MIDNIGHT FANTASY (M/L ADULT) AN 12/22/08 (WIP)

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^^ i know another story...
but it was stuck in my head and i just had to start writing it. x



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TITLE: midnight fantasy
AUTHOR: Ping (Pijeechinadoll)
DISCLAIMER: I do not own Liz Parker or Max Evans. They are from Roswell. I do not own Isabel or Alex either or a matter of fact anyone one else who is stated in my story. The characters of "Roswell" belong to Jason Katims, Melinda Metz, WB, and UPN. They are not mine and no infringement is intended I do not profit from them, they belong to their owners. ^^
ANY OTHER CHARACTER NOT KNOWN TO ROSWELL BUT WHO IS WRITTEN IN THIS STORY IS A FIGMENT OF MY IMAGINATION> ALL MINE ^^
Pairings/Couples/Category: Max/Liz AU (LOL who else)
Rating: ADULT
SUMMARY: Liz is going to inhibitions that's all i'm saying. the title was inspired by a britney spears' perfume midnight fantasy. ^^

THIS IS ALL IN LIZ’S POV with AN OCCCASIONAL MAX’S
+ is Liz’s point of view
- is Max’s point of view

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‘You’ve got to lose your inhibitions!’ cried Isabel Evans.
‘YEP HEAR HEAR!’ cried Maria Deluca with a whoop.

I shake me head in annoyance and I roll my eyes. I don’t want to lose my inhibitions I want to Josh to like me for me. I don’t want to be tarted up. What’s wrong with the way I dress? I pull a face as I reply to my two friends.

‘I don’t want to lose my inhibitions. I don’t want to be more sexual. AND what’s wrong with the way I dress?’ I say.

I watch with curiosity as Isabel looks at Maria and back at me. Maria nudges Isabel and Isabel nudges her back. They start muttering between themselves. They keep saying you tell her, no you tell her. Of course they’re referring to me. I sit there watching them with growing annoyance which ends up with me tapping my foot under the table. I swallow my last bit of wine from my glass and slam it back down on the table.

‘Oh will you just bloody tell me!’ I cry.

Everyone in the bar turns round to look at me, I duck in embarrassment. Maria giggles. I think she’s a little tipsy. It’s Isabel who ends up speaking up, she orders me to stand up. I huff in exasperation as I stand up, I can feel lots of people’s eyes on me. I quickly sit back down.

‘Well first thing you need to do is get rid of that check shirt! It’s hideous!’
‘It’s Alex’s!’ I pout.
‘My point exactly!’ cried Isabel. ‘Even now my boyfriend doesn’t wear those shirts!’

I roll my eyes; Alex Whitman is my step brother, we have been siblings since we were kids. I love him to bits, he always looks after me.

‘It’s comfortable!’ I whisper.

Maria drops off her seat in giggles. Isabel rolls her eyes and picks her up and sits her back. Maria head the drops on to Isabel’s shoulder… I think she’s fallen asleep.

‘I think we should be getting Maria home!’ as I’m about to get up.
‘SIT!’ commanded Isabel.

I stand up in defiance.

‘SIT DOWN ELIZABETH PARKER!’
‘AND THE ICE QUEEN HAS ENTERED THE BUILDING!’ I pout as I sit back down.

Isabel shakes her head.

‘I’ll let you have that Liz as we’re going to stay here and you’re going to talk, actually you’re going to listen. Liz when was the last time you had sex?’

I can’t help but blush.

‘Um… four years…’
‘And don’t think that’s a problem?’
‘No…’ I pout.
‘Well I think it is and they way you dress Liz. It’s like you’re trying to hide yourself and I know that you have a gorgeous figure. So why?’
‘I like comfort!’
‘There’s nothing wrong with comfort when you’re at home, but when you go out you’ve have to have a bit more style and when we go out clubbing or a date: you’ve got to look sexy. And I hate to say this Liz. You never look like you make the effort…’

I can’t help it I want to cry, but I don’t want to let Isabel know she got the better of me. I sit there silently as it sinks in. I relent to what she says.

‘What do I do?’
‘I want you to go to my friend’s business. Midnight Fantasy.’
‘What is it? It sounds sordid!’

Isabel grinned at me.
‘Oh it is a little. Serena will give you the full works. Makeover and much more, you’re going to have the best three days and nights of your life.’

Isabel leans closer.
‘She’ll give you a man who’ll satisfy you ever want and needs. I’m telling you Liz. You’ll be left wanting more.’

Something inside me snaps, I melt at what she tells me. … oh my god im excited. I Liz Parker am excited. I’m going to do something adventurous. And in my excitement I completely forgot about Josh. Josh Allen who?





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I’m sitting here nervously outside an office in this glamour hotel called Pacific Heights. Doesn’t it sound like its come out a film or a TV serial…?

I really really can’t believe I’m doing this. When I arrived at the hotel with just an overnight bag with toothbrush and stuff I looked around it curiosity. It wasn’t just the building that was glamorous; it was everyone who walked in and out of the building. All the men looked liked they were high powered business men who looked liked they were loaded, all the women looked sophisticated. Oh my god even the receptionist looked liked she stepped out of a fashion magazine.

I got to the reception and handed in the card that Isabel gave me. I was so tempted to turn around and leave, but for some absurd reason I didn’t.

And boy am I regretting it now, I really want to go home and eat some Ben and Jerry ice cream. What the hell am I doing here? What made me think I could do this? I run a hand through me hair and look down at my clothes. I gulp, maybe I do need a makeover, but really do I really need to enrol into this… I didn’t even know what this was. All I know was what Isabel told me…

Midnight Fantasy.

Where I will get a makeover and apparently have the best time off my life… but what got me shivering in my skin was what she said to me…

‘She’ll give you a man who’ll satisfy you ever want and needs. I’m telling you Liz. You’ll be left wanting more.’

‘Please step into the office!’ a male voice boomed through the tannoy speaker.

I bite my lip nervously as I sat up and push the door open. I was blinded by bright pink fluorescent lights. I couldn’t see the desk.

‘Step forward!’ replied the voice.

I quickly do as I say, nearly tripping over my feet.

‘Turn around! Spin!’

I can’t help but gawp in annoyance how dare he tell to turn around when he doesn’t even talk to me face to face. I look around but I can’t see him in the room.

‘No! NOT UNTIL YOU COME OUT AND SPEAK TO ME!’ I say.

I hear a sigh and then silence; the door opens and a small petite red head steps into the room.

My jaw falls opened.

‘I thought I was talking to a man?’

She grins.

‘You was; but think of my partner like he’s Wizard of Oz and I’m the Good Witch of the North. I’m the one who’s going to give the shoes. And the full works.’
‘So I don’t have to deal with him?’
‘Do you want to deal with him?’

I shake my head. I didn’t like the sound of his voice. Serena smiled and points for me to seat down.

I plonk myself down.

‘That was your first mistake.’

I look across as the red headed woman places herself in the other seat across from me with her legs crossed.

‘Do you know what you did?’

I shake my head.

‘As a lady you have to hold yourself as a lady, when you sit down you place yourself down. Do you know why you’re here? Do you know what Midnight Fantasy is?’
‘Makeover?’ I reply with confusion.
‘I see that you know Isabel, you know you’re privileged you know. We aren’t actually taking any new members, but because you had a purple ticket…’
‘Wait what’s the purple ticket?’

She smiles secretly.

‘The secret ticket is past on to old members as a keepsake and if and when they want to pass it on to a person who needs it.’
‘And I need it?’ I ask.
‘Do you think you need it?’

I look down at myself and nod.

‘Yeah I think I do… but what do I have to do? What is Midnight Fantasy? Isabel said you give more than a makeover…’
‘That we do… we’ll give you the full works, we will make you into the essence of the perfect woman. We’ll dress you and show you how to do your hair and your makeup; the full works. And then… and only then will we show you the wonders...’

I knew what she saying.

‘Is this allowed? I mean… you’re… going to give me a man right? Isn’t that what you were going to say?’ I reply.

She howls with laughter.

‘Anyone that walks through these doors always come away satisfied, this is all consensual and even though we ask you to not leave this building for three days or three nights; you’re more than welcome to walk away at any time.’

I purse my lips in thoughts.

‘Do I get to pick who I’m matched with?’

She gave me a secret sort of smile, which confused me.

‘In some cases we hold gathering party where members can meet and on occasions we hold masque balls. But when new initiated members join we tend to match for you.’
‘Are… are all men… you know tested?’
‘Of course, all members are tested and all have to submit medical histories. Police checks are required of course.’
‘How long does this take?’
‘Eager?’

I blush.

‘Don’t worry we have contacts. It all but takes 42hours, during which time we will be giving you your crash course to beauty, fashion and seduction techniques.’

I breathe, taking in the information.

‘And I can walk away any time?’
‘Oh yes but I can guarantee you won’t want to, especially not the man I have in mind for you?’
‘You already have a match for me?’ I ask in shock.

She grins at me.

‘The perfect man! He’s been a member for ages. In fact I know he’s been untouched for a very long time and I know you would be perfect for him. There have of course been rumours he’s dynamite in bed, but he’s yet to find the perfect woman.’
‘And you think I am?’

She grins even more.

‘Oh perfect. Oh and by the way I’m Serena.’





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And so the very next day as soon as I had woken up; I had been thrown into one room after another.

What rooms I hear you ask me…

Basically I started off in the basement where I was given a haircut then taken to another treatment room where I had to have my height and weight measured; my dress size was taken down also taken down. I told to strip and put a towel around my waist, to which I was pushed inside a sauna room where I thought I was allowed to stew and relax. BOY WAS I WRONG!

Cause apparently this is to make my skin more supple for the next treatment. Hair removal treatment! From head to toe! WHICH MAY I ADD WOULDN’T HAVE KILLED AS MUCH AS A WAX, BUT IT STILL KILLED!

I was so wanted to go home by this but I persevered… I was then given a facial, then a pedicure and then a manicure. Then was thrown into a mud bath! And then and only then was I finally made to have a shower blast, where it removed all the mud from my body.

Man I’ve never been through so many treatments in my whole life. Is this what women go through to be pretty?

As much as was unsure whether all these treatments were necessary I did have to admit I enjoyed being pampered. I mean who wouldn’t. Maybe I could do once in the blue moon. But saying this I feel like I’ve been running through a miller. Maybe if I had given a chance to take a proper breather I wouldn’t have felt so completely utterly drained. The only chance I had to pause was the lunch break. But even that was short.

And Now I was laying down in my swanky nightdress and big fluffy dressing gown in my glamorous suite that they had put me in. The day was finally drawing to a close, I was tired but at the same time energy was buzzing through my whole body.

But do you want to know something? WHAT I hear you ask? Something had been playing through my mind the whole day. The thoughts of the man that Serena had told me about… She hadn’t told me anymore than he was tall dark and handsome. But trust me that was enough. That and her quote ‘There have of course been rumours he’s dynamite in bed, but he’s yet to find the perfect woman.’ was enough to make me melt.

For the first time in my whole life I had an erotic dream of a tall dark stranger taking me to bed, damn didn’t I wake up hot and flustered last night.

There was suddenly a knock on the door which interrupted me from my thoughts.

I end up stumbling very unladylike from the bed. I was about to yank open the door when I decided instead to look through the peephole. I see no one there. I was about to open the door when an envelope is pushed through the door.

I pick it up in curiosity. It smelt of a man’s aftershave. Not overly done, but it was nice and subtle. I inhaled another breathe with a sign, it was so masculine. I ripped open the envelope and pulled out the card. I gasp in surprise as red petals fluttered to the ground.

I read the card…

Liz,
A sun burns a thousand fires.
Solace lies within a heart.
Wonders cry my love desires.
Secrets will unlock us free.
Come my darling come to me.

I look at the card with annoyance. There was no name. But whoever it is knows my name. I wonder if Serena told that man my name. Has she discussed with him information about me?

There was another knock at the door.

I flung the door open in thoughts that maybe it might be him again. But it wasn’t. It was maid.

“Are you Miss Parker?” she asked me.

“Yes I am…”

“I was told by Miss Serena to give you this. It’s a cordless telephone; you dial 9 to ring out. If you need to charge it there is a cradle by bed next to the bedside cabinet. She also asked me to remind you to be down at her office by 11:00am.”

I smile pleasantly and say thank you and squeal happily inside. Did mention yesterday that Serena took my mobile off me? She told me no contact with outside world. Hmm… I wonder why she would do that.

Suddenly the phone rang.

I nearly jumped out of my skin. I press the answer button.

“Hello…”

‘There is not need to be scared Liz. I will not harm you in any way.’

“How do you know my name?”

‘Did you like the card I sent you?’

“Who are you?” I ask in annoyance and slight fear.

‘I won’t hurt you Liz. That’s the last thing I want from this…’

“I asked you who you are!”

‘I can not tell you that Lizabeth. But I can tell you this. Serena has told me a lot about you. I want you Liz. I will have you. I want you in my bed, underneath me, all around me…’

I blush for some reason. I’m not scared. I’ve been with a man before. But I’ve never had someone who could satisfy me. And damn I think this man could. A hot flush comes over me as he continues to talk.

‘I love you eyes and your hair. I can imagine it fanning out on my pillow. I want you Liz Parker.

‘I want to learn every curve of your body and every sound that comes out of your mouth. Every sigh and every moan! I can’t wait to get you naked.

‘Nothing kinky about what we’re going to do. I’m going to take you as a man should take a woman.

‘I’ll leave you begging for more. Wanting more till you’re never satisfied! I’ll be watching and waiting for you my love.’

The phones disconnects, leaving me gasping for air, my whole body warm with perspiration. I was excited. Oh my god I feel wetness pooling between my legs…

Now I know why I was given the phone.



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HunterLOL miss essay writer ^^ LOL your reply is above.
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Did I mention I collapsed in bed after taking a cold shower and even then I couldn’t calm my body down? I was so aroused when I hit the pillow; I was surprised to wake up without another hot dream last night.

I glance at the card sitting on the bedside cabinet and sighed. I wondered if I would meet the man tonight.

There was a tap at the door.

I look at the time. It’s was quarter past 9.

I walk over to the door and pull it open. It was a young teenage boy.

“Umm good morning Miss Parker your breakfast is here. Would you like me to bring it in?”

“Um yes come in!”

“Umm… if you just leave the door open one second I’ll bring it in...”

Liz looked on a bit confused but left the door open. She went and sat down next to the dressing table and brushed her hair.

A few minutes later, her food was pushed in. Liz was about to get up.

“Please don’t get up!”

“What? Why?” replied Liz.

“I do not want you to see me.”

Liz then realised that this was not the same person. This man had a deeper voice. She could see through the mirror that even though he had his back turned he was tall and he had dark jet black hair.

“Why do you not want me to see you?” whispered Liz.

The man sighed.

“I can not tell you that.”

Liz was about to get up when she heard the door slam. He was gone. Liz ran to the door and pulled it open. There stood the young boy.

“Um sorry you had to bring in your own food, I forgot your orange juice.” He replied.

“Wait! So you didn’t get someone else to bring me food in?”

The boy looked confused.

“Um no Miss Parker, why are you okay?”

Liz shook her head in confusion.

The boy handed her orange juice and then left.

Liz was confused, who was that man, unless… unless that man was the man who rang her last night, the man of who Serena talked about. But why of all the secrecy?

She rang down to the reception.

‘Hello? This is Pacific Heights reception how can I help you?’

“Can you put me through to Serena please?”

‘Hold one minute and I’ll put you through.’

Liz huffed as she waited.

‘Good morning Liz. How are you this fine morning?'

“Why did you give a phone last night so that man could ring me?”

There was silence on the other end.

‘Liz I gave you the phone so you could ring your friends. So you wouldn’t be bored.’

“Then why did I have someone ring me?”

‘I told Max not ring you.’

“WAIT MAX? WHO’S MAX?”

‘Um woops… I shouldn’t have said anything… Max is the guy that I’m going to pair you up with. I told him not to ring you!’

“So how did he get my phone extension?”

‘I do not know… wait… sorry Liz I’m going to have to get back to later.’

Liz looked annoyed at the phone as was about to throw it, but then the phone rang.

‘Liz I’m sorry I annoyed you! Serena just told me off!’

“Wait you just spoke to Serena?”

‘Yes. And she told me to ring you and apologise. I’m sorry.”

“Did you bring in my food this morning? Why were you being so secretive?”

‘Are you still annoyed with Liz? Are you still angry?’

“Are u trying to gloat me?” snapped Liz.

‘I’m sorry Liz I wanted to see you close up.’

“WAIT BUT I’M NOT ALLOWED TO SEE YOU? ISN’T THAT A BIT UNFAIR?”

‘Serena would have killed me if we have actually physically met.’

Liz couldn’t help but snort.

‘Hey I didn’t say I was prefect.’ replied Max.

“So you’re not perfect?” retorted Liz, as she lay down on the bed.

‘Yes Liz I’m not perfect, I have my flaws. But I hope you’ll see pass my flaws so I can be the perfect match for you.’

“What makes you think I’m here for a perfect man? I might just be here for the training on how to be a woman…”

‘And the other stuff? What about the love-making Liz? Do you not want that as well? Do you not want me to make love to you? Do you not want to meet me? I can get Serena to match you up with someone else. If that’s really what you want…’

Liz was lost in his words.

‘I’m sorry Liz. I shall leave you alone. Good bye my Lizzie. Goodbye…’

The phone suddenly disconnected. He was gone.

Liz heart pounded as a tear slipped down her face. She never even got the chance to met him and he was gone.




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Hunter lol really and truly you dont think thats the last we've seen of max evans
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destinyc

Now you're just toying with us! That's hardly fair. Hurry back and fix this!!!-Destiny

aww as i wrote before; i wouldn't delibratetly toy with you. dont worry there is a point to my madness ^^ the way i write. keep reading
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Im having withdrwal symptoms..lol Come Back soon Please!!

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“Now walk this way…” replied Serena.

I look up to see Serena getting up and opening the door. I so wanted to leave, I didn’t think I could go through this.

“Where are we going?”

Serena didn’t reply she pulled me through a corridor. This is where you get your final makeover she said to me.

She pushed open the double doors for me to see a big stockroom of women’s clothes. In the corner there were two older women on sewing machines. In another corner was a large chest of drawers. In another corner there was obvious a changing room. In the centre of the room was a circular sitting area. On the back wall were loads and loads of shoes.

My jaw dropped, I’m not one to go mad on shopping but this was heaven.

“Isabel was the one who built and designed this place, after she found Alex. It’s beautiful isn’t it? Isabel can’t keep away from this room; she’s always pinching shoes and clothes from her.” smirked Serena.

“And she’s allowed?” I ask in curious.

Serena laughs.

“When have you ever known anyone to say no to Isabel?”

I laugh. I really needed this. I couldn’t wait to get stuck in.

“Any lingerie you obvious get to keep. So shall I leave you to it? Sophia and Kimberley are here to help you. Okay?” replied Serena.

I nod eagerly as I watch her go.

“OH by the way be in the dinning hall at 6:00pm this evening!”

“Why?” I ask.

“Don’t ask questions just be there tonight.”

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And so I’m standing here in this long floaty black and silver dress. With my hair pinned up and strappy shoes and a subtle bracelet and earring.

Did I mention that behind the shoe of wall is a vault full of accessories and jewellery? It was amazing; I can imagine why Isabel couldn’t keep away from here. Kimberley told me all sorts of stories about Isabel and apparently there’s a room for men, exactly the same as the women’s room. I so wanted to take a look in there but apparently women aren’t allowed in there. It’s a no go area. The only person, women ever to gone in there is Isabel. Even Serena hasn’t had the luxury.

I couldn’t believe the transformation.

I notice a candle lit table in the centre of the room. The lights were dimmed. I knew in my heart what I was doing here but at the same time I couldn’t believe it. I looked up and see him standing there.

I nearly swoon on sight. He was perfect. Perfect to look at! I mean who wouldn’t be attracted to him. He had short jet black hair. He had a jet black tuxedo suit on I couldn’t help but wonder about Max, he should be here. Not this guy. I can’t help but feel a bit sad.

My heart sinks a little as he stepped up to me and tilts my face to look at him.

“Liz Parker.”

I nod a little.

“God you’re beautiful!”

I try to speak, my voice it caught in my throat. My heart is caught in my chest, it’s pounding wildly.

“Do… do… I get… to know you’re name?”

“You already know it!” he whispers in my ear.

Max Evans. Max Evans stood before me. He breathes in my scent.

“Absolutely stunning you are do you know that?

“I want you Liz Parker.

“I couldn’t keep away.

“I couldn’t let any other man have you.

“I want you Liz Parker.

“I will have you tonight.

“I will take you tonight, over and over again…”

He pressed a kissed just below my ear. A dizziness comes over me, I feel my limbs soften and before I knew it blackness came over me…



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jake17

OK Ping I think a dizziness took over me just reading this

LOL i love reading your feedback.x
Natalie36 yep she fainted again. LOL all my lizs' seem to faint one time or another.
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destinyc

can we send Liz some smelling salts or something? I think she would want to be awake for this!

haha yes send her some. yep she needs to be awake. xx
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I stirred awake to find myself in a dark dimmed room. Should I be scared? Looking around room I recognise that I’m back in my bedroom. Relief floors me but at the same time I can’t help but be disappointed. I push the wet cloth off my head and sit up.

Where was Max?

I pushed away the duvet in shock and embarrassment to realise that my dress had been removed; I was down to my underwear. I grabbed the top sheet and wrap around my body. A stand up a little woozy.

“I see you’re awake.”

I turn to see Max sitting in a chair near the balcony’s door windows.

I walk towards him and stumble slightly. Max is there by my side immediately, he holds me up.

“Are you okay?”

I nod as Max pulls me closer into his arms.

“Do you still feel a little bit dizzy?”

“…A little.” I whisper.

Max slides her hand around my cheek pulls me into a kiss. He pulls away.

“I wanted tonight to be perfect but I’m going to walk. I don’t want you to cause you to faint again…”

I’m shocked for words; I don’t want him to leave. I want him to finish what he started.

“Liz I’m doing the honourable thing here.”

“…I …don’t …want you to go…” I whisper.

He smiles at me and lifts me up and walks me over to the bed. He places me down.

“Sleep my beauty.”

I look at him with a heavy heart I want to cry as he kisses my forehead.

“Maybe tomorrow my darling.” He whispers as he walks away.

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30 mins later…

I didn’t go to sleep. I’m so angry, I grab my coat and button it up and do up the tie. I snatch up my key card and leave my room.

I ended up storming down to Serena’s office, I flung the door open.

Serena is sitting behind her desk looking at some paperwork. She looks shocked at first, but then she grins at me.

“That was quick!”

I scowl.

“Just give me Max’s room no. Serena! Actually just give me his room card!”

Serena raises an eyebrow but, rings down to the reception. A lady immediately comes in a gives me the card.

“I don’t know what Max has done but he never does anything without good reason.”

“Just tell me which room and floor!” I growl.

“Did he leave you wanting more?”

‘He didn’t even start!’ I say in my head.

“Just give me the details.” I mutter.

“Room 196B floor Pent House Apartment.”

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I stroll up there with shimmering anger but determination. This is all what this has lead up to this is what I was brought here to do. I was going to get Midnight Fantasy even if it kills me.

I push the key card through the door and let myself in.

I close the door behind me and place the card on the side table.

I push the bedroom door open and gulp at the sight before me.

There lay Max facedown with nothing but a towel around his waist. He had slight muscles ripple his body, not to over done. His jet black hair, I felt a hotness flush my body. I can see that his face is turned slightly towards me. He’s breathing slowly which tells me he’s asleep. I push the towel up slightly with a slight blush; his thighs looked strong and powerful.

I push the towel up further in anticipation, when a hand stops me. I’m suddenly pinned to the bed.



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OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG!! I've just found this story and had to leave feed back!!!!
Not only are you a talented artist but you're a freakin' awesome writer as well!!!
This story is sooooooooo HOT!! HOT! HOT! HOT!!
Max in a towel ... okay I've just died and gone to heaven!!
You so have to get your butt back here and write another wonderful chapter!!! BUMP!!!
JANxxxx
P.S. I'm glad you are feeling better ping!!!

awww thankyou jan your feedback is really appreciated. im glad u love the story.
begonia9508

Bad girl!..... and can't believe what she did and I approve in the same time! :lol:EVE

OF COURSE APPROX. I DO TO. LOL.
Hunter yes hunter you've read it before LOL.x
destinyc action on the way LOL ^^
crazedearthgirl

Go Liz!...Max in bed in a towel (oh the images haha)
You can not stop there it is such a tease! Come back please:D

who me? tease? LOL!
Kitten88 lol im back. LOL.

this chapter's max's POV ENJOY
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“What are u doing here Liz?” I mutter in shock as I stared at Liz in shock pinned under my body.

She looked as me with wild scared eyes, as shoves at hands at my chest. Surprised by her strength I nearly end up flying backwards. I watch as I see Liz scrambled off the bed and stumble towards the door.

OH NO! I’m not going to let her go that easier. I step in front her to block her departure. I swing her against the door with some ease and trap her there with my body, my legs.

“How did you get in here?”

She looks at me petrified.

“Liz god I wouldn’t hurt you. Calm down, you’re shaking like a leaf!”

Liz shakes her head.

“This… this… was a mistake… could… could you let me go?”

“Liz I would let you go but you’re shaking like a leaf. I don’t want you to faint again.”

I watch Liz gulp and take a deep breath.

“Please… please just let me go…”

Something inside me snaps.

“Why Liz?”

“This is a mistake. I was wrong to come here.”

“Well you came here for something Lizzie. Did you want a look? Did you want to sample the package?”

I’m actually rock hard still from seeing her before in her dress and imagining what delights were underneath it. I had a cold shower and still it wouldn’t crush my desire. My want for her, my need for her. Her trapped body is withering against my hard body. Soft against hard, it’s arousing me even more. It doesn’t help that I have only just a towel around my waist. My hard arousal is obviously throbbing and pressing against the towel. It’s like it could feel the call to her supple body, her soft core. I wonder if she’s aroused like me, I wonder if she wet for me.

I want to touch her and I tell her as much. I whisper in her ear.

“I want to sample your delight Liz. The same as you want to sample mines. I want a midnight fantasy as much as you want one!”

I press my hard arousal against her core. She cries and whimpers out and tries to struggle out me grip. It makes me harder.

I want to tear that coat off and peel off her dress. Damn I want to taste her.

“Please…” she whispers.

I don’t know if that means yes or no, but I don’t wait to find out. I have to get her coat off first. I pull at her buckle and undo the belt and pull open the snaps…

FUCK ME.

She has nothing underneath apart lacey underwear including garters and all. And a slinky wonder-bra that has pushed her breasts closer together to give a enhanced effect. Fucking hell she looked good enough to eat.

“DAMN WAS THIS FOR ME?”

I press my hand against her smooth taunt stomach as I feel it contract. She feels like she has butterflies in her stomach as well like me. For the first time I’m going to admit im nervous as well. I haven’t done this in ages; my business doesn’t let me have the satisfaction of a playtime.

“If this was for anyone else I’ll kill them!” I snap in anger.

Liz flinches.

Shit I scared her.

I bring my hand to her cheek to try and calm her. I cup her cheek in my hand and caress it.

“I’m sorry my sweetheart.”

“Max please… please let me go.”

“I can’t do that Liz.”

“What? Why not?”

“Because Liz I know you want me as much as I want you. Don’t deny it! Don’t deny me! Don’t deny this of yourself. You want this Liz. This is why you’re here!”

Liz shakes her head again at me.

“Look I’ll show you how I know you want me.”

Liz looks up at me in curious eyes.

“How?” She asks.

I grin at her.

“This is how…” I reply.

I push my hand down her underwear and slid my finger upwards between her lower lips, upside her hot wet core. Her lips grip at my fingers as my fingers slips in and out of her. Yes!

Yes she’s dripping for me.

I hear her cry out for me. She sobs in desire as she can’t but help but press herself into my fingers. She dripping wet.

I kneel down and snap her flimsy underwear and replace my hot mouth against her lips where my fingers were once caressing.

I drink like the thirsty man that I am…

TBC?......

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Janetfl

Ping are you seriously trying to kill me here!!! *Fans face*
First of all you burn that shower scene from Saints and Sinners into my brain and now this!!!! *Fans Face*
This is such an awesome story Ping I seriously can not wait until you update again!!!! (hint! hint!)
JAN

^^ lol are u accusing me of murder LOL. hehe kidding. I'm glad you loved the update. He's more LOL. enjoy. x
Kitten88 LOL your feedback is so funny. thanks for dropping it by. x
keepsmiling7 LOL of course a man can be nervous LOL. he wouldnt be human if he wasnt. ^^ it makes Max sweeter anyway. don't u think. BIG GRIN.
destinyc hurry back with more. LOL ENJOY DESTINY.
crazedearthgirl LOL ^^ who me a tease?
Hunter hey miss sneak preview. ^^ thanks for the little pre plug of the next chapter. x
Natalie36 OH i dont think liz will stop him LOL
begonia9508 LOL eve your feedback is always welcome as usual. LOL. mwah+hugs. x
Hunter i know i missed my so called deadline. OPS SORRY.
DreamerM&L awww thanks. x x
jake17

IM with Jan here Ping! Between that heart stopping shower scene and this update you are just KILLING ME! How evil to leave us hanging!!!!! get back here with your awesome self!!
CArrie

LOL ENJOY the next chapter carrie. x
roswell3053 oh she gets even more lucky. LOL.x

LOL ^^ enjoy. x
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The moment I felt Max snap my underwear, my legs went weak at the knees.

Max held me up at my waist by gripping his hands around me as he placed his hot mouth against me. My heart was pounding, there was ringing in my ears. I feel the hot tears slip down my face! No not because I was sad… but I was feeling so emotionally torn.

His mouth… his hot breath… as he kissed me between my folds.

His tongue… OMG… if I was wet before… I was… OMG I was dripping like a waterfall.

I cried out as Max pushed his tongue upwards. He starts licking me out as I start contracting around his mouth. He pushes his tongue in and out, I withering against his onslaught I can help it. I moan! I want to scream. I want to cry out.

OMG Max’s hands travel upwards, sliding along my skin as he pleasured me… over my stomach, past my ribcage. His hands slid underneath my bra, he pushes the bra upwards, his hand close around my breasts.

“God… your whole… body is on fire…” Max replies as he drinks me.

“…you’re like… sweet nectar. I… can’t help… but want more…”

“Max!”

I can’t help but respond to his touch, caress… his… I move myself against his mouth. I feel so wanton. I want more. I finally admit to myself I want this! I want Max inside me all around me, above me, under me. I want him to take me against this door, against the wall, on the floor, in the bed. God I want him to take me so many times…

I could feel my body cry out at the thoughts.

“MORE!” I cry as I close my eyes in desire.

“LOOK!” Max snaps at me.

I look down as I watch Max bury his head between my legs. I watch how he takes me. I watch how his tongue appears and disappears.

Max grins as he rubs and caresses my nipples making, them hard and sore. God I want his mouth on them. I want them wet and aching.

“More! Max! More!”

I’m begging Max to finish me off.

His Tongue plunges deeper and faster. In and out. Thoughts of his arousal inside me instead of his tongue. Deeper. His tongue is dripping with my wetness.

I want him inside me I try to move, but Max isn’t finished with me. He lifts one of my legs over his shoulder, stretching me. Changing the angle slightly. He grips my bum in his hands as… deeper… faster… god I can’t hold in it in anymore… I cry out… I contract around his hot tongue.

I whimper as I come apart, as Max stand up before me. My whole body is hot and sticky. Max tugs and my arms and finally decides to remove my coat.

His hands wonders to my breasts again… he cups them in his hands.

“God you are so sexy!” he whispers.

“...just watching you come apart in front of my eyes.”

“Max!”

He unsnaps my bra and drops it to the floor.

“Max kiss me!”

Max grins. He places his hot mouth over mine. I should feel disgusted after all his mouth has just been… but god I don’t I feel so aroused. I still feel hot.

“No Max. Here!”

I point downwards towards my achy breasts. Max laughs.

“Lizzie Parker you naughty girl. Don’t worry… we haven’t finished not by a long shot!”

He presses hot kisses against my neck and travels his hot lips downwards. Finally his lips enclose over my left breast. He sucks it into his mouth. All the blood rushes to my head. His hand that isn’t enclosed over my other breast, travels downwards again between my legs.

I’m surprised actually his towel has moved at all, instead I remedy that. I tug at it. I want it off. I want him inside me. The towel won’t budge. It frustrates me! Here I am fully naked apart from my garter belt, tights and heels. AND MAX STILL AS THAT DAMN TOWEL AROUND HIM. I tug at it again.

“MAX!” I cry.

He grins at me as his hands let go of me and undoes his towel with the flick of the wrist.

“Do you want more?”

I nod eagerly.

“Do you want this?”

I points to his aroused piece.

“DO you want this inside you?”

“DO you want me to take you right here against this door? Do you want me inside your naked body?”

“Yes!” I whimper.

I want him. God I want him to fuck me till I come apart in his arms forever, till I can’t move.

“Max… please… make love to me… I need you inside of me!”

“Do you now?” grins Max.

“Please!”

Max presses his fingers against my opening again.

“Lizzie… fuck! You’re all wet again. Do u want me now? Do you want my hard arousal thrusting inside you? Fuck I’m so hard.”

I turns my eyes downwards to watch his pulsating piece rest against my lower body. He rubs it against my opening. I become even more wet. Max seems to suddenly grow bigger inside.

OMG he’s so hard. Rock solid and big!

I need him inside me.

I need him to stop teasing me.

He presses his hot arousal against my soft core. He slips between my core slightly. God I’m so wet for him.

“More!” I whisper.

He slides in halfway, but slides out halfway.

He’s teasing me.

Bastard!

I had enough. I grip my lower body around his piece as he slides back in. He tries to slide backwards. I don’t let him; in fact I grab his backside and slam him back inside of me.

His whole hot arousal thrust inside me. We fall against the door with a thud. Our bodies are pressed right together. OMG I feel so full. His piece is pulsating inside me. God I need him to move now.

“Fuck this feels good!” Max murmurs, as he rotates his hips against mines. Grinding himself inside me; if possible even more.

“Max!”

He doesn’t move.

His hot piece is throbbing harder. God I’m going to come… I need him to move. He stays for a few minutes as my warmth envelopes his arousal. I whimper in frustration.

“Max! Fuck! I need you to…”

Max slips his fingers between us. All he has to is touch me and I come. I sob as I contract around him.

Max grins as me wet coats his arousal and his fingers.

“Damn this feels good”

He licks fingers in front of me. I watch him with blushing cheeks.

“SO damn sexy!” He whispers in my ear.

Finally just as I finish my orgasm with me contracting around his arousal, he starts sliding out of me completely…

But not before he slams right back into me.

TBC.... haha sorry lol. more in the next chapter. x

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A/N: hey people >< im so so sory but it doesnt look like im going to be able to update my stories before i go to my aunties. sorry xmas time is busy, with work and other stuff. X

anyway HAPPY XMAS TO EVERYONE ^^.
much love pingx

i hope you people can wait 5 days till i come back.x