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Re: The General and His King (AU, Teen) 5/17/16

Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2016 6:04 pm
by keepsmiling7
I hope you will coming back to complete this. I like the different take on things.
Carolyn

Re: The General and His King (AU, Teen) 5/17/16

Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2016 8:17 am
by Eva
I'm loving this story already! The new was of tackling the alien complot is very original. I'm very curious with this one, which side will win: the alien of the human?

And hands up for Maria! I would've run by now!

Re: The General and His King (AU, Teen) 8/8/16

Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2016 7:42 pm
by norahb
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Re: The General and His King (AU, Teen) 5/17/16

Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2016 9:19 pm
by keepsmiling7
I love seeing the characters as they discover their past life.
Of course Tess is jealous of Liz getting Max's attention.
Max was more than surprised when Michael gave him the surprise information.
And yes Isabel........this is going to be awkward.
Can't wait for more,
Carolyn

Re: The General and His King (AU, Teen) 5/17/16

Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2016 12:33 pm
by Eva
Indeed, I'm hoping that the human side in our hybrids will win over their alien side. 'Cause if they turn out how Nasedo wants them to be... No, I don't want to think about that.

So, Isabel was brave to hear Michael out and she already knew in which direction it was heading. Female intuition?

Anyway, great chapter!

One little idea for when you update: if you change your title with a new date and the number of the chapter, your readers will know that you posted something new.

Re: The General and His King (AU, Mi/M, MATURE) 8/26/16, chapt 6-8

Posted: Fri Aug 26, 2016 8:27 am
by norahb
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Re: The General and His King (AU, Teen) 5/17/16

Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2019 12:47 am
by maxandlizforever
Why is the story .... Instead of story?