "That's exactly what I said! I said that the two of you should have hooked up as friends, you know, to keep one another company while you can't be with your respective soul mates. Friends with benefits."

"Have you always been this... romantic?" Julia's eyes widened. She started to chuckle. "All cheesy and gushy? Do you like, read all those trashy romance novels you can find in the library or something?"

"Hey," Alison tried to look offended, but it was spoiled by her laughter. "They are not trashy, 'kay? Anyway, it just comes naturally with me. But look at me! Here I am all fired up by the romance of you and Luke and your amazing search for your soul mates, and what do I get? A prickly guy who doesn't call, who doesn't write and who, let's face it, doesn't even know the basics of human communication."

"He sounds kind of spacey to me," Julia giggled.

"Spacey," Alison started to chuckle. "That's a good one. Did I ever tell you his last name?"

"No," Julia, still giggling, shook her head.

"Ollow," Alison could not help the laughter coming out.

"No way!" Julia laughed with her. "Han Solo? No Way!"

They started to roll on the bench with laughter.

"Next," Julia continued between laughs. "Next, you tell me Luke's last name is Skywalker."

"Close," roared Alison. "Luke's last name is... Skye!"

"I don't believe it!" their laughter was hysterical.

Alison couldn't defend her answer. She could only nod her head as tears started to form through her laughter.

"And his sister's name is..." she snorted.

"No, no," Julia managed to belt out. "Don't tell me. Leia, right?"

"Right!" Alison collapsed into heaps of laughter again.

The two girls were roaring, swaying to and fro, with tears streaming from their eyes. They each tried to speak but could form no words. Just more laughter.

"I know when his birthday really was," Julia managed to squeak past the belly laughs that had her rolling on the bench.

"When?" Alison would have found anything funny just then.

"Fourth of May," Julia managed to grind out. "May the fourth be with you!"

"Stoppit!" Alison choked out between her huge roars of howling. "Stoppit. I'm gonna pee my pants here."

Julia burst into a new torrent of hilarity, which of course, only caused more laughter from Alison.

"Oh, oh!" Julia's voice rolled with so much humor, she could barely speak. "Do you know what Han's favorite snack is?"

"No?" Alison was just starting to control herself. "What?"

"A chocolate chip wookie!" she could barely get the words out.

Their laughter was silent now. The two girls rolled around, their whole bodies shaking from their head to their toes. They were clutching at their sides, their stomachs, as they fought for their breath. Both of them had fallen to the floor and their laughter went on, and on. Kicking their feet on the ground, tears rolled down their cheeks, tears of laughter.

The laughter started to fade as they fought for control. Eventually, it died down to silence, but only after they kept breaking into fits of giggles. They wiped their eyes and rubbed their sides that were now aching. At last their laughter ceased though neither girl dared to look at the other, for fear that they might burst out laughing again and start the whole process off once more.

"I hope they come down, sometime," Alison was still fighting the laughter. "It'd be fun. Well, Luke would be. Hans... is another matter."

"They were visiting family, right?" Julia asked. "Grandparents or something?"

"Yeah," the blonde nodded. "That's right."

"Okay then," the brunette shrugged. "How about when we have a moment, we go around to their grandparents' house and ask them. I think I can still remember which was their house."

"You'd like them," Alison nodded. "Well, you'd like Luke. Even if he does have ears like a Tie Fighter."

She slipped her fingers behind her ears and pushed them out at right angles.

"Alison!" Julia tried to hide her laughter behind mock outrage, but was unsuccessful. "Does he really?"

"Nah," she shook her head. "He's okay. They're not that bad. He kinda has some other more interesting features that take your eyes away from them. Did I say he was hot? But you're right. Going to see his grandparents would be great. Hey, do you know what Jabba the Hut's middle name was?"

"No," Julia shook her head.

"The."

"You know what, Alison?" Julia shook her head with a groan. "It's a good thing you've got a summer job waitressing."

"I have to admit, it wasn't as good as your chocolate chip wookie joke. That was cool."

"Talking of cool," Julia smiled. "How about we go back to my place and continue this over a carton of ice cream?"

"That would be great," Alison smiled. She rolled her shoulders and tucked her top lip against her teeth. "Jules Cartier? I think this is the start of a beautiful friendship."

"That was a very good Cagney impression," Julia nodded with a straight face.


* * *


The three of them gathered on the beach the next day, Saturday. Julia had called for Sandra first and then they both went to meet Alison. Julia had been right, the two girls did get on well together, although she noticed that Alison's natural exuberance tended to repress Sandra a little. The flame-haired girl didn't really know how to take her. Alison wore a yellow bikini under her white sundress while Julia wore a red bikini under a rainbow colored sarong. Because of her coloring, Sandra chose to wear a one piece swimsuit covered with a full-length cotton wrap. She had already applied sun block that morning and regularly topped it up. Even when sitting under the shade of an umbrella, she wore a wide brimmed hat. She was taking no chances.

"Hey, babes!" a small group of boys moved closer.

"Oh, great," Alison rolled her eyes. "A welcoming committee."

"Fine day for a party," one of the lads grinned at Alison.

"It sure is," Alison nodded. "So why don't you go see if you can find one. If you do, call me. Five, five, five, beat it."

"We can party right here," he indicated the boom box he was carrying. "We got the sounds, we got the drinks," another lifted a cooler. "We got the moves." The three boys danced a few steps. "And you three have got the curves." He drew an hourglass shape with his hands.

"Do your mommies know you've come out to play with the big kids?" Alison frowned. "Do they know you're at the beach unsupervised?"

"Am I sensing some hostility, here?" another joined in.

"Not at all," Alison shook her head. "'Cause to be hostile, I'd actually have to give a damn. Right now, you're not even worth thinking about. Now either make like a banana and split, or just sit down, far away, shut up, and leave us alone."

"Come on, guys," they started to pick up their belongings. "Let's go and find some 'decent' looking chicks.

"Quite an impact," Julia nodded at the retreating Romeos and then at the other guys that were casting interested glances their way. "No one usually bothers us. Me. I mean," she looked down at herself. "It's not like I can even fill my bikini top."

"Yeah," Alison looked on with sympathy. "But then, I'm not exactly big myself and any way, you're still growing. I mean, how old are you?"

"Fourteen."

"But she's fifteen next Saturday," Sandra added.

"Really?" Alison widened he eyes. "Are we working our shift that night or are we free?"

"I already checked," Julia nodded. "We're working in the morning but we're free in the evening."

"Awesome," Alison's eyes lit up, "Party time, babe! We can rustle up some dates and go out to celebrate the big one five!"

"Oh, no," Julia shook her head. "I'm not sure about getting dates Alison. You know, because of..."

"Well, we'll improvise," Alison brushed her objection aside. "How about you, Sandra? Are you up for it? Is there anyone in particular you have your eye on?"

"Nah," Sandra shook her head. She started to point between herself and Julia. "We're not what would be considered hot stuff. No, that's not true. Some consider Jules hot because I do know that Jules has a secret admirer or two."

"Never mind," Alison shrugged. "Something will turn up, I'm sure. We are so not sitting at home and eating ice cream, just the three of us, on your fifteenth birthday."

"It's what we did on mine," Sandra grinned with a shrug.

"That's 'cause I wasn't here to organize things for you," Alison rolled her eyes. "It's a good thing for you that I got here when I did. We are going to have a blast, if it kills you."


"Anyway," Alison disturbed the silence that had fallen on them. "Don't worry about your size, Julia. You'll grow. There was this girl at my school who was the same size as you and over last summer, she popped out like a pair of freaking air bags. This time next year, I bet you'll be clear out to here." She held her hands way out in front of her chest.

The girls started to giggle.

"Don't you think I might be a little, well, top heavy?" Julia rolled her eyes, "I mean, wouldn't I look like that stupid girl rabbit from that film?

"You mean Jessica Rabbit?" Sandra started to laugh. "If you look like a rabbit, does that mean you'll..."

"Sandra!" Julia gasped, pressing her hands to her ears.

Alison joined in with the laughter.

"Don't worry, Jules," Alison smiled at her, placing her hand on her arm. "You'll be as big as you need to be, and if this guy of yours is your soul mate, then he won't care how big you are, right? I mean... suppose he has a little tiny..." she held her finger and thumb close together in front of her eye, "itty bitty..."

"Alison!" Julia gasped. "You are so bad!"

Alison joined Sandra rolling with laughter while Julia turned very pink.

"Well?" Alison sat back up. "Would it matter how big he was?"

"I don't know," Julia huffed. "I'm only fourteen! And I am no way thinking about things like that at least until... until I've graduated. From college!"

"Uh huh," Alison nodded. "Well, if he is, uhm, you know," she repeated her finger and thumb action, "then you had better find another soul mate or else buy your dates from the same place as Hans."

"Huh?" Julia looked at Sandra who shrugged in ignorance.

"When we first met, Hans told me he liked his women quiet and out of his way until he needed them.. So I told him. They sold those kind of women at the Adult store over in Sarasota. Pump included. And I expect we could get your date in the next aisle," she winked at her dark haired friend.

Not for the first time since meeting Alison, and certainly not for the last, Julia's face transformed through several shades of red.

For the rest of the day, they sat, soaked up the sun and talked about unimportant things. They shared their lunches amongst themselves and splashed about in the water, even Sandra shed her wrap and played, if only for a while. Alison even found time to flirt with some jocks, promising to consider an offer of a date.


"Hey," they heard some one call from a short distance away.

They all turned to see a tall, very skinny guy with short, brown hair approaching them. He looked a little geek like. His hands were pushed into pockets on his brightly colored Bermuda shorts.

"Hey," he repeated, nodding down at Alison first but he then nodded at the other two. "I know you, don't I?" he looked back at Alison.

"Haven't heard that line before," Sandra smirked.

"I'm not sure," Alison shook her head, trying to place his familiar face.

"Are you local?" Julia asked.

"No," he shook his head. "I'm from Birmingham. Alabama."

"May the force be with ya'll," Alison looked at Julia and they burst out laughing.

Sandra and the boy stared at them in bewilderment.

"Sorry," Julia giggled. "Private joke. Stop it Alison."

"I know," he snapped his fingers. "I know where I've seen you. You were at Leia's birthday party, last spring break."

"Oh yeah," Alison nodded. "That's right! You were one of the puppy dogs trailing around after her, getting your tongue sunburned."

"I was not," he tried to look insulted.

"There were three of you, right?" Julia looked up. "Yeah, I remember now. And yes. Yes you were. Definitely tongue hanging out."

"I don't remember you," he shook his head at Julia. "But you I remember. You were the one who was chasing around after her brother... or cousin, or whatever."

"Hans," Alison nodded.

"Good name for him," the boy smirked. "'Cause that guy is definitely Solo material."

The three girls remained silent.

"Nah," Alison and Julia shook their heads and started to giggle.

"We make quite a group, don't we?" Alison grinned. "You chasing after her, me after Hans. Oh, and then there's her brother, Luke, whose chasing after his dream girl who he doesn't know if she was a local or a tourist or what."

"How about you?" he looked at Julia.

"I'm local," she nodded. "And I'm hopeless for someone else, too."

"She's head over heels in love with some guy who isn't even here," Alison finished. "A matched set. All of us except Sandra pining after people we can't have."

"No secret crushes then?" he looked at Sandra.

"Nope," she shook her head. "I'm not at all choosy. Mr. Right Now is plenty good enough for me, even if he does seem to be AWOL at the moment. I don't think I could handle the pain that comes with wanting one specific person."

"My name is Anders. Anders Karlvit."

"Wow," Alison nodded. "That's... that's quite a mouthful."

"Yeah," he sighed. "It's Swedish."

"Mind if we just call you Andy?"

"It's better than most of the names I get called," he shrugged. "And you guys are...?"

"Alison DeLong from Jackson Mississippi."

"Julia Cartier, local gal."

"Sandra Reynolds. Local gal too."

"So, Andy," Alison called to him as he was fixing the names in his memory. "Did you manage to keep in touch with Leia?"

"Yeah," he nodded. "Yeah, I did. Emails and phone calls."

"Really?" Alison looked surprised. "That's great, 'cause I gave my email and phone number to Hans but he never called. If I ever see him again..."

"Well, you will, I expect," he blurted. "They're coming down to spend the whole summer with their grandparents."

"The whole summer?" Alison's eyes widened. "That is so cool. When will he... they, when will they get here?"

"Not too sure," he shook his head. "Next weekend, I think. On Sunday."

"Sunday?" Alison started to pout. "The day 'after' Jules' birthday."


"So Andy," Alison bounced right back. "Being a guy, you can give us a guy's perspective on a very important matter. Do you think Jules' breasts are too small?"

"Alison!" Julia gasped, turning a dark shade to match her red bikini. She pulled her sarong to cover herself.

Anders' eyes flickered to Julia's breasts and then away again. He too was blushing a furious shade of pink.

"I uh," he stammered. "I refuse to answer that on the grounds that I might incriminate myself."

"Coward," Alison tooted. "You can't tell me you never noticed."

"Can we not discuss my... uh, my physical attributes please?" Julia groaned out loud.

"Uhm," Anders indicated further along the beach. "I think I'm going to... you know. Catch you later. Bye."

"Yeah, bye, Andy," Alison laughed as Anders scurried away.

"Bye," Sandra and Julia called to his retreating back.

They spent the remainder of their time basking in the sun, reapplying their sunscreen and drinking cold water that they bought from a vendor who rode a tricycle with a huge icebox along the boardwalk. Around mid afternoon, just as Alison and Julia had to pack up and head for work, storm clouds appeared in the empty sky. By the time they had reached Scoops for their first ever shift together the heavens opened up. Their first Saturday had already been an interesting day. It promised to be a very entertaining summer.


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Red Shift Part 2 Chapter 13

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Hi everyone,

Sorry, I'm running extremely late tonight. I blame it on Christmas. :)

Thanks for you feedback. I'm sorry if I appear to be rushing tonight, but it's late and I desperately want to post tonight AND I have two stories to see to. :wink:

roswell3053 - Thank you :)

behrlyliz - Well, having spread them across the country, I had to do something to get them together. :) Nore will become known about the human elements of the gang, later.

youre my dreamgirl - And I will not disappoint you :)

omwf - Yes. You're right. Of course I could drag it out :wink:

smokie - Oh yes! This will be VERY good. :) YOu'll love it!

roswellluver - Glad you liked it. :)

lazza - There's a simple reason why Alison won't put two and two together. But do you think that will stop our dream couple?

BehrObsession - Glad you liked the jokes. They even made ME laugh :wink:

Timelord31 - Will they remember. Oh my. what a quaetion! :wink: Wait and see. :)

tequathisy - You won;t be disappointed when they do meet. :)

VeronicaB - It does seem that history is repeating itself in so many ways.

Ellie - Seeing as Eliie won;t be around for much of the holiday, she won;t add much to the dynamics at all. :wink:

frenchkiss70 - Glad you liked the meeting. More meetings to come! And you will like them, too! :)

Roswelllostcause - It's interesting. Do you think Anders will have much of a chance to form his friendship with Leia and Luke around?

AJK001 - LOL. So when you tell me that you are completely okay with whats going on, I need to worry? :wink:

cherie - I worked so very hard to make them so! :) Glad it's paying off.


Red Shift


Part 2


Chapter 13


With the torrential rain from the sudden thunderstorm pouring from the sky, it was no surprise to the girls to find that by the time they had reached Scoops, the patio was empty. Everyone had rushed somewhere else to get out of the rain.

"We had a customer last week," Julia rolled her eyes. "He sat out there in a storm worse than this and they made me go out and serve him."

Inside the parlor, it was crowded with customers who had retreated indoors to finish their ice creams and with customers who were merely trying to shelter from the storm. Alison followed Julia as she pushed her way through them, to the employees' room at the back.

"We're going to have to rethink our strategy for the future," Julia grimaced as she toweled her hair dry. "I'm all greasy from the sun screen and I have sand sticking to me. I could really use a shower right about now. And I don't mean standing out in the rain."

They changed into their Scoops dresses, aprons and before they put on their hats, they combed out their hair and used elastic bands to hold it in a pony tail. When they returned to the parlor, the crowds indoors had thinned, having finished their snacks and made a dash for home, or wherever the gangs were meeting. Although the rain had stopped, the chairs outside were still wet, so it would be a while before there was much to do. Julia took advantage of the respite and showed Alison how to use the machines, where to store the ice cream cartons, the fruit, the sauces and the candy toppings. She taught her the easiest way to stack and balance her trays and how to write the customer orders so that girls inside knew what the order was. She went through the hygiene regulations and explained how big Mr. Faulkner was on that.

"He says that the kids who come here want to have a good time, and sitting at home on the uhm... you know... is not his idea of a good time." Julia looked around. "Of course, that means they're not spending money here either." She whispered the last part.

"I'm amazed that after only two weeks, you've remembered all this stuff," Alison was impressed. "It's like you've been here forever. I bet you get good grades at school, huh?"

"Uh, yeah," Julia blushed. "I do okay."

"Okay?" Vanessa snorted as she walked past them. "She gets straight 'A's. She's a regular girl geek."

"Nah," Alison laughed. "She's too good looking to be a geek."

Business was still a little on the slow side, even after they had dried off the tables and chairs. The storm had driven the customers home and were unlikely to venture out again. It was only the first day of the summer, though, and both knew that it would not be like this for long. Julia took the opportunity to take Alison outside where they divided up the patio into sections.

"They didn't have waitress service during spring break, did they?" Alison was trying to remember.

"No," Julia smiled. "We only do that in the summer when the crowds are big enough to make it worth while. And the really good thing about it is that we don't have to bus the tables. We have Martin."

Julia pointed across the patio to an area where a young man was passing dirty dishes and bowls through a hatch in the wall. He looked older than the girls, and he wore a pair of jeans that seemed one size too big for him. They were only just clinging to his hips, revealing the top of his plaid boxers that he wore underneath. His faded T-shirt advertised a Metallica tour from ages ago. His hair was long, blond and greasy. A personal stereo hung from his waistband and a set of wires ran up to disappear into his hairline.

"Try to stay down wind of him if you can," Julia whispered with a scrunched up nose. "And make sure that you shut the changing room door and don't ever bend over in front of him. But generally, he's harmless."

"I'll remember that," Alison's eyes widened.

Martin arrived at the table nearest to Alison and Julia and placed a large, deep tray on the edge. He started to put the dirty dishes and utensil into the tray before he wiped the table down.

"Hey, Julia," his gravelly voice droned. "Do you like, maybe wanna grab a soda or something? Like after your shift or something?"

"Uh, sorry, Martin," Julia shook her head while moving away. "I'm, ah, busy. Sorry."

Martin shrugged and moved away to another table.

"What?" Julia looked at Alison who was grinning at her.

"Well, clearly," Alison held her hands out in front of her chest, "he doesn't think you're too small."

"Shut up, Alison."


As the evening warmed up again, so too did the crowds. And because Scoops was one of the places that the teenagers had staked as 'their' evening hangout, groups of teens congregated around the tables. One table in particular had become the temporary home of a large gang of young guys, jocks on their way home from a basketball game by the sound of things. It had been hell trying to get their orders. What they wanted was either Julia's phone number or a date when she finished her shift. She refused both and politely persevered until she had taken their orders. Julia was carrying a tray of sundaes to another table and when she passed the jocks, a spoon bounced onto the floor in front of her.

"Oh, Julia," someone called in a singsong voice. "I seem to have dropped my spoon. Be a dear and pick it up for me, would you?"

Julia closed her eyes and silently cursed the name badges that they had to wear. She knew that they had engineered this situation because they wanted to look up her skirt when she knelt down.

"Sure," she smiled sweetly and reached into her apron pocket, pulling out a clean spoon. She slapped it on the table in front of the dumbfounded jock. "The other one is dirty now, anyway," she shrugged, "You can have a clean one. No extra charge. Martin will pick the dirty one up in a moment."

As she continued on her way, the joker found himself the butt of his buddies ribbing, the waitress having got the better of him.

"That was so cool," Alison nodded. "Quick thinking."

"Dumb jocks," Julia nodded. "Like they never even considered I would get them a clean spoon. These guys don't really worry me though, cause they're just trying to have a little fun, you know, acting silly. They don't mean anything by it. I'm kinda worried about the self centered, self opinionated one dimensional jerks who think they're God's gift to women and hang around places like this because they think that all waitresses are something kind of stupid."

"Oh," Alison nodded. "You mean Hans. But don't worry, Babe. He's not here yet."


* * *


"We struck gold with you two," Mr. Faulkner smiled to the two girls as they finished their shift.

"How's that, Mr. F?" Alison smiled at him. "On account of our dazzling good looks?"

"Yeah," he grinned. "That and the fact that you and Julia seem to be such naturals at waiting tables. And you work so well as a team. It's like you've been doing this all your lives or something. You girls sure you haven't waited tables before?"

"No," Julia shook her head. "This is my first job."

"Same for me," Alison chuckled. "Can we help it if we are so good? Hey, does this mean we get a raise?"

"With the tips you two earn," he shook his head with a wry smile, "maybe you should be paying me for the privilege. Now go on, scram. Enjoy the rest of your Saturday night."

"Good night, Mr. Faulkner," Julia called.

"See ya, Mr. F," Alison waved.


* * *


It was early Sunday afternoon when their flight landed. As they disembarked from the plane, it felt strange for the three teenagers moving through Tampa's crowded airport without Allan and Debra by their side. Ever since they had arrived at the Skye's household, hours after emerging from their pods, they had never been far from them. But here they were, having landed moments ago, about to spend seven of the nine-week vacation without them.

They followed the signs to the baggage claim and stood by the carousel that was identified by their flight number. The suitcases went around and around like some slow motion race with no positions changing until someone removed an item of baggage. Luke and Hans quickly found theirs, but Leia had brought two - big ones at that - and they seemed to be a long time coming.


"Welcome back, kids!"

Grandpa was waiting for them as they stepped though the arrival doors.

"Grandpa!" Leia ran at him.

He hugged Leia and mindful of the boys' ages, restricted his greeting to a simple but firm shake of their hands. He knew teenaged boys did not hug other guys. At least, not publicly.

"This way," he motioned them to follow. "The car's not far. We should make it back in time to bar-b-cue your Sunday lunch."

Pushing the luggage trolley, Luke was lagging behind Grandpa who in turn was listening to an animated Leia.

"I still say we should be checking out New Mexico," Hans growled.

"And I still say not till we know more about ourselves," Luke rolled his eyes. He hated it when Hans went all 'alien' on him.

"The answers are over there!" Hans pointed westward. "We should be out there finding them."

"And what if the answers we learn from them turns out to be that they are our enemies and want to kill us? Can you say, walking into the lions den?"

"We don't know that," Hans objected.

"Hans," Luke sighed. "Until we get some kind of signal, or instruction, or... or even an order, we act normal."

"This," Hans looked around at the hustle and bustle, "is normal?"

"Not 'your' normal," Luke shook his head. "But for millions of other people it is."

"This is dangerous," he growled. "We're exposing ourselves."

"Oh my god!" Luke exclaimed as he ground to a stop. "You're right! How come I never realized it before? Here we are, three teenagers pushing their suitcases through a large airport, at a major tourist center, surrounded by hundreds of other people looking just like us. We must stand out like a sore thumb. Might as well have a sign over our heads saying 'aliens'."

Luke shook his head in disgust and carried on walking.

"There's no talking to you," Hans spat. "You just bury your head in the sand and ignore your responsibilities. One day it's going to catch up to you. And what are you going to do if it catches us tomorrow, huh? Ask if they can wait till we finish our vacation?"

"If I thought it would work," Luke nodded.

Hans threw his hands in the air in disgust and stormed off toward Grandpa. Luke shook his head and hurried to catch up. Over to one side, the sight of a petite girl with long dark hair caught his eye. Ever since he had left the plane, his eyes had been searching for her. He was watching this one so closely, trying to see if it was his dream girl, that he did not see the trolley coming the other way.

"Sorry," Luke apologized to the elderly couple as he reached up and scratched his ear.


Sitting in the front seat, next to Grandpa, Leia did all the talking. Hans was brooding on the back seat, seething that Luke was not as eager as he was to get to New Mexico and what he thought were the answers. He firmly believed that the way home lay through New Mexico. While Luke did agree with him on that, he also believed that they would be shown the way at the appropriate time, and not before.

Alone with his thoughts, Luke kept watch as they drove through any areas of habitation. Any time he saw someone he thought might fit the vision in his memory, he watched her until he was proved wrong. For a long time, they were in the open country, on a freeway where there were no pedestrians to see. Luke wished that he had x-ray vision to enable him to search the passing cars. He even tried to see if he might develop it, like Leia had her dream walking. All the while, he was hoping against hope that he might catch a glimpse of the girl he was so desperately seeking.

The car arrived in Sarasota, allowing Luke to once more take up his latest hobby. They drove across the bridge onto Siesta Key and followed the main road around. When Grandpa turned onto Ocean Boulevard, Luke knew the likelihood of finding her had diminished. There was no way she would live so close to him. Luke could never be that lucky. When they turned onto Sandy Cove Road, he knew all hope was gone. He released a long, slow sigh and put on his 'game' face to meet the rest of the grandparents.

Their first order of business was to carry their luggage to the bedrooms. Or rather, Opa carried Luke's case, Grandpa carried Hans' while the two boys struggled with the heavy cases that Leia had managed to cram her entire wardrobe into. They had to make two trips, carrying the cases up the stairs between them. Descending the stairs, the boys wanted nothing more than to collapse onto their beds. They were in a room this time, and not the porch. It didn't take them long to unpack and they were surprised to see that Leia was already outside when they went through to the back yard where Opa was cooking steaks over the bar-b-cue.

"So how did school go," Omi asked when they were all sitting down with full plates in front of them.

"Good," Luke nodded.

Leia and Hans nodded with him.

"Did you become a cheerleader, Leia?" Grandpa winked.

"Please," Leia rolled her eyes and tossed her hair over her shoulder. "As if."

"Did you try out for any sports, boys?" Grandpa asked, turning to them. He had been a keen sportsman in his day.

"Sorry," Luke shook his head, looking to Hans for help in the conversation.

During the talk, Luke couldn't help noticing that Hans had half an eye on the pedestrians that walked along the path at the back of the yard.

"Why not?" Opa frowned. "It's not like you guys couldn't handle yourself. I mean, you certainly look fit enough."

"Just..." Luke shrugged. "Not into sports."

"Bad hand-eye coordination," Hans pointed to his eyes.

"Well, you boys just promise that you won't be hanging around the house all summer. Boys your age should be out with other young 'uns, having fun and chasing pretty girls."

Hans, taking a gulp of coke, choked.

"What's got into you?" Omi demanded with concern, reaching over to mop up the spilled drink.

"Nothing," he croaked. "Uh, what is there to do again?"

"Out on the beach," Grandpa pointed, "they play soccer, tag football and volleyball pretty much every day. There's a ton of stuff to do. I'll pick up some leaflets."

"Oh, and I'll tell you what, boys," Omi sounded extremely excited. "When I see him, I'll ask Richard and see if he'll take you two paintballing again."

Hans and Luke exchanged a look that suggested it would be over their dead bodies.


Back in their room, Hans and Luke were changing into something more suitable for the beach.

"I think I'd rather play those sports on the beach with total strangers than go paintballing," Luke shuddered.

Hans grunted.

"Especially with that GI-Joe prick."

"So," Luke gave Hans a steady glare. "Apart from not being able to go to New Mexico to get us all killed, you want to tell me what has you all jumpy? I mean, more so than usual."

Hans looked around, as though he was seeking some way to avoid this conversation.

"It's that Alison girl," he mumbled.

"What?" Luke raised his eyebrows. "You've seen her already? What's she done to you this time?"

"No, I haven't seen her, yet," he shook his head. "But I'm bound to."

"What makes you say that?" Luke shook his head. "She wasn't local, was she? I mean, she stayed in a hotel. She lived in Mississippi, didn't she?"

"Yeah," Hans nodded. "Jackson."

"So did she tell you she was coming?"

"No," Hans shook his head, trying to hide the look of guilt.

"So then there's not much chance of bumping into her, really, is there," Luke narrowed her eyes. "But even so, why would meeting her again worry you? You seemed to get on with her last spring. Sort of."

"Because I didn't get in touch with her like I said I would!" Hans snapped.

"Huh?" Luke frowned.

"She gave me her email, and her number," Hans pushed his hand through his hair. "And I didn't call."

"Why not?"

"Cause I figured..." Hans ground his teeth together. "I figured we would be going to New Mexico. I thought I'd never see her again and it was better to make a clean break than have her hanging on."

"Oh," Luke widened his eyes. "I see. Still, she might not come here again."

"Oh, she's here," Hans growled. "I just know it."

"Well," Luke sighed and sat on the corner of his bed. "I don't know much, but I do know that you can't hide. Especially from her. It's better to face the music as early as possible, get it all over with and then you can forget about it. Tonight, we'll go over to Scoops. If she's anywhere, she'll be there."

"Do we have to," Hans looked as though he would rather have his teeth pulled.

"No," Luke grinned. "But I kind of liked the place and so I'm going to go get myself a Cherry Surprise tonight. Now come on. Let's go for a swim and cool down from that trip."


* * *


"So how did your shift go last night?" Sandra asked Alison while they were lying in the sun.

At least, Alison and Julia were in the sun. Sandra found it more comfortable to stay in the shade. Alison had brought her boom box today, and they had tuned into the local radio station. The latest tunes, mixed with golden oldies, played in the background.

"It was interesting," Alison nodded, bouncing her head to the rhythm of the song that was currently playing.

"Oh, that reminds me, Sandra," Julia sat up. "Alison and I need to leave the beach a little earlier today. We need to have a shower before we start work. It gets really uncomfortable with all the sand and sunscreen stuck to you. And I so want to put on deodorant and stuff."

"You're working tonight?" Sandra frowned. "On a Sunday night?"

"Yeah," Alison nodded. "Scoops is open all week. You know that. You should pop in for a while. We can talk during the quiet moments."

"Huh!" Julia laughed. "Quiet moments? Have you seen how many people there are around here today? I think we'll be pretty busy tonight."

"Maybe we'll get lucky and have another rain storm."

"No," Sandra shook her head. "Forecast is clear."

"Mind you," Julia chuckled. "There's one good thing about more people being around."

"What's that?" Alison lifted her head.

"It means that there are more groups of single girls for the bozos to chase after," Julia waved a hand at the beach, noting that there were no groups of boys ogling them.

"But," Alison sighed. "It also means that the cute guys get their pick of those girls. And I don't think we're them."

The sun climbed to its zenith and then started its descent, taking none of its heat with it. All too soon, Julia took a look at her watch and started to pull on her beach dress.

"We have to go, now," she nudged Alison, laying face down on her towel.

"Already?" she pouted.

"What?" asked Sandra. "Your shift doesn't start for like, an hour!"

"Sorry," Julia shrugged. "But last night was just awful, all sticky from the sun screen. And the sand! I was itching like crazy. So I'm going to use the public showers and wash my hair first."

"Another ten minutes, Chica," Alison grumbled. "It's too hot to do anything right now."

"Suit yourself," Julia started to put her things away. "But don't complain to me tonight when you feel all itchy and yucky."

"Oh!" Alison growled, rising to her knees. "I hate it when you're right."

"Are you going to pop in tonight, Sandra?" Julia looked over to her friend who was starting to pack up, too.

"Maybe," she shrugged. "I don't know. We'll see."

"Okay, then," she nodded. "If not, see you here tomorrow."

"Definitely," she hugged Julia. "Toodles."

While Sandra headed one way, Alison and Julia headed for the public showers. It was time to get ready for their shift at Scoops.


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Red Shift Part 2 Chapter 14

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Hi everyone,

As always, thanl you for continuing to leave me feedback, is spite of my seeming deliberance in drawinf out Luke and Julia's much awaited meeting.

AJK001 - Well, Julia works at Scoops, Luke goes to scoops... Unless I can think of a way to stop Julia from waiting tables... :twisted:

BehrObsession - Meeting on Scoops that evening seems most likely. Seems. :wink:

Ellie - Oops. Last weeks feedback should have said Sandra, not Ellie. Sorry. :wink:

lazza - Yup. Too easy. Since when I have I done things easy? :wink:

roswell 3053 - Yup. Michael is Hans is Michael. :wink:

omwf - The question is... can I drag it another week? :twisted:

auroraskey - Funny how thei past lives seem to play an important part of this one. :wink:

VeronicaB - Mean? Me? Must have me mistaken for someone else. :wink:

smokie - Well... would you really want me any other way? Would my stories be as interesting without all this anticipation? And I DO always deliver, right? :) :) :)

frenchkiss70 - Who says they are meeting THIS week? :wink: As for obstacles... well, just two. That's all. Two simple little obstacles. Not including distance. :wink:

tequathisy - A tad frustrated are we? :wink:

Scottie - All those bikini's. right Scottie? :wink:

roswellluver - Well... they will meet... eventually. :wink:

Timelord31 - Just one, huh? heh heh heh :wink:

Roswelllostcause - Would you really want ,e to change? Would my stories be as entertaining? Enjoyable? :)

Hmmmm.... I guess a lot of people gat a little fed up. :wink: LOL. Hope to see the rest of you guys again soon!! (I expect they are all hanging out at my other story. LOL



Red Shift


Part 2


Chapter 14


A lovestruck Romeo sings the streets a serenade
laying everybody low with a lovesong that he made
finds a streetlight steps out of the shade
says something like you and me babe how about it?

Juliet says hey it's Romeo you nearly gave me a heart attack
he's underneath the window she's singing hey la my boyfriend's back
you shouldn't come around here singing up at people like that
anyway what you gonna do about it?

Juliet the dice were loaded from the start
and I bet and you exploded in my heart
and I forget I forget the movie song
when you gonna realize it was just that the time was wrong, Juliet?

Come up on different streets they both were streets of shame
both dirty both mean yes and the dream was just the same
and I dream your dream for you and now your dream is real
how can you look at me as I was just another one of your deals?

Well you can fall for chains of silver you can fall for chains of gold
you can fall for pretty strangers and the promises they hold
you promised me everything you promised me thick and thin
now you just say oh Romeo yeah you know I used to have a scene with him

Juliet when we made love you used to cry
you said I love you like the stars above I'll love you till I die
there's a place for us you know the movie song
when you gonna realize it was just that the time was wrong?

I can't do the talk like the talk on the tv
and I can't do a love song like the way its meant to be
I can't do everything but I'd do anything for you
can't do anything except be in love with you

And all I do is miss you and the way we used to be
all I do is keep the beat the bad company
all I do is kiss you through the bars of Orion
Julie I'd do the stars with you any time

Juliet when we made love you used to cry
you said I love you like the stars above Ill love you till I die
there's a place for us you know the movie song
when you gonna realize it was just that the time was wrong, Juliet?

A lovestruck Romeo sings the streets a serenade
laying everybody low with a lovesong that he made
finds a convenient streetlight steps out of the shade
says something like you and me babe how about it?



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"Ah, Jules," Vanessa called from the office as Julia and Alison entered the Employees' room on Sunday evening. "Can you spare a moment?"

Being the most senior employee at Scoops, Vanessa had been promoted to Assistant Manager, meaning that Mr. Faulkner no longer had to work such long hours. It was a duty that she was good at and one that Vanessa took seriously. This, she knew, would look great on her college application.

"Yes, Vanessa?" Julia entered the office with a smile.

"Sophie's running an errand for me," she looked up. "She shouldn't be more than an hour or so, but in the meantime, I need someone to take her place behind the counter making up the deserts. And, well, no one else knows how to do that better than you. So, would you mind?"

"No, that's okay," Julia nodded. "I don't mind at all."

Because of the freezers, working behind the counter was a pleasant task when the temperatures were as high as they were today. Especially when it was humid, too. After getting ready, Alison disappeared to cover both hers and Julia's sections while Julia went to help out behind the counter.

She was working on a Double Banana Split when Alison came up and flopped against the counter. She placed a large order on the carousel.

"With only three of us working the patio tonight," she groaned. "It's worse than chaos. It's a zoo out there."


* * *


They walked in silence, their feet remembering the way from the few short weeks ago that they were last here. Although it had been warm then, it hadn't been as hot as this. There were more people here this time, too. Fewer students but more families. The whole atmosphere was slightly different, but it still felt good. The bright lights of Scoops soon came in to view as did the crowds of people sitting at the tables.

"Whoa," Luke nodded toward the parlor. "Check it out."

"What?" Hans frowned, not seeing anything out of the ordinary.

"Waitresses," he pointed. "Scoops has waitresses now."

"Great," Hans grumbled, "I bet we'll be expected to leave freaking tips for them now, too. Let's go somewhere else."

"Like you said, Hans," Luke slapped him on the back. "She'll only hunt you down. The sooner she finds you, the sooner you face her. She'll be easier on you, too. Make her wait, her wrath will grow exponentially. Give her less time to plan what she'll say... or do to you."

"If she's here," Hans gave a hopeful shrug.

"Come on," Luke tugged his shoulder. "There's a table free in the corner.

They sat down at the chosen table, with Hans taking the seat that allowed him to sit with a panoramic view of the patio, allowing him to keep a constant vigil for the approach of danger, or Alison, which to Hans, amounted to the same thing.

"Oh, crap," Hans suddenly groaned. "I don't believe it!"

"Don't believe what?" Luke glanced over his shoulder and then back at his friend.

"She's here."

"Who? Alison?" He looked over his shoulder again, trying to see her. "Where?"

He quickly scanned the tables he could see and then looked out at the sidewalk. He couldn't see her anywhere.

"There!" Hans was pointing at the crowd.

Still, Luke couldn't see her. He looked back at Hans, his face an open question.

"Look," he pointed again. "She's only a freaking waitress."

"What?" he managed to mumble.

Luke's jaw dropped when he spotted Alison, wearing the cute white dress of a waitress, complete with an apron and a hat, taking someone's order at a nearby table. He turned back to Hans and smirked.

"Looks like you might be wearing your dessert rather than eating it."


Alison approached their table after she had placed the order she had just taken with Julia. Her head was down, flipping to the next page of her notepad. She didn't see her new customers until the last moment. At first, when she saw the table's occupants, her face showed surprise. Then she looked angry, causing Hans to groan. When she looked back, her face was calm again. She had a warm smile of friendship when she stood next to them, although she had twisted in such a way that she faced Luke, and away from his companion.

"Hi, Luke," her smile bubbled with genuine affection.

"Hey, Alison," Luke nodded. "How have you been?"

"Good, thanks for asking," she glared at Hans and then looked back at Luke. "It's so good to see you. We weren't expecting you till next Sunday, though."

"How come?" Luke frowned.

"How come we were expecting you?" Alison raised an eyebrow. "Or how come not till next Sunday?"

"Both of the above," Luke shook his head with a soft snigger.

"We bumped into Anders yesterday. He told us you were coming, but he thought it was next weekend."

"Oh, right," Luke nodded.

"So, what can I get you?" Alison's pen hovered above her pad.

"I'll have, uh," Luke glanced at the menu card. "A Cherry Surprise."

"Talking of surprises," the blonde girl nodded as she wrote the order down. "Surprised to see me here?"

"Uh, yeah," Luke nodded. "Pleasantly though. I, uh... thought you lived over in Mississippi?"

"I do," she smirked. "But I'm here all summer and my friend arranged this job for me."

"Your friend?" Luke raised his eyebrows.

"Yeah, Jules."

"Jules?" his eyes narrowed. He remembered the name. She was the mysterious girl who had left the birthday card.

"Yeah, Julia" Alison rolled her eyes. "She was the girl I was telling you about last spring. The one I invited to your party that day. The one you didn't meet 'cause you bailed on me."

"Oh, right," Luke chuckled. "So..."

"Yeah," Alison bobbed her head.

"Ahem!" Hans cleared his throat, trying to attract the attention that she was deliberately withholding.

"You don't call, you don't write," she turned to face him with a sickly sweet smile. "Gee. Was I that forgettable?"

"No, I..." Hans started.

"No telephones in North Carolina?" Alison continued. "No Internet access? No, wait. There must be, because Leia managed to keep in touch with 'her' friends!" She shouted the last two words, drawing everyone's attention for a moment.

"Look," Hans leaned away. "I'm sorry, okay? I... I was busy."

"Oh yeah?" Alison's anger was bearing down on him. "Doing what, exactly?"

She was met with silence.

"Yeah," she smirked. "Right."

"Listen, Luke," Alison turned her back on Hans again. "I wonder if you could do me a big favor?"

"Uh, sure," Luke nodded but not without some apprehension. "What?"

"It's Jules birthday on Saturday," she glanced back at the parlor and then down at Luke. "Her fifteenth. And, well, we kind of want to go out and celebrate, you know?"

"Uh huh," Luke nodded, wondering where he came in.

"She has a boyfriend, right? And it's really, really serious, okay? But the trouble is, he's not around at the moment. So I know you're kinda serious about someone else too, and I thought that because you wouldn't like, try and hit on her or anything, you would make an ideal date for her. As a friend. You know, because all she would be interested in with you would be friendship, right? You could just be two friends together knowing that neither will make a move because you guys are both so in love with someone else. You could be her friendship date for her birthday celebration."

"Uh," Luke blinked. Did she say all that on one breath? "Okay."

"Jeez, Luke," Hans rolled his eyes. "She might be a dog."

"Trust me, Luke." Alison glared at Hans. "Jules is no dog, okay? She's gorgeous."

"This is the girl who got you the job here, right?" Hans looked smug.

"Yes," she nodded. "She is. You got a problem with that?"

"So where is she, then?" Hans demanded looking around. "She must work here too."

"Yeah, she's, uh..." Alison looked up at the parlor. "There she is. Through the window. She's the small one behind the counter."

Luke turned to look at the girl Alison had indicated. His eyes widened and his pulse went racing. She could hide her long deep brown hair in that hat, she could stand beneath the unflattering glare of those harsh, flat fluorescent lights but she could never hide that inner glow of hers, that golden aura. Luke's heart was hammering in his throat. All those plans to search for her, all that worrying that he would never find her, and she was here all the time. And she was every bit as beautiful as he remembered her. She might not be as fully developed as her peers but Luke had always preferred tangerines to oranges anyway. They were sweeter. Controlling himself, he turned back to Alison, careful not let Hans see his eyes, because he knew that Hans would know something was up.

So, his dream girl worked at Scoops. And Alison wanted him to date her. Wait! Alison had said she had a boyfriend. Luke's heart cracked. She said that it was really, really serious. Two 'reallys'. His heart broke in two. She said that she would only be interested in friendship. The pieces of his heart crumbled into dust. Going on a friends only date would be hard when he wanted so much more. He was already head over heels in love with her, but she was in love with someone else. Should he just tell Alison? But what if she got worried that he might selfishly try to ruin her relationship and make him stay away from her? After all, Alison was her friend, too.

"As long..." his voice croaked. He cleared his throat. "As long as she's okay with it, yeah, I'll do it. I'll just be her, uh... just friends escort for her birthday celebration." And that was so very hard to say.

"Great," Alison jumped up and down with enthusiasm. "Now all I have to do is get a couple of dates for me and Sandra."

Alison headed back to the parlor, leaving Hans opening and closing his mouth in stunned silence.


So she was working here, Luke shook his head as he contemplated how easy his search had been, in the end. No need for his maps, his search patterns, or endless days cycling around Tampa. Instead, he could spend them sitting here, looking at her, worshipping her from afar. And she was perfect. She looked as amazing in real life as she had done in his imagination. Better. And as Alison's friend, he could get to know her, to talk to her. It might be a slow torture for him, but how sweet the pain would be. What stroke of fortune had brought her here, he wondered, for him to find her? And then it hit him. At his party, after Alison had told him she had invited a friend, he had left. He had missed her. If he hadn't been so set on his 'being alone' mood, he would have met his dream girl months ago. Maybe back then, she didn't have a boyfriend. Damn this stupid secret!

"Did you see that?" Hans demanded as Alison headed for the parlor. "She practically ignored me. She didn't even take my order."

"I wonder why?" Luke raised his eyes, retreating from his depressing thoughts. "Oh yeah. 'Cause you ignored her since spring break?"

"We can't get involved, Luke," Hans leaned over and hissed. "You know that. A bit of... fun while we're here is one thing. But phone calls? Emails?"

"Yeah," Luke nodded. "I can see how that would be so suspicious. Everyone would be sure to realize we were different then. Especially if they saw us with some pretty girls. Look. Leia kept in touch with her friend, right?"

"Yeah," Hans snarled. "But Leia knows where to draw the line. And besides. She has three chasing her. She won't commit to just one of them and so she won't want to tell them."

"Why does it always come back to that?" Luke shook his head. "When have I ever said I wanted to tell anybody? You know, out of all of us, you are the one who is closest to someone." He looked back at Alison. "Even if it is kind of freaky."


* * *


"Jules!" inside Scoops, Alison pulled her petite friend to one side. "Okay, remember how I told you about my friend? Luke?"

"The Jedi knight?" she laughed.

"Yeah," Alison chuckled with her. "Well, he's here. I just spoke to him. And guess what? He says that he'll do it. He'll be your date on Saturday. Okay?"

"Alison," Julia exhaled with a frown. She moved back to the counter, accepting Alison's latest orders. She picked up a bowl and started to work on the desert. "I'm not all that confident that this is a good idea, you know? I mean..."

"Look, he knows," Alison interrupted. "I told him that you already had a steady boyfriend and he understands, okay? He won't expect anything other than friendship. Because, like I said, the guy is so head over heels in love with someone else, too. Okay?"

"All right," Julia nodded. "That's not exactly the truth, but... As long as he doesn't... I don't know. Make a pass or something."

"He understands," Alison shook her head. "Besides, Luke's not like that. So there's nothing to worry about."

"Okay then," Julia nodded.

"Right," the blonde grinned. "Now all we have to do is to fix up some dates for me and Sandra."

"Wait," Julia held up her hand. "Isn't Hans with Luke?"

"Yeah," Alison frowned. "What's your point?"

"Well," she narrowed her eyes. "Couldn't he be your date? I thought you liked him?"

Alison put her hands on her hips.

"If he can't be bothered to drop me a single line then I don't want him to be my date."

"Well," Julia grinned. "There's always Martin."

They looked across to the patio at the bus boy.

"Uh, no," Alison shook her head. "But don't sweat it babe. If we can't find anyone, you and Luke can still go by yourselves. It is your birthday."

"Nuh, uh, Alison," she shook her head. "I mean, I don't really know him and..."

"So you'll get to know him," Alison shrugged. "I'll ask him to join us at the beach tomorrow."

"He's okay, right?" Julia frowned as she placed the completed order on the counter. "I mean, he's not like this... like another Martin, is he?"

"Uh, no," Alison shook her head. She reached up with her hands and lightly pinched Julia's cheeks. "Trust me, Petunia. If you didn't already have your heart set on someone else, then my MoonDoggie would light you up like a Roman Candle. But why don't you go check him out for yourself? That's his Cherry Surprise. Sophie's back, so you can take it to him yourself." She gave Julia a wicked smile. "You could always surprise him and offer him your cherry."

Alison doubled over with laughter as Julia stormed away to take Luke the ice cream version of a Cherry Surprise.


Leaving the confines of the Ice Cream Parlor, Julia looked to the table where Alison said that Hans and Luke were sitting. She could easily make out Hans. She recognized him as the guy Alison had spent time with at the party last spring. Someone sat across from him, with his back to her. Hans leaned over and spoke to him, probably telling him that his order was coming. The boy, Luke, turned in his seat. And then she saw him. Her heart pounded. Here was the boy, no, a young man now, from MOSI! Julia was about to burst with joy and excitement. She had found him at last. It was all she could do to stop herself from dropping the desert, running to him, throwing her arms around him and kiss him senseless. But then, of course, she remembered what Alison had told her. The young man that she was head over heels in love with after seeing him only once was already in love with someone else.

Oh my God, she whimpered in her mind. Could life be any more cruel?

Fighting back her tears and hiding her feelings, she stepped up to their table, and took a deep, steadying breath to compose herself before speaking.

"There you go," she gave him a smile of friendship that nearly killed her. "One Cherry Surprise. Luke, right? I'm Julia."

"Hey, Julia," Luke nodded, fighting to control his emotions. "Thank you. I uh... I guess Alison told you about our, uhm, date, ah?"

"Uhm, yeah," Julia looked down on her feet. "You know, you don't have to..."

"That's okay," he nodded. "But don't, you don't have to, uh, worry. I won't uhm... you know. I understand we'll just be friends."

"Yeah," she gave a slow nod of her head. "Thanks."

Luke nodded, unable to take his eyes off of her.

"Oh, uhm," Julia noticed that Hans had no ice cream. "Hans, right? Didn't you want anything?"

"Yeah," he growled. "Actually, I did. And lucky for her I haven't gone to see Alison's boss and got her ass fired!"

"So, uhm," she backed away from his anger. "What can I get you?"

"Toffee Sundae," he growled.

"I'll, uh," she pointed back over her shoulder and turned away.

On the way back, she decided that she would tell Alison the truth. She would tell her that Luke had been her mystery man all along. Yeah, she thought, and then she would do everything in her power to push the two of us together. And Luke would end up losing the love of his life somehow and forever blame me for it. I would rather have just his friendship than have him hate me forever. She couldn't let Alison do that to her. To Luke, either. No, she would keep this a secret and pretend that she really did have someone else, somewhere. She would keep Luke's offered friendship over him having nothing to de with her, any day.

"Well?" Alison was on her like a rocket.

"Yeah," Julia handed the order to Sophie. She worked hard to hide her disappointment, to keep her emotions neutral. All that waiting, all that longing and his heart belonged to someone else. "You were right. He is cute and nice." Nice, she wondered? The thought of offering cherries was definitely tempting, now. "And if I wasn't with someone else..."

"You're not 'with' someone else," Alison pointed out.

"You know what I mean," Julia rolled her eyes. "But it will be fun hanging out with him on my birthday. But only if you and Sandra are there too. 'With' dates." She handed her the Toffee Sundae. "You can take this to Hans."


* * *


He watched her leave before turning back to his ice cream. Lucky for Luke, Hans was too busy glaring at Alison to have noticed anything strange with him. He pulled out the bottle of Tabasco sauce from his pocket and quickly checked that no one was watching before he sprinkled a liberal dose of the hot sauce over the ice cream.

"I can't believe how we discovered that particular quirk of our diet," Hans mumbled so that only Luke could hear.

"Yeah," Luke nodded. "A pretty cool accident."

"Accident my ass," Hans snarled. "Leia was pissed with me and deliberately poured the whole freaking bottle into my OJ."

"And she sat there, waiting to erupt into laughter at your reaction when you took a mouthful," Luke chuckled. "Man, her face when you chugged the whole glass down in one."

"And then the look on her face when I asked Aunt D for some more because that was the most amazing OJ I had ever tasted."

"Only, when Debra passed you the carton, you were visibly disappointed when it wasn't the same." Luke chuckled while nodding his head.

"But then Leia confessed," Hans shrugged, "and we started to experiment. We already knew that we liked things really, really sweet. Who knew that we liked it spicy too?"

Han's face grew hard. Alison appeared and without ceremony, slapped a Toffee Sundae in front of him.

"Oh, yeah, Hans," her voice was as cold as the ice cream. "Julia says you can come with me to her Birthday celebration next Saturday."

"Humans," he spat.

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Red Shift Part 2 Chapter 15

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Hi everyone!

I hope that I'm not in the doghouse for missing last week's posting, but I do hope I can be forgiven, seeing as I gave you half a dozen of so chapters of Christmas festivities to tide you over.

Becaue of my hectic schedule right now, I'm not going to thank you all idividually. I hope you can forgive me for this, too. But thank you so much for your great feedback and continued support.

I kind of feel mean for doing this, but...




Red Shift


Part 2


Chapter 15




"What is he doing?" Traydn demanded. "Six months, Kivar has been in charge. And in that time, Deryn seems to have gone from strength to strength. At this rate he'll be back on his throne by the end of the year."

"What's got you all riled up?" Nickolas looked up from the maps he was studying.

"He's taken another dozen platoons from my army," he growled. "Refitting, retraining, and re-deployment, he calls it. A new army he says. Well, where is his new army now? By the time they are ready, Deryn will dismantle it for him."

"Are you saying that the great General Traydn with his huge army can't hold back small boys with less experience than him?" Nickolas raised a single eyebrow.

"How can I, when I lose men at the rate Khivar steals them from me." He paused, his voice falling low. "I think we should take back control."

"We agreed to this," Nickolas pointed out. "We gave him the authority to do what he wants, what he needs to do. I for one, plan to wait and see what this new army can do before I judge him."

"When?" Traydn snapped. "When do we get to see the great 'new army' at work?"

"Tomorrow, gentlemen," Khivar entered the room. He did not look pleased as he glared at Traydn. "Tomorrow, I will meet Deryn's forces here." His finger stabbed the map. "At Javex rocks. There, you will see what my new army is capable of. Tomorrow will see the new face of this war, and the beginning of the end of the monarchy."


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The camp was in an uproar. Vehicles screamed around the hordes of men moving in almost random directions, as if a giant ant colony had been dug up.

"What's up?" Zan burst into the tent, hastily finishing his dressing on the move. "What's happened?"

"The King was defeated yesterday," Rath shouted above the noise of arguing officers. "At Javex Rocks. He faced the much vaunted new army that Khivar's been preparing all this time." He stopped and looked up at his prince. "Zan, even the Bloodguard broke."

"What?" Zan gasped.

"It seems that Khivar's new army has been based on the Bloodguard. It's like we face an army of them, now. A whole freaking army!"

"What of my father?" Zan's face was still white with the news. "What news of the King?"

"We don't yet know," Rath shook his head. "No one has seen him. We haven't heard that he was captured, but neither have we heard if he was killed. No one seems to know. His army... the men were pretty much in a panic. It was a rout."

Zan hurried to the large table and rolled out an even larger map.

"Pull your army in to cover the center," Zan stabbed the map. "We need to consolidate here," his fingers drew a circle. "It looks like we're going to be on the defensive for a while. And send out patrols to see if they can find my father."

"Already ordered," Rath grinned. "I taught you well. And at the risk of sounding defeatist... you need to give some thought as to where to go if the worst comes to the worst."

"Already done," Zan smiled. "I learned well."


* * *


"Zan," Vilandra called after him, hurrying to catch her brother on his way to another meeting.

"Yes, Lonnie?" he stopped to wait for her.

"We don't get to talk as often as we used to," she observed. "You're either busy with all of this... or you're with Ava."

"You mean Ava is with me," his comment was dry.

"Whatever," she shrugged.

"I know," Zan sighed. "It's just... I do miss our little talks, Lonnie. It's just...

"I want to help."

"I am not letting you fight, Lonnie," Zan's face grew dark.

"Other women fight," she pointed out. "On both sides. They have done so for centuries. What's so bad about me doing my part?"

"I absolutely forbid you to fight," he shook his head.

"Fine!" Vilandra snapped. "But find me something to do! Anything. Anything at all." She paused. "I know that we need a new communications officer."

"Not a battlefield comm.," Zan narrowed his eyes at her.

"Not a battlefield comm.," she agreed with a shake of her head. "Strictly HQ if you want. Please! I have to do something to help."

"Okay," Zan nodded. "I'll get something organized for you."

"Thank you, Zan," Vilandra squealed, kissing his cheek.

"I swear, Lonnie," he glowered. "If Ava comes and asks me for something to do, I'll..."

"Ava?" Lonnie giggled. "Volunteering to do some work? Yeah, right."


* * *


"Rath," a shadowy figure called from the darkness of a large bush.

"Who's there?" Rath pulled his sidearm to aim at the voice. "Come out where I can see you."

"It will do you no good," the voice said as it stepped into the light. "For you do not know me. And if you choose to kill me... so be it. I am prepared to make that sacrifice, but someone else will come. And someone else, and someone else... until you hear us out."

"So what do you want?" Rath remained edgy.

"I am a patriot," the man replied.

"You have come to enlist, have you?" he breathed again.

"No," the stranger shook his head. "No. I wish to see this war ended, but I do not wish to see the monarchy continue in its current form."

"Then what 'do' you want?" Rath's guard went up again.

"A change of direction," the man smiled. "Every one knows that you were to be betrothed to Vilandra. You could marry her, and lay valid claim to the throne of Antar. As the only general who has remained undefeated, you are popular among your own men, Rath. And you are also respected among your enemies. Can Zan or Khivar say such a thing? Only you can heal the wounds that divide our planet."


"Nickolas also remains undefeated," Rath's words were guarded. "We have not, as yet, met."

"That doesn't matter," the man shook his head. "No one will follow Nickolas. He is not a politician, he is a military man. He is also in Khivar's pocket. And he does not hold the heart of Vilandra."

"I cannot rule while Deryn still sits on the throne."

"It is only a matter of time before Deryn is caught," the man shrugged.

"If anything should befall him, Zan will inherit the throne," Rath pointed out."

"Not if an accident befell him, also," the man's voice dropped to a whisper.

"I will not murder my friend," Rath sounded outraged. "My Prince."

"You need not do it," the man sounded worried, that he had said the wrong thing. "If Khivar was to find him, Zan will not rule. That's for sure. But with the huge following you could command... Think about this, Rath. Surrender Zan's positions to Khivar and let him deal with the Prince. Then you step forward, marry Vilandra and claim the throne. Otherwise, Antar will be fighting this war for generations. Do it to save countless lives. Do it to save Antar."

'Do it to rule Antar,' a small voice in Rath's mind called out.


* * *


"Khivar, is that you?" the woman's voice over the radio was hesitant.

"This is Khivar, Vilandra," Khivar smiled. "I've been expecting your call, my love. Is this frequency secure?"

"It is," Vilandra confirmed. "You think me to be a child, still?"

"I know you are not a child, Vilandra," Khivar smiled. "Did our time together on Denst not teach you that?"

"It was a wonderful time," Vilandra nodded. "And I wish we could go back to that time of innocence."

"We cannot," Khivar sighed. "Not while Antar is locked in this bloody civil war."

"I want this war to end."

"As do I, Princess," Khivar agreed. "As do all Antarans. For two years, I have led these forces against your father and brother. That's two years too long. This war has been seven years too long. Just tell me your location and we can end this within a day or two."

"No. I..." there was a pause. "I'm afraid for my brother."

"I will see that he is treated fairly," Khivar's voice was calm and reassuring. "No one will be hurt."

"It's just... I love, Zan, Khivar. I mean, you know I love you more, but still..."

"The only way to truly save Zan is to surrender his location to me. I can then send a delegation in to negotiate for his surrender. Once Zan hears my proposals, he will agree to the surrender of his forces. Rath's too. Your father will be alone, then. He too will see the folly in continuing to fight a lost cause. I give you my word that I will simply exile Zan. Then, you and I can marry and be happy together.

"You won't kill him?"

"I promise you, my darling," Khivar soothed. "I will not kill Zan."

"Okay." There was a pause. "We're at... Wait. Someone's coming. I'll call later."


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Red Shift Part 1 Chapter 16

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Hi everyone!

Well, surprise of the week was that I discovered that two of my stories (The Christmas Angel and The Imortance of Being Elizabeth) each won an award. :) So thank you for nominating me and thank you for voting. :)

Wasn't that mean of me? I just put them together and then zip back to Antar for another spot of history. :wink: Well... I can't spin it out for too much longer, you will be pleased to hear. Heh, heh, heh.

Thanks for all you feedback. It is so great to know that people enjoy my stories. It mkes taking time out to write something like "Last Christmas" all the more fun. :) But now I am back in full flow on this story, and my other, Parisienne Walkways.


AJK001 - It will be a while before the date, but lots of good stuff first. :)

smokie - Now this is not the end. It is not even the beginning of the end. but it is, perhaps, the end of the beginning. :wink:

roswellluver - Oh yes. Sneaky sneaky. :)

lazza - perhaps unsurprisingly, history was always my best subject. :wink:

Timelord31 - Thank you :)

roswell3053 - Thank you :)

aurorasky - Thank you :)

VeronicaB - Yes, the scent of power has certaily twisted Antar into a complete mess.

tequathisy - Yup. Mean through and through - which is why I write stories like Last Christmas and Parisienne Walkways. :wink:

xmag - I always try to write an original story. But it's getting harder. And you're right. I think having killed off everyone by chapter 13 will take some beating. :wink: BTW - nice to see you here. :)

Scottie - Well, so far, Rath was only offered a chance of betrayal. And who wouldn;t think about it? But does Rath act upon it? :twisted:

frenchkiss70 - Just because Luke and Julia think they can;t be together together, doesn't mean that they won't be topgether as often as they can! :wink:


Roswelllostcause - Well... here I am.... ready to drive you crazy once more. :wink:

BehrObsession - I think much of the problems can be attributed to the lack of the King's personal involvement in areas he should have stayed involved in.

Okay... on with the story.




Red Shift


Part 2


Chapter 16

"What is up with you, Jules?" Sandra demanded as she looked up from the magazine that she was trying to read.

Ever since Julia had sat down in her beach chair half an hour earlier, she had been unable to sit still, always fidgeting. Neither had she removed her yellow sundress, nor taken her sunscreen from her bag. All she had done so far was to flick through her magazine without seeing a single article. Unbeknownst to her friends, her mind was, as it had been all night, in turmoil over a certain dark haired, golden eyed... God, whom she was hopelessly in love with, yet whom did not... could not love her back. That just sucked as far as she was concerned. Knowing that he would be meeting them at some point during that morning was making her all... tense.

"Sorry," Julia sighed. "I guess I didn't get enough sleep last night."

"Boyfriend turn up?" Alison peered up from her magazine and over the top of her glasses and grinned.

Alison had already removed her sundress and sprawled out in the sun wearing her black bikini.

"No!" Julia sounded scandalized. "You know, even if... I would just... I would never do that."

"I'm just teasing, Julia," Alison looked upset that she had genuinely offended Julia.

"I know," she sighed. "It's just..." She waved her arms in frustration. Just what?

"Well," Alison sat up. "At least we have your dates organized for your birthday."

"What?" Sandra looked up sharply. "Jules has a date? Did she meet her guy last night?"

"No," Alison snickered. "But she met my friend Luke. He's going to go out with her, as a friend. But Jules says she's not going to go unless we both have dates too. And Hans is coming with me, so that means we need to fix you up."

"What about that Anders guy?" Sandra shrugged. "He seemed okay."

"Nah," Alison shook her head. "Luke and Hans are here and so that means Leia will be here too. We weren't kidding when we joked about him. He really will be following her around, sweeping the streets with his tongue."

"Oh," Sandra shrugged. "Then I don't know who... Let me think about it, okay?"

"I'm not going unless both of you have a date," Julia reminded them.


Still covered up in the shade, Sandra went back to reading her magazine, while Alison returned to allowing the sun to worship her, Julia continued to reflect upon how much more handsome Luke looked, now that she had seen him up close.

"Oh... my... God!" Sandra announced.

Both Julia and Alison looked over at her.

"Alison, whatever you do, do not chase them away," she commanded.

"Who?" Alison frowned.

"Just look at the major hunks walking this way," she drooled. "And I do mean hunks and I do mean this way. Oh my, I'll just die if they sit anywhere near us. Ohmygod! Ohmygod! They've seen us. They pointed." She squealed. "They're coming this way."

Alison and Julia both removed their sunglasses and turned to look the direction that was the cause of Sandra's fit. Julia smiled, her own heart racing when she saw Luke and Hans walking toward them. They both wore Bermuda shorts, wrap around sunglasses and carried their towels rolled up in a tube, around their neck and over their shoulders. Both carried a large bottle of water. Julia was having problems breathing as her eyes fixed upon Luke's chest. He certainly was fit, in every sense of the word. She felt very light headed. When Luke waved, Sandra gave another squeal and almost fainted. Julia had to giggle, glad that she wasn't the only one affected by Luke, yet sad that she could not react how she wanted to.

"Good morning," Luke smiled.

"Good morning, Luke," Julia looked up and smiled back. She was glad that she had replaced her sunglasses to hide the emotions that she knew they would be showing.

"Hey, guys," Alison waved.

"You know them?" Sandra's mouth dropped open.

"This is Luke," Alison pointed. "He's a freshman from Raleigh in North Carolina. All around nice guy. A great friend and Jules' birthday date. Luke, this is our friend, Sandra."

"Hey," Luke nodded.

"Oh yeah," Alison waved her hand in his general direction. "That's Hans."


Julia was fighting an internal battle. One she felt that she was losing. She found it more than difficult to play it casual around Luke when her heart and soul was crying out to him. So too was her body. She was reacting in ways that she had never reacted before. It was so unfair that someone as gorgeous as him should belong to someone else and yet be so close to her. She just knew that his girlfriend would be blue eyed, blonde and buxom. Just because his body was to die for wouldn't necessarily make him all that different from the other guys she knew, would it? She was so glad that her sunglasses were mirrored. He would not be able to see her eyes, which she just knew were so readable right now. Her whole body was quivering as she watched him spread his towel on the sand, a short distance from her chair.

"Did... did uh, you sleep all right?" she asked him. "Last night, I mean?"

"Yeah," he nodded. "It was, uhm... hot, though. I think it might have been cooler on the porch. More air."

"Yeah," Jules nodded. "It gets hot in Florida. At night, too."

"I noticed," Luke smiled at her.

Her legs turned to jelly and if she had been standing, she would have fallen.

"Are you uh..." he looked at her sitting in the chair. "Don't you sit out in the sun?"

"Oh, yeah," she nodded, looking down at her bag. "I just didn't get around to putting my towel out yet."

"Oh," he nodded. "Uh... Am I bothering you or anything? I mean, are you trying to read?" He indicated the magazine in her hand.

"Oh!" Julia looked down. "No, no," she shook her head. "I was just going to put it away when you turned up. I uh, fished."

"Fished?" Luke looked confused.

Behind his sunglasses, she saw his eyebrow raise.

"Finished," she blurted. "Just finished it."

To cover her embarrassment, Julia bent to put her magazine in her bag, cursing her stupidity and wondering what he must think of her. From her bag, she pulled out her towel.

"Here," Luke held out his hand. "Let me..."

Nodding, she handed Luke her towel.

"Where?" he asked. "Is here okay?" He indicated the space next to his.

"Fi.." her voice came out dry and cracked. She swallowed. "Fine," she repeated.

She watched him straighten the towel out, wishing the gap he left between them was not quite so wide.

"So, where's your sister today?" she tried to steer her mind to other matters and not on the hot body so close to her.

"I think they went to get a soda or something," Luke looked up and down the beach.

"Oh," she nodded. "With Andy?"

"No," he shook his head. "I think his name is Anders."

"Yeah," Julia laughed. "We met him the day before yesterday. We call him Andy 'cause it's easier to say."

"Ah," he chuckled.

Earlier, when Luke had unrolled his towel, she had noticed that he had a bottle of sunscreen and his wallet wrapped inside it. He picked up the bottle and poured the white milk in line along his arms and across his chest. Julia's whole body shuddered when he started to rub the milk into his skin, leaving a sheen wherever his hands touched. She hoped that the groan she just emitted was too silent for him to hear. With her mouth now as dry as a bone, she reached for her bottle of water.

"Are you going to sit in that dress all day?" Alison peered over the top of her sunglasses from her prone position close to where Hans had settled.


She moved with a graceful elegance as she rose from her chair. Hiding behind his sunglasses, Luke could not keep his eyes off of her. It had been so hard to concentrate on ordinary, friendly chat with her. Especially when all he wanted to do was hold her. To hug her. To kiss her. But he couldn't do that, because she belonged to someone else.

Gripping her dress from the bottom, Julia pulled it off over her head in one fluid, refined motion. His mouth all but dropped open when she stood there wearing a neon yellow bikini. With her skin already tanned from living in the sunshine state, she was a vision of health, of fitness, of... beauty. She was absolutely stunning. Luke was so glad that he was wearing Bermudas because they would hide the more obvious signs of his body's reaction to hers. Unless he had to stand up, when it would become all too abundantly clear just what she had done to him. She stood to one side of him and as he had done moments ago, she started to pour oil over her body. Luke would have traded anything to have the luxury of rubbing that oil onto that smooth skin of hers. The heat that he was feeling right now had nothing to do with the weather.


She sat down on her towel, facing him, her knees bent and twisted sideways, resting on one arm.

"Uhm," she held the bottle to him. "I'll do your back, if you do mine."

Luke's mouth opened and closed a few times before he found his voice. Yeah, real smooth, you jerk. She's going to think you're worse than Anders.

"Sure," he croaked, taking the bottle from her hands. She started to rise. "No!" his cry was a little too urgent. "No," he was calmer. "Just... just turn around. On your, uhm, knees."

Julia nodded and turned her back to Luke, kneeling instead of standing.

"So what do you think of Florida?" Julia asked, trying to keep her mind off of the amazing sensations caused by the warm, strong hands that were teasing her back. She definitely did not want him to hear her moan.

"Smooth," Luke breathed hotly.

"Smooth?" she frowned.

She did not see Luke squeeze his eyes shut and his lips move, calling himself all manner of names.

"Sure," he saved. "It's a real smooth place."

"Is that uh, a North Carolina slang?"

"Something like that," he thanked the gods, all of them, that she had given him a way out. "Okay. You're all done."

For a split second, Julia wanted to beg him to do her front again.

"Your turn," she said instead.

Luke chose to lie down on his towel. It would be easier to control himself then. Not to mention the fact that he would be able to hide something rather obvious. Julia poured the milk onto his back in two long lines. She then started to push her hands across the tight muscles, feeling every sinew as she massaged the sun cream into his skin.

"Do you play sports?" she asked, her eyes following every contour.

"Uh," Luke struggled to speak. "No. Not really."

"Oh," her eyes widened. She wondered how someone developed muscles like his without training to play something.


Laying on her back, Julia was doing everything she could to take her mind off of the unattainable young man who lay just a short distance away from her. Right now, she was trying to concentrate on the periodic table, which had recently changed following the discovery of the strange mineral, Cadmium-X; a strange byproduct of the Alien Invasion. When she started to feel the sun biting her, she sat up and started to reapply the cooling oil to herself. How she wished that Luke would offer to help her. When she saw how her bikini top was showing her body's reaction to him, she turned over and lay on her front. She felt a momentary pang that Luke hadn't even glanced at her. But then, how could she compete with those senior girls over there with the huge... volleyballs. The ones who appeared more than interested in her dark mystery man. Giving a heavy sigh, Julia reached behind her back and unfastened her bikini strap. At that moment, Luke leapt to his feet and ran down the beach as though the devil himself was after him. She raised her head and watched him as he ran into the sea and flung himself into the waves. He hadn't even noticed her.


* * *


The water really felt good when he threw himself into the waves. But it wasn't nearly cold enough.

"It was bad enough watching her hands rubbing along her skin," he kept swimming, working hard. "But when she reached behind and undid that strap. Damn!"

The water was just too warm. It was not helping him to ease his problem.

"God! What must she think of me?" he demanded. "A complete horndog. That's what I am. Could she be any more sexy?"

His blood was boiling.

"God knows what would ever happen if we ever did date for real," he groaned. "I would probably mess myself every time we so much as kissed. And that soft, tanned skin of hers. And those lovely, firm, perfect... breasts."

Luke let out a long, loud groan of frustration. This was not helping. The water just had to be colder farther out, right? It just has to be. But as he swam farther and farther, the water seemed no colder now than it had been when he first jumped in and he was still suffering from his original embarrassing problem. His hardness ached. He stopped swimming. He raised his shoulders out of the water, sucked in a deep breath and then threw his upper body down, diving beneath the waves, raising his legs straight into the air to push him down like a torpedo. Pulling with his hands and kicking with his legs, exhaling as he went, Luke pushed himself deeper and deeper into the cold, blue water - hoping that his painful erection would go down.


* * *


Breaking the surface, Luke sucked in the air that he had expelled. He had achieved his goal, he had regained control of his body, after only a dozen or so dives into the cooler depths. Everything was good again.

"You're a pretty good swimmer," he heard a warm voice beside him.

"Julia!" he gasped, his body reacting to her mere presence.

"Call me, Jules," she smiled, treading water to keep herself steady. "All my good friends do."

"So..." his blood started to heat up. "You count me as a good friend?"

"I should hope so," she laughed, her voice ringing through the air like a bell. "We are going on a date on Saturday night."

"As friends," he reminded her.

"As friends," she confirmed with a nod. "Are you looking forward to it?"

"Of course," he nodded. He broke into a genuine smile. "Who wouldn't want to be seen with a pretty girl on his arm, even if she is just a... you know, friend."

"So..." she dropped her eyes. A swell of exultation coursed through her. "You think I'm pretty?"

"Sure," Luke started to curse himself. No sunglasses. She could see his eyes. He looked down into the blue water but they only dropped as far as the gentle rise of her breasts just visible through the water. "I uh, think you're very pretty. You're, uh... beautiful."

"Are uh, you planning on staying out here for a while?" she turned to look at the shore, so that she could hide the rising color of her cheeks.

"Uh... why?" Of course he was, if only to regain control of his body again.

"We're a long way out," she shrugged. "Would you swim back with me?"

"Sure," he squeaked. He cleared his throat. "Lead on." Being friends with Julia would be the death of him.


* * *


At the back of the yard, Luke had placed a reclining chair so that he could look out to sea and watch the amazing sunset. The beauty of nature reminded him of another natural beauty, the girl who didn't know that she had taken his heart. In his hand, he held a cold can of soda.

"You mind?" Hans had dragged another chair with him.

"Knock yourself out," Luke shrugged.

"Fun day," Hans sat in the chair.

"Yeah," Luke nodded. "You and Alison seemed to get back in the swing of things."

"It's not like we're serious or anything," Hans shook his head.

"It doesn't worry me if you are," Luke sighed.

"You seemed to be getting on okay with Julia."

"Yeah," Luke nodded again. "She's nice. I like her."

"You can't get involved."


"She's already seeing someone," Luke rolled his eyes. "We're just friends."

"See that it stays that way."

"I don't believe you!" Luke's voice, though low, came out as a growl.

They fell into a silence.


"Want to go to Scoops?" Hans broke the stillness.

"Nah," Luke shook his head. But the truth was, he did. He wanted nothing more than to go to Scoops and watched his dream girl, Julia. But today's torture had been almost unbearable and he had only recently managed to calm his body down. How on Earth was he going to cope with the friends only date they had made?

Luke had decided earlier that he was going to speak with Alison tomorrow. He would tell her the truth that Julia was the girl he had seen in Tampa, and the she was his dream girl, his soul mate. No sooner had he decided that when he considered what Alison would do once she knew the truth. She had become good friends with Julia, and would do anything to protect her. And preventing some other guy moving in and breaking up her relationship with her boyfriend is the sort of thing Alison would do. Luke would be banned from seeing her, from talking to her, from dating her, even if only as a friend. Upon reflection, Luke decided that would rather have a little of nothing, rather than none at all.

Luke released a heavy sigh, wishing that Debra were here. He really needed someone to talk to. Someone who might give him an honest female perspective.

"You can go," Luke spoke at last. "If you want."

"Nah," Hans shook his head. "Too much Alison in one day is hazardous to my sanity."

"Would it have really hurt you to drop her a line every now and then?" Luke looked across at his friend. "Even if you only said hi?"

"Right," Hans snorted. "How about, 'Hi, I'm an alien.' Yeah, that would make everyone get up and dance."

"Why would you even want to say that?" Luke rolled his eyes. "Why not just say, 'Hi. How are you? School is okay. Can't wait to get back to Siesta Key.'"

"But that's not the truth," Hans growled. "I was hoping to travel in a more westward direction."

The arrival of Leia and Anders prevented another heated discussion.


"Hey, guys," Leia smiled at them.

"Leia," Luke nodded. "Anders."

Hans grunted.

"What did you guys do today?" Leia asked, taking one of the two chairs that Anders pulled over.

"Just... swimming," Luke shrugged. "You know, hanging. You?"

"The same," Leia nodded. "Just the two of you?"

"No," he shook his head. "We met up with Alison, Julia and Sandra."

"Oh," Anders looked up. "I met up with them on Saturday. They're okay. A bit wacky. Especially that Alison girl.

"Alison?" Hans spoke. "In what way, wacky?"

"When I introduced myself, Alison said this, may the force be with ya'll joke. Her and Julia cracked up. I mean," Anders looked confused. "What was that all about?"

"So, three girls, huh?" she grinned at her brothers. "Do I detect a little romance blossoming?"

Luke was glad that the darkness hid his red face.

"Only Sandra was free," Anders smirked. "She said she was looking for Mr. Right Now."

"There you go, Luke," Leia teased. "Isn't that your middle name?"

"Luke already has a date," Hans snickered.

"With Sandra?" Leia's eyes were wide. "That was quick?"

"Nah," Hans shook his head. "With Julia."

"No way!" Anders exclaimed. "She's like, seriously heavy into some dude, or something."

"I'm only seeing her as a friend," Luke explained. "It's her birthday next week and Alison wanted to do something special for her."

"And Alison chose you to be Julia's date?" Leia widened her eyes. "Poor girl. So where's her boyfriend, then? Why can't he take her?"

"I think they said he had to go somewhere for the summer," Anders tried to remember what they had said. "But I do know that she totally digs him and will wait for him. Like a soul mates thing."

Beside him, Hans gave a loud snort.

"Don't you believe in soul mates," Luke asked him.

"What?" Hans raised his eyes. "No way. Of course not." He paused. "Do you?"

"No," Luke shook his head with a sad frown. At least, not anymore, he didn't.


* * *


"Damn, girl," Sophie exclaimed as they were in the middle of their shift. "Who was that fine specimen of Adonis I saw you flirting with at the beach today?"

"I was not flirting!" Julia defended herself.

"Who wasn't she flirting with?" Vanessa entered the room.

"I wasn't flirting with anyone," she shook her head.

"A real hunk," Sophie continued. "You should have seen him. Talk about fit! Hot is way too cold a way to describe him. Short dark hair, eyes to die for, and a body... The guy must be the star quarterback from somewhere. And you were so too flirting with him. Girl, you could not keep your eyes off of him and you should have seen her little nips sticking out like they were patriot missiles." Sophie stuck her hands over the top of her breasts, making a pair of fists but extending her index fingers.

"Sophie!" Julia shrieked.

"Ah," Vanessa raised her eyes. "So spill, Jules. Or should we call you, Juliet? Who was your Romeo? Tell your sisters all about him."

"His name's Luke," Julia sighed with resignation. "He's the same age as me... well, he turned fifteen last spring break, and he comes from North Carolina. He's down for the summer, and he's a friend. A good friend."

"Who we talking about?" Alison joined them with a new order.

"Adonis," Sophie told her.

"Romeo," Vannessa said.

"Luke," Julia frowned at the other two/

"Oh," Alison shrugged. "She tell you she has a date with him on Saturday night?"

"No," Vanessa shook her head and looked archly at Julia. "She seems to have forgotten that part."

"Here," Sophie reached into her apron pocket and held her hand out to Julia. "You might need this."

What is it?" Julia reached out and accepted Sophie's offering.

She opened her hand.

"Sophie!" Julia gasped when she found the gold foil wrapped condom.

"What are you keeping a condom in your apron for?" Alison's eyes narrowed with suspicion. "Is there some other menu I don't know about?"


* * *


"Will they be coming in tonight, do you think?" Julia stopped Alison out on the patio.

There was only an hour left on their shift and so far, Luke had not paid her... them a visit.

"You can never tell with them," Alison shrugged. "I get the feeling that Hans kind of makes the decisions and Luke just follows them. Though why Luke just doesn't stand up for himself... I mean, you saw their bodies. They are both pretty damn fit but I gotta say, Chica, your man has got some pretty fine muscles."

"He's not my 'man', Alison," Julia rolled her eyes. "He's my friend."

"I warned you, didn't I," she laughed.

"Warned me, how?" Julia frowned.

"I said he'd light you up like a Roman Candle," Alison smirked. "And, you my friend, are well and truly lit. You have been glowing all day."

"I'm sure I don't know what you're talking about," Julia denied.

"I'm sure you do," Alison laughed. "I know that Luke affected you, but it's okay. I won't say anything to him. Just don't let everyone's teasing make you shut Luke out, okay? He seems kind of sensitive to me. All that stammering and blushing. He is way too cute."


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