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by behrinthecity
Tue Feb 20, 2024 11:52 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 65 2/19 (WIP)
Replies: 176
Views: 228382

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 65 2/19 (WIP)

As promised a proper response to your comments over the last several (eek!) months. A combination of writer's block, teaching an all day summer class (which was so much fun but exhausting. I totally understand now why grade school teachers always groused about indoor recess. Though I didn't mind the...
by behrinthecity
Mon Feb 19, 2024 12:36 pm
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 65 2/19 (WIP)
Replies: 176
Views: 228382

Part 65

I finally managed to finish this part. Will respond to messages tomorrow-- but want to say thank you all. Enjoy. Previously… [From Toy House] “I've wanted to tell mom. I've wanted to tell her every day for the last ten years,” Isabel implored her brother. Her voice wavered with desperate hope that h...
by behrinthecity
Thu Sep 28, 2023 7:47 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 65 2/19 (WIP)
Replies: 176
Views: 228382

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 64 4/2/23 (WIP)

Trying to annoy you into posting lol Aww you never annoy me! I deeply appreciate your messages. As I had some indecision over the following part, a i started filling out subsequent parts. Have been reviewing the story timeline so what I wanted to happen makes sense for the next part. Mini poll: the...
by behrinthecity
Mon Apr 24, 2023 10:52 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 65 2/19 (WIP)
Replies: 176
Views: 228382

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 64 4/2/23 (WIP)

totallizfan wrote: Mon Apr 24, 2023 10:35 am Thanks for the update. Hope they stay safe.

Thank you for your comment totallizfan. (And welcome to the story, don't think I've seen you comment before.)
by behrinthecity
Sat Apr 22, 2023 7:47 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 65 2/19 (WIP)
Replies: 176
Views: 228382

Part 64

:D Thank you all so much for the check ins and tremendous patience. It has been a tough and anxious several months of not only health issues, but family related emergencies, and frustrations in job hunting. At least the first two are at a slightly better place so I finally could focus to finish this...
by behrinthecity
Sun Nov 27, 2022 4:10 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 65 2/19 (WIP)
Replies: 176
Views: 228382

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 63 9/9/22 (WIP)

MP wrote: Mon Nov 14, 2022 2:35 pmJust checking in…
dreamon wrote: Sat Oct 29, 2022 4:49 pm Hope to see a new part soon!

Thank you both for your check-ins. I've been in the hospital. Hope I can go home this coming week. Sorry for continued delays. :cry:
by behrinthecity
Sat Sep 10, 2022 2:59 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 65 2/19 (WIP)
Replies: 176
Views: 228382

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 63 9/9/22 (WIP)

So happy to have you back! And thank you for another fantastic part!!! Also, the following line was in blue: There’s the military strategist I know. Not sure if this was the line you were trying to alter or not. Thank you for your comment :D and answering my question-- the small font size was meant...
by behrinthecity
Fri Sep 09, 2022 8:22 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 65 2/19 (WIP)
Replies: 176
Views: 228382

Part 63

Thank you dreamon and keepsmiling7 ! Apologies for the extra delay-- had added more to Michael and Max's conversation. So Liz and Cal are in the next part! By the way, one sentence of dialogue is supposed to be in smaller font, but I don't see a difference in the preview. Do let me know if you see a...
by behrinthecity
Wed Aug 31, 2022 9:29 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 65 2/19 (WIP)
Replies: 176
Views: 228382

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 62 5/28/22 (WIP)

dreamon - I am so sorry for how much time has past! I am mostly recuperated from my hospitalization (long story short-- anemia is way more debilitating than I expected, but dietary changes are helping to reduce body weakness/dizzy spells). Anyway, your message is good timing-- I am currently review...
by behrinthecity
Tue May 31, 2022 12:47 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 65 2/19 (WIP)
Replies: 176
Views: 228382

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 62 5/28/22 (WIP)

glad you liked my comment! I wasn’t joking :lol: Happy to see a new part! And loved the fact that it was dreamer focused. Looking forward to more. :mrgreen: I'll keep that mind! Though it shouldn't happen again before I finish! (At least it better not. :| ) Now that we're entering the final stretch...