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by mela3
Tue May 10, 2016 8:19 pm
Forum: Alternate Universe Without Aliens
Topic: The Safe House (AU, M/L, Adult) Ch 38, 11/27/12
Replies: 164
Views: 120561

Re: The Safe House (AU, M/L, Adult) Ch 38, 11/27/12

Still awaiting another chapter. I love this story.
by mela3
Sat May 07, 2016 10:28 am
Forum: Alternate Universe With Aliens
Topic: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) COMPLETE 5/5/17 + A/N 5/5/19
Replies: 1044
Views: 553747

Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) Ch. 92 5/5/16 p. 77

OMG I'm so glad you're back! Why? How could this happen. Maria unconscious, Max dying, where's Dresden? They should be stronger than this. It's too much. I can't.
by mela3
Sun Mar 06, 2016 4:25 am
Forum: Alternate Universe With Aliens
Topic: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) COMPLETE 5/5/17 + A/N 5/5/19
Replies: 1044
Views: 553747

Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) Ch 87, 3/3/16, p. 70

Wow. The description of Liz's feeling in the previous chapters was so clear and realistic, that it seemed interwoven into the story as thread in a tapestry. It truly speaks of Liz's character and their narrative as a couple.

I'm really excited that Maria is involved.
by mela3
Sun Feb 21, 2016 11:41 pm
Forum: Alternate Universe With Aliens
Topic: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) COMPLETE 5/5/17 + A/N 5/5/19
Replies: 1044
Views: 553747

Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) Ch 83, 2/20/16, p. 67

I really wish Max's Granddad had been a greater influence in his life. He seems a master at quiet strength.
by mela3
Thu Feb 18, 2016 11:00 pm
Forum: Alternate Universe With Aliens
Topic: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) COMPLETE 5/5/17 + A/N 5/5/19
Replies: 1044
Views: 553747

Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) Ch 82, 2/17/16, p. 66

Another top notch chapter. I agree with Max and am concerned that the "connection" has such strong control over them, especially with Max's sensitivity to being controlled. I wonder if the connection will steer them towards a specific path or to take risks, not necessarily bad, but not cho...
by mela3
Thu Feb 04, 2016 10:11 pm
Forum: Alternate Universe With Aliens
Topic: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) COMPLETE 5/5/17 + A/N 5/5/19
Replies: 1044
Views: 553747

Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) Ch 75, 2/4/16, p. 63

WOW. To be the primary weapon in a war is great undertaking and an enormous stress for a couple of teens. It is interesting that the rebellion needs the assistance of a human. I wonder how their definition of "society" will differ from "Command", and how humans will be viewed in ...
by mela3
Sat Jan 30, 2016 8:09 pm
Forum: Alternate Universe With Aliens
Topic: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) COMPLETE 5/5/17 + A/N 5/5/19
Replies: 1044
Views: 553747

Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) Ch 70, 1/30/16, p. 59

More, more! Great quality writing of characters with depth. I can't wait to read more.
by mela3
Thu Jan 28, 2016 10:26 pm
Forum: Alternate Universe With Aliens
Topic: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) COMPLETE 5/5/17 + A/N 5/5/19
Replies: 1044
Views: 553747

Re: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) Ch 68, 1/28/16, p. 58

OMG!! I am so glad your back, and the devil incarnate is dead. I'm so happy Max will live, but worried how the council will respond to a human taking down their strongest military leader :oops: