Beautiful Stranger (AU, M/L, Adult) 14/12/08 chpt 9 [WIP]

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Beautiful Stranger (AU, M/L, Adult) 14/12/08 chpt 9 [WIP]

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Beautiful Stranger
Disclaimer: We own nothing Roswell, no infringement is intended and Madonna owns the song Beautiful Stranger.
Summary: Liz, Tess and Maria all go to the same university but a completely different from each other, when a beautiful stranger comes into town, they suddenly have one thing in common....
Rating: Adult
Pairing: M/L
Authors: Hunter and Pijeechinadoll

Author's notes:
Hunter will be writing Liz's POV and Pijeechinadoll will be writing Max's POV.

HUNTER: Well, funny how this became a fic. Both of us were playing a game by pming each other ideas of a story and we decided to put it together and share it with you guys. Ping created ideas of Maria, just to let you know lol. I had no idea that 3 instead of 2 women will go mad for Max. lol. This is our first time writing together and defo Ping's first time co writing a story..so please don't bite lol

PING: hey people a quick hello ^^ thank you for hunter for agreeing to write with me. readers i hope you enjoy the ride with us. ^^ LOL it should be bumpy :mrgreen: but a lot of fun. ENJOY.

Hunter's starting us off with chapter 1...
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Re: Beautiful Stranger (AU, M/L, Adult) 10/10/08 chpt 1

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A/N: Lol, ping wanted to post this very early..So I just went with the flow. Hope you guys enjoy! :wink:


Chpt one

Liz's POV

"Oh yes....I'm coming". I panted, moving my hips against his in a heated rhythm. The intense friction just takes over me as I finally find my release.

"Yessss" I hiss, as my walls tighten and my orgasm washes over. I hear him groan and then I release him. Taking myself off his sweaty body and let my naked body fall on the cool sheets on the bed.

"Fuck Liz, that was fucking awesome!". He praises, laying back on the bed with me.

"Hmm." I nod watching him take care of his thing and it's time for me to move on. I rest for a moment before rolling off the bed and wrapped a sheet around me.

"Where are you going baby?". He asked, pulling out another condom from the nightstand.

"To shower."

"But we were only getting started." I hear him chuckle from behind me as I make my way to the shower room.
"I'm finished." I hollered before shutting the door behind me.

I'm already in the shower and I think to myself. What have I achieved by sleeping with the twenty six year old lawyer Jesse Ramirez?

He was rich, by no doubt I was rolling in Gucci and Louis Vuitton because of him. But he wasn't my type. I wasn't even sure what was my type. At the age of 20 years, studying Psychology and Criminology in my second year, I had no idea what I wanted to do with my life.

Yeah I was taking a degree but wasn't everyone who was sane doing that already?

I just wanted money, money, money. I wasn't a call girl or an escort...I was just tempted to be wined and dined by rich men. And of course, lavished with sex and money.

Sex and Money.

The two things I most value. Sex is good for my body. I need it. I love it. How can people not have sex? Without sex, we'd all be frustrated and eventually go bonkers. Mad as hell in layman's terms.

And money. They say diamonds a girl's best friend...but without the money...how could you actually get the diamonds? Money can buy everything. That's how people live. I need my good dose of money. I have to have lots of money.
Otherwise I might as well reside in a shanty town.

The hot sprays of water melt onto my skin like burning wax. I flinch. Who was I kidding.

I was pathetic. I was a loner.

I finished having my shower and grabbed the towel to dry myself. I go back and get changed into my clothes. Jesse watches me as he's still sprawled naked onto the bed.

"Where you going baby?". His paranoia was taking over again. This guy asked to many questions.

"Home." I stated bluntly, throwing on my t shirt and hoodie.

"You're not serious are you? What about round seven?". He gets up, his erection jutting. I shudder.

"Please put that away." I point at his thing. The sight of it isn't appealing, I try hard not to gag.

"Liz...I'm serious baby. I ain't done yet."

I look at his face wide eyed. This guy had about seven orgasms and still he has the stamina who produce more?

"Sorry. Find another. We're done." I say turning back as I fasten the zip and button on my jeans.

Then I find myself being spun around and his lips crash on mine. I struggle in his strong grip and then with a mighty effort, I pull away. "Jesse no!". I warned him and slapped him.

"Oh come on Liz, you know you want me." He wiggles his eye brows, I try hard not to laugh at his pathetic attempt to seduce me.

"You know I don't." I faked a giggle back. God, this Jesse was a pain in the neck.

I just wanted to be rid of him.

"I thought we had something special?". He whispered as he pulls back to see my serious face.

I scoff. "Huh...take a look around Jesse....you're a married man whose in an unhappy and unstable marriage. You have two kids at home and you're here fucking about with a uni student whose five and a half years younger then yourself." I pointed out.

"Baby.." He tried to reach out for me but I step back.

"Don't." I warned him, flashing a serious look at him. "I'm not in love with you Jesse...you were just a good fuck."
"Right." He nods silently and accepts it.

"I can't see a future with you. You're just not...the kind of guy that sweeps me off my feet."

"Right."

"I would never marry you."

"Okay."

"Sorry." I shrugged and then walked past him to grab my bag on the nightstand.

He's silent and doesn't speak. "You'd think I wouldn't find out about your family Jesse." I told him and pressed the button on the phone. The message his frantic worried wife left him played.

After the message had ended, he turns around with tears in his eyes. "I should have told you everything".

"Yeah but what difference would that make? I still wouldn't have loved you." I reminded him. I would not be able to love him.

Because I didn't know what love was.

"I just needed to escape from my marriage. I wasn't satisfied anymore." He tries to explain his point and suddenly it feels like we're in the court, fighting a case. I was the prosecuter and he was the defender.

"So you thought fucking someone else would take your mind off things. See..that's not love. That's desperation." I told him. "Stop running away from your life. You need to man up and face it. Stop wasting your time on me."

"But I...need ...you."

"You don't need me. You need your family. Your wife, your two kids."

Oh god, A couple of years ago, if someone asked me if I'd ever see myself become the other woman..I would have said no. Hell no.

But today I was put in that position. I was the other woman.

I hated myself for letting myself fall in that position.

"I guess you're right." He nodded.

"I guess this is goodbye then." I said, walking towards the door. Doing what I do best, walking out of people's lives.

"What about the things I brought you? You're not going to give them back?".

I froze. He's was going to talk about that. All the jewellery...

"Umm...no actually. I'll keep that." I answer.

What? I had to have a memento of this moment to remind me of my past mistakes in the future right?

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Beautiful Stranger chapter 2

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CHAPTER 2:
Max's POV

I, Max Evans had only just arrived in LA just a few minutes ago, I was knackered; I felt like I had been travelling for donkeys. All I wanted to do was crawl into bed and sleep. First thing I had to do though was to tell my younger sister that I was going to need my apartment back. I looked at my watch and groaned, I guessed I would have to ring her as she should be at uni at this time of the day. or I could just leave a text message or something…

I dumped my two cases in the hallway of the flat as I let myself in. All I could heard moaning and groaning coming from the other room. Swearing and cursing I flung open the living door.

The two occupancies scrambled apart at the door being slammed open.

“MAX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”

Isabel my 19 year old younger sister scrambled of her boyfriend by shoving him off the sofa. She pulled on her shirt to cover her bra covered breasts.

I snarled at my sister getting intimate with her boyfriend.

“You out!” I snapped.

Alex Whitman who had landed on his back pulled his jeans up and scrambled like his life depended on it. Isabel eyes flared with anger.

“What is your problem Max how dare you barge into my apartment and kick my boyfriend out?”

I pulled a sarcastic face like whenever I would talk to my sister.

“Actually are you forgetting that this place is actually mine?”

Isabel pouted.

“AND ARENT YOU MEANT TO BE AT UNI? IN LECTURES OF SOMETHING?”

Isabel sighed.

“You said I could live here whilst I studied at uni?”

“Yeah well if I had my way I would kick you out?”

I was enjoying gloating her, if Isabel was a cartoon at this moment in time. She would have a steam engine coming from both sides of her ears. I smirked as I hit the boil button on the kettle, knowing that if I didn’t give Isabel my full undivided attention on her. SHE WOULD FLIP!

And she did…

“YOU FUCKIN’ DARE AND I’LL TELL MUM!”

“And I’ll tell mum you’re shacking up with Alex!”

“And I’ll tell mum you’re a male slut who chases anything with a bra and skirt!”

“And I’ll tell mum about the time you snuck out to that party!”

“YOU WOULDN’T DARE!”

I smirked knowing I had my sister over a wheel barrow. For a 5 years age difference and being related we should be quite similar, but this wasn’t the case. We were so different. Isabel was loud and brass and sophisticated. I was quiet, moody and broody, mysterious. I was actually a typical alpha male who was tall dark and handsome, whilst my sister was blonde and bubbly. Whilst Isabel had been in a steady relationship since high school with her high school boyfriend resident geek turned cool guitar playing band mate. I enjoyed having to seduce lots of girls and women. As long as they were female and had a pulse, I could do them. Of course they had to be sexual attractive. I had specifications and requirements
a) They couldn’t be sluts
b) They had to look like they weren’t dressed like sluts
c) They had to be pretty
d) They had to be good looking
e) They had to be beautiful
f) They had to be 18 and over
g) I didn’t care if they were married
h) I didn’t care if they were virgins.
i) HELL I didn’t even care if they were naïve at the start. As long as they knew what they were getting into and that this was only a one off. I didn’t care.
j) I never ever did a girl twice…

“Max you said I could stay here?!”

“Well you can’t now! I don’t want to hear you and you lapdog panting and groaning! I really rather I didn’t hear about your sex life, or a matter of fact see it. SO it’s bye bye Miss Evans.”

Isabel was so pissed off.

“WHAT FUCKING CRAWLED UP YOUR ASS? ARE U NOT GETTING ANY? IS THAT WHAT IT IS? HAS MAX EVANS FUCKED EVERY GIRL IN NEW YORK? AND THAT’S THERE’S NO ONE LEFT? IS THAT WHY YOU’RE BACK IN L.A.?”

I smirked once again.

“Isabel just move. I’m sure your boyfriend wouldn’t mind putting you up!”

Isabel wept.

“YOU’RE A BASTARD MAX EVANS I SWEAR IF WE DIDN:T HAVE A DNA TEST I COULD HAVE SWORE YOU WASN’T MY BROTHER!”

She stormed out the room.

I shook my head in denial. I don’t care. Right?

I sit down and switch on the TV to see what was on the sports channel. I channel hopped for a while, when Isabel stormed back into the living room and grabbed the cordless telephone off its cradle.

She had mascara trailing down her face.

I can’t help but roll my eyes as the sight of her scurrying back to her bedroom.

Minutes later rock I hear music blasting through the walls.

POD...Alive

On repeat.

I cursed her. The little prat, she was so trying to wind me up.

This was the one song I played after Erica had dumped me after she had taken my virginity back in high school and started dating Adam Hallam. The little Bitch! Erica not Isabel…

I had to tune the music out by putting the TV up and proceeded to made myself an espresso coffee the door bell rang. I looked round to see if Isabel had heard. The door bell rang again, continuously this time. Obviously she hadn’t.

I stood up with a sigh and threw the door open.

There stood some blonde girl with big pouty lips. She must be Isabel's new friend. Maria Deluca I guess.

Maria looked shocked to see me.

“You can pick your jaw off the floor!”

“WHO ARE YOU?” she snaps at me.

“Isn’t it obvious?” I grinned.

“Ahh the infamous Max Evans who made his little sister cry!”

I grin, she knows who I am.

“As always Max Evans it’s a pleasure to see you not!”

“And who are you?”

She sighed.

“Not that it’s any of your business. But Its Maria Deluca!” she bites.

“AWW ain’t little Maria got no more crush on me!”

“I do not Max Evans. Get over yourself!” snapped Maria, with a blush.

Ha she still wants me. Isabel’s friend, Maria Deluca still wants me.

She squeezed past me and stormed into Isabel’s room.

I wondered if Maria Deluca is still a virgin. Nah she didn’t look like one. I could always tell whether a girl was a virgin or not. Maybe it was one of my intuitive powers of deduction.

“Max…”

I sighed as I turned to see Isabel standing with Maria.

“What?”

“I’m going to be staying with Maria… when you’re ready to… when you’re ready to apologise to me let me know…”

Maria shook her head as she followed Isabel out. But I saw she couldn’t help but take one last glance at me.

I smirked.

Yep she wants me!

I switched the music off coming from Isabel room and turned the TV off.

AHH BLISSFUL QUIET….

I couldn’t wait to hit the town tomorrow night.

For now I was content and satisfied in sitting in his living room just letting my thoughts drift to his next conquest.

Maybe a red head?

Nah.

Or maybe an ebony hair colour?

Nah.

Hmmm a blonde…

Blonde blue eyes and big bust.

I, Max Evans smiled to myself as I fell asleep with a hard on.







TBC? ^^ LOL
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Re: Beautiful Stranger (AU, M/L, Adult) 10/15/08 chpt 3 p. 3

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We hope everyone of you and others enjoy our little story lol!

Chpt 3

Liz's POV

"This party is so boring." A slut behind me whinges. "Where are the hot guys?"

I roll my eyes as I sip on Pepsi sitting with my two new friends, Felicity Harbor and Serena James. Felicity was tall, just two inches taller then myself and she had this awesome deep brownish red hair that was long like mine, the shade of it was beautiful..sometimes I wish I could dye my dark brown hair like that...but that would be copying wouldn't it and copying others wasn't my style. She was slender, thin and but her face was more mango shaped, her eyes were small and wide unlike my chestnut eyes, and she always wore mascara. Her nose was thin and long with a square kind of end.
She was pretty in weird way.

And then Serena James. She was average and shorter then me by one inch. She had a bob cut and her hair was black. She had a round face like mine and her lips were really thin, thinner then mine. She also always had mascara on whenever I saw her. Was I the only one without mascara?

I didn't know how to use the thing without smudging it all over my face. I always had shaky hands.

Felicity runs her hands through her smooth long hair. Something she does every five to ten minutes, making sure there wasn't a single knot. "I need a haircut." She tells us.

I have to agree. My hair was also getting too long.

We were still getting to know each other. I had found out that Felicity was in a relationship with some one called Kyle. And Serena was single like me. We didn't have a boyfriend on our hands so we could relate more. I did wish sometimes I was taken though, as Felicity flashes pictures of her with her boyfriend somewhere exotic in Panama city, I do get the green eyed monster paying me a visit.

"You're so lucky." Felicity tells Serena. "You don't need to worry about a haircut."

Serena gives a small chuckle. "Your hair is absolutely fine Felicity."

She puts down her drink. "I need the girl's room." She says and excuses herself.

Felicity takes her phone out and starts texting. "It's my boyfriend. He wants’ to meet up."

"You mean he's coming here?". I asked, sitting up.

"Yeah." She nods.

"Mind if I join you?". Some girl asks, the girl I met on the first day of uni, in the fresher’s week.

I shrug. "Course not. Take a seat."

And so she sits down in our circle.

Maria, I remember her name. The loudly bustly teenage Christina Aguilera, you couldn't forget those huge red lips she flashed around. We only talked on the first day.

It was the second week into uni now.

"So what's up? how you finding this whole change of scene?". Maria asks.

"Getting used to it." I nodded. "You?".

"Ah, same as." Maria answered. "The amount of work we have to do is terrifying." She tells us.

"Yeah, tell me about it." Felicity muttered.

"Where's your friend?". I curiously asked her, did Maria come here alone?

"Oh she had something come up." Maria shrugged. "But I couldn't miss the opportunity to go to this event. I heard One Republic was going to make an appearance tonight."

"Oh yeah, the band. Gotta love them." I smiled, sipping on the last bit of my pepsi and putting the empty glass down on the table.

The music plays loudly and the neon lights are flashing. I'm always a little uncomfortable around this scene. The beats are beating against my ribcage and I have to raise my voice in order to get heard.
It's also getting more hotter in here.

Serena's back and I stand up to allow her to pass so she could get to her seat. It was getting more and more crowded.
"He's already here." Felicity says, looking. "My boyfriend is here with his boss and a couple of guys he works with."

"Wow. That's good because I need another drink." I said.

"Come on then, let's go." Felicity said getting up.

"Serena you coming?". I asked, glancing at her. She looked aweful now.

"Ah..I'll stay here you guys." She said, holding her stomach like she was about to heave.

I was about to say something but Felicity had already moved towards the bar. I quickly followed her. Once we were at the bar, she fell into some guy's arms.

"Hey baby!".

"Mwah." Felicity kissed her boyfriend's lips. "Missed you." She pouted.

"Missed you even more." He said in return and kissed her again.

Her boyfriend was kind of short, an inch taller then her but the guys around him were way taller. He was broad and he had a wide face. He had light brownish hair. Seemed like an okay dude.

"Hey guys, this is my girlfriend Felicity." He announced to the group of men who began to cheer.

"You bagged yourself a hot chick didn't you then!". One of them cheered, Felicity blushed and her boyfriend wrapped an arm around her.

"Hi guys." She smiled and then turned back to pull me in the conversation. "This is my friend Liz." She introduces.

"Hi Liz." Her boyfriend was the first one to greet me, he greets me with a handshake. The rest of the guys take turns to greet me.

"Hey I'm Alex." The very tall lanky one says, shaking my hand. As soon as they meet me, they turn serious.

And there's one more of them. He's different. Tall, dark haired and broody. Broody. He doesn't smile at first and he takes his time. He stands up to rid of that hunch and takes a moment to do a turn to face me and then stares into my eyes.
Who is this guy?

The song beautiful stranger by Madonna begin to play at this moment. How ironic I thought.

"Hey." He says. "How you doing?".

"Okay." I gave him a polite smile.

Was I looking at his lips? Oh my god.

"Great."

"You?".

"Fine".

"Okay." Kyle intervenes. "I'm gunna take my girl on the dance floor."

Before I could protest, he takes her away and I am left with a group of strange men at the bar. Oh god. And the strangest of them all was that dark haired one who started to drink again.

"Right. We're gunna go and play at the arcades now." Alex said and the rest followed leaving the broody dark haired man behind.

"See ya." I muttered.

I check this guy out. By no means he's good looking, could be a potential boyfriend...

Or a good fuck.

I bite my lip at that thought. How would he be in bed?

I could just imagine a six pac under those layers..

"Wow." I say, checking him out. "Like a diamond in the rough."

He stops drinking and then looks at me, he smiles. "Hey, haven't we just met?". He asks, trying to look deeper into my eyes.

"No, but we just did now." I say joining him at the bar. "Aren't you gunna tab me?".

He chuckles and I love it when his lips curl up, showing his pearly whites which I found kind of cute.

"Like how you waltzed in here and started to flirt with me. I like that." He admitted and looked at me. I looked into his dark amber eyes. They were so captivating.

I stared at him.

"Okay...I'll tab you...what would you like to drink?". He asks politely, giving me a small smile that made my insides turn to mush. Who is this man?

Oh my god, this man had put a spell on me.

"Anything you think would suit me." I wink.

"Right." He nods his head and turns to the bartender. "Could you put a Malibu with sea breeze on my tab?" He asks the bartender.

The bartender nods and goes to get the drink. I lean closer towards Max. "Hmmm not bad."

He looks at me. "You strike me as this exotic refreshing girl whose always looking for a new adventure." He tells me. "I can see it in your eyes."

"How do you know me so well?". I play along.

I like flirting with this man and for some strange reason, I want to get to know him better.

"Well..that's for me to know and you to find out." He flirts back.

"I wonder where you came from." I told him with honesty. I was curious to know where he came from.

He was a smooth talker and I knew he was cocky. I wondered if he saw me as another piece of meat. The thought did offend me though.

"You must have seen me before." He frowns.

His ego is kind of rising, it's one thing to sleep around but another to flash your pride around.

"No." I shake my head. "I honestly don't know you."

The bartender returns with my drink and places it next to me before leaving. I look back at Max. I haven't seen him before.
He pauses for a moment and looks at me, trying to convince himself that I was telling him the truth. He seems to read my expression and then nods.

"Max Evans." He tells me.

"Liz Parker." I smile.

What a strange first meeting I thought to myself as I smiled back.

I'll always remember this.
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Beautiful Stranger chapter 4

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CHAPTER 4:
Max's POV

I wake up and roll over when I feel someone kick me.

Seriously I hate that. I’m so tempted to push her out the bed. I looked over to her sleeping, with her face turned away from me. Her dark chocolate hair covers her neck, damn had she been hot stuff.

Okay she wasn’t my blue eyes and big bust blonde. So what? Who cares? I got my woman last night. I remember her flirting with me and me buying her a drink. We nearly got it on in the taxi cause I was so hot for her.

Fuck! As she kicks me again.

I really can’t stand it.

She moans in her sleep and rail rolls into me. She knocks the breath literally out of me. She grinds herself into me. Hot as she was, seriously didn’t I mention I never ever do a girl twice? Seriously im tempted to push her.

“Hmmm Max!” she moans.

I cringe at her whiney voice. God enough already.

I have to do some times drastic…

I cup her face.

“Hmmm… Charlotte you’re HOT!” I smirk.

She opens her eyes with a blaze of anger that trails across her face as she gets up; she drags the duvet from me and slaps me hard across the face.

“It Sherry! How dare you forget my name? How many girls have you fucked?” She screeched.

I smirked even more.

“Wouldn’t you like to know? And actually it’s none of you business. In fact if you must know I tried to pick up a few girls before I hit on you. YOU aren’t the first and you certainly aren’t going to be my last. Anyway didn’t I tell you last night this was a one time thing? I gave you a choice last night. I set the rules. You agreed to them.”

“What the hell? I thought you were joking!” she snapped at me.

I grinned.

“Hey as if I would tie myself down to one woman; especially you. You’ve got to be joking!”

I know I shouldn’t have laughed, but I could help myself.

I let out my laugh to the annoyance of Charlotte or Sherry what’s her name.

I know. I know you’re thinking I’ve got no decency and sense. Or morals! What can I say I’m a typical man? I have sex on my mind 24/7 every second, every minute, every hour of the day. Look at least I’m being honest. I never lie or cheat… Well actually I do kinda when I sleep with a married woman. But hey they know the rules!

“OUCH FUCK OFF BITCH!” I shout.

If I knew she would be a psycho I would have avoided her.

There are a number of women that I tend to avoid in personality…
01-clingy
02-possessive
03-who want me for for my money
04-psychotic
05-talks too much about themselves
06-dumb
07-giggles too much
08-ignorant of my rules
09-eager
10-Prima Donnas

Seriously I could go on…

I mean women always bitch about how men are useless and that we don’t have any redeeming quality but look at my list.

Oh and you’re probably wondering what happened to Liz Parker.

Well there was something about her I didn’t like. I mean I know she would have probably been good in bed and we flirted and stuff. But I don’t know I got a vibe like she was a bit desperate. As I say I don’t do eager girls. She also dressed like she needed a lot of money. I mean she was covered head to toe in fashion labels and BLING BLING (that’s jewellery to you people who don’t know what I’m talking about!). She had a $2,500 handbag, well it wasn’t even a handbag it was more like a purse. And I tried to ask her about it but she was very vague about where she got it all from. This got me curious because I mean she’s a student after all…

But back to my side of the story, the little bitch just threw my black glass china vase above my head. Luckily she had a crap aim. Shame I can’t send her the bill.

I heard the door slam.

I sigh a little, part of me is sick of this life. But part of me knows I would miss the excitement.

Hmmm I’m not one to dwell. Right shower first and then a jog. I need some energy!

***

I’m physically knackered as I slow down to the coffee shop around the corner from my apartment; but at the same time I’m buzzing with a lot of emotionally and mental energy.

Man I need a drink.

I stroll in there’s only two or three people sitting inside. I see a blonde girl wiping down the table, she not overly sexy but she definitely hot.

I walk up behind her and whisper.

“Boo!”

She jumps out of her skin.

“I’m Max Evans and your name is?”

She frowns at me and walks behind the corner.

“Your name?” I repeat.

“I don’t know you why should I tell you my name. Are you going to order?” she asked me?”

“Well I like to know the name of the person selling me my coffee every morning!”

“What are you order?” She sighs.

“Black coffee no sugar!”

She pulled a face as she makes me one.

Yes she’s pretty and she quite snappy but something tells me from the way she dresses. She’s not overly confidence. Do I want to sleep with her? We’ll have to see. If anything does she even know what sex is? Im tempted to ask her but I think she might throw her drink at me…

She puts the drink down in front of me and waits for me to pay for it.

“Croissant as well!”

She sighed but speaks up.

“Please wouldn’t go amiss!” as she shoves the croissant in front of me.

I smirk at her.

“Tell me your name and I’ll give you my manners. In fact I could give you a lot more!”

I know I know I’m just asking for trouble.

She explodes and the same time she blushes, she grabs my HOT drink and throws it at me.

Luckily I had my hoodie on.

“FUCK! What was that for?”

Everyone is looking now, her manager who I met yesterday comes running out. Paolo Richardson starts apologising profoundly for me.

“I shall sack Tess immediately.”

I smirk as I grab the croissant.

“It’s okay Paolo, it was an accident. Let Tess keep her job. Put the croissant on my tab and I shall see you tomorrow.”

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Re: Beautiful Stranger (AU, M/L, Adult) 18/24/08 chpt 5

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Chpt 5

Liz's POV

I wish I could say last night was the bomb.

The party was in full swing, I was lavished with drinks and I met the most strangest man on earth well according to me. His name was Max or Matt or something. Couldn't remember his last name. I was more of a visual learner.

I could remember his face clearly. Those amber eyes would not leave my mind.

He was stunning, good looking and girls would go crazy over him but there was something about him, something a bit standoffish. The way his body language changed whenever he was around girls and around guys. He was really cocky when it came to flirting with girls. Thought he could flirt with five of us in a row.

When I wasn't having it, he brought me a whole bottle of bailey's just to stay and listen to his chat up lines.

And to top it off, my favourite band didn't arrive either. Their gig was to be postponed so I ended up standing next to an arrogant Matt all night instead of dancing away on to One Republic. And about the bailey's he brought me along with god knows how many other bottles of acoholic beverages that was stored underneath my bed. I remember Maria telling me that this Matt or Max was loaded.

Loaded.

I checked my watch. I only had one seminar today at one and I had to meet up with Serena and Felicity at twelve. I throw on a top and pull a hoodie over it before sliding into my levis.

Gotta love that money.

I pull on my socks and my lacoste sneakers. I run to my closet, opened it and take out a wad of cash to pay my mother aka my landlord. I did have a job but it didn't pay as much as it paid when I got together with rich guys.

Beauty was a virtue.

No one ever knew where the money came from apart from my self and my exes. I shut the closet and grab my bag before making my way downstairs. "Here mom." I said, slapping down the cash.

She's always surpised as usual. Wondering where on earth her daughter manages to get her money from. She watched me with her eagle eyes as she sips on her cup of tea.

"What?". I asked her. "Is it my hair?".

I brushed it a couple of times before having it put up in a high ponytail.

"Nothing." She answers. "I just wonder where you get all this money from. It's incredible." She bluntly stated.

I press my lips together almost tasting the lime on my lip balm. "Mom, I told you. They pay me good."

I was a bookseller at some posh bookstore. It did kind of benifit me because I got discounts on books I needed to study for my degree. Yes, I might have been rolling around in money twice my pay but the book store was posh so I could get away with making up that lie.

Plus, how could you tell your mother that her daughter was a gold digger? I preffered that term to a whore. And plus I was addicted to sex. Thank the lord for material goods and sensual pleasures.

"I gotta go now. So I'll see you later." I didn't know when I was coming home. I might meet another eager candidate or something....

"Aren't you going to have breakfast?". She asks the same question.

I cringe. I hated breakfast. "I'll just grab a muffin from B&B." I answered, rushing towards the door. "Love ya mom."

I leave the house as soon as possible. It's eleven. An hour. I could sit in the library and do some work for an hour. I decide to walk to uni today instead of taking the car. Anyway I'm crossing the road and suddenly a car honks at me as I cross the road.

It was a red light as well.

"You stupid idiot!". I turned to shout at the driver who got out of the car to confront me. "Can't you see it's a red light?".
I gasp as I recognise him. The Matt guy from last night. His gorgoues amber eyes...

"You again?!". He laughs. "I'm sorry. I was busy with something". He mutteres.

"You almost had me killed." I pointed out. Even though he was hot as hell, I would not forgive him for dangerous driving.

Life was dangerous as it was.

"I'm sorry." He throws his hands up in defeat.

I sigh, putting my hands on my hips.

"Can I give you a ride?". He asked me softly.

I looked at him and then at the silver lamborghini he was driving. That would make a fine entrance to uni. Hmm. "Okay." I shrugged.

"Okay?". He repeated, surprised.

"Yeah. You can give me a ride." I tell him, walking to the passenger side of his car and thankfully it wasn't taken. He smiles.

"Alright then. Come on in."

Okay so were's sitting in his car listening to Akon's Dangerous. He had a dice and a playboy ring on his rearview mirror. Oh my god, this guy was that kind of player. And his car smelt of aftershave.

He was such a bachelor. It was kind of hot.

He was busy humming away the tune to the song so I had to raise my voice a little to get his attention. "So Matt, what's your profession. We never got down to that area."

I blush realising my words could also mean another thing.

"It's Max." He smiles. "I'm a model Liz." He answered, handling the steering wheel, turning it in a swift smooth move. God, his fingers seem like they have magic in them. I wondered what else they could do.

The heat pools between my legs and I press my legs together. Now was not the time to get turned on in cocky guy's car.
"A model?". I stammered. I did remember him being worried that I didn't know who he was.

"Hmm, I model for a number of magazines. I even modelled for Calvin Klien's Escape." He tells me. "You know the frangrance for men."

"Oh that was you?". I sqeaked. Remember I had stumbled across a picture of some hot dude bending close to the wall with a gorgoues upper body and his face was all seduction.

"Yeah. That's me."

"Oh my god." I say, fanning myself with my folder.

"What? you're hot?". He asked in concern and then presses a button. I feel the cool breeze of air hit my knees. I needed the air conditioner right now.

"Ur thanks." I smile.

"Don't worry." He smiles a cocky smile. "It happens." He said, making a turn on the intersection.

"What happens?". I asked, wanting to know what was he smiling about. He puts the volume of the music down.

"The heat. First you feel a friction down south which picks up into continous earthquake like vibrations which then bring out the heat like the core of the earth breaking out onto the surface. And before you know it, voila, you're in intense heat."

I frown at him and then I get his meaning. "Urgh...it's that what you guys think about." I have to admit, his wording was impressive but he was still a cocky bastard.

"It's what I know." He corrects me with a cocky smirk.

I shake my head in disgust wondering how many sluts sat in this very same spot, drooling out of their.... "Oh you can stop. We're here." I tell him, catching a glimpse of the library.

And I realise this dude took the long way. So basically wasted fifteen minutes extra talking to him. I wait till he opens the door after stopping near the sidewalk. The door talks a long time to open, sliding slowing up.

"Thanks for the ride. Max." I say before removing myself from his car.

"Liz wait." He stops me as he bends over to look at me. "Here's my card. You ever need anything, call me." He said. I take the card.

"Thanks." I said, trying to hurry.

"No problem." He smiles and then leans back. Closes the door and drives off.

I look at the seven digits in my hands. Did he just give me his number?

Oh this could be fun I thought...

Song used: Dangerous by Kardinal Offishal ft Akon.

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Beautiful Stranger chapter 6

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CHAPTER 6
Max's POV

“What is this? A fucking ambush?! The Spanish inquisition?!”

Yeah you’re probably wondering what’s going on. There are my parents, Isabel, my cousin Michael and Maria (Isabel’s friend. WTF is she doing here?), anyway here they are sitting there in my living room like a pack of wolves. Isabel looks likes she’s been crying wolf.

“Watch your language!” replies my father.

“If I want to go potty mouth I can!” I retort.

“Max sit down!” said my mother.

I refused to look at my mother and stare at my sister. Well not stare, more like evil staring. Ha-ha she looks scared. Yep she should be.

“MAX SIT DOWN AND STOP EVIL STARING YOUR SISTER!” snapped my mother.

I frown as I plonk myself down, im thoroughly annoyed.

“I’ve been told that you’ve been bullying your sister and kicked your sister out of the apartment!” said my mother. “You can not treat people like that!”

“You little grass!” I snap at Isabel.

“Mother do you know that your daughter has been shacking up with her boyfriend whilst living here!”

My father sighed as my mother speaks. “I know about Alex. I knew ages ago and your sister was honest and told us about the time she sneaked out. Yes I’m not happy, but at least she was honest. Now Max I want you to stop blackmailing your sister and treat her with a little respect!”

“Or what?” I bark, they can’t touch me.

“We want you to treat women with respect!” replied my father.

I shrug my shoulders in annoyance and indifference.

“Max! You know you have only one credit card and only one bank account. Well we’ve put a freeze on them!”

I blow.

“WHAT THE FUCK DO YOU THINK YOUR DOING PUTTING A FREEZE ON MY BANK ACCOUNT? IT’S MY MONEY! MY HARD EARNED CASH! NOT YOURS!” I snap at them.

“Until you learn a little respect and restrain…” whispered my mother.

“Max you wasn’t like this when you were younger. What happened to you? It’s like we can’t see you any more.”

“Mom… please!” I haven’t called my mother mom in donkeys, but I'm not to turn down a little begging. What can I say when the times calls for it, this is it. A little bit of manipulation as well wouldn’t go amiss.

“You will have $200 dollars to live on and that is it and you cousin will be moving in to share the rent and bills!”

“And maybe you’ll learn some respect from Michael who is always so nice and pleasing to everyone!”

“What no mom?!” I cringe in annoyance. There is my art dweeb of a cousin, who has no sense of dress sense what’s so ever. I don’t wanna share my apartment with him, I rather hang myself. Okay a little extreme. I would rather share with Isabel and that’s saying something. FUCK!

They get up and leave. My parents leave, I knew then I couldn’t argue with them. Once they decided on something that was final.

FUCK what the hell am I to do with $200 a week, it’s not enough to live on let alone bar crawl. FUCK! FUCK! FUCK! Yep I’m fucking pissed off!

I turned to see who’s remaining on the couch that could be my target practice.

“YOU! What the fuck are you doing here?”

Maria scowls.

“Actually I was here with your sister for moral support!”

“FUCKING GET OUT!”

“No!”

“IT’S STILL MY FUCKING APARTMENT! SO SCRAM!” I snap.

“Max… I wanted to pick up the rest of my things… please… I’m sorry…” whispered Isabel.

For the first time I look at her. Really look at her. She hasn’t got any make up on, her eyes are all swollen, her cheeks are red and her hair is scraggly put up. She looks devoid of emotion. She doesn’t look like the sophisticated little sister I know. Her aura looks sad. I gulp.

“YEAH GET YOUR BLOODY STUFF AND THEN TAKE YOUR BLONDE BUSYBODY FRIEND WITH YOU!”

I stormed to my bedroom and slam the door and flop on my bed. How the fuck did my life come to this?



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Re: Beautiful Stranger (AU, M/L, Adult) 21/11/08 chpt 7

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Chpt 7


LIZ'S POV


I stare aimlessly at the projected screen as my boring lecturer fills us in about how environmental factors could evoke our personalities in our adult life, something I had already covered before.

I scribble names on my notebook, thinking of my "dream guy". Oddly, I ended up writing Max's name all over in the margin of my lined notepad.

"Looks like someone has a little crush." Maria teased looking over at my drawn lovehearts around Max's name, with the ballpoint pen in my hand, it was evident enough I had written his name while zoning out.

Turned out, we also had some same classes together and sort of became lecture buddies. "I'm bored." I yawned and then turned to the blonde who was scribbling away next to me. "How can you pick up everything he says and write so fast?". I asked in wonder.

"I guess I'm just lucky." She shrugged and wrote the same time. It amazed me how she possessed the ability to write and speak at the same time and not have her attention diverted.

"Who are you?".

"Tess Harding." She answered, not making eye contact because her eyes were focused on the piece of paper which she had already filled up with words written in black ink.

Maria snorts and mutters to herself, while the sound of Tess writing away on her paper mingles in tune with the voice of the lecturer who probably had no idea that more then half the class were not paying attention whatsoever.

When the class had ended, I invite Tess over with me and Maria to chill out at starbucks. Very reluctantly she joined us and before we knew it, the three of us were chatting away like old school pals.

"So Tess, you've never been intimate with a guy?". Maria teased, picking up a cup of frappicino and taking a sip.

The blush on Tess' face was the exact shade of the inside of a guava. She was definetly a prude. "Umm, well I have been on dates."

"But never had excessive sex like the rest of us naughty girls." I laughed and so did Maria.

Tess laughs a little, she's very uneasy and I decide to make the laughter just a simple chuckle. "Tess, don't worry. When you meet the guy, it'll happen naturally." I assure her.

I don't know if already had feelings for Max but damn he was one hot bastard of a hunk and to ride him to glory was a fantasy of mine that needed to become reality. I could just dream of Max being a stallion in bed..

"Liz, you look so dreamy. What you thinking of?". Maria asks. "Perhaps you're thinking of a certain handsome devil." She purred.

"Ah maybe." I said.

"You girls." Tess blushed, shaking her head. "I'm kinda like the girl who is bashful. I.." She shakes her head and tries her best to find the words to say next.

"Aw Tess. Don't be shy. We're all girls." Maria coos the little gerbil tentaively with a hint of slyness and sarcasm. I had a feeling she didn't like Tess that much and was kind of envious of her nature. Maria seemed like the kind of girl who needed a good gossip to use as a defence mechanism, I'm not an avid reader of people's personalities, but her aura had this toxic flow.

Very addictive but very harmful.

I knew some guys I had been with might have thought the same about me, that I was this seductive dangerous woman who was bad for their health. But I was simply a girl who had a secret and needs to be satisfied.

I wasn't the kind of girl to spend a lot of time thinking of what and who I was, unlike Tess who seemed to be exactly that type of girl who reflected on every action she made and was wary of her surroundings.

I suppose I could learn a thing or two from both of them.

"I've had sex." Tess blurted out and I almost choke on my hot chocolate.

"Ahem."

"But..it's not how they make it look in the movies." Tess admitted. "I guess, I'm a little scared to go back into that world again."

"Babe, the first time's always gotta hurt. Ask Liz." Maria soothed the frightened little gerbil.

I don't know why but Tess strikes me as some sort of gerbil. She has that face which is a like a mink, pointy nose on a small and rounded face and her eyes are beady.

"Liz how was your first time." Tess innocently asked me.

I wished she hadn't because now the thoughts of my first boyfriend floods my mind. "It's something I'd rather not think about." I wiped my mouth with the napkin. "But first times' are always awkward. But don't worry, once you get the hang of it, you'll learn the sensual enjoyment of female pleasures." I took out my lip gloss and mirror to apply my second coating of lipgloss.

"He was a bitch wasn't he?". Maria asked all of a sudden, causing me to freeze for a moment.

"Yeah, he was." I half whispered before getting back to my lipgloss.

Looked like I could use my phone and Max's phone number later on.

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By the time I'm home, I dump my book bag, run me a hot bath with lots of bubbles and close my bedroom door before going to my closet. I open the doors and search for a pair of jeans and a pink baby tee.

I grab some towels and head towards the bathroom and rip my clothes and step into the bathtub, sinking into the mass of bubbles and greeted by lovely hot hot water.

"Aahh." I turn the tap off and lay propped up in the bath, letting the heated water run over my smooth flat stomach.
My phone is sitting on the clothes rack and I take it.

I smile as I open up the contact book and scroll down to Max's name. I find his name and dial. This should be naughty I thought. It was just like in the movies, the only thing missing was rose petals floating with the bubbles and a nice glass of champange. Maybe I'd have my dream hot tub fantasy with him, that would be better.

I put the next to my ear and he answers.

I swear, everytime he speaks to me in that velvet voice of his, It feels like a mind blowing orgasm and he hadn't even touched me yet.

"Hello?".

"Max, it's me..Liz." I purr into the phone. Somehow I have the decency to work hard in seducing him.

"Hey Liz." I can practically envision his smile when he knows who he's talking to. "How are you?".

"I'm good.." I rub my right foot up my left leg and sigh.

"That's good Liz, listen I wanted to meet you." He said quickly. "It's important. Do you think you can be ready by eight? I'll pick you up."

"Why what's happening?". I curiously ask, I barely had started my seduction and he's already inviting me to his place.

"We're going out someplace." He answers.

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Beautiful Stranger chapter 8

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CHAPTER 8: PING
Max's POV

I throw the phone back onto the bed and sigh. What the fuck am I doing? Something tells me this is going to blow up in my face. I stand up and run my fingers through my hair and straighten up my shirt.

I grab my black smart jacket and sling it over my shoulder as I leave my bedroom.

“Hi mate!”

I turn and scowl at Michael.

“My name is Max so fucking use it and I’m not your bloody mate! Get this I’m not your friend and I don’t like you!”

Michael eyes widen in shock as he chokes on his Snapple drink.

I slam the door behind me and storm towards the lift in a pissed off mood. Fuck maybe I just need to get laid.

I call for the lifts, when the elevators open to reveal Maria.

I shake my head in disgust.

“What do you want?”

“I came to see you.”

“Well I don’t want to speak to you!” I snap at her.

Maria flicks her hair back as the lift closes. There’s something different about her… suddenly the lift stops.

“Bitch what are you doing? If you’re here to talk about my sister you can get lost!”

The stupid cow has just pressed the emergency stop button.

“I’m not here to talk about Isabel. I’m not even here to talk. I want you Max and I know you want me. I know you want me badly. I saw the way you were looking at me.”

She drops her jacket and pulled off her top to reveal her naked upper body to me to my amusement.

She about to drop her skirt…

“You can stop now!” I howl with laughter as I restart the lift. “I’m not at least one bit interested. I was 24hrs ago. But I was so over you then… and now you’re not even worth the second glance!”

“What?” cried Maria. “I’m giving myself to you.”

“Yeah on a platter! Not interested love! I like a challenge and you… you aren’t even worth a morsel.”

Maria backhands me across the face as I laugh.

“Put you clothes back on, you’re degrading yourself.”

***

I’m driving toward Liz with a frustration, what the hell am I doing? I’m not even sure if I like this woman but something inside me is pulling me towards her.

FUCK MAYBE I DO JUST NEED TO GET LAID.

I twist as pulled up by the curb. Ahh now there is a challenge.

I grin with amusement. “Well hello Miss Harding you look ravishing as usual.”

Of course that’s me being funny. I can’t help myself. You should see what she is wearing. Timberland boots, a gangly green skirt, a high neck grey jumper.

Tess turns and looks at me with a flushed face of annoyance.

“I said hello!” I repeat.

She doesn’t reply.

“Aren’t you hot in that top?”

“What do you want and how do you know my name?” she snapped.

I grin at her.

“Wouldn’t you like to know? Do you need a lift?” I ask.

She shakes her head and blushes.

“I’m not allowed to talk to strangers!”

I climb out the car.

“The name’s Max Evans. See I’m not a stranger anymore.”

She tries to step past me, but I block her move. I give her my card and pull her against my body. She shrieks quietly.

“I’ve got to go.”

I brush my hand against her neck.

“What if I don’t want you to go?”

“You… you… just want me for sex… I don’t… don’t want that!” squealed Tess. “Please just let me get by.”

“Come meet me at my place tonight. 189 Avenue Crescent, apartment no 27. I’ll show you want you’re missing!”

I let her past.

“I… I won’t come!” she whispers.

Oh she will as I walk away grinning, letting her think she has the last word. Now! Now that that’s sorted on to Miss Elizabeth Parker, I’m going to show her a ride. Heck she won’t even want to leave her apartment let alone her room. No need to spent money. I drive off as I honk my horn at Tess Harding. OH WHAT A NIGHT… IT’S GOING TO BE! I laugh and grin at my own amusement.

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Finally I arrived at Liz’s apartment and ring the doorbell… I’m kept waiting. And waiting and waiting. I curse in anger. Did I not tell her that I was coming round?

I ring the bell again in annoyance.

Suddenly the door is thrown open. Liz looks agitated to say the least. She has a black dress on, a few rollers left in her hair. One strappy shoe on, another in her hand; whilst her other hand was trying to pull a roller out. My anger suddenly depleted, she looked so cute I couldn’t help.

“Hi!” I grin at her as I lean against her doorway. “I take it your not ready yet.”

Liz sighed.

“I’m sorry do you want to come in.”

I grin and enter her living room, Liz is about to walk away when I pull her back towards me. I close the door behind us and kneel down in front of her.

“What are you doing?”

I grin at her and pull of her shoe, caressing her foot as I go. I work my way up her leg; running my cold fingers over her skin. She shivers under my touch. She gasps as I slip my hand between her thighs. She tries to move away I grip her legs.

“Shhh!” I whisper as I stand up I press a kiss to her neck.

“Max…”

I use one hand and pull the remaining rollers out of her hair as my other hand inch closer to her hot core.

She whimpers in my arms as I slip a finger under her lacey underwear as my other hand shakes loose her hair.

“Max… more please.”

She pushes herself against my fingers, my fingers slip between her hot lower lips. Oh my god she so wet. I rub my fingers in and out, making her even more wet. Her wetness coats my fingers and her underwear. She’s withering under my touch; her eyes are closed in desire.

“More…” I whisper.

“Yes!” she cries.

My fingers move fast as her lower lips contract around my fingers.

“More!” cried Liz.

I stop and pulled my finger away as my lips brush her ear. Liz looks up in shock.

“Wah… what are you doing?”

“I’m here for a proposition!”

Liz looks at me in confusion.

I myself look back at her with a grin.

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Re: Beautiful Stranger (AU, M/L, Adult) 14/12/08 chpt 9

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Chpt 9

Liz's POV

I was the sort of woman who knew when to say no. I had that much respect and dignity for myself that I wouldn't allow myself to be someone's plaything when it comes to sex.

I wasn't questioning my actions when Max Evans had literally made me fall apart without the coitus involved. I didn't want him to stop. I wanted him to continue, I won't deny that.

It felt good that someone could make me feel so much doing barely anything.

He had magic in his fingers and I wanted more. I was shocked when he was touching me. Here in my bedroom, where anything could be possible between the two of us.

I hid my disappointment very well when he let go. I was more curious to know what his intentions were.

"Proposition?". I raise an eyebrow.

Max Evans needing to strike a deal with me was amusing. Why? Because I never expected a well paid model to ever need any help from a simple university student like me. I had heard some things about him. How he considered himself to be a walking god to women.

He tries to snake another hand up my dress again and I push his hand away. My dress falls around my thighs. "I'm not interested." I push him away. I zip up my dress after he tries to unzip it.

"Aww come on Liz." He pouts and pulls the puppy dog eyes. "You know you want to." He winked.

"Urgh." I rolled my eyes, snatching my shoe out of his hands. "Not another cheesy chat up line."

"Not even if I had the latest brands of designer wear to offer you?". He get's more serious, I put my shoes on and head toward the bathroom and shut the door.

He lingers outside the bathroom door. "I'll make it worthwhile for you Liz."

I fix my makeup, hair and get myself cleaned up. "Really?" I feign interest.

"I promise." He says and by the tone of his voice I could sense he wasn't playing around with me this time. "Sorry Liz."

I wash my hands and dry them before opening the door.

"Can you forgive me?". He asks hopefully.

I sigh. "If you take me out to dinner." I said, hoping I was making the right choice in asking him. "To your place." I added, watching the smile fade away.

There was no way he was going to snare me with a paid platter in some swanky restaurant. This guy would have to work for my respect. And he would have to do it the hard way.

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When we reached his 'bachelor pad' as he liked to call it, he flicked on the lights and the darkness was gone with a click to reveal beautiful furniture. Everything was spotless and well beautiful.

"Wow. Your maid goes a great job." I looked around, peeling off my coat. Max immediately takes my coat for me and hangs it on the coat hanger next to the door.

I stare at the crystal chandelier. "So pretty." I smile. The co -ordination of his furniture was flattering. It seemed like everything was positioned in the right place.

"Why don't you take a seat Liz?". Max asked, ushering me to the sofa and handed me the remote after switching the TV on.

"I might have a look around." I said, putting the remote down. "I hope you don't mind." I traced his lips with my index finger.

"Of course not." He smiled. I let go of his lip.

"Well, better start get cooking then." I teased. "I'm famished."

He hurries into the kitchen to get started. He's completely changed from the jerk Max back in my bedroom to a shy Max. I wondered if I had a part to play in his sudden change. I look around his lounge and decide to explore his den.

I start with the photoframe which sits near the crystal lamp. I notice a lot of crystal around in Max's place which tells me he doesn't usually bring women home.

I pick the photo up and it's a picture of a beautiful blonde haired woman in her early forties with a man in a suit who looked like he was in his middle forties. I was guessing they were Max's parents. I was surprised. For a bachelor having a picture of his parents at his place.

Maybe Max wasn't so bad after all...

I couldn't help but think about the other side to him. The side that not many people have seen.

I almost drop the photo when I hear a loud bang coming from the kitchen and Max
cursing.

"Shit." I mutter, slowly putting the photo down and rushing towards the kitchen, I try my best not to laugh as I see Max covered in flour. His whole face in white flour. He looks so funny that I can't help but giggle.

"What happened Max?".

"The stupid flour fell on me." He snapped. Waving his hands in the air causing puffs of flour.

"What were you trying to make Max?". I asked. "Cake?, What ever happened to the starters and main course?". I pondered innocently.

"I don't know how to cook." He muttered.

"Huh?". I decided to tease him.

"I don't know how to cook." He said a little louder. It was so cute seeing an angry Max.

"Oh really?" I mused. "Too bad." I shrugged.

"You think this is funny don't you?". He asked.

"Mmm-hmm." I nodded, not expecting Max to charge at me with a handful of flour and lightly throw it on my face.

"Max!". I stagger back in shock. The flour hits my neck and travels down the valley of my breasts and on my strapless black dress.

Why did I choose to wear black out of all the colors? I don't know..

"You ruined my dress!". I gasped. "That was a dolce and gabbana dress.."

He smirked. "Looks like I'm not the only one covered in flour."

I relax. "Oh Max." I step towards him. He watches me as I push lightly against him. "Did I ever tell you how..." I drift, making sure his entire attention is on my face while I pinch the packet of flour lying on the counter. "how...goood..you look...in..." And at the right moment, in one swift motion I push him back and chuck the excess of flour on him. "Flour!".

"Huh!". A shocked Max is totally unprepared for an ambush from me.

The flour smacks him across the face and in no time, he's pinned me against the big fridge, pushing the flour down on me. I could feel the cool powder slip down between my breasts, his hot breath on my neck.

"That was not funny." He tells me.

I laugh a little. "Max it was funny." I insisted. "Seeing you all covered in flour. I bet mommy would want to take a picture too." I teased.

Under the flour covered eyelids, his dark hooded eyes felt like they were looking into my soul. He slowly releases my wrists and almost withdraws.

I hope to god I didn't hit a nerve.

"Max?". I watched him. "What's wrong?".

"Nothing." He said, wiping the flour off his face. "Just look at us." He chuckled. "Acting like school kids."

I chuckled with him. "Yeah." I had never behaved this way with a man before. Never. It surprised me so much that Max and I were like this. That I was seeing a side to him that I believe not many people had been allowed to see.

"Let's get cleaned up." He said, going to the sink and grabbing a clean dish cloth from the drawers. "I would have called my maid to help you out but she'd kinda busy and everyone's doing their own thing.." He babbled. Slightly damping the cloth under the tap.

Shutting the tap, he trotted towards me and began wiping my face clean of the flour. "What a waste of flour huh?". He joked and I just watched him clean me up.

Softly he ran the cloth over my forehead and all I could do was stand still.

"Is that better?". His soft voice fills my ears.

"What?". I asked a little bit dazed.

He's about to say something but I beat him do it. "I think I need to hop in the shower." I said. "I need to clean my dress and-"

"It's okay, I'll let you borrow some of my clothes." He tells me with a smile.

"Okay." I nod.

Half an hour later, he leaves me in his bedroom after he laid out some clothes for me. A nice cream shirt and blue jeans which I hoped would fit me and he leaves me with a belt.

Damn, this was awkward.

I take a shower, I very quick one. I was scared Max might join me, not that I didn't want him to but that..if he did and things between us changed..it could be fatal. I had endless disasters with men when it came to dating. It was a nightmare. And I didn't want things to be over with Max. I was enjoying this strange relationship we had. I didn't know whether to call myself his friend or girl or whatever...

It was confusing.

I leave the shower and dry myself before getting dressed again. My black dress is gone. Max walks in the room just as I was about to button up my shirt and he catches a good glimpse of my bra clad breasts.

"Oh, sorry." Max tells me and turns around, allowing me some privacy. I quickly button myself up.

"Oh hi Max..you can turn around now." I tell him.

He turns around. "Liz, I just sent your black dress to the dry cleaners..is that okay?".

"As long as they don't shrink it." I joked.

"Wow...you look nice." He uttered in a breathless manner.

"In your clothes?". My eyes widened. A guy only said that when he started to like the girl. Well, no guy would actually let a girl wear his clothes if he didn't like them..

But it was kinda his fault for getting my dress dirty...but he could have taken advantage of me...but he didn't. "Yeah. You look very good in my clothes." He folded his arms and nodded.

"Thanks I guess."

"I kinda need your help to make dinner." He admits. "I can't cook to save my life."

I bite my lip. "What do you have in mind for us?".

"Italian?".

My smile spreads. "Okay.".
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After we cooked the dinner together, we laid the table together and I couldn't help but ask for a couple of candles and a lighter. Max didn't mind. As long as we enjoyed our dinner together. It was hard teaching him the basics but fun.

He pours the glasses with some expensive wine. I don't normally drink, but tonight I'd make an exception. We sit in our respective seats and I thank him for handing me the glass of wine. He responds by giving me a cute smirk.

"Well.." He says, picking up his fork and knife. "Bon Appétit."

We tuck in the delicious dishes of linguini and other various types of pasta and cheese. Max licks his lips as he sucks in a spaghetti coated in molten cheese. "Mmmm, this is heaven. Bliss. We make a good team Liz."

I nod my head in response. I'm happy he's enjoying this meal as much as I was. He was right. We did make a good team.

"Liz, I think I should keep you here. You can cook me my meals." He teases.

"Hey!". I threw back playfully. "What ever happened to equality?".

"It's still there." He says. "But not many people recognise it."

"Tease." I pouted.

"Besides, who needs equality when you have money?".

"Jerk." I stick my tongue out at him. "Money can't buy everything." I almost choke on my own words as I realise I was saying this for the first time.

"Can't it?". He takes another mouthful of linguini. "That's a shame." He tells me.

"Why is it?".

"I had a proposition for you."

"And that would be?".

"Do you know Tess?".

I almost stop chewing the food in my mouth. "Yeah." I swallowed. "Why?".

"I need your help to make her fall for me."

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