Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) COMPLETE 5/5/17

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Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) COMPLETE 5/5/17 p. 102

Postby begonia9508 » Tue May 09, 2017 9:08 am

Oh! I am so happy to be back, after such a Long time,! life isn't really always easy and I learned it, these two last weeks, as I was bitten by an insect and that brought me to the hospital for two weeks!

Now I am home but weak likes a baby... But happy to find that everything is still like when I went away and I will have to read back a Little bit because the Story moved with new parts I had to read first...

Thanks EVE
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Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) COMPLETE 5/5/17 p. 102

Postby max and liz believer » Tue May 09, 2017 9:25 am

begonia9508 wrote:Oh! I am so happy to be back, after such a Long time,! life isn't really always easy and I learned it, these two last weeks, as I was bitten by an insect and that brought me to the hospital for two weeks!

Now I am home but weak likes a baby... But happy to find that everything is still like when I went away and I will have to read back a Little bit because the Story moved with new parts I had to read first...

Thanks EVE


That sounds horrible! It got infected, I assume? Good to hear that you're home again, but what a horrible ordeal.

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Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) COMPLETE 5/5/17 p. 102

Postby Morning Dreamgirl » Wed May 10, 2017 5:27 pm

How am I just now seeing this?!?!

Gah!

My notifications didn't work.

Expect a response tonight. Cause girl... :oops:

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Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) COMPLETE 5/5/17 p. 102

Postby max and liz believer » Thu May 11, 2017 12:57 pm

Morning Dreamgirl wrote:How am I just now seeing this?!?!

Gah!

My notifications didn't work.

Expect a response tonight. Cause girl... :oops:

Stupid notifications… I was wondering where you were :roll: :wink:

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The sequel

Postby max and liz believer » Fri May 12, 2017 3:58 pm

Hi everyone!

Thank you so much for your comments and your excitement about the sequel :D :mrgreen:

The sequel has now been posted. Here.

Have a great weekend!

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Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) COMPLETE 5/5/17

Postby mela3 » Mon May 22, 2017 11:25 am

OMG - it continues, I'm so excited! I absolutely adore this story and the character progression. Killing evil with kindness is the greatest plot ever! lol

I feel like our group never gets a change to decompress and deal with loss. I'm worried that Max is holding too much in. His Mom is gone and his grandfather is back and he's becoming a Dad and he is leading a war and.... Whew! That's too much stress to not have a moment of reflection and peace. Liz having a baby without her the support of her Mom is also going to be very emotionally challenging. I'm very curious to see how these characters grow.
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Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) COMPLETE 5/5/17

Postby Midnightdreamer » Mon May 22, 2017 2:37 pm

Feedback 1-60
I just binged read the first sixty chapters in three days and I must say what a good story and very well written especially all the emotional aspects of the characters even Mr. Phillip Evans even if he can't show his true feelings that often he loves his wife and children. I didn't think Mr. Evans was a bad person like those who read the story as it was being posted mainly because of Diane and odd scenes throughout the first sixty chapters. I think Mr. Evans knows a lot more about connections and is connected to Diane mainly because he knows how great the sex is when connected. I think he doesn't understand or not able to express a lot of human stuff or pick up on something where his wife needed comforting. It doesn't mean he doesn't care it just means he either doesn't know how or something. Now that we know max and Liz connected as children and a few scenes of memories Max and Liz have picked up that Mr. Evans felt guilty for sending his son to re education and not being able to help either of them, so he had max come along on his check ups of Liz for many reasons. I think like Liz on the show in this story she can feel or sense the evil within. Even as a little girl she knew the men in the room were evil but she didn't feel that with max and she instantly trusted him which I think help caused the connection. After being re education, Mr. Evans probably felt guilty so he had him come along to see Liz even if neither remember their first meaning because even though the mind didn't remember the muscles did. Hence why Liz always sought max out and fought others because she felt safe with max. I think max was brought a long on checks up way before Sean started coming along because I think Phillip wanted to help his son and what better way than to keep Liz in his life some way and also to slowly build a connection through other means before max connected through healing. Max always was able to connect with Liz so easily even on the show to heal her. More later because my battery is dying. Good story

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Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) COMPLETE 5/5/17

Postby max and liz believer » Wed May 24, 2017 5:25 am

mela3 and midnightdreamer - Thank you so so SO much for your feedback! I will respond to it on "Surviving the Truth" instead of here :D , in case you don't go back to this story anytime soon :roll:

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Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) COMPLETE 5/5/17

Postby Alien_Friend » Mon Aug 28, 2017 10:16 am

I finally am all caught up! What an incredibly story. I am so happy it isn't over. I am in awe of your imagination and writing abilities. I loved how you were able to build up the suspense during their time preparing for the fight and as they were in the thick of it. I am so pleased that Michael and Isabella and Jeff and Max's dad aren't died. I was so scared that they were really died. I love what you have done with this connection. It's an incredible concept that you have managed to grow up to new heights that I haven't seen before. I couldn't be more pleased with all the twists and turns and the bringing back to life of Max's grandfather. I am terribly sad Diane had to die though she was such a great character. Now they both know what it's like to lose their mothers.

Thank you for writing and sharing such a fantastic piece of art with us. It has been a much needed escape from rl for me.
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