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Re: Street Rat (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 18&19 8/15/16

Post by keepsmiling7 » Mon Aug 15, 2016 4:34 pm

Maybe that wall is breaking down. But Liz needs to realize she will always be the same kind and caring person she has always been even when with the Prince. He will probably encourage those traits, and direct them in even greater channels.

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Post by Lillmonster » Tue Aug 16, 2016 12:54 am

Liz thinks ahead. Good girl.
By taking the test before hand it will make Kivar and Nicholas even more stupid when they question her.

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Re: Street Rat (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 18&19 8/15/16

Post by Natalie36 » Tue Aug 16, 2016 5:59 am

great part. can't wait to see what is next

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Re: Street Rat (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 18&19 8/15/16

Post by Roswelllostcause » Tue Aug 16, 2016 2:23 pm

L-J-L 76 Yes Liz and Max talked. Liz is going to take the blood oath.

Carolyn Max doesn't want Liz to be anyone but who she is. He wants to help her to do the things she wants.

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Part 20

Max walked into his father's office to see him meeting with Lord Larick.

"I am sorry father for interrupting." Said Max
"We were nearly fininished. What can I do for you?" Asked Philip
"Miss Elizabeth asked me to request to be able to do the blood oath." Said Max
"The blood oath? Does this young lady fully understand it? That she is binding a part of herself to the granalith forever? That should she betray your family it would cost her life?" Asked Larick
"She is very aware of the price that she would pay for betrayal." Said Max
"Larick, would you act as witness to it?" Asked Philip
"Of course Sire."
"Max, have Elizabeth in the throne room in two hours. I will have everything ready then." Said Philip
"Yes father."

Max walked out of the office to find Liz.


Serena sat in the library reading through one of the law books that Trina had gotten for her. She looked up when she heard someone clear their throat.

"Hi your Serena right?" Asked a young man in front of her.
"Uh yeah. Serena Parker."
"Kyle Valenti."
"So uh Kyle, you're in the army?" Asked Serena looking at his uniform.
"Well in training anyway."
"That's nice."
"Yeah, my commanding officer is a real hard ass."

Serena raised an eyebrow. She knew then for sure that he had a background not to different from her own.

"Let me guess. You're human."
"Yeah. How could you tell?"
"The way you talk. No antarian would say hard ass."
"Yeah. So uh did you want to take a walk in the garden with me sometime?"
"I don't know. Kyle, you do know that I am only fifteen."
"Yeah. I just turned seventeen."
"I am not even at the proper age for courting."
"I realize that. Serena, I just want us to be friends right now."
"I would like that."

Kyle smiled and the two of them headed out to the garden.


Max lead Liz into the throne room. Liz's eyes went wide when she saw it. She had never dreamed that she would ever enter this place. He lead her right to a white ring on the floor in front of the throne. There were four crystals around the ring. One at each point as if the ring was a compus. North, south, east and west.

"Please step into the ring Elizabeth and kneel." Said Philip

Liz did as she was told. Philip came up to her with a very sharp dagger. Liz could feel her heart start to race.

"Elizabeth, let me see your left hand palm side up." Said Philip

Liz did as she was told. Philip gripped her tightly around her wrist. Philip then leaned down close and whispered in her ear.

"I know my grip is tight. But this will hurt you more if you move when I cut you."
"I understand my King."

Philip then spoke to those in the throne room. He made note that Kivar was there.

"Miss Elizabeth Parker do you swear on your life's blood that you have never nor will you ever betray the Royal family of Antar?" Asked Philip
"I swear on my life that I have never been nothing but a loyal subject of the crown. I swear that until my dying breath I will never betray the crown. If I speak a lie then by the drawing of my life's blood may these be the last words I ever speak." Said Liz

Philip placed the blade on her palm and cut it open. He heard a soft wince of pain as the blood was drawn. Philip then placed the bleeding hand on each of the crystals. He then released his grip and the crystals released a white light. A voice was then heard in the throne room though no one spoke.

"This woman's loyalty to the crown is the purest and with no doubt. It can never bee questioned again. Rise Elizabeth, and remove yourself from the granalith's ring of loyalty."

Liz did as she was told. It was then her personal guard stepped forward and wrapped a cloth around her cut hand.

"Maxwell, please see that Elizabeth has her hand looked at by a doctor. You must not heal it yourself. The scar will be the proof to all of her undying loyalty to us." Said Philip
"Yes father." Said Max

Max lead Liz away and Philip could see that Kivar was not happy with the out come of the oath.

Part 21

Kivar stormed into his house after watching the girl take the blood oath that she passed. Them meant the only thing now to keep her from the prince was if she was a slut. He pushed pass his staff and headed to the hidden room. It was the one place that he kept his prisoner. A prisoner that if the Royals found out about would cost him his life. His family even when the law changed never gave up having at least on slave. The his father and grandfather before him kept a young human female to use for their needs. This girl was new he had yet to use her for the only thing human females were good for. He had dumped his last one back in the gutter he found her in three years ago. He had his fill of that one. This girl had been found living on the streets. He grabbed the girl and dragged her to his bed chamber. He had a doctor on his pay roll. Her health had been checked and other then not eating right she was deemed healthy. He was even more pleased to learn that his dick would be the first to enter her. Tonight he would start teaching her what her place really was. What the only thing she would ever be good for.

"My Lord do you wish your meal to be brought to your room?" Asked his head of staff.
"No! I do not wish to be bothered."
"As you wish."

Kivar dragged the girl into his room and locked the door.

"What are you going to do to me?" Asked the girl
"Just teach you what you stupid human bitches are good for."

He grinned when he saw the fear in her eyes. He had all ready taken all her clothing except for a thin long shirt used to cover her. He threw her on the floor and gave her a hard kick. Before he undressed the he grabbed her ripped the shirt from her body. He pulled her so that he had his dick pressed to her thigh. He just laughed at her reaction to it.

"Oh my dear whore you will grow use to my dick in your pussy. Can't say you will enjoy this ever. But you will get use to it after a while. But I can tell you this. Tonight will be very painful for you as I take you for the first time."
"Please my Lord don't do this."

He just slapped her threw her on the bed forced her legs as far apart as they would go got between them put the tip of his rock hard dick at her opening and pinning to her down rammed into her hard. She screamed as she felt her virginity being taken from her. Kivar paid her no mind as he kept pumping hard and fast into her. Kivar let out a grunt when he had his release. He pulled out chained her wrists to the bed and fell onto the bed next to her to rest before he rode her again. By the end of tonight this girl would be begging to die. But he wouldn't kill her. He had other plans for her. He knew of a place he would sell her for a nice sum once he had her broken in right.


Max watched as Kara cleaned and bandaged the cut on Liz's hand. Kara then pulled out an injection. He could see the fear in Liz's eyes, so did Kara.

"Liz, this is just an antibiotic. It will make sure the cut does not become infected while it heals." Said Kara
"Can't you just give me pills?" Asked Liz
"Liz, the first dose needs to be higher then comes in pill form. But for the next five day you will need to take pills as well twice a day. At breakfast and dinner." Said Kara
"Liz are you afraid of needles?" Asked Max
"Kara will I be in the way if I come and hold her good hand?"
"No. I can inject into the same side as the cut. In fact in will be best in that arm." Said Kara

Max walked over and took Liz right hand in his hands and turned her to look at him.

"Just look at me Liz. It will be over soon and you can go back to your room to rest." Said Max

Liz looked at Max. She felt Kara rub disinfectant on her arm and then winced as the needle pierced her skin.

"It's almost over sweet Liz." Said Max placing a kiss on her hand.
"All done. Now Liz, I do want you to go back to your room and rest." Said Kara
"OK." Said Liz
"Between you and Zane, I am sure she will get there. Oh and Zane, you make sure she doesn't leave her suite until morning." Said Kara
"Damn Kara, do you have to pull that being ten minutes older card all the time with me?" Asked Zane
"Yes my dear younger brother." Said Kara

Liz looked from her guard to her doctor in shock.

"You're twins?" Asked Liz
"Yes Liz we are. Seeing as we are hybrids one of the first sets not of fully human blood." Said Kara
"Liz, there are no full blood antarian twins. It was only thirty years ago that humans and antarians started to marry." Said Max
"That I wasn't aware of." Said Liz
"Well glad there are still some things that I can teach you."

Liz just smiled. Max helped her down from the exam table and they headed to Liz's suite.

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Re: Street Rat (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 20&21 8/16/16

Post by L-J-L 76 » Tue Aug 16, 2016 3:35 pm

Great Chapter!!!! Please please please please please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon? Can't wait to read what will happen next for Max and Liz. So glad that Liz took the blood oath. Love how the king is being so caring to Liz. So Serena and Kyle meet and hit it off. Love how Max is being so caring and loving to Liz. Love how Kara and Zane are with each other.

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Re: Street Rat (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 20&21 8/16/16

Post by keepsmiling7 » Tue Aug 16, 2016 8:34 pm

Should have known Kivar wouldn't settle for Liz being pure after her loyalty oath.....
But her poor sister, why did she have to be raped by Kivar?
I hope Kivar will be killed for that action.
They need better guards watching the sisters.

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Re: Street Rat (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 20&21 8/16/16

Post by max and liz believer » Wed Aug 17, 2016 11:39 am

It scares me how ruthlessly Kivar rid himself of Tessa. This, in combination with his plans for Liz, is a lot more frightening than anything Tessa could ever have attempted. Kivar is a horrible psychopath who also seem to be a loose cannon. Meaning that he can actually decide to just start killing the royalty (since he's usually accompanying the same areas as the royals) and kill quite a few of them before there's even a chance of having him stopped.

Which means that he needs to be stopped beforehand. Maybe one of his staff have overheard his plans and is loyal to the King?

Love how sweet Max is to Liz and that Liz is finally coming around.

Kyle and Serena? Well, Serena is awfully young, but since they are just hanging as friends now, I guess that would be okay :wink:

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Re: Street Rat (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 20&21 8/16/16

Post by Roswelllostcause » Wed Aug 17, 2016 5:37 pm

L-J-L 76 Taking the blood oath was a very good thing for Liz.

Carolyn It wasn't Liz's sister that Kivar raped. It was som other poor girl.

Jo Yes Kivar is a psychopath. While he does treval in the same circle as the Royals he can't just walk up to one of them at this time. Max is very sweet to Liz and she is starting to come around. Serena is young, but right now she and Kyle are only talking and getting to know each other.

Part 22

Edward Harding pulled his pants on as got ready to leave the human whore. After throwing some money at the girl, a girl that he knew was younger than his daughter had been. While it was a shame that Tessa was dead, he was not surprised that it came to that. The girl was stupid. She couldn't even do something as simple as get the prince to screw her. But he knew that girl the prince had a thing for was just like the dozen human sluts he fucked monthly. Hell he had been fucking the human whores since he was fifteen. It had been his father who had gotten him his first whore. He had wanted a son to teach about using whores. Oh he had married and his wife had died giving birth to Tessa. He had thought about marrying again, of course it would be a younger woman. One that would bond to be able to give him the son he needed. Lord Gath had a daughter who had just turned seventeen a month ago. He was going to talk to him about marrying Janda, in an hour. Not that he would ever give up visiting his whores. A wife was only to give an heir and to hang on his arm at balls.


Liz walked into her suite to find her sister there.

"Why didn't you tell me that you were going to take the blood oath?" Asked Serena
"Rena, it was my choice."
"Yeah and you could have died!"
"I knew I was in no danger of dying. Rena, the only way I would have died is if I wasn't loyal to Max's family."
"I know."
"The truth is I was going to have to take it anyway. You know that either Lord Harding or Lord Kivar would call my loyalty into question. They will still question my purity. But we both know that I will never have sex with anyone other than the man I marry."
"They won't believe you are a virgin."
"I know."
"Liz, now how does it work if you were have been raped?"
"I have no idea. But I never was."
"Did someone try?"

Serena watched as Liz's eyes grew dark and had her answer.

"How many times did you fight someone off?" Asked Serena
"I don't want to talk about it. I need to go lay down."
"Why didn't Max heal your hand?"
"He isn't aloud too. This has to heal on it's own. The scar that will be left will be proof to all that I am nothing but loyal to the Royal family."
"I'm worried about you Lizzie."
"Rena, I am fine."

Liz walked into her room and laid down on her bed. Serena understood why Liz did what she did. But she wished that Liz had told her before she did it.


Julia winced as Kivar forced his dick into her for the fourth time since he stole her virginity from her less then six hours earlier. The area between her legs burned in pain. She always thought that when she finally did have sex it would be with the man she loved. Not to have some monster rape her repeatedly. She listened as he grunted and groaned as he kept pounding hard into her. She could only hope that he would soon wear himself out so that her body had a chance to heal a little before his next assault. It was over an hour later that she felt his body go still as he had his release. He rolled off her but made no move to have her taken back to her tiny cell. She knew then that he wasn't done with her tonight.

"Don't worry my dear slut we still fuck more tonight. It will only be once more. Then I will let you rest. Before we spend more time together tomorrow."

Julia felt fresh tears fall down her face. God she didn't know how she was going to live through this. She had no idea how so many human women had lived this way for as long as they had. The only thing she didn't know was if she were to get rescued what would happen to her then. She feared that no man would ever see her as anything but a fucking whore.

Part 23

Liz woke from her nap to find a maid pulling a nice dress from a garment bag and hanging it on the dress rack.

"What is going on?" Asked Liz
"Miss Elizabeth, I have been sent to help you dress for dinner. You and your sister are to join the King and his family at his request." Said the maid
"Dinner with the Royal family?"
"That is what I have been told. Did you want to take a bath? After I can redress your hand."

Liz thought about it and nodded her head. The maid smile went into the bathroom and turned on the bath and added some nice smelling bath oils. She then helped Liz into the bath and removed the bandage from her hand.

"Now Miss Elizabeth, I know that you would rather do this yourself. But I am under strict orders from the Queen to aid you in your bath."
"I understand. By the way what is your name?"
"My name?"
"Yes. I really don't want to just call you hey you."

The maid let out a small laugh. She could understand why the prince was falling for this young woman.

"My name is Eve. My family has worked for the Royals for two hundred years. Since humans first came here."
"Are you human?"
"So uh your family use to be owned by the Royal family?"
"Yes. While there were a lot of slaves mistreated my family never was. The house of Zanderon has always treated their workers well. That is why we stayed even after humans were freed."
"They pay you well then?"
"Yes. Much more then anyone else would."

Liz nodded and let Eve wash her. Thought Liz did notice that the other woman did let her clean her private areas. It was almost two hours later that Liz stood in front of a full length mirror in a light blue dress that fell just below her knees, short sleeves that ended just above her elbows. Her hair had been pulled back at the sides leaving it flowing down her back.

"Wow." Said Liz
"I think the Prince won't know what hit him when he sees you Miss."
"Eve, is that really me?"
"Yes. Miss Elizabeth, sometimes it is hard to see our own beauty until someone else shows it to us."

Liz gave the maid a smile. She knew that she was right.

"Thank you for your help." Said Liz
"It was a pleasure. You have been a joy compared to that Lady Tessa. The whole staff was happy when the King sent her and her father away. Neither treated us or their personal maid that came with them well." Said Eve
"That doesn't surprise me. I met Lady Tessa."
"I am sorry about that."
"Don't worry about it. You didn't make her the way she is."
"True. Now your escort will be here any minute to take you to dinner."

Liz walked out to the sitting room just as there was a knock on the door. She saw Serena come out of hers and gave her sister a smile. Then they went to see who was waiting for them on the other side of the door.

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Re: Street Rat (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 22&23 8/17/16

Post by keepsmiling7 » Wed Aug 17, 2016 6:31 pm mistake regarding the rape.
But could someone please slip Julia a knife or gun to take care of Kivar and Harding. These men should not be allowed to walk on the earth.......or Antar.
Can't wait for dinner with the royal family. Wonder who her escort will be?
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Re: Street Rat (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 22&23 8/17/16

Post by L-J-L 76 » Wed Aug 17, 2016 7:05 pm

Great Chapter!!!! Please please please please please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon? Can't wait to read what will happen next for Max and Liz. Someone please please give Julia a bomb to put down Lord Kivar and Harding's mouth. Or give Julia a live electric wire and kill Lord Kivar and Lord harding that way. So Liz and Serena are going to royal family dinner. Now maybe that will be fun and no one gets mad. Who is Liz's escort? What will happen at Royal dinner?

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