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by mezz
Tue Jan 19, 2016 10:39 am
Forum: Alternate Universe With Aliens
Topic: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) COMPLETE 5/5/17 + A/N 5/5/19
Replies: 1044
Views: 549120

Re: Unbreakable (AU M/L ADULT) Ch 58, 1/18/16, p. 52

Ooooo Lookie at all them chapters what've been put up. :shock: Mezzi will have to begin reading them :)
by mezz
Fri Jan 15, 2016 9:12 am
Forum: Alternate Universe With Aliens
Topic: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) COMPLETE 5/5/17 + A/N 5/5/19
Replies: 1044
Views: 549120

Re: Unbreakable (AU M/L ADULT) Ch 54, 10/28/15, p. 49

hey look. it's back :mrgreen: I wonder if Jo has chapter 55 done yet? :wink: Oh I do hope so ;) Liz and Max have been lying in that bed with each other for an awful long time :lol: Though I suppose they don't mind. Hopefully they've used the extra time to actually get some sleep to be more ready fo...
by mezz
Fri Oct 30, 2015 3:37 am
Forum: Alternate Universe With Aliens
Topic: Lethal Whispers (ML, MATURE) 10/29/15 COMPLETE
Replies: 412
Views: 235140

Re: Lethal Whispers (ML, MATURE) 10/29/15 COMPLETE

Wonderful ending to a great story. So glad you took another go at it. Glad that Alex and Jeff were able to join them and that everyone is so happy.
by mezz
Mon Oct 26, 2015 7:18 am
Forum: Alternate Universe With Aliens
Topic: Lethal Whispers (ML, MATURE) 10/29/15 COMPLETE
Replies: 412
Views: 235140

Re: Lethal Whispers (ML, MATURE), Ch 60 10/25/15 p. 39 (bot

Max is cute.... 'grateful' :wink: Ha :D

So if this is coming to an end, does that mean you have another story in the works or will it just be Unbreakable for a while?
by mezz
Mon Oct 26, 2015 7:16 am
Forum: Alternate Universe With Aliens
Topic: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) COMPLETE 5/5/17 + A/N 5/5/19
Replies: 1044
Views: 549120

Re: Unbreakable (AU M/L ADULT) Ch 53, 10/25/15, p. 48

Love the visual of you reading a book while taking bloods :wink: Goodness what a complicated mess. The first thing that struck me was that Max had done so much to save Liz, even allowing her mum to die, and then Liz asked him to kill her anyway. No wonder he completely shut himself off in the eraser...
by mezz
Fri Oct 23, 2015 6:11 am
Forum: Alternate Universe With Aliens
Topic: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) COMPLETE 5/5/17 + A/N 5/5/19
Replies: 1044
Views: 549120

Re: Unbreakable (AU M/L ADULT) Ch 52, 10/22/15, p. 47

Well you've most certainly mastered the 'leave them wanting more' technique. Got that one right down-pat. :P What an emotional roller coaster. At first I thought Liz was being a little self indulgent by assuming that Mrs E was scared for her, rather than immediately for Max, but after several subseq...
by mezz
Wed Oct 21, 2015 1:48 am
Forum: Alternate Universe With Aliens
Topic: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) COMPLETE 5/5/17 + A/N 5/5/19
Replies: 1044
Views: 549120

Re: Unbreakable (AU M/L ADULT) Ch 51, 10/19/15, p. 46

So we get a glimpse into what Mr E knew or suspected. It would be hard for a father to raise his son always hoping that trouble wouldn't come but watching it come closer and closer. He would have had to have given serious thought over the years as to what he would do if push came to shove. He still ...
by mezz
Sun Oct 18, 2015 7:17 am
Forum: Alternate Universe With Aliens
Topic: Lethal Whispers (ML, MATURE) 10/29/15 COMPLETE
Replies: 412
Views: 235140

Re: Lethal Whispers (ML, MATURE), Ch 58 10/17/15 p. 38

I'm liking Isabel's reactions to Alex. She seems to have tapped into his personality and character immediately. I wonder if it is simply because she trusts Liz so completely having known her through work as well as for years in Max's dreams, or if she has felt a connection to him? She's wonderfully ...
by mezz
Thu Oct 15, 2015 6:42 am
Forum: Alternate Universe With Aliens
Topic: Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) COMPLETE 5/5/17 + A/N 5/5/19
Replies: 1044
Views: 549120

Re: Unbreakable (AU M/L ADULT) Ch 50, 10/14/15, p. 45

The story is just beginning. :D Actually, I said the story was just beginning because for me there's so much that needs telling and answering. I wrote it and then thought 'oh crap' what if she's going to tie the story up in like, 3 chapters and that's it. OH NO!! :lol: I hope you won't do that. Loo...